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* The splintering of the main group of friends. Before the Acapulco arc, the main clique used to be a rather tight-knit group of friends (especially the main protagonists Lucy and Mike), and despite all of the vitriol that they give each other, always had each others' backs, even willing to risk their lives to save each other when in dangerous perils. Come Sophomore year, the circle of friends slowly corrodes as internal grudges and bottled-up emotions rise and LoveTriangles come forward. The absolute destruction of Mike and Lucy's friendship (with the latter being PutOnABus) was a very critical hit to the group's stability, and even when Lucy came back in Chapter 95, the situation did not get any better. Makes it even more tragic when you realize that every single member of the group is guilty of doing something that unwittingly shatters not only their individual friendships with one another, but their entire TrueCompanions group as a whole.

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* The splintering of the main group of friends. Before the Acapulco arc, the main clique used to be a rather tight-knit group of friends (especially the main protagonists Lucy and Mike), and despite all of the vitriol that they give each other, always had each others' backs, even willing to risk their lives to save each other when in dangerous perils. Come Sophomore year, the circle of friends slowly corrodes as internal grudges and bottled-up emotions rise and LoveTriangles {{Love Triangle}}s come forward. The absolute destruction of Mike and Lucy's friendship (with the latter being PutOnABus) was a very critical hit to the group's stability, and even when Lucy came back in Chapter 95, the situation did not get any better. Makes it even more tragic when you realize that every single member of the group is guilty of doing something that unwittingly shatters not only their individual friendships with one another, but their entire TrueCompanions group as a whole.



** Even in the light-hearted moments there's still a bit of sadness. As he's facing the last opponent in dodgeball, he can't quite shake off all of the [[spoiler:violent antics Lucy did to him]].

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** Even in the light-hearted moments there's still a bit of sadness. As he's Mike's facing the last opponent in dodgeball, he can't quite shake off all of the [[spoiler:violent antics Lucy did to him]].
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* The splintering of the main group of friends. Before the Acapulco arc, the main clique used to be a rather tight-knit group of friends (especially the main protagonists Lucy and Mike), and despite all of the vitriol that they give each other, always had each others' backs, even willing to risk their lives to save each other when in dangerous perils. Come Sophomore year, the circle of friends slowly corrodes as internal grudges and bottled-up emotions rise and LoveTriangles come forward. The absolute destruction of Mike and Lucy's friendship (with the latter being PutOnABus) was a very critical hit to the group's stability, and even when Lucy came back in Chapter 95, the situation did not get any better. Makes it even more tragic when you realize that every single member of the group is guilty of doing something that unwittingly shatters not only their individual friendships with one another, but their entire TrueCompanions group as a whole.

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* The splintering of the main group of friends. Before the Acapulco arc, the main clique used to be a rather tight-knit group of friends (especially the main protagonists Lucy and Mike), and despite all of the vitriol that they give each other, always had each others' backs, even willing to risk their lives to save each other when in dangerous perils. Come Sophomore year, the circle of friends slowly corrodes as internal grudges and bottled-up emotions rise and LoveTriangles come forward. The absolute destruction of Mike and Lucy's friendship (with the latter being PutOnABus) was a very critical hit to the group's stability, and even when Lucy came back in Chapter 95, the situation did not get any better. Makes it even more tragic when you realize that every single member of the group is guilty of doing something that unwittingly shatters not only their individual friendships with one another, but their entire TrueCompanions group as a whole.whole.
* [[spoiler:Chapter 95 has us see Lucy's suicide attempt in gruesome, heartrending fashion. She decides to jump off a building after we're treated to a few pages of her self-loathing internal monologue. And we see her jump too... and watch her not only survive the attempt, but also ''realize'' she survived, is bleeding out, and can barely move. It's a good thing Augustus came when he did...]]
* Chapter 96 doesn't stop the pain train for anyone. While it's more reasonably light-hearted, the end of it has Mike get [[LaserGuidedKarma exactly what's coming to him]] from [[spoiler:Lucy]]. With Mike pussyfooting around so much, it should have been a glorious moment, but the end and the intermission, where all the guilt culminates in him and he breaks down in tears, feels otherwise.
** Even in the light-hearted moments there's still a bit of sadness. As he's facing the last opponent in dodgeball, he can't quite shake off all of the [[spoiler:violent antics Lucy did to him]].
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* What is happening to the main group of friends as a whole after Volume 2 starts! Before the Acapulco arc, the main clique used to be a rather tight-knit group of friends (especially the main protagonists Lucy and Mike), and despite all of the vitriol that they haven each other, always had each others' backs, even willing to risk their lives to save each other when in dangerous perils. Come Sophomore year, the circle of friends now gradually begins to corrode as internal grudges and bottled-up emotions rise and LoveTriangles come forward. The absolute destruction of Mike and Lucy's friendship (with the latter being PutOnABus) was a very critical hit to the group's stability, and even when Lucy came back in Chapter 95, the situation only worsened from there. Makes it even more tragic when you realized that every single member of the group is guilty of doing or saying something that unwittingly shattered not only the individual friendships with one another, but their entire TrueCompanions group as a whole.

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* What is happening to The splintering of the main group of friends as a whole after Volume 2 starts! friends. Before the Acapulco arc, the main clique used to be a rather tight-knit group of friends (especially the main protagonists Lucy and Mike), and despite all of the vitriol that they haven give each other, always had each others' backs, even willing to risk their lives to save each other when in dangerous perils. Come Sophomore year, the circle of friends now gradually begins to corrode slowly corrodes as internal grudges and bottled-up emotions rise and LoveTriangles come forward. The absolute destruction of Mike and Lucy's friendship (with the latter being PutOnABus) was a very critical hit to the group's stability, and even when Lucy came back in Chapter 95, the situation only worsened from there. did not get any better. Makes it even more tragic when you realized realize that every single member of the group is guilty of doing or saying something that unwittingly shattered shatters not only the their individual friendships with one another, but their entire TrueCompanions group as a whole.
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* "Class of 2008", in which Tess graduates. After all she's been through with Paulo, as well as Jess and Rachel, it's heartrending to see her (mostly) forgiven and sent on her way with good luck wishes. The last we see of her is a [[https://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c88/p12.html hazy gray pencil sketch as she walks out of Roseville High.]] Especially poignant for those graduating at the time of this chapter's release.
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* Mike and Abbey's fight regarding the former neglecting Daisy in favor of spending time with Lucy. Abbey loves Daisy, but he's painfully aware that she loves Mike and is angry that Mike can't take the time to at least try to be a more attentive friend with her, to the point of him nearly getting into a fist fight with Mike despite his tendency to only use violence to be a BullyHunter. Likewise, Mike [[spoiler:foreshadows his frustration with his friendship with Lucy and eventual hatred for her,]] gets enraged at Abbey's accusations, and fights back. Considering how the two of them are the nicest members of the cast, it's jarring to see the, fight like this, particularly when Molly comes and begs them to stop fighting.
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* Wayching Volume One becomes HarsherInHindsight as the story progresses in the next volumes thanks to CerebusSyndrome kicking in. Watching Mike and Lucy playing together or engaging in slapstick humor, watching Paulo and Abbey getting into arguments after meeting in high school, watching Daisy and Paulo's [[AllLoveIsUnrequited initial pursuit for Mike and Lucy's hearts]]... It's not so funny anymore when we see what happens in the following volumes.

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* Wayching Reading Volume One becomes HarsherInHindsight as the story progresses in the next volumes thanks to CerebusSyndrome kicking in. Watching Mike and Lucy playing together or engaging in slapstick humor, watching Paulo and Abbey getting into arguments after meeting in high school, watching Daisy and Paulo's [[AllLoveIsUnrequited initial pursuit for Mike and Lucy's hearts]]... It's not so funny anymore when we see what happens in the following volumes.

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* Wayching Volume One becomes HarsherInHindsight as the story progresses in the next volumes thanks to CerebusSyndrome kicking in. Watching Mike and Lucy playing together or engaging in slapstick humor, watching Paulo and Abbey getting into arguments after meeting in high school, watching Daisy and Paulo's [[UnrequitedLoveInterest initial pursuit for Mike and Lucy's hearts]]... It's not so funny anymore when we see what happens in the following volumes.

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* Wayching Volume One becomes HarsherInHindsight as the story progresses in the next volumes thanks to CerebusSyndrome kicking in. Watching Mike and Lucy playing together or engaging in slapstick humor, watching Paulo and Abbey getting into arguments after meeting in high school, watching Daisy and Paulo's [[UnrequitedLoveInterest [[AllLoveIsUnrequited initial pursuit for Mike and Lucy's hearts]]... It's not so funny anymore when we see what happens in the following volumes.


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* The "Another Path" chapter is pretty much tear jerking. It's a what-if scenario of what would have happened if Paulo had a MomentOfWeakness to give Lucy SexForSolace over her heartbreak. It's quite heartbreaking to see Lucy tear up over Paulo taking her virginity and panicking over the possibility of being pregnant. Likewise, Paulo actually breaks down in tears when he tells his dad (even if it's PlayedForLaughs) and later as he takes care of Lucy during the time it takes to get the results of her pregnancy test, he bitterly cries in jealously over Mike being Lucy's support, admitting his anger at him for not wanting to be there for her while he wants to be there for her. By the end of the chapter, Paulo and Lucy are an OfficialCouple and graduating, with Lucy declaring her love for him...only for the chapter to be revealed to be AllJustADream.
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* Wayching Volume One becomes HarsherInHindsight as the story progresses in the next volumes thanks to CerebusSyndrome kicking in. Watching Mike and Lucy playing together or engaging in slapstick humor, watching Paulo and Abbey getting into arguments after meeting in high school, watching Daisy and Paulo's [[UnrequitedLoveInterest initial pursuit for Mike and Lucy's hearts]]... It's not so funny anymore when we see what happens in the following volumes.
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* "Trapped," where Augustus has his origins with Alejandro told, and we run into a girl named Melanie... who is in an abusive relationship with Alejandro. [[spoiler: On page 25, she reveals that the scholarship she wants is specifically to get away from Alejandro, and her breakdown over it is ''painful'' to watch.]]
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* "Total Recall", wherein at the end of the Junior Prom, where Paulo, Matt, and Jordan do some definite male bonding, [[spoiler:they get caught ''right'' into a car accident.]]
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* "Small Fry", despite being more of a light-hearted romp through Paulo's 16th birthday, and his foray into getting a part-time job and learning how to drive, shows us the inevitability of Rachel and Paulo's 'friends-with-benefits' relationship, especially with Paulo feeling guilty about Rachel's genuine attraction to him while he's still hoping that Lucy will one day return...
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* There have been other tearjerkers besides the one above. How about some of Daisy's {{Corrupt the Cutie}} moments during the Awakening arc? In Rising Temperature, being humiliated by [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c39/p3.html Katie]] and two in this [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c39/p10.html page]]? [[spoiler: Mike feels guilty for ignoring Daisy and Daisy is all alone, even though she does have her friends.]]

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* There have been other tearjerkers besides the one above. How about some of Daisy's {{Corrupt the Cutie}} CorruptTheCutie moments during the Awakening arc? In Rising Temperature, being humiliated by [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c39/p3.html Katie]] and two in this [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c39/p10.html page]]? [[spoiler: Mike feels guilty for ignoring Daisy and Daisy is all alone, even though she does have her friends.]]



* In the "December" arc, [[spoiler:Mike finally ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tears into]]'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]
** [[spoiler: He then proceeds [[HeWhoFightsMonsters to take it WAY too far]], especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Even a constant victim of abuse for so long like himself isn't supposed to break her to the point where she's ''[[VomitDiscretionShot physically ill]]''. Poor Lucy...]]

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* In the "December" arc, [[spoiler:Mike finally ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tears into]]'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]
** [[spoiler: He then proceeds [[HeWhoFightsMonsters to take it WAY too far]], especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss [[TookALevelInJerkass leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Even a constant victim of abuse for so long like himself isn't supposed to break her to the point where she's ''[[VomitDiscretionShot physically ill]]''. Poor Lucy...]]
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* "Just Beautifu" is relatively lighthearted...until [[spoiler:Lily chases off Mike, who decided to try apologizing to Lucy for his [[HeWhoFightsMonsters recent]] [[TookALevelInJerkass behavior]].]] Not really that sad, since [[spoiler:he was only doing so on Sandy's advice]], but then [[spoiler:She and Lucy have to tell Yashy the truth behind Mike's [[LongDistanceRelationship status]].]] Jesus!

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* "Just Beautifu" Beautiful" is relatively lighthearted...until [[spoiler:Lily chases off Mike, who decided to try apologizing to Lucy for his [[HeWhoFightsMonsters recent]] [[TookALevelInJerkass behavior]].]] Not really that sad, since [[spoiler:he was only doing so on Sandy's advice]], but then [[spoiler:She and Lucy have to tell Yashy the truth behind Mike's [[LongDistanceRelationship status]].]] Jesus!
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* "Just Beautifu" is relatively lighthearted...until [[spoiler:Lily chases off Mike, who decided to try apologizing to Lucy for his [[HeWhoFightsMonsters recent]] [[TookALevelInJerkass behavior]].]] Not really that sad, since [[spoiler:he was only doing so on Sandy's advice]], but then [[spoiler:She and Lucy have to tell Yashy the truth behind Mike's [[LongDistanceRelationship status]].]] Jesus!
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Probably the only webcomic that will make you cry for good reasons.
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* Anytime [[{{Tsundere}} Lucy]] loses [[DoggedNiceGuy Mike]], she has a heartrending emotional breakdown. It really shows just how attached she's become to him over the years. However, the single saddest moment happens in [[http://taeshilh.deviantart.com/art/Chapter-51-A-Distance-Apart-152537276?q=gallery%3Ataeshilh%2F390207&qo=6 Chapter 51 "A Distance Apart"]] when [[spoiler: Lucy finally admits her love for him, and he rejects her.]]
* There have been other tearjerkers besides the one above. How about some of Daisy's {{Corrupt the Cutie}} moments during the Awakening arc? In Rising Temperature, being humiliated by [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c39/p3.html Katie]] and two in this [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c39/p10.html page]]? [[spoiler: Mike feels guilty for ignoring Daisy and Daisy is all alone, even though she does have her friends.]]
* [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p4.html Pillow]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p5.html Talk]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p6.html has]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p16.html some]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p21.html more]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p29.html tearjerkers]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p31.html for]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p39.html you.]] Though, YMMV on them.
** The way things are going in that [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p47.html flashback]], you just ''know'' the whole chapter will turn out as one...
*** Yeah, the flashback ended sad, so the chapter seems to be so full of {{Tear Jerker}}s.
* In the "December" arc, [[spoiler:Mike finally ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tears into]]'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]
** [[spoiler: He then proceeds [[HeWhoFightsMonsters to take it WAY too far]], especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Even a constant victim of abuse for so long like himself isn't supposed to break her to the point where she's ''[[VomitDiscretionShot physically ill]]''. Poor Lucy...]]
* "At Loose Ends" show more of Abbey's DarkAndTroubledPast, specifically, his final straw with his father, how he became a woman-protector, and [[spoiler:his mother's death]]. All in the middle of the fucking Christmas season.
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Probably the only webcomic that will make you cry for good reasons.
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* Anytime [[{{Tsundere}} Lucy]] loses [[DoggedNiceGuy Mike]], she has a heartrending emotional breakdown. It really shows just how attached she's become to him over the years. However, the single saddest moment happens in [[http://taeshilh.deviantart.com/art/Chapter-51-A-Distance-Apart-152537276?q=gallery%3Ataeshilh%2F390207&qo=6 Chapter 51 "A Distance Apart"]] when [[spoiler: Lucy finally admits her love for him, and he rejects her.]]
* There have been other tearjerkers besides the one above. How about some of Daisy's {{Corrupt the Cutie}} moments during the Awakening arc? In Rising Temperature, being humiliated by [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c39/p3.html Katie]] and two in this [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c39/p10.html page]]? [[spoiler: Mike feels guilty for ignoring Daisy and Daisy is all alone, even though she does have her friends.]]
* [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p4.html Pillow]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p5.html Talk]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p6.html has]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p16.html some]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p21.html more]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p29.html tearjerkers]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p31.html for]] [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p39.html you.]] Though, YMMV on them.
** The way things are going in that [[http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c63/p47.html flashback]], you just ''know'' the whole chapter will turn out as one...
*** Yeah, the flashback ended sad, so the chapter seems to be so full of {{Tear Jerker}}s.
* In the "December" arc, [[spoiler:Mike finally ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tears into]]'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]
** [[spoiler: He then proceeds [[HeWhoFightsMonsters to take it WAY too far]], especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Even a constant victim of abuse for so long like himself isn't supposed to break her to the point where she's ''[[VomitDiscretionShot physically ill]]''. Poor Lucy...]]
* "At Loose Ends" show more of Abbey's DarkAndTroubledPast, specifically, his final straw with his father, how he became a woman-protector, and [[spoiler:his mother's death]]. All in the middle of the fucking Christmas season.
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* In the "December" arc, [[spoiler:Mike finally ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tears into]]'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] Also, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly because of the stress of showing his hatred.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]

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* In the "December" arc, [[spoiler:Mike finally ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tears into]]'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] Also, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly because of the stress of showing his hatred.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]



* "At Loose Ends" is turning out to be a big one, showing more of Abbey's DarkAndTroubledPast.

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* "At Loose Ends" is turning out to be a big one, showing show more of Abbey's DarkAndTroubledPast.DarkAndTroubledPast, specifically, his final straw with his father, how he became a woman-protector, and [[spoiler:his mother's death]]. All in the middle of the fucking Christmas season.
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** [[spoiler: He then proceeds [[HeWhoFightsMonsters to take it WAY too far]], especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Even a constant victim of abuse for so long like himself isn't supposed to break her to the point where she's ''[[VomitDiscretionShot physically ill]]''. Poor Lucy...]]

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** [[spoiler: He then proceeds [[HeWhoFightsMonsters to take it WAY too far]], especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Even a constant victim of abuse for so long like himself isn't supposed to break her to the point where she's ''[[VomitDiscretionShot physically ill]]''. Poor Lucy...]]]]
* "At Loose Ends" is turning out to be a big one, showing more of Abbey's DarkAndTroubledPast.
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* [[spoiler:Mike finally ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tears into]]'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] Also, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly because of the stress of showing his hatred.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]

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* In the "December" arc, [[spoiler:Mike finally ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tears into]]'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] Also, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly because of the stress of showing his hatred.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]
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* [[spoiler:Mike finally ''tears into'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkWhenItsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] Also, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly because of the stress of showing his hatred.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]
** He then proceeds to take it WAY too far, especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Even a constant victim of abuse for so long like himself isn't supposed to break her to the point where she's ''physically ill''. Poor Lucy...

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* [[spoiler:Mike finally ''tears into'' ''[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tears into]]'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkWhenItsFemaleOnMale [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] Also, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly because of the stress of showing his hatred.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]
** [[spoiler: He then proceeds [[HeWhoFightsMonsters to take it WAY too far, far]], especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Even a constant victim of abuse for so long like himself isn't supposed to break her to the point where she's ''physically ill''.''[[VomitDiscretionShot physically ill]]''. Poor Lucy...]]

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** He then proceeds to take it WAY too far, especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Poor Lucy...
*** [[SarcasmMode Yes, because a few months of improved behavior should make Mike forget all about the fact that she was physically and emotionally abusive to him for ten years, and he should just blindly forgive her and trust her again.]]
*** Not claiming that at all. He doesn't need to be her friend again, but he took [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech his calling her out on her former behavior]] way too far to the point where she was physically sick. [[TookALevelInJerkAss That is why Mike's taken several levels in jerkass.]]

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** He then proceeds to take it WAY too far, especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Poor Lucy...
*** [[SarcasmMode Yes, because
Even a few months constant victim of improved behavior should make Mike forget all about the fact that she was physically and emotionally abusive to him abuse for ten years, and he should just blindly forgive so long like himself isn't supposed to break her and trust her again.]]
*** Not claiming that at all. He doesn't need to be her friend again, but he took [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech his calling her out on her former behavior]] way too far
to the point where she was physically sick. [[TookALevelInJerkAss That is why Mike's taken several levels in jerkass.]]she's ''physically ill''. Poor Lucy...
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*** Not claiming that at all. He doesn't need to be her friend again, but he took [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech his calling her out on her former behavior]] way too far to the point where she was physically sick. [[TookALevelInJerkaAss That is why Mike's taken several levels in jerkass.]]

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*** Not claiming that at all. He doesn't need to be her friend again, but he took [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech his calling her out on her former behavior]] way too far to the point where she was physically sick. [[TookALevelInJerkaAss [[TookALevelInJerkAss That is why Mike's taken several levels in jerkass.]]
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*** [[SarcasmMode Yes, because a few months of improved behavior should make Mike forget all about the fact that she was physically and emotionally abusive to him for ten years, and he should just blindly forgive her and trust her again.]]

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*** [[SarcasmMode Yes, because a few months of improved behavior should make Mike forget all about the fact that she was physically and emotionally abusive to him for ten years, and he should just blindly forgive her and trust her again.]]
*** Not claiming that at all. He doesn't need to be her friend again, but he took [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech his calling her out on her former behavior]] way too far to the point where she was physically sick. [[TookALevelInJerkaAss That is why Mike's taken several levels in jerkass.
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** He then proceeds to take it WAY too far, especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Poor Lucy...

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** He then proceeds to take it WAY too far, especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Poor Lucy...Lucy...
*** [[SarcasmMode Yes, because a few months of improved behavior should make Mike forget all about the fact that she was physically and emotionally abusive to him for ten years, and he should just blindly forgive her and trust her again.]]
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** He then proceeds to take it WAY too far, especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his necessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Poor Lucy...

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** He then proceeds to take it WAY too far, especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his necessarily unnecessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Poor Lucy...
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** He then proceeds to take it WAY too far and [[TookALevelInJerkAss leaves the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Poor Lucy...

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** He then proceeds to take it WAY too far far, especially considering that [[CharacterDevelopment Lucy's behavior has improved,]] and his necessarily cruel words to her [[TookALevelInJerkAss leaves leave the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Poor Lucy...
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* [[spoiler:Mike finally ''tears into'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkWhenItsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] Also, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly because of the stress of showing his hatred.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]

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* [[spoiler:Mike finally ''tears into'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkWhenItsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] Also, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly because of the stress of showing his hatred.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]]]
** He then proceeds to take it WAY too far and [[TookALevelInJerkAss leaves the reader with a strong desire to punch him in the face.]] Poor Lucy...
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* [[spoiler:Mike finally ''tears into'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkWhenItsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly hinting that he's ''lying''.]]

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* [[spoiler:Mike finally ''tears into'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkWhenItsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] The worst part, Also, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly hinting that he's ''lying''.because of the stress of showing his hatred.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:he then reveals he ''never'' saw her as a friend.]]
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*** Yeah, the flashback ended sad, so the chapter seems to be so full of {{Tear Jerker}}s.

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*** Yeah, the flashback ended sad, so the chapter seems to be so full of {{Tear Jerker}}s.Jerker}}s.
* [[spoiler:Mike finally ''tears into'' Lucy over [[AbuseIsOkWhenItsFemaleOnMale everything]] she's done to him, culminating in him declaring his undying hatred for her.]] The worst part, [[spoiler:Mike is ''crying'' while saying he hates her, possibly hinting that he's ''lying''.]]

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