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* Carter and Adrian's emotional states before they met, Carter being a 'collossal douchebag' desperate for sex, Adrian being heartbroken after what was with David.
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* Carter and Adrian's emotional states before they met, Carter being a 'collossal 'colossal douchebag' desperate for sex, Adrian being heartbroken after what was with David.
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* Carter and Adrian's emotional states before they met. Carter being a 'collossal douchebag' desperate for sex. Adrian's heartbroken state after David.
-->'''Adrian:''' He destroooyed my heart. Rrripped it out. Dansched on it. Fatality. Bloody and gruesome, you know. We're friends now i guess, so it's fine.
* Maria being sexually assaulted in the bedroom, and Carter gets injured from fighting the guy off. Basically the entire party and aftermath is an angstfest.
-->'''Adrian:''' What's wrong with mee? It's just..everything seems to come back to you, doesn't it. I mean, you're a total sex obsessed dick but you're here. You're here and in front of me, and you're the only one who makes it easy for me. The only fricking one...
-->'''Adrian:''' He destroooyed my heart. Rrripped it out. Dansched on it. Fatality. Bloody and gruesome, you know. We're friends now i guess, so it's fine.
* Maria being sexually assaulted in the bedroom, and Carter gets injured from fighting the guy off. Basically the entire party and aftermath is an angstfest.
-->'''Adrian:''' What's wrong with mee? It's just..everything seems to come back to you, doesn't it. I mean, you're a total sex obsessed dick but you're here. You're here and in front of me, and you're the only one who makes it easy for me. The only fricking one...
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* Carter and Adrian's emotional states before they met. met, Carter being a 'collossal douchebag' desperate for sex. Adrian's sex, Adrian being heartbroken state after David.
what was with David.
-->'''Adrian:''' He destroooyed my heart. Rrripped it out. Dansched on it. Fatality. Bloody and gruesome, you know. We're friends now i guess, so it'sfine.
fine.
* Maria being sexually assaulted in the bedroom, and Carter gets injured from fighting the guy off. Basically the entire party and aftermath is anangstfest.
angstfest.
-->'''Adrian:''' What's wrong with mee? It'sjust..just... everything seems to come back to you, doesn't it. it? I mean, you're a total sex obsessed dick but you're here. You're here and in front of me, and you're the only one who makes it easy for me. The only fricking one...
-->'''Adrian:''' He destroooyed my heart. Rrripped it out. Dansched on it. Fatality. Bloody and gruesome, you know. We're friends now i guess, so it's
* Maria being sexually assaulted in the bedroom, and Carter gets injured from fighting the guy off. Basically the entire party and aftermath is an
-->'''Adrian:''' What's wrong with mee? It's
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-->'''Carter:'''Oh. Okay. Hahahaha..." [[spoiler: subverted, Adrian was also joking about that and kisses him anyway.]]
* Adrian and Carter's faces after [[spoiler: they give each other handjobs]] and their faces of regret.
* Carter walking home depressed in the pouring rain, not even bothering to put on his hood as he slowly becomes drenched once again.
* Their fight in which Carter drops the bombshell 'You've been using me.' and Adrian's response? 'Forget it.' Cue Carter's heartbroken face, only to be made worse when he returns the theatre tickets and skips school.
* Adrian and Carter's faces after [[spoiler: they give each other handjobs]] and their faces of regret.
* Carter walking home depressed in the pouring rain, not even bothering to put on his hood as he slowly becomes drenched once again.
* Their fight in which Carter drops the bombshell 'You've been using me.' and Adrian's response? 'Forget it.' Cue Carter's heartbroken face, only to be made worse when he returns the theatre tickets and skips school.
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-->'''Carter:'''Oh. Okay. Hahahaha..." [[spoiler: subverted, Subverted; Adrian was also actually joking about that ''that'' and kisses him anyway.]]
* Adrian and Carter's faces after [[spoiler: they give each other handjobs]] and theirfaces expressions of regret.
* Carter walking home depressed in the pouring rain, not even bothering to put on his hood as he slowly becomes drenched onceagain.
again.
* Theirfight argument in which Carter drops the bombshell 'You've bombshell: "You've been using me.' and " Adrian's response? 'Forget "Forget it.' " Cue Carter's heartbroken face, only to be made worse when he returns the theatre tickets and skips school.
* Adrian and Carter's faces after [[spoiler: they give each other handjobs]] and their
* Carter walking home depressed in the pouring rain, not even bothering to put on his hood as he slowly becomes drenched once
* Their
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Adrian and Carter's faces after [[spoiler: they give each other handjobs]] and their faces of regret.
Carter walking home depressed in the pouring rain, not even bothering to put on his hood as he slowly becomes drenched once again.
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* Carter walking home depressed in the pouring rain, not even bothering to put on his hood as he slowly becomes drenched once
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*Their fight in which Carter drops the bombshell 'You've been using me.' and Adrian's response? 'Forget it.' Cue Carter's heartbroken face, only to be made worse when he returns the theatre tickets and skips school.
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Adrian and Carter's faces after [[spoiler: they give each other handjobs]] and their faces of regret.
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-->'''Carter:'''Oh. Okay. Hahahaha..."
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-->'''Carter:'''Oh. Okay. Hahahaha..."" [[spoiler: subverted, Adrian was also joking about that and kisses him anyway.]]
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* Adrian's expression when he retracts his hand from next to Carter's when they're stargazing.
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* Adrian's expression when he retracts his hand from next to Carter's when they're stargazing.stargazing.
*The heartbreaking disappointment on Carter's face when Adrian reveals he was kidding about kissing him, even after working up a sweat to beat him. He attempts to laugh it off.
--> "Oh. Okay. Hahahaha..."
*The heartbreaking disappointment on Carter's face when Adrian reveals he was kidding about kissing him, even after working up a sweat to beat him. He attempts to laugh it off.
--> "Oh. Okay. Hahahaha..."
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* Maria being sexually assaulted in the bedroom, and Carter gets injured from fighting the guy off.
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* Maria being sexually assaulted in the bedroom, and Carter gets injured from fighting the guy off. Basically the entire party and aftermath is an angstfest.
-->'''Adrian:''' What's wrong with mee? It's just..everything seems to come back to you, doesn't it. I mean, you're a total sex obsessed dick but you're here. You're here and in front of me, and you're the only one who makes it easy for me. The only fricking one...
-->'''Adrian:''' What's wrong with mee? It's just..everything seems to come back to you, doesn't it. I mean, you're a total sex obsessed dick but you're here. You're here and in front of me, and you're the only one who makes it easy for me. The only fricking one...
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* Carter and Adrian's emotional states before they met. Carter being a 'collossal douchebag' desperate for sex. Adrian's heartbroken state after David.
-->'''Adrian:''' He destroooyed my heart. Rrripped it out. Dansched on it. Fatality. Bloody and gruesome, you know. We're friends now i guess, so it's fine.
-->'''Adrian:''' He destroooyed my heart. Rrripped it out. Dansched on it. Fatality. Bloody and gruesome, you know. We're friends now i guess, so it's fine.
