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* The Gruffs inspired the story "Literature/TheThreeBillyGoatsGruff" in-universe.
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* The Gruffs inspired the story "Literature/TheThreeBillyGoatsGruff" "Literature/ThreeBillyGoatsGruff" in-universe.
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* Eldest Gruff's approach at the abandoned cannery plays out a lot like the first on-screen appearance of a shrieker in ''Film/Tremors2Aftershocks''.
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* Eldest Gruff's approach at the abandoned cannery plays out a lot like the first on-screen appearance of a shrieker in ''Film/Tremors2Aftershocks''.''Film/Tremors2Aftershocks''.
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* Murphy quotes the same [[Creator/WilliamButlerYeats Yeats]] poem which Harry'd quoted back at the end of ''Literature/StormFront''.
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* Murphy quotes the same [[Creator/WilliamButlerYeats Yeats]] poem which Harry'd quoted back at the end of ''Literature/StormFront''.''Literature/{{Storm Front|DresdenFiles}}''.
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** Later, Harry tells Michael that because of his WalkingTechbane effect, he doesn't ride planes. Michael responds that "[[Film/{{Superman}} statistically speaking, flying is still the safest way to travel.]]"
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** Later, Harry tells Michael that because of his WalkingTechbane effect, he doesn't ride planes. Michael responds that "[[Film/{{Superman}} "[[Film/SupermanTheMovie statistically speaking, flying is still the safest way to travel.]]"
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* Once again, the Archive is compared to Bill Mumy's character Anthony Fremont from ''Series/TheTwilightZone1959''s adaptation of "Literature/ItsAGoodLife".
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* Once again, the Archive is compared to Bill Mumy's character Anthony Fremont from ''Series/TheTwilightZone1959''s ''Series/TheTwilightZone1959''’s adaptation of "Literature/ItsAGoodLife".
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* Faced with opponents whom Michael and Mouse can sense but he can't, Harry complains about not getting to [[Franchise/StarWars be the Jedi]].
** He quotes ''Franchise/StarWars'' a few paragraphs later, and calls Mouse "Chewie".
** He quotes ''Franchise/StarWars'' a few paragraphs later, and calls Mouse "Chewie".
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* Faced with opponents whom Michael and Mouse can sense but he can't, Harry complains about not getting to be the [[Franchise/StarWars be the Jedi]].
** He quotes ''Franchise/StarWars'' again a few paragraphs later, and calls Mouse "Chewie".
** He quotes ''Franchise/StarWars'' again a few paragraphs later, and calls Mouse "Chewie".
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** Harry compares Marcone's safe house to his own warded apartment, saying that his defenses are a little more Myth/{{Merlin}} and [[Film/JamesBond a little less Bond]].
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** Harry compares Marcone's safe house to his own warded apartment, saying that his defenses are a little more Myth/{{Merlin}} and a little less [[Film/JamesBond a little less Bond]].
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** Later, he compares what he and the Knights are doing to the biblical Daniel entering the lion's den.
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** Later, he compares what he and the Knights are doing to the biblical Daniel [[Literature/BookOfDaniel Daniel]] entering the lion's den.
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* After Michael reveals that it is not Kincaid's time yet, Harry [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries 'Spocks']] an [[FascinatingEyebrow eyebrow]] and gives him a look.
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* After Michael reveals that it is it’s not Kincaid's time yet, Harry [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries 'Spocks']] an [[FascinatingEyebrow eyebrow]] and gives him a look.
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* Thinking about the gruffs' possible maneuvers, Harry guesses that one might jump clear over him [[{{Wuxia}} Kung Fu Theater]] style.
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* Thinking about the gruffs' Gruffs' possible maneuvers, Harry guesses that one might jump clear over him [[{{Wuxia}} Kung Fu Theater]] style.
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** Harry compares Marcone's safe house to his own warded apartment, saying that his defenses are [[Myth/KingArthur a little more Merlin]] and [[Film/JamesBond a little less Bond]].
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** Harry compares Marcone's safe house to his own warded apartment, saying that his defenses are [[Myth/KingArthur a little more Merlin]] Myth/{{Merlin}} and [[Film/JamesBond a little less Bond]].
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** The original quote comes from [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rifleman%27s_Creed the Rifleman's Creed]], which apparently was/is a genuine part of [[SemperFi US Marine]] doctrine. Toot-toot is probably more likely to have seen the movie though, particularly since Harry attributes it to the movie when he hears Toot-toot say it.
** Toot-toot's "uniform" includes boots filched from a [[{{Franchise/Barbie}} Ken doll]] or a vintage Franchise/GIJoe.
** Toot-toot's "uniform" includes boots filched from a [[{{Franchise/Barbie}} Ken doll]] or a vintage Franchise/GIJoe.
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** The original quote comes from [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rifleman%27s_Creed the Rifleman's Creed]], which apparently was/is a genuine part of [[SemperFi US Marine]] doctrine. Toot-toot Toot-Toot is probably more likely to have seen the movie though, particularly since Harry attributes it to the movie when he hears Toot-toot Toot-Toot say it.
**Toot-toot's Toot-Toot's "uniform" includes boots filched from a [[{{Franchise/Barbie}} Ken doll]] or a vintage Franchise/GIJoe.
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* Toot-toot does a full-blown parody of ''Film/FullMetalJacket'': "This is my box-knife. There are many who like it, but this one is mine."
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* Toot-toot Toot-Toot does a full-blown parody of ''Film/FullMetalJacket'': "This is my box-knife. There are many who like it, but this one is mine."
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* Harry points out that in mid-fall, a Denarian is no more immune to gravity than anyone else in the hands of [[MotherNature Mother Earth]] and Creator/IsaacNewton.
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* Harry points out that in mid-fall, a Denarian is no more immune to gravity than anyone else in the hands of [[MotherNature Mother Earth]] and Creator/IsaacNewton.UsefulNotes/IsaacNewton.
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* Eldest Gruff's approach at the abandoned cannery plays out a lot like the first on-screen appearance of a shrieker in ''Film/Tremors2''.
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* Eldest Gruff's approach at the abandoned cannery plays out a lot like the first on-screen appearance of a shrieker in ''Film/Tremors2''.''Film/Tremors2Aftershocks''.
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* There's a subtle reference to ''Film/JurassicPark'' when Harry describes a Denarian's clawed footprint as "like a turkey's, only larger."[[note]]A kid at the beginning of the film calls the ''Velociraptor'' skeleton a "six-foot turkey" before Dr. Grant informs him just how dangerous they were.[[/note]] A bit later, what's likely the same Denarian stalks Ivy through some faux foliage and leaps out at her, raptor-like--only to be instantly vaporized by the Archive.
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* There's a subtle reference to ''Film/JurassicPark'' when Harry describes a Denarian's clawed footprint as "like a turkey's, only larger."[[note]]A kid at the beginning of the film calls the ''Velociraptor'' skeleton a "six-foot turkey" before Dr. Grant informs him just how dangerous they were.[[/note]] A bit later, what's likely the same Denarian stalks Ivy through some faux foliage and leaps out at her, raptor-like--only to be instantly vaporized by the Archive.Archive.
* Eldest Gruff's approach at the abandoned cannery plays out a lot like the first on-screen appearance of a shrieker in ''Film/Tremors2''.
* Eldest Gruff's approach at the abandoned cannery plays out a lot like the first on-screen appearance of a shrieker in ''Film/Tremors2''.
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* There's a subtle reference to ''Film/JurassicPark'' when Harry describes a Denarian's clawed footprint as "like a turkey's, only larger." A kid at the beginning of the film calls the ''Velociraptor'' skeleton a "six-foot turkey" before Dr. Grant informs him just how dangerous they were.
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* There's a subtle reference to ''Film/JurassicPark'' when Harry describes a Denarian's clawed footprint as "like a turkey's, only larger." A "[[note]]A kid at the beginning of the film calls the ''Velociraptor'' skeleton a "six-foot turkey" before Dr. Grant informs him just how dangerous they were.[[/note]] A bit later, what's likely the same Denarian stalks Ivy through some faux foliage and leaps out at her, raptor-like--only to be instantly vaporized by the Archive.
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* After Michael reveals that it is not Kincaid's time yet, Harry [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries 'Spocks']] an [[FascinatingEyebrow eyebrow]] and gives him a look.
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* After Michael reveals that it is not Kincaid's time yet, Harry [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries 'Spocks']] an [[FascinatingEyebrow eyebrow]] and gives him a look.look.
* There's a subtle reference to ''Film/JurassicPark'' when Harry describes a Denarian's clawed footprint as "like a turkey's, only larger." A kid at the beginning of the film calls the ''Velociraptor'' skeleton a "six-foot turkey" before Dr. Grant informs him just how dangerous they were.
* There's a subtle reference to ''Film/JurassicPark'' when Harry describes a Denarian's clawed footprint as "like a turkey's, only larger." A kid at the beginning of the film calls the ''Velociraptor'' skeleton a "six-foot turkey" before Dr. Grant informs him just how dangerous they were.
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* Charity is like the Series/MacGyver of the kitchen.
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* Charity is like the Series/MacGyver Series/{{MacGyver|1985}} of the kitchen.
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** In the same scene, Harry hums "[[Disney/{{Pinocchio}} When You Wish Upon a Star]]" while waiting for Toot's return.
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** In the same scene, Harry hums "[[Disney/{{Pinocchio}} "[[WesternAnimation/{{Pinocchio}} When You Wish Upon a Star]]" while waiting for Toot's return.