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** The club had once stopped the streak of a serial killer who had been killing high school girls, especially when they had killed a few of their schoolmates. It turns out... (Fukawa & Syo)
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** (Kreese)One day, Moritani was approached by a burly, intimidating man in black gi, challenging her to a fight. She accepts and ended up losing, completely outmatched by the man's expertise and dirty tricks, something the other clubmates called him out on. He then proudly introduced himself as John Kreese, head of the Cobra Kai dojo, which aims to train bullied kids into vicious fighters who can be bullies themselves and considers Moritani and her martial art both a joke and an insult as he is [[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain both racist and sexist towards her]] and her friends. After that unpleasant meeting, Daichi looked up his past; Kreese himself was trained by a harsh teacher who imparted to him the beliefs he has to this day, a backstory the club agrees it doesn't excuse his current behaviour.
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** It can be a shocking surprise to some people that [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Manabe is actually not as dumb as he comes across]]. For one, he can actually hold his own in a (non-powered) fight and he can distract himself with anything else other than his honest thoughts like reciting and memorizing numbers. This got him somehow connected to two superheroes, Plastic Man and Squirrel Girl with Plastic Man having more in common with Manabe such as being {{Chivalrous Pervert}}s, generally and being cunning and craftier than they look though Manabe is slightly jealous that Patrick has super stretching powers; Plas himself eggs Manabe on when it comes to making more risque fantasies and was delighted to meet the Head Priest as he himself respect monks and priests because a monastic order helped him recuperate and meditate. As for Squirrel Girl, she is ecstatic someone like Haruka got a nice boyfriend like Manabe and learned his trick of memorizing numbers both simple and complex to better combat against her enemies who are even more aggravated against her because of it.
** It can be a shocking surprise to some people that [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Manabe is actually not as dumb as he comes across]]. For one, he can actually hold his own in a (non-powered) fight and he can distract himself with anything else other than his honest thoughts like reciting and memorizing numbers. This got him somehow connected to two superheroes, Plastic Man and Squirrel Girl with Plastic Man having more in common with Manabe such as being {{Chivalrous Pervert}}s, generally and being cunning and craftier than they look though Manabe is slightly jealous that Patrick has super stretching powers; Plas himself eggs Manabe on when it comes to making more risque fantasies and was delighted to meet the Head Priest as he himself respect monks and priests because a monastic order helped him recuperate and meditate. As for Squirrel Girl, she is ecstatic someone like Haruka got a nice boyfriend like Manabe and learned his trick of memorizing numbers both simple and complex to better combat against her enemies who are even more aggravated against her because of it.
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Aside from Issei, Manabe has a hard time finding openly proud perverts in the Pantheons to share his joy with. That is, until he came across the elderly ninja Jiraiya, selling copies of his ''[[{{Filth}} Makeout Paradise]]'' book series. Not only does Manabe like it a lot, he finds a lot of kinship with the author, being {{Chivalrous Pervert}}s and hiding a lot of cunning beneath their seeming stupidity. Manabe was sad he didn't get to win [[Pantheon/CommercialAttitude Tsunade]]'s heart as Jiraiya died before ever getting to see how she truly feels, to which Jiraiya advises the young man to hold Haruka closer than ever before to never go through what he had... and also, keep imagining Haruka like the pervert he is. Who would've thought... At least, since Tsunade is still around, Manabe is also encouraging Jiraiya to win over her in return and the old man accepts the encouragement.
** It can be a shocking surprise to some people that [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Manabe is actually not as dumb as he comes across]]. For one, he can actually hold his own in a (non-powered) fight and he can distract himself with anything else other than his honest thoughts like reciting and memorizing numbers. This got him somehow connected to two superheroes, Plastic Man and Squirrel Girl with Plastic Man having more in common with Manabe such as being {{Chivalrous Pervert}}s, generally and being cunning and craftier than theylook look, just like with Jiraiya though Manabe is slightly jealous that Patrick has super stretching powers; Plas himself eggs Manabe on when it comes to making more risque fantasies and was delighted to meet the Head Priest as he himself respect monks and priests because a monastic order helped him recuperate and meditate. As for Squirrel Girl, she is ecstatic someone like Haruka got a nice boyfriend like Manabe and learned his trick of memorizing numbers both simple and complex to better combat against her enemies who are even more aggravated against her because of it.
** It can be a shocking surprise to some people that [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Manabe is actually not as dumb as he comes across]]. For one, he can actually hold his own in a (non-powered) fight and he can distract himself with anything else other than his honest thoughts like reciting and memorizing numbers. This got him somehow connected to two superheroes, Plastic Man and Squirrel Girl with Plastic Man having more in common with Manabe such as being {{Chivalrous Pervert}}s, generally and being cunning and craftier than they
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*** Creatures and villains who can induce MindRape or even advocates such a crime are also big no-no as they not only endanger Haruka but also the entire club. The Angel Arael is an incomprehensible alien who can infamously do so, as Asuka Langley Soryu can attest; she herself tolerates the club enough to talk to them normally but as Haruka does find out about her backstory via telepathy (which Asuka was offended at unlike Yuriko), the latter tries to be more discreet around her as she can be more nastier than Moritani, though Asuka does try to be better around the [=ESPer=], especially since both of them have a soft spot for cats. Johan Liebert is a dangerous enough man that most of his enemies that they allied with warned them against his effortless charisma and honeyed words which they heeded and Haruka has a feeling she wouldn't like what she'll she in his mind; Johan himself found out about Haruka and while he luckily hasn't gone after her yet, he does find her to be someone he can drive to off themself with ease. Kyubey can sense the despair in Haruka's heart even after she had overcame it and offered a chance to be a magical girl but before another word can be uttered, Madoka Kaname and Nanoha Takamachi are able to chase him away. Haruka and the club are thankful since she saw his agenda via telepathy and she didn't like what she was about to sign up for.
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*** Creatures and villains who can induce MindRape or even advocates such a crime are also big no-no as they not only endanger Haruka but also the entire club. The Angel Arael is an incomprehensible alien who can infamously do so, as Asuka Langley Soryu can attest; she herself tolerates the club enough to talk to them normally but as Haruka does find out about her backstory via telepathy (which Asuka was offended at unlike Yuriko), the latter tries to be more discreet around her as she can be more nastier than Moritani, though Asuka does try to be better around the [=ESPer=], especially since both of them have a soft spot for cats. Johan Liebert is a dangerous enough man that most of his enemies that they allied with warned them against his effortless charisma and honeyed words which they heeded and Haruka has a feeling she wouldn't like what she'll she in his mind; Johan himself found out about Haruka and while he luckily hasn't gone after her yet, he does find her to be someone he can drive to off themself with ease. Kyubey can sense the despair in Haruka's heart even after she had overcame it and offered a chance to be a magical girl but before another word can be uttered, Madoka Kaname and Nanoha Takamachi are able to chase him away. Haruka and the club are thankful since she saw his agenda via telepathy (she actually can't understand his native language but what she saw doesn't need words) and [[https://i.imgur.com/CIxWTwJ.png she didn't like what she was about to sign up for.for]].
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** (Osaka As the ESP Club go around Elysium Academy promoting their activities, Haruka suddenly caught [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qEoMMC1WP5U a really strange thought]] which caused her to [[FaintingSeer passed out]]. When she awakened, she saw her friends circling her... along with one perpetually smiling girl who thought the esper was sleeping in the hallway. As Haruka gets up, the girl introduced herself as Osaka, real name Ayumu Kasuga and co.)as the club get to know her, they realized she is way kookier than Manabe which made the pervert unusually competitive (in clean thoughts, don't worry). As both parties talk on, the rest of Osaka's friends entered the conversation with Haruka getting along very well with Chiyo in being the resident cuties who can also cook, Sakaki for being a fellow [[KindheartedCatLover cat lover]] and Yomi for also being bad at singing and was delighted that Haruka, Yuriko and Daichi once scored excellent grades on their final exams. Chiyo and her friends did hear out how and why the club turn out this way and began to be friends with them, even joining them for summer trips. As for some rocky interactions, Yomi chided Moritani for getting too many bad grades and Chiyo is scared of her atrocious cooking; Kagura did get along better with Moritani since she too is also BookDumb and is a tomboy good at sports, but she is also keeping an eye on the latter since she used to be pretty rude to Haruka. Going back to Osaka, her [[RealityIsOutToLunch bizarre]] yet [[AvertedTrope thankfully clean]] [[DirtyMindReading mental imagery]] often keeps Haruka entertained and amazed for hours while Haruka and somehow even Daichi, makes for a rather [[HilarityEnsues hilarious]] CloudCuckooLandersMinder. Osaka was also asked about the purple thing Manabe thought about when Haruka first met him, but she doesn't want to tell anybody else as she believes [[TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow they aren't ready to know what it is]].
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** The House of Pantheon/LoveAndAffection wait patiently for the day Haruka and Manabe will have their wedding though some members there are concerned that he's sexually fantasizing about them when he already has a girlfriend in her. Manabe insists that he always envisioned Haruka in their clothes even as much as he once proclaimed, "''Not being able to fantasize about women is the worst torture for a man!''", though that doesn't really ease their worries completely. Nevertheless, they can't bring themselves to fully hate Manabe because they know how earnest he is that Haruka is the only one for him.
