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* Valerie is called Shendu's "[[ComicBook/HarleyQuinn Harley-Quinn]] rip off" by the burglars' leader in the 17th chapter.
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* Valerie is called Shendu's "[[ComicBook/HarleyQuinn Harley-Quinn]] rip off" by the burglars' leader in the 17th chapter.chapter.
* A citation from ''Literature/TheBloodyChamber'' continues the recurrent habit from ''The Ultimate Evil'' to describe Shendu and Valerie's relationship.
* A citation from ''Literature/TheBloodyChamber'' continues the recurrent habit from ''The Ultimate Evil'' to describe Shendu and Valerie's relationship.
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* Shendu showing Valerie his human disguise and his disappointment at her reaction are borrowed from ''Manga/TheAncientMagusBride''.
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* While trying to meditate, Drago mutters that "[[Theatre/TheMerchantOfVenice the sins of the father are to be laid upon the children]]".
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* While trying to meditate, meditate in the ninth chapter, Drago mutters that "[[Theatre/TheMerchantOfVenice the sins of the father are to be laid upon the children]]".
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* Valerie can't help but think of ''Franchise/JurassicPark'' when she enters the zoo where the resurrected Shendu has followed her friends. When she and Jade are later hiding from Drago in a school library, she mutters that no one had better start humming the theme.
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* Valerie, who already compared her first visit to Section 13 to being in a ''Franchise/MenInBlack'' film in ''The Ultimate Evil'', hums the theme song when she first returns there.
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* The ninth chapter has a quote borrowed from ''Film/RedRidingHood''.
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* Valerie and Shendu's confrontation in the antepenultimate chapter has lines borrowed from the climax of ''Film/{{Labyrinth}}''.
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* Nat calls Bai Tza [[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 "Ariel-wannabe"]] at one point.
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* When Uncle announces that he's going to pick up an apprentice, Valerie asks jokingly if it's going to be like [[Literature/HarryPotter Hogwarts]] wizard training.
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* Nat makes a reference to ''Franchise/StarWars'' by calling Tarakudo's MindOverMatter powers the Force and saying that she's no Jedi.
* Nat's last line in the 11th chapter ("We are in ''very'' serious trouble…") is a reference to ''Film/TheMummy1999'', used by the author as direct defiance of [[Film/TheMummy2017 the newest version]].
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* Nat makes a reference to ''Franchise/StarWars'' by calling Tarakudo's MindOverMatter powers [[MindOverMatter telekinetic powers]] the Force and saying that she's no not a Jedi.
* Nat's last line in the 11th chapter ("We are in ''very'' serious trouble…") is a reference to''Film/TheMummy1999'', used by ''Film/TheMummy1999'' and the author as author's direct defiance of [[Film/TheMummy2017 the newest 2017 version]].
* Nat's last line in the 11th chapter ("We are in ''very'' serious trouble…") is a reference to
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* In the second chapter, Valerie cites ''Literature/AlicesAdventuresInWonderland'', ''Literature/{{Persuasion}}'' and a supposed Creator/WilliamShakespeare quote.
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-->'''Shendu''': You're with me now, that's all that matters, ''Valerie''...\\
'''Valerie''': You know my name...
'''Valerie''': You know my name...
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-->'''Shendu''': You're with me now, that's …that's all that matters, ''Valerie''...\\
''Valerie''…\\
'''Valerie''': You know myname...name…
'''Valerie''': You know my
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* Nat's last line in the 11th chapter ("We are in ''very'' serious trouble...") trouble…") is a reference to ''Film/TheMummy1999'', used by the author as direct defiance of [[Film/TheMummy2017 the newest version]].
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* Nat and Valerie mention [[Literature/HarryPotter the spells]] ''Wingardium Leviosa'' and ''Petrificus Totalus'' in the 14th chapter.
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* Valerie is called Shendu's "[[ComicBook/HarleyQuinn Harley-Quinn]] rip off" by the burglars' leader in the 17th chapter.
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* The 9th chapter has a quote borrowed from ''Film/RedRidingHood''.
-->'''Shendu''': You're with me now, that's all that matters, ''Valerie''...\\
'''Valerie''': You know my name...
-->'''Shendu''': You're with me now, that's all that matters, ''Valerie''...\\
'''Valerie''': You know my name...
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* Nat and Valerie mention [[Literature/HarryPotter the spells]] ''Wingardium Leviosa'' and ''Petrificus Totalus'' in the 14th chapter.
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* Nat's last line in the 11th chapter ("We are in ''very'' serious trouble...") is a reference to ''Film/TheMummy1999'', used by the author as direct defiance of ''[[Film/TheMummy2017 [[Film/TheMummy2017 the newest version]]''.version]].
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* Nat's last line in the 11th chapter ("We are in ''very'' serious trouble...") is uses by the author as direct defiance of ''Film/TheMummy2017''.
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* Nat's last line in the 11th chapter ("We are in ''very'' serious trouble...") is uses a reference to ''Film/TheMummy1999'', used by the author as direct defiance of ''Film/TheMummy2017''.''[[Film/TheMummy2017 the newest version]]''.
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* Nat makes a reference to ''Franchise/StarWars'' by calling Tarakudo's MindOverMatter powers the Force and saying that she's no Jedi.
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* Nat's last line in the 11th chapter ("We are in ''very'' serious trouble...") is uses by the author as direct defiance of ''Film/TheMummy2017''.
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* When reading the newspaper, Valerie comes across an article about homeless people spreading stories of [[WesternAnimation/{{Gargoyles}} gargoyles in New York]].
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* Nat makes a reference to ''Franchise/StarWars'' by calling Tarakudo's MindOverMatter powers the Force and saying that she's no Jedi
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* While trying to meditate, Drago mutters that "[[Theatre/TheMerchantOfVenice the sins of the father are to be laid upon the children]]".
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* While trying to meditate, Drago mutters that "[[Theatre/TheMerchantOfVenice the sins of the father are to be laid upon the children]]".children]]".
* When reading the newspaper, Valerie comes across an article about homeless people spreading stories of [[WesternAnimation/{{Gargoyles}} gargoyles in New York]].
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* Valerie mentions ''Film/TheTerminator'' when Jade assumes Drago to have a similar reason for coming to the present.
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* While trying to meditate, Drago mutters that "[[Theatre/TheMerchantOfVenice the sins of the father are to be laid upon the children]]".
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** When Valerie meets Nataline for the first time, she describes the demon hunter as [[Series/BuffyTheVampireSlayer Buffy The Vampire Slayer's]] long lost cousin.
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!!!The Stronger Evil
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* Valerie finds [[DiscoDan Finn's]] outfit to look something straight off of ''Film/SaturdayNightFever'' when she first sees it, and she describes Jade demonstrating the Rabbit Talisman's [[SuperSpeed power]] as turning into a mini version of the Franchise/TheFlash.
* Some quotations from classic literature — like ''Literature/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'', ''Literature/ThePhantomOfTheOpera'', ''Literature/BraveNewWorld'' and ''Literature/LesMiserables'' — are read out loud to make references to Shendu and Valerie's relationship as it develops.
* When Uncle announces that he's going to pick up an apprentice, Valerie asks jokingly if it's going to be like [[Literature/HarryPotter Hogwarts]] wizard training.
** When Valerie meets Nataline for the first time, she describes the demon hunter as [[Series/BuffyTheVampireSlayer Buffy The Vampire Slayer's]] long lost cousin.
* When Valerie swims frantically in the flooding Embarcadero Station, she compares the experience to being in close proximity to Film/{{Jaws}}.
!!!The Stronger Evil
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* Valerie finds [[DiscoDan Finn's]] outfit to look something straight off of ''Film/SaturdayNightFever'' when she first sees it, and she describes Jade demonstrating the Rabbit Talisman's [[SuperSpeed power]] as turning into a mini version of the Franchise/TheFlash.
* Some quotations from classic literature — like ''Literature/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'', ''Literature/ThePhantomOfTheOpera'', ''Literature/BraveNewWorld'' and ''Literature/LesMiserables'' — are read out loud to make references to Shendu and Valerie's relationship as it develops.
* When Uncle announces that he's going to pick up an apprentice, Valerie asks jokingly if it's going to be like [[Literature/HarryPotter Hogwarts]] wizard training.
** When Valerie meets Nataline for the first time, she describes the demon hunter as [[Series/BuffyTheVampireSlayer Buffy The Vampire Slayer's]] long lost cousin.
* When Valerie swims frantically in the flooding Embarcadero Station, she compares the experience to being in close proximity to Film/{{Jaws}}.
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