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We now exit out of the tranquil, unkept beauty that was ''Sandbox/NaturesBliss'' and into the big city known as ''Metropolis'' (This year's theme), a bustling hub
%%seemingly alive, streets, concrete jungle, crimes galore, CityNoir...live out your dreams or see them get crushed
%%A metropolis (/mɪˈtrɒpəlɪs/)[2] is a large city or conurbation which is a significant economic, political, and cultural area for a country or region, and an important hub for regional or international connections, commerce, and communications.
%%seemingly alive, streets, concrete jungle, crimes galore, CityNoir...live out your dreams or see them get crushed
%%A metropolis (/mɪˈtrɒpəlɪs/)[2] is a large city or conurbation which is a significant economic, political, and cultural area for a country or region, and an important hub for regional or international connections, commerce, and communications.
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We now exit out of the tranquil, unkept beauty that was ''Sandbox/NaturesBliss'' and into the big city known as ''Metropolis'' (This year's theme), a theme). A bustling hub
%%seemingly alive, streets, concrete jungle, crimes galore, CityNoir...hub where you can either live out your wildest dreams imaginable or see watch them get crushed
%%A metropolis (/mɪˈtrɒpəlɪs/)[2]crushed beyond repair. Where this concrete jungle is a large city or conurbation which is a significant economic, political, seemingly alive with
%%crimes galore andcultural area for a country or region, and an important hub for regional or international connections, commerce, and communications.
CityNoir, love
%%seemingly alive, streets, concrete jungle, crimes galore, CityNoir...
%%A metropolis (/mɪˈtrɒpəlɪs/)[2]
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** "The Seedlings 2: Home Sweet Home": Acorn and Seedo underwent a RelationshipUpgrade
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** "The Seedlings 2: Home Sweet Home": Acorn and Seedo underwent a RelationshipUpgrade
RelationshipUpgrade, spending a lot of time with each other
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** "Moving Day": Popsicle and Parfait became one during a Timeskip, making them the second sapphic blue-and-pink pairing confirmed by the former kissing the latter on the cheek.
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** "What's Important": Poppy and Azure/Ezel/? (Find out name), got together in the end
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** "What's Important": Poppy and Azure/Ezel/? (Find out name), got together in the end end, kisses her on the cheek
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** "Moving Day": Popsicle and Parfait became one during a Timeskip, the former kisses the latter on the cheek, blushing, the second pink-blue sapphic pairing
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* NeverTrustATitle: "2048", twenty-five years from 2023, current year of the festival, referring to the name of the abandoned building the gang decides to explore
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* NeverTrustATitle: "2048", "2048" suggest the short takes place exactly twenty-five years from 2023, current the year of the festival, ''Metropolis'' was released, when it's actually referring to the name of the abandoned building the gang decides to explore
explore.
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* TheHeist:
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* TheHeist: diamond
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* BoundAndGagged:
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* BoundAndGagged: Just only the bound part
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* AnachronismStew: The Sheriff proclaims that technology shouldn't exist yet but if there isn't then how come he knows what to call it in the first place? Not to mention among the townsfolk was a LED TV, a keyboard cap and the sheriff himself being a smartphone.
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* AnachronismStew: The Sheriff proclaims that technology shouldn't exist yet but if there isn't then isn't, how come he knows what to call it in the first place? Not to mention among the townsfolk was a LED TV, a keyboard cap and the sheriff himself being a smartphone.
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* DramaticCurtainToss: Lampy 47, paid to reveal inventions by pulling the cloth covering it
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Lampy mentions Large Incorporated's "two-year hiatus of radio silence", working on a revolutionary project, This is a not-subtle lampshade of how Sacri missed the deadline with their team for ''Nature's Bliss'' ...[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZsreJqQFlA video]], last seen in 2021's ''The Little Things''
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Lampy mentions Large Incorporated's "two-year hiatus of radio silence", working on a revolutionary project, This is a not-subtle lampshade of how Sacri missed the deadline with their team for ''Nature's Bliss'' ...[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZsreJqQFlA video]], last seen in 2021's ''The Little Things''
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* DramaticCurtainToss: Lampy 47, paid to reveal inventions by pulling the cloth covering it
it, unveil the time machine
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Lampy mentions Large Incorporated's "two-year hiatus of radiosilence", silence" while working on a revolutionary project, This is a not-subtle lampshade of not-so-subtly lampshading how Sacri missed the deadline with their team for ''Nature's Bliss'' ...[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZsreJqQFlA video]], last seen in 2021's ''The Little Things''
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Lampy mentions Large Incorporated's "two-year hiatus of radio
* ShoutOut: Mug pulls a [[Film/FerrisBuellersDayOff Ferris Bueller]] by popping up after the credits to tell the viewers to go home but then realise they're probably at home already so he says bye instead.
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* LiterallyShatteredLives:
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* LiterallyShatteredLives: Mug smashes him, easily too, which makes you wonder why nobody bothered to try this before the situation got worse
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* ShoutOut: ''Film/FerrisBuellersDayOff'', telling the viewers to go home but then realise they probably are home so he says bye instead
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* BrickJoke: The grape nontuplets wanted a skateboard... got one after the ring took a ride
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* BrickJoke: The grape nontuplets wanted a skateboard... got one after the ring took a ride on one
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* DeathIsCheap: the city is installed with communal recovery centers
* LiterallyShatteredLives: flower vase
* LiterallyShatteredLives: flower vase
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* DeathIsCheap: the The city is installed with communal recovery centers
* LiterallyShatteredLives: flowervasevase, shattered on impact with the concrete ground
* LiterallyShatteredLives: flower
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** "Opposites Attract": Cranberry and Tie
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** "Opposites Attract": Cranberry and TieTie, CrushBlush
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* FarmBoy:
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* FarmBoy: Cranberry, Tie used to be one until they moved into the city
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* {{Cyclops}}: wrench
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* {{Cyclops}}: The wrench
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* {{Idiosyncrazy}}: Archeville, the Mechanism
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* {{Idiosyncrazy}}: Archeville, the Mechanism Mechanism, architecture
* NotQuiteDead: Minnie, despite being [[BoomHeadshot shot clean through the head]], manages to survive with a fairly big crack running down his face and save the crew from the state police. This surprise the live chat as they thought there was no way he could make it.
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* NotQuiteDead: Minnie, despite being [[BoomHeadshot shot through the head]], manages to survive, nasty crack that spreads through the head, save the crew from the state police
* SoulCrushingDeskJob: 21 years straight
* SoulCrushingDeskJob: 21 years straight
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* UrbanRuins:
* DeliberateMonochrome:
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* TimeTravel:
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* TimeTravel: to the [=1920s=]
* AmbiguouslyGay: Sharpener specifies [[IHaveAFamily having a wife and kids]] while begging for her life. Although this was just one of the lies she told to garner sympathy, the wife part implies Sharpener has an interest in women at the very least.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: specify a wife and kids, she lied
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** but was later revealed to be a
* BlatantLies: Magenta keeps falling for it every single time, letting Sharpener and Eraser Cap go
* CrocodileTears:
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# Troop 16, Critter Crusaders, City Folk and Colour Crew - Varying unknown amounts[[note]][[/note]]
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# Troop 16, Critter Crusaders, City Folk and Colour Crew - Varying unknown amounts[[note]][[/note]]
amounts[[note]]between[[/note]]
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* AccessoryWearingCartoonAnimal:
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* AccessoryWearingCartoonAnimal: clothes, accessories, hats
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* {{Intermission}}: The festival got creative for ''Metropolis'', [[AudienceSurrogate Filmy]], ElevatorButtonsMash, PublicDomainSoundtrack as elevator music
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* {{Intermission}}: The festival got creative for ''Metropolis'', [[AudienceSurrogate Filmy]], ElevatorButtonsMash, PublicDomainSoundtrack [[PublicDomainSoundtrack various Kelvin MacLeod tracks]] as elevator music
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* OneSteveLimit: There's only a finite number of objects that are recognizable and relatively easy to animate..., named accordingly as per {{Object Show|s}} tradition, Banana
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* OneSteveLimit: There's only a finite number of objects that are recognizable and relatively easy to animate..., named accordingly as per {{Object Show|s}} tradition, Bananatradition
** Banana, both coincidentally have no legs
** Banana, both coincidentally have no legs
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* TheComicallySerious: Cigar builds himself up as a stone-cold/dead serious, smoking a cigarette, wears the outfit, CluelessDetective, says this as a matter-of-factly sells it
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* TheComicallySerious: Cigar builds himself up as a stone-cold/dead serious, hard-boiled detective, brooding, smoking a cigarette, wears the outfit, CluelessDetective, says this as a matter-of-factly sells it
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Burger ....complicated murder ploys, tripped over a rock and knocked unconscious
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Burger ....The detectives had their fair share of speculating complicated murder ploys, ploys for Burger's death, leading to an all-out argument over Cigar's, .... tripped over a rock and knocked unconscious
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* ItsTheJourneyThatCounts: subverted in that no...they still had to paid for bus and train fare and waited several hours for a huge disappointment
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* ItsTheJourneyThatCounts: subverted in that no...no, they still had to paid for bus and train fare and waited several hours to get there, so they have no net gain, for a huge disappointment
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* DeliberateVHSQuality: applied a grainy filter, including the thumbnail and credits
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* DeliberateVHSQuality: applied a grainy filter, including the thumbnail credits and credits
the thumbnail
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* DownerEnding: wakes up, sighs and stares out the window
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* DownerEnding: wakes up, sighs and stares out the window window, back in her toxic relationship with Peacock Feather
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* ShoutOut: ''VideoGame/TheLastOfUs''
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* ShoutOut: ''VideoGame/TheLastOfUs''''VideoGame/TheLastOfUs'', fungus growing out of the crevices
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* AnachronismStew: The Sheriff proclaims that technology shouldn't exist yet but if there isn't then how come he knows what to call it in the first place? Not to mention among the townsfolk was a LED tv, a keyboard cap and the sheriff himself being a smartphone.
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* AnachronismStew: The Sheriff proclaims that technology shouldn't exist yet but if there isn't then how come he knows what to call it in the first place? Not to mention among the townsfolk was a LED tv, TV, a keyboard cap and the sheriff himself being a smartphone.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Lampy ...their "two-year hiatus of radio silence", working on a revolutionary project, This is a not-subtle lampshade of how Sacri missed the deadline with their team for ''Nature's Bliss'' ...[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZsreJqQFlA video]], last seen in 2021's ''The Little Things''
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Lampy ...their Lampy mentions Large Incorporated's "two-year hiatus of radio silence", working on a revolutionary project, This is a not-subtle lampshade of how Sacri missed the deadline with their team for ''Nature's Bliss'' ...[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZsreJqQFlA video]], last seen in 2021's ''The Little Things''
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* QueerColors: Soda (Pansexual rainbow)
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* QueerColors: Soda (Pansexual rainbow) has a Pansexual rainbow
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* TokenMinority: potted plant is the only wheelchair-bound object, the entire film festival, in a wheelchair[[note]]Not Wheelchair from "A Failed Heist" earlier on[[/note]]
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* TokenMinority: potted plant Potted Plant is the only wheelchair-bound object, the entire film festival, in a wheelchair[[note]]Not festival[[note]]Not Wheelchair from "A Failed Heist" earlier on[[/note]]
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* NoSnackForYou:
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* NoSnackForYou:
NoSnackForYou: the last can of Awesome Sauce
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As the short was a relative success, a four-episode mini-series is in the works and TMOJ Official is currently [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PXHi923payo looking for auditions]].
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As the short was a relative success, a four-episode four-episode, musical mini-series is in the works and TMOJ Official is currently [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PXHi923payo looking for auditions]].
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Evett, ThePrankster, ill-thought out and unfunny at best or property-destroying at worst
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%% Evett uses any pronouns,
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Evett, ThePrankster, ill-thought out and unfunny at best or property-destroying at worst
worst (See NoodleIncident)
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%% Evett uses any
Ant colony
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* TheCityVsTheCountry:
* {{Cyclops}}: Adam has a puncture of where his eye should be
* {{Cyclops}}: Adam has a puncture of where his eye should be
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* TheCityVsTheCountry:
* SpeciesSurname: A marker named Mark has the surname of ''Marker''ton, doubling as a RepetitiveName.
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* GISSyndrome: the backgrounds
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* SpeciesSurname: Mark, Marker, ''Marker''ton
* AmbitiousButLazy: Lamp
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* ShoutOut: orange scard Kenny, ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark''
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* ShoutOut: orange scard scarf Kenny, ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark''
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* TheUnintelligible: Latte, muffled speech, scarf
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* TheUnintelligible: Latte, mostly muffled speech, scarf
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* ShipTease:
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* ArtInitiatesLife:
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* ArtInitiatesLife: Paint Can
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* NotSoBadassLongcoat: Cigar, completely useless, imbecile
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* NotSoBadassLongcoat: Cigar, completely useless, useless imbecile
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* DirectorsCut: [=RainbowServal=] later uploaded a [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u07IK1cAwQw remastered version]] which adds an extra scene of Sundew and Glass Shard ...taking the elevator, Radio is a bit more .... but not much
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* DirectorsCut: [=RainbowServal=] later uploaded a [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u07IK1cAwQw remastered version]] which adds is the original storyboards with the audio. Notable changes include an extra scene of Sundew and Glass Shard ...taking the elevator, elevator... Radio is a bit more .... but not much
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* ScarsAreForever: Joe now wears a cup sleeve ever since a NoodleIncident where someone resisted arrest by poking a hole through his body with a comically oversized straw.
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* ScarsAreForever: Joe now wears a cup sleeve ever since a the NoodleIncident where someone resisted arrest by poking a hole through his body with a comically oversized straw.
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* LimitedAnimation: The climax wasn't animated at all since Bot Allen didn't have much time left before the festival's deadline and resorted to storyboards with narration.
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* LimitedAnimation: The climax wasn't animated at all since Bot Allen didn't have much time left before was reaching the festival's deadline and resorted to storyboards with narration.
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* MorningRoutine: how their life went down the drain, wake up early, brush their teeth with a sponge, drink coffee while communing on the train as they stare dead-eyed at the Coffee drinking from a mug, punch in (slide card at the terminal for access), do paperwork
* NotQuiteDead: Minnie, despite being [[BoomHeadshot shot through the head]], manages nasty crack that spreads through the head
* NotQuiteDead: Minnie, despite being [[BoomHeadshot shot through the head]], manages nasty crack that spreads through the head
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* MorningRoutine: Teana's is to show how their her life went down the drain, is absolutely miserable....dead, wake up early, brush their teeth with a sponge, drink coffee while communing on the train as they stare dead-eyed at the Coffee drinking from a mug, punch in (slide card at the terminal for access), do paperwork
* NotQuiteDead: Minnie, despite being [[BoomHeadshot shot through the head]], manages to survive, nasty crack that spreads through theheadhead, save the crew from the state police
* NotQuiteDead: Minnie, despite being [[BoomHeadshot shot through the head]], manages to survive, nasty crack that spreads through the
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* YouAreNumberSix: Teena... Mug [=D35=], says "Object" as opposed to "Name" in her identity status
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* YouAreNumberSix: Teena... Mug [=D35=], says "Object" as opposed to "Name" in her identity status
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* CastOfExpies:
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* CastOfExpies: supposed to represent a member of the Griffins
* AllThereInTheManual: We only know the protagonist's name is Beepdoot from the credits as there's no dialogue spoken in the short itself.
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* AllThereInTheManual: Beepdoot
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** In "Oh No.", The newscasters Ace and Lynx are voiced by Ace and Lynx respectively (Though the former is credited as Corndni).
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** In "Oh No.", The newscasters in "Oh No." are named Ace and Lynx are voiced by Ace and Lynx respectively like their respective voice actors (Though the former is credited as Corndni).
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* ClosestThingWeGot: After some careful consideration, Clipboard picks Harmonica to be a part of Flamora in spite of their [[ReformedCriminal criminal background]] and being quite proud of it. The only reason being the five candidates are all unqualified idiots that would have been immediately rejected on the spot in any other company so Harmonica was just the best of the worst.
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte is [[TheDitz incompetent]], Lamp has too many future plans, Snotty is a [[GreenIsGross health violation]] and Harmonica's [[DamnedByFaintPraise our best option]].
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte is [[TheDitz incompetent]], Lamp has too many future plans, Snotty is a [[GreenIsGross health violation]] and Harmonica's [[DamnedByFaintPraise our best option]].
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* ClosestThingWeGot: After some careful consideration, Clipboard picks Harmonica to be a part of Flamora in spite of their [[ReformedCriminal criminal background]] and being quite proud of it. The only reason being why so is because the five candidates are all unqualified idiots that would have been immediately rejected on the spot in any other company so Harmonica was just the best of the worst.
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte is [[TheDitz incompetent]], Lamp has [[AmbitiousButLazy too many futureplans, plans]], Snotty is a [[GreenIsGross health violation]] and Harmonica's [[DamnedByFaintPraise our best option]].
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte is [[TheDitz incompetent]], Lamp has [[AmbitiousButLazy too many future
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** "FRAGMENTS": Fish Cake spent the entire short finding a way back to his boyfriend Wrench after his elimination. They share the only kiss on the lips in ''Metropolis'', and the second in the 48-Hour OSC Film Festival as a whole.
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** "FRAGMENTS": Fish Cake spent the entire short finding a way back to his boyfriend Wrench after his elimination. They share the only kiss on the lips in ''Metropolis'', and the second in the 48-Hour ''48-Hour OSC Film Festival Festival'' as a whole.
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* AudienceSurrogate: Filmy
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* AudienceSurrogate: FilmyFilmy, huge fan of the festival, looking forward to it
* ArtShift: The {{Imagine Spot}}s of the characters are in different art styles which [[StylisticSuck progressively degrades]] with every reenactment.
* NotQuiteDead: Burger, the murder victim whom the detectives spent the entire plot figuring out how he died, was actually asleep the whole time in spite of his body being scattered everywhere. It turns out he just tripped over a rock and got knocked out from the fall.
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* ArtShift: ImagineSpot, progressively [[StylisticSuck degrades]] with every reenactment
* TheComicallySerious: Cigar builds himself up as a stone-cold/dead serious, smoking a cigerette, wears the outfit, CluelessDetective, says this as a matter-of-factly sells it
* CityNoir: The first short
* TheComicallySerious: Cigar builds himself up as a stone-cold/dead serious, smoking a cigerette, wears the outfit, CluelessDetective, says this as a matter-of-factly sells it
* CityNoir: The first short
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* CityNoir: The first short in ''Metropolis''
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* NotQuiteDead: Burger who the detectives spent the entire plot ....was actually asleep the whole time
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* NaiveNewcomer: first of work in a big company, video diary, interviews with various people, reminded me of the
* SurroundedByIdiots: Shakey's true feelings
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* NaiveNewcomer: The short follows Star Ledger on her first of work in a big company, video diary, interviews with various people, reminded me of the
* SurroundedByIdiots: Shakey's true feelings about their colleagues
* SurroundedByIdiots: Shakey's true feelings about their colleagues
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* ALizardNamedLiz: Sunflower named "Sunny", fedora named "Fedoric" (A {{Portmanteau}} combining fedora and Fredrick)
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* ALizardNamedLiz: Sunflower Two of the objects in the short are a sunflower named "Sunny", "Sunny" and a fedora named "Fedoric" (A {{Portmanteau}} combining fedora "[[{{Portmanteau}} Fedoric]]".
* {{Portmanteau}}: Fedoric's name is a combination of the hat "fedora" andFredrick)the human name "Fredrick".
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* DudeNotFunny: Waulk administered a DopeSlap on Tuts after he jokes about their boss getting arrested for accidental murder with a stupid {{Pun}}.
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* DudeNotFunny: Waulk administered a DopeSlap on Tuts after he jokes about their boss getting arrested for accidental murder homicide with a stupid {{Pun}}.
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* CheknovsGun:
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* CheknovsGun: ChekhovsGun: Ty's flask, cluing Tuts in on who the murderer is
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* FromBadToWorse: Dollar... overslept, cold shower, stubs toe on a coffee table, rent's warning notice, splash by puddle, tripped over rock and miss train, super late to work, does bad presentation to the meeting board, got laid off and told to get out, drunk himself silly at the bar, girlfriend breaks up with him for missing their date,
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* FromBadToWorse: Dollar... overslept, cold shower, stubs toe on a coffee table, rent's warning notice, splash by puddle, tripped over rock and miss train, super late to work, does bad presentation to the meeting board, got laid off and told to get out, drunk himself silly at the bar, girlfriend breaks up with him for missing their date, date... and get this, this is the ''second'' worst day anyone had in ''Metropolis''
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* AlwaysSecondBest: Subverted... after Oska, Nic and Raine...previous ''Lost and Found'' and ''WebAnimation/DandelionTheWorldBeginsWithYou'' receiving second place, ... WILL was the one to break the trend and nabbed them first place, collaborating with strong contenders Olivia (Natural Bliss) and Daniel Adam Valle (''Sandbox/AFloristsFolly'')
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* AlwaysSecondBest: Subverted...Subverted.. after Oska, Nic and Raine...previous ''Lost and Found'' and ''WebAnimation/DandelionTheWorldBeginsWithYou'' receiving second place, ...place in the last, ... WILL was the one to break the trend and nabbed them first place, collaborating with strong contenders Olivia (Natural Bliss) and Daniel Adam Valle (''Sandbox/AFloristsFolly'')
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* DeletedScene: There was an alternate scene in "Failed Heist" where Wheelchair couldn't cut open the display case with the saw since it was made of glass so Lime devise a new strategy of beating up the guards. When WC asked how they are gonna do that without weapons, Lime confidently says with their fists all the while raising up his leg as he [[ArmlessBiped doesn't have arms]]. He immediately tells a smirking Wheelchair to zip it due to realising the {{Irony}}.
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* DeletedScene: There was an alternate scene in "Failed Heist" where Wheelchair couldn't cut open the display case with the saw since it was made of glass so Lime devise a new strategy of beating up the guards. When WC Wheelchair asked how they are gonna do that without weapons, Lime confidently says with their fists all the while raising up his leg as he [[ArmlessBiped doesn't have arms]]. He immediately tells a smirking Wheelchair to zip it due to realising the {{Irony}}.
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** In "Magical Malfunction", [=RainbowServal=] confirmed Sundew is [[NonHumanNonBinary non-binary]] while [[https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1115936679417626654/1122114317375000688/glass_shard_objectum_pride.png Glass Shard]] identifies as [[https://www.lgbtqia.wiki/wiki/Objectum Objectum]] which the attraction to inanimate objects as opposed to {{Animate Inanimate Object}}s (Kind of [[FurryConfusion paradoxical]] thinking about it).
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** In "Magical Malfunction", [=RainbowServal=] confirmed Sundew is [[NonHumanNonBinary non-binary]] while [[https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1115936679417626654/1122114317375000688/glass_shard_objectum_pride.png Glass Shard]] identifies as [[https://www.lgbtqia.wiki/wiki/Objectum Objectum]] which the attraction to inanimate objects as opposed to {{Animate Inanimate Object}}s (Kind of [[FurryConfusion paradoxical]] thinking about it).to think about).
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* OneSteveLimit: There's only a finite number of objects that are recognisable and relatively easy to animate..., named accordingly as per {{Object Show|s}} tradition, Banana
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* OneSteveLimit: There's only a finite number of objects that are recognisable recognizable and relatively easy to animate..., named accordingly as per {{Object Show|s}} tradition, Banana
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* QueerColors:
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* QueerColors: pride flags
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sets up a UsefulNotes/{{Lemonade Stand|s}}
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CJ sets up a UsefulNotes/{{Lemonade Stand|s}}Stand|s}} in hopes of garnering enough money to buy the toy model she wanted but business proved to be incredibly successful beyond xir wildest dreams.
* OnlyKnownByInitials: CJ's full name is Cookie Jar but is not called that once during the short.
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* AccessoryWearingCartoonAnimal: CJ, wears glasses and boots
* OnlyKnownByInitials: CJ's full name is Cookie Jar but
* OnlyKnownByInitials: CJ's full name is Cookie Jar but
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* AccessoryWearingCartoonAnimal: CJ, wears glasses glasses/spectacles and boots
* OnlyKnownByInitials: CJ's full name is Cookie Jar butpurple boots
* OnlyKnownByInitials: CJ's full name is Cookie Jar but
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* ShowWithinAShow: LeaningOnTheFourthWall, watching the screening of the 48-Hour OSC Film Festival, "Screeningception" as the video's description lampshades
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* ShowWithinAShow: In a case of LeaningOnTheFourthWall, a background character was watching the screening of the 48-Hour OSC Film Festival, ''Metropolis'' on their phone, "Screeningception" as the video's description lampshades
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** "FRAGMENTS": Fish Cake spent the entire short finding a way back to his boyfriend Wrench after his elimination. They share the only kiss on the lips in ''Metropolis'', and the second in the 48-Hour OSC Film Festival as a whole.
* AudienceParticipation: QR code that takes you to the donation drive, chat, commenting on the events going on in the short
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** "Moving Day": Popsicle and Parfait, during the Timeskip, the former kisses the latter on the cheek, blushing, the second pink-blue sapphic pairing
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** "Moving Day": Popsicle and Parfait, Parfait became one during the a Timeskip, the former kisses the latter on the cheek, blushing, the second pink-blue sapphic pairing
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** "FRAGMENTS": Fish Cake and Wrench, the former spent the entire short finding a way to the latter after his elimination, they share only kiss on the lips in the festival, ''Metropolis'', and the second overall
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We now exit out of last year's tranquil, unkept beauty of ''Nature Bliss'' and into the big city known as ''Metropolis'' (This year's theme), a bustling hub
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We now exit out of last year's the tranquil, unkept beauty of ''Nature Bliss'' that was ''Sandbox/NaturesBliss'' and into the big city known as ''Metropolis'' (This year's theme), a bustling hub
** "Terrors And Fables Of The Horrible City Of Cityplace": Claire Wilson was revealed to have a wife who didn't take her death well at all and spends her only scene crying puddles over her lost beloved.
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** "Terrors And Fables Of The Horrible City Of Cityplace": Claire Wilson was revealed to have a wife who didn't take her death well at al, love her so much, spends her only scene crying puddles
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** "Moving Day": Popsicle and Parfait, during the Timeskip, the former kisses the latter on the cheek, blushing
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** "Moving Day": Popsicle and Parfait, during the Timeskip, the former kisses the latter on the cheek, blushing blushing, the second pink-blue sapphic pairing
* MediumShiftGag: The animated short switches to live-action for Fountain Pen's [[ImagineSpot segment]].
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* MediumShiftGag: switch live-action for Fountain Pen's segment
* NotQuiteDead: Burger was merely asleep
* NotQuiteDead: Burger was merely asleep
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* AmbiguousCriminalHistory: Poppy
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* AmbiguousCriminalHistory: Poppy Poppy, on the run from the police, paid some cops, CorruptCop
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* DestructiveRomance: just got out of it
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* DestructiveRomance: Poppy, just got out of it
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* LiterallyShatteredLives:
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* LiterallyShatteredLives:
LiterallyShatteredLives: the orb
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* OneHeadTaller: Mike
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* OneHeadTaller: MikeMike is significantly taller than Aaron
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* UndignifiedDeath: Through exploiting their WeaksauceWeakness, Dr. Peavil defeats Cotton Candy using just a spray bottle filled with water who pathetically [[ImMelting melts]] ala [[Film/WizardOfOz The Wicked Witch of the West]] meets ''Literature/CaptainUnderpants''. Dr. Peavil herself similarly met a humiliating fate after Briefcase threw an eraser at her, initially shrugging it off before realising it was a ''latex'' eraser she was deathly allergic to. One FuneralCut later:
-->'''Gravestone:''' R.I.P Dr. Peavil - Died to office supplies like a loser lol.
-->'''Gravestone:''' R.I.P Dr. Peavil - Died to office supplies like a loser lol.
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* UndignifiedDeath: Through exploiting their WeaksauceWeakness, Dr. Peavil defeats Cotton Candy using just a spray bottle filled with water who pathetically [[ImMelting melts]] ala [[Film/WizardOfOz The Wicked Witch of the West]] meets ''Literature/CaptainUnderpants''. Dr. Peavil herself similarly met a humiliating fate after Briefcase threw an eraser at her, initially shrugging it off before realising it was a ''latex'' eraser she was she's deathly allergic to. One FuneralCut later:
-->'''Gravestone:''' R.I.P Dr. Peavil - Died to office supplies like aloser loser, lol.
-->'''Gravestone:''' R.I.P Dr. Peavil - Died to office supplies like a
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* SilentProtagonist: doesn't respond or engage with the shenanigans behind him, Dr. Peavil
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* SilentProtagonist: Briefcase doesn't respond or engage with the shenanigans behind him, Dr. Peavil
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* RelationshipUpgrade: Parfait and Posicle, kiss her on the cheek
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* RelationshipUpgrade: Parfait and Posicle, kiss her on the cheek, coincidentally this is the second pink-blue sapphic pairing where the blue object kisses the pink object on the cheek to signify their upgrade/relationship
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* CloningBlues: It turns out the multiple Lampys in ''[[Sandbox/TheLittleThingsOSC The Little Things]]'' were not special effects but actual clones with their own thoughts and personalities separate from the original Lampy. Collectively, they all feel incredibly miserable over the fact of having no purpose other than working at Large Incorporated, especially [[YouAreNumberSix Lampy 47]] who wants to live their own life as a dancer instead of a "[[DramaticCurtainToss cloth-remover]]".
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* AscendedExtra: Lampy's clones who acted as {{Living Prop}}s from the previous short now have a slightly bigger role with their own feelings and [[CloningBlues thoughts about their current predicament]].
* CloningBlues: It turns out the multiple Lampys in ''[[Sandbox/TheLittleThingsOSC The Little Things]]'' were not special effects but actual clones with their own thoughts and personalities separate from the original Lampy. Collectively, they all feel incredibly miserable over the fact of having no purpose other than working at Large Incorporated, especially [[YouAreNumberSix Lampy 47]] who wants to live their own life as a dancer instead of a "[[DramaticCurtainToss cloth-remover]]". It's also implied that none of the clones can leave the building as seen by the numerous prison cells lining the walls, some of whom have gone stir-crazy from isolation.
* CloningBlues: It turns out the multiple Lampys in ''[[Sandbox/TheLittleThingsOSC The Little Things]]'' were not special effects but actual clones with their own thoughts and personalities separate from the original Lampy. Collectively, they all feel incredibly miserable over the fact of having no purpose other than working at Large Incorporated, especially [[YouAreNumberSix Lampy 47]] who wants to live their own life as a dancer instead of a "[[DramaticCurtainToss cloth-remover]]". It's also implied that none of the clones can leave the building as seen by the numerous prison cells lining the walls, some of whom have gone stir-crazy from isolation.
* {{Hypocrite}}: The sheriff declares that Lampy and the time machine is unwanted here in TheWildWest as modern-day technology should not exist. This is in spite of the fact he's a living smartphone and a tv and keyboard cap are blatantly shown behind him while making the statement.
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* AscendedExtra: Lampy's clones that acted as {{Living Prop}}s from the previous short, now have a bigger role with their own feelings ...about their current predicament
* TheBusCameBack
* TheBusCameBack
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* AscendedExtra: Lampy's clones that acted as {{Living Prop}}s from the previous short, now TheBusCameBack: to have a bigger role with their own feelings ...about their current predicament
* TheBusCameBack{{Sequel}}
* TheBusCameBack
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* DramaticCurtainToss: Lampy 47, paid to reveal inventions by pulling the cloth covering it
* {{Hypocrite}}: The sheriff ...the time machine is unwanted as he declares that there's no technology in TheWildWest in spite of the fact he's a living smartphone, tv and a keyboard cap blatantly shown in the shot
* {{Hypocrite}}: The sheriff ...the time machine is unwanted as he declares that there's no technology in TheWildWest in spite of the fact he's a living smartphone, tv and a keyboard cap blatantly shown in the shot
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* DramaticCurtainToss: Lampy 47, 47, paid to reveal inventions by pulling the cloth covering it
* {{Hypocrite}}: The sheriff ...the time machine is unwanted as he declares that there's no technology in TheWildWest in spite of the fact he's a living smartphone, tv and a keyboard cap blatantly shown in the shotit
* {{Hypocrite}}: The sheriff ...the time machine is unwanted as he declares that there's no technology in TheWildWest in spite of the fact he's a living smartphone, tv and a keyboard cap blatantly shown in the shot
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* MythologyGag:
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* MythologyGag: context, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=62owPtMWbTE video]], Lampy having to be cloned to keep the company running
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: banned Minecraft, that last one cause Mug to take action
* FunHatingVillain:
* FunHatingVillain:
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: banned Minecraft, that last one cause caused Mug to take action
* FunHatingVillain: the future mayor
* FunHatingVillain: the future mayor
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* MediumShiftGag: live-action
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* MediumShiftGag: switch live-action for Fountain Pen's segment
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* ItsTheJourneyThatCounts: subverted in that no...they still had to paid for bus and train fare, a huge disappointment
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* ItsTheJourneyThatCounts: subverted in that no...they still had to paid for bus and train fare, fare and waited several hours for a huge disappointment
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* SmokingIsCool: Cigar smokes a cigarette (Even though he is one) to give off the impression of being a hard-boiled detective.
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* CityNoir:
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* CityNoir: The first short
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* SmokingIsCool: Cigar smokes a cigerette even though he is one, hard-boiled detective
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Burger
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Burger
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* AllForNothing: spent nearly two hours and quite a sum of fare money to get to the city, only for it to turn out to be a huge disappointment
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* AllForNothing: The trio spent nearly two hours and quite a sum of fare money to get to the city, fabled Silver City, only for it to turn out to be a huge disappointmentdisappointment when it didn't meet their expectations at all. Strawberry tried subverting it by pointing out ItsTheJourneyThatCounts but Bucket shot that down immediately.
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl:
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: Fedoric, Sunny
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* BlandNameProduct: The shopkeeper is a box of "hockey sticks" -> [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pocky Pocky Sticks]]
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* BlandNameProduct: The shopkeeper is a box of "hockey sticks" -> sticks", [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pocky Pocky Sticks]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: Glass Shard couldn't shake of the bad feeling that Radio tasked someone vastly underqualified for his job so he cut his much-needed vacation short. Lo and behold, the company is undergoing a magical nuclear meltdown that threatens the entire metropolis... He manages to save the day...
* {{Bizarrchitecture}}: {{Floating Platform|s}} stairs, parkour course
* {{Bizarrchitecture}}: {{Floating Platform|s}} stairs, parkour course
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* BigDamnHeroes: Glass Shard couldn't shake of off the bad feeling that Radio tasked someone vastly underqualified for his job so he cut his much-needed vacation short.short and head back. Lo and behold, the company is undergoing a magical nuclear meltdown that threatens the entire metropolis... He manages to save the day...
* {{Bizarrchitecture}}: To access the Orb, Sundew must hop onto {{Floating Platform|s}}stairs, stairwell which were spaced so far apart, it might as well be a parkour course course ....WordOfGod confirms the stairwell, housing, employers, jobs in the company is important and needs to be constantly maintain
* {{Bizarrchitecture}}: To access the Orb, Sundew must hop onto {{Floating Platform|s}}
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* DirectorsCut: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u07IK1cAwQw remastered version]], added an extra scene of
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* DirectorsCut: [=RainbowServal=] later uploaded a [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u07IK1cAwQw remastered version]], added version]] which adds an extra scene of Sundew and Glass Shard ...taking the elevator, Radio is a bit more .... but not much
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* TimeSkip: cycles through
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* TimeSkip: cycles through
through a whole bunch until it lands on
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: desperately wanted customers to come to their pizzeria
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: desperately wanted customers to come to their pizzeriapizzeria, deal with the long line of police officers, for free, to make up for the vandalism
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* TheUnreveal: The detectives suspect the broken glass door of the nightclub to be a major clue in the case, yet none of their {{Imagine Spot}}s can give a solid answer and in the end, it's never explained how the door was shattered in the first place, not even after Burger's flashback.
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* TheUnreveal: The detectives suspect the broken glass door of the nightclub to be a major clue in the case, yet none of their {{Imagine Spot}}s can give a solid answer and in the end, it's never explained how the door was shattered in the first place, not place even after Burger's flashback.
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* PlantPerson:
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* PlantPerson: Bush
* BroodingBoyGentleGirl:
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* BlandNameProduct: hockey sticks -> [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pocky Pocky Sticks]]
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* BlandNameProduct: hockey sticks The shopkeeper is a box of "hockey sticks" -> [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pocky Pocky Sticks]]
* FoodSlap: Having nothing else to fend themselves from the hostile invader, Toilet Paper threw the torta they were eating at it with enough force to send the alien flying back to space and unintentionally saving the Earth.
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* FoodSlap: torta
* GISSyndrome:
* GISSyndrome:
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* BigDamnHeroes: Glass Shard had a bad feeling about Radio finding someone vastly underqualified for his job so he came from his much-needed vacation, lo and behold, he was right saves the day
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* BigDamnHeroes: Glass Shard had a couldn't shake of the bad feeling about that Radio finding tasked someone vastly underqualified for his job so he came from cut his much-needed vacation, lo vacation short. Lo and behold, he was right saves the day company is undergoing a magical nuclear meltdown that threatens the entire metropolis... He manages to save the day...
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* CityNoir: Three films, "The Leftovers", "Terrors And Fables Of The Horrible City Of Cityplace" and "An Awakening Mystery", focuses on detectives.... were centered around the nitty-gritty side of the city... ...with the former two, DeliberatelyMonochrome
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* CityNoir: Three films, "The Leftovers", "Terrors And Fables Of The Horrible City Of Cityplace" and "An Awakening Mystery", focuses on detectives....detectives solving a case.... were centered around the nitty-gritty side of the city... ...with the former two, DeliberatelyMonochrome
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* CityNoir:
* DamselInDistress:
* DeliberatelyMonochrome: averted, unlike the previous two {{City Noir}}s, regular colour palette
* DamselInDistress:
* DeliberatelyMonochrome: averted, unlike the previous two {{City Noir}}s, regular colour palette
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* CityNoir:
BoundAndGagged:
*DamselInDistress:
CityNoir: the third and last one in the film festival
* DamselInDistress: his sister Macaroni
* DeliberatelyMonochrome: averted, unlike the previous two {{City Noir}}s, regular colour palette instead of the black-and-white aesthetic
*
* DamselInDistress: his sister Macaroni
* DeliberatelyMonochrome: averted, unlike the previous two {{City Noir}}s, regular colour palette instead of the black-and-white aesthetic
* TalkingLightbulb:
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking:
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: banned Minecraft, that last one cause Mug to take action
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* ShoutOut: look like the objectsonas/object personifications of [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario and Luigi]], red and green toilet plungers with mustaches, one of whom says "Mama Mia"
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* ShoutOut: look like the objectsonas/object personifications of [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario and Luigi]], The red and green toilet plungers with mustaches, one of whom says "Mama Mia"
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* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Bush
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* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Bush Bush ....in just a single day
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* TokenMinority: potted plant, wheelchair-bound, the entire film festival, in a wheelchair[[note]]Not Wheelchair from "A Failed Heist" earlier on[[/note]]
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* TokenMinority: potted plant, wheelchair-bound, plant is the only wheelchair-bound object, the entire film festival, in a wheelchair[[note]]Not Wheelchair from "A Failed Heist" earlier on[[/note]]
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* ComingOfAge
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* ComingOfAge
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* ComingOfAgeStory:
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* CallForward: The assets of Bolt and Sparkles both references the film festival by featuring the number 48 and the upcoming sequel according to WordOfGod.
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* CallForward: The assets of Bolt and Sparkles both references reference the film festival by featuring the number 48 and the upcoming sequel according to WordOfGod.
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* DeliberateVHSQuality: grainy filter, including the thumbnail and credits
* LimitedAnimation: Or rather the animation just stops and only the audio remained for the last part, ...skipped straight to the credits, audio plays over the credits, voice-acting
!!Wild Dreams
->'''Created by:''' Tuxedo
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!!Wild Dreams
->'''Created by:''' Tuxedo
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!!Wild Dreams
->'''Created by:''' Tuxedo
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!!Wild Dreams
->'''Created by:''' Tuxedo
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->'''Created by:''' Tuxedo
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Their two-day window
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* ContrastingSequelSetting: nature, urban landscape, less likely to follow AnAesop, having a more cynical/nihilistic tone, not one but two shorts where someone is having the [[FromBadToWorse worst day of their life]] where they ended up fired, dumped by their girlfriend and homeless.
* {{Intermission}}: got creative, [[AudienceSurrogate Filmy]], ElevatorButtonsMash, PublicDomainSoundtrack as elevator music
* {{Intermission}}: got creative, [[AudienceSurrogate Filmy]], ElevatorButtonsMash, PublicDomainSoundtrack as elevator music
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* ContrastingSequelSetting: nature, urban landscape, less likely to follow AnAesop, having a more cynical/nihilistic tone, with not one but two shorts where someone is having the [[FromBadToWorse worst day of their life]] where they ended up fired, dumped by their girlfriend and homeless.
* {{Intermission}}: The festival gotcreative, creative for ''Metropolis'', [[AudienceSurrogate Filmy]], ElevatorButtonsMash, PublicDomainSoundtrack as elevator music
* {{Intermission}}: The festival got
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** Cigar has the most dramatic of the retellings, with lighter greyscale and well-detailed sketch art to boot, but the theory itself sounds like a nine-year-old who made it up on the spot. It goes as follows: Burger was with a friend named Soda Cup at the nightclub but while they partying it up, Soda got hungry so the most obvious and logical choice for them was to beat up Burger and ate his pickles. Realising what they had done, Soda ran away in tears not because they killed their best friend but because they were deadly allergic to pickles and needed to use the bathroom. His colleagues were so dumbfounded that they cut off Cigar's monologue to point out all the inconsistencies and absurdities like how did he know Burger had a friend or pickles, why said friend was stupid enough to do that and why Cigar is so obsessed about them going to the bathroom but completely ignored the broken door which never came up in the story.
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** Cigar has the most dramatic of the retellings, with lighter greyscale and well-detailed sketch art to boot, but the theory itself sounds like a nine-year-old who made it up on the spot. It goes as follows: Burger was with a friend named Soda Cup at the nightclub but while they partying it up, Soda got hungry so the most obvious and logical choice for them was to beat up Burger and ate his pickles. Realising what they had done, Soda ran away in tears not because they killed their best friend but because they were deadly allergic to pickles and needed to use the bathroom. His colleagues were so dumbfounded that they cut off Cigar's monologue to point out all the inconsistencies and absurdities like how did he know Burger had a friend or pickles, why said friend was stupid enough to do that and why Cigar is he so obsessed about them going to the bathroom but completely ignored the broken door which never came up in the story.
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-->'''Cigar:''' It... was tragedy. The story of two friends. They came to the nightclub looking for fun but his... his friend was sooooo~ hungry, he stole his pickles and ''ate them''! He ran away but not because he murdered him but because he was allergic to pickles and went to the bathroom--
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-->'''Cigar:''' It..."It... was tragedy. The story of two friends. They came to the nightclub looking for fun but his... his friend was sooooo~ hungry, he stole his pickles and ''ate them''! He ran away but not because he murdered him but because he was allergic to pickles and went to the bathroom-- bathroom--"
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-->'''Binoculars:''' Dude what?
-->'''Cigar:''' Hey, I didn't interrupt you guys did I? As I was saying--
-->'''Fountain Pen:''' Where did this guy come from? How did you know this guy had pickles? And why are we talking about him going to the bathroom?
-->'''Cigar:''' Let me finish please!
-->'''Cigar:''' Hey, I didn't interrupt you guys did I? As I was saying--
-->'''Fountain Pen:''' Where did this guy come from? How did you know this guy had pickles? And why are we talking about him going to the bathroom?
-->'''Cigar:''' Let me finish please!
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-->'''Binoculars:''' Dude what?
what? "
-->'''Cigar:'''Hey, "Hey, I didn't interrupt you guys did I? As I was saying--
saying--"
-->'''Fountain Pen:'''Where "Where did this guy come from? How did you know this guy had pickles? And why are we talking about him going to the bathroom?
bathroom?"
-->'''Cigar:'''Let "Let me finish please!please!"
-->'''Cigar:'''
-->'''Fountain Pen:'''
-->'''Cigar:'''
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-->'''Binoculars:''' Cigar, you're ''[[CluelessDetective actually useless]]''!
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-->'''Binoculars:''' Cigar, "Cigar, you're ''[[CluelessDetective actually useless]]''!useless]]''!"
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* SmokingIsCool:
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* SmokingIsCool: Cigar smokes a cigerette even though he is one, hard-boiled detective
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* AllForNothing: spent nearly two hours and fare money to get to the city, only for it to turn out to be a huge disappointment
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* AllForNothing: spent nearly two hours and quite a sum of fare money to get to the city, only for it to turn out to be a huge disappointment
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* ItsTheJourneyThatCounts: subverted in that no...paid for bus and train fare, a huge disappointment
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* ItsTheJourneyThatCounts: subverted in that no...they still had to paid for bus and train fare, a huge disappointment
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* HappilyMarried: Sunny and Fedoric, they are the only straight couple
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* LimitedAnimation: Or rather the animation just stops and only the audio remain, skips remained for the last part, ...skipped straight to the credits, audio plays over the credits, voice-acting
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** "Terrors And Fables Of The Horrible City Of Cityplace": Claire Wilson was revealed to have a wife who cried so hard when she died
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** "Terrors And Fables Of The Horrible City Of Cityplace": Claire Wilson was revealed to have a wife who cried didn't take her death well at al, love her so hard when she died much, spends her only scene crying puddles
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** While everyone was arguing over Cigar's idiotic theory, Burger [[NotQuiteDead turns out to be alive]] as he wakes from his prolonged nap to vividly recall the night for them. In [[StylisticSuck poorly-drawn Microsoft paint art]], what really happened was Burger walked past the nightclub when he tripped over a rock and was merely knocked unconscious by the time the cops arrived, [[StatingTheSimpleSolution simple as that]] ([[TheUnreveal Although this doesn't explain why the club's glass door was shattered in the first place]]).
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** Cigar has the most dramatic of the retellings, with lighter greyscale and well-detailed sketch art to boot, but the theory itself sounds like a nine-year-old who made it up on the spot. It goes as follows: Burger was with a friend named Soda Cup at the nightclub but while they partying it up, Soda got hungry so the most obvious and logical choice for them was to beat up Burger and ate his pickles. Realising what they had done, Soda ran away in tears not because they killed their best friend but because they were deadly allergic to pickles and needed to use the bathroom. His colleagues were so dumbfounded that they cut off Cigar's monologue to point out all the inconsistencies and absurdities like how did he know Burger had a friend or pickles, why said friend was stupid enough to do that and why Cigar is so obsessed about them going to the bathroom but completely ignored the broken door which never came up in the story.
** While everyone was arguing over Cigar's [[InsaneTrollLogic idiotictheory, theory]], Burger [[NotQuiteDead turns out to be alive]] as he wakes from his prolonged nap to vividly recall the night for them. In [[StylisticSuck poorly-drawn Microsoft paint art]], what really happened was Burger walked past the nightclub when he tripped over a rock and was merely knocked unconscious by the time the cops arrived, [[StatingTheSimpleSolution simple as that]] ([[TheUnreveal Although this doesn't explain why the club's glass door was shattered in the first place]]).
** While everyone was arguing over Cigar's [[InsaneTrollLogic idiotic
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** Cigar has the most dramatic of the retellings, with lighter greyscale and well-detailed sketch art to boot, but the theory itself sounds like a nine-year-old who made it up on the spot. It goes as follows: Burger was with a friend named Soda Cup at the nightclub
*** speculate he had a friend, allergic to pickles but ate him anyway, threw up and needed to go to the bathroom, his colleagues were so dumbfounded by what he was saying that they had cut him off from his ImagineSpot and told him off for being useless to the case, says this as a ...ToiletHumour with stupid, unnecessary details
*** Burger had a friend who is a soda cup, out in the club having the time of their lives, Soda got so hungry that they beat up Burger and ate even though he's allergic to pickles, then ran away in tears and needing to go to the bathroom, momentarily stopping to throw up, his colleagues were all so baffled by Cigar's InsaneTrollLogic that they interrupted his monologue and point out all the inconsistency and absurdities like how did Cigar know Burger had a friend or pickles, why said friend was stupid enough to do that and why Cigar is so obsessed about them going to the bathroom but completely ignored the broken door which never came up in the story
** Cigar has the most dramatic of the retellings, with lighter greyscale and well-detailed sketch art to boot, but the theory itself sounds like a nine-year-old who made it up on the spot. It goes as follows: Burger was with a friend named Soda Cup at the nightclub
*** speculate he had a friend, allergic to pickles but ate him anyway, threw up and needed to go to the bathroom, his colleagues were so dumbfounded by what he was saying that they had cut him off from his ImagineSpot and told him off for being useless to the case, says this as a ...ToiletHumour with stupid, unnecessary details
*** Burger had a friend who is a soda cup, out in the club having the time of their lives, Soda got so hungry that they beat up Burger and ate even though he's allergic to pickles, then ran away in tears and needing to go to the bathroom, momentarily stopping to throw up, his colleagues were all so baffled by Cigar's InsaneTrollLogic that they interrupted his monologue and point out all the inconsistency and absurdities like how did Cigar know Burger had a friend or pickles, why said friend was stupid enough to do that and why Cigar is so obsessed about them going to the bathroom but completely ignored the broken door which never came up in the story
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* WhoNeedsTheirWholeBody: gruesome crime scene, the murder victim's remains or rather toppings were scattered everywhere on the sidewalk, Burger was totally fine, woke up from his nap
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* WhoNeedsTheirWholeBody: gruesome crime scene, the murder victim's remains or rather toppings were scattered everywhere on the sidewalk, Burger was totally fine, fallen over, woke up from his nap
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* NaiveNewcomer: first of work in a big company, video diary, interviews with various people, reminded me of the ''WebAnimation/TheWaitingRoom''
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* NaiveNewcomer: first of work in a big company, video diary, interviews with various people, reminded me of the ''WebAnimation/TheWaitingRoom''
* WholePlotReference: ''WebAnimation/TheWaitingRoom''
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* VitrolicBestBuds:
VitrolicBestBuds: The main trio
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* HappilyMarried:
* MeaningfulName: Sunny, ray of sunshine
* MediumShiftGag: running away
* MeaningfulName: Sunny, ray of sunshine
* MediumShiftGag: running away
* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: raw, unadulterated rage
* SplashOfColor:
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* CallForward: The assets of Bolt and Sparkles not only reference the film festival by featuring the number 48 but also the upcoming sequel according to WordOfGod.
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* CallForward: The assets of Bolt and Sparkles not only reference both references the film festival by featuring the number 48 but also and the upcoming sequel according to WordOfGod.
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* SupportingProtagonist: Glass Shard is the second main character after Sundew even though they only appeared in the last scene to help guide Sundew in stopping the orb's power meltdown.
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* SupportingProtagonist: Glass Shard is the second main character after Sundew {{Deuteragonist}} to Sundew's protagonist even though they only appeared in the last scene to help guide Sundew in stopping the orb's power meltdown.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Glass Shard had a bad feeling about Radio finding someone vastly underqualified for his job... came back from his much-needed vacation, saves the day
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* BigDamnHeroes: Glass Shard had a bad feeling about Radio finding someone vastly underqualified for his job... job so he came back from his much-needed vacation, lo and behold, he was right saves the day
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* DirectorsCut: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u07IK1cAwQw remastered version]], added an extra scene
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* PointyHairedBoss: Zig-Zagged. Radio is quite incompetent and often makes bad decisions such as tasking an inexperienced intern to take care of such a huge responsibility without proper guidance, without notice, something which Glass Shard acknowledges how bad of a job Radio is doing by letting, understanding gloss over, the director's cut shows her to be more sympathetic but still
%%* ShoutOut: The musical sting...an unintentional reference to ''Film/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy''
%%* ShoutOut: The musical sting...an unintentional reference to ''Film/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy''
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* PointyHairedBoss: Zig-Zagged. Radio is quite incompetent and often makes bad decisions such as as
** tasking an inexperienced intern to take care of such a huge responsibility without properguidance, guidance, ...without notice, something which Glass Shard acknowledges how bad of a job Radio is doing by letting, understanding gloss over, the director's cut shows her to be more sympathetic but still
%%* ShoutOut: The musical sting...but also an unintentional reference to ''Film/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy''
** tasking an inexperienced intern to take care of such a huge responsibility without proper
%%* ShoutOut: The musical sting...but also an unintentional reference to ''Film/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy''
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* FuneralCut: gravestone dissing her
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* EyelessFace: Martini ...most people went came to the conclusion that he's blind
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* DudeNotFunny: Waulk administered a DopeSlap on Tuts after he jokes about their boss getting arrested for accidental murder with a stupid {{Pun}}.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Tuts, CluelessDetective, he still is a detective, cracked the case by himself in just a day in spite of the lack of evidence
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Tuts, CluelessDetective, he still is a detective, cracked the case by himself in just a day in spite of the lack of little evidence and testimonies he has to work with
* CheknovsGun:
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* DudeNotFunny: administered a DopeSlap
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* SuddenAnatomy: Ty is limbless ... arms, slams his hands on the table, cause a plot hole since there are supposed to be no fingerprints
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* SuddenAnatomy: Ty is limbless ... arms, limbless except the instance where he slams his hands on the table, although cause a plot hole since there are supposed to be no fingerprints
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* {{Callback}}: ''Sandbox/AFloristsFolly''
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* {{Callback}}: to the tune of StandardSnippet/TheCancanSong, ''Sandbox/AFloristsFolly''
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* FromBadToWorse: overslept, cold shower, stubs toe on a coffee table, rent's warning notice, splash by puddle, tripped over rock and miss train, super late to work, does bad presentation to the meeting board, got laid off and told to get out, drunk himself silly at the bar, girlfriend breaks up with him for missing their date,
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* FromBadToWorse: Dollar... overslept, cold shower, stubs toe on a coffee table, rent's warning notice, splash by puddle, tripped over rock and miss train, super late to work, does bad presentation to the meeting board, got laid off and told to get out, drunk himself silly at the bar, girlfriend breaks up with him for missing their date,
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* UndergroundCity: the train subway connects to... complete with its own ecosystem and day-and-night cycle
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* UndergroundCity: the train subway connects to... to one... complete with its own ecosystem and day-and-night cycle cycle, where Moss lives
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* ArmlessBiped: Poppy is an inversion, having arms and no legs but can move around with no problem since she's a helium balloon.
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* ArmlessBiped: Poppy, inverted, float because she's a balloon
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Twenty-one of the ninety-two films had received a vote in their name comprising a total of $1,026
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Twenty-one of the ninety-two films had received a vote in their name comprising a total of $1,026$1,026 in donations:
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* TheDanza: Ace and Lynx are voiced by Ace and Lynx (Though the former is credited as Corndni).
* TheDanza: Ace and Lynx are voiced by Ace and Lynx (Though the former is credited as Corndni).
* IronicName: Minnie was specifically nicknamed that because he's the biggest in the crew, the opposite of what his name implies.
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* ALizardNamedLiz: Teana, Minnie "has good timing", minutes on a clock (his object)
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* ALizardNamedLiz: Teana, Teana ({{Portmanteau}} of "Tea" and "Tina"), Minnie "has good timing", minutes on a clock (his object)
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* IronicName: Minnie was specifically nicknamed that because he's the biggest in the crew...and sounds like the opposite
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* GenreDeconstruction: was more or less confused at what was going on, didn't learn a valuable lesson as their grandpa had intended
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* GenreDeconstruction: was more or less confused and scared at what was going on, didn't learn a valuable lesson as their grandpa had intended intended
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When the city becomes more and more gray, the Colour Crew is here to save the day! Watch as Magenta, Yellow, and Cyan face off against Sharpener and Eraser Cap in this action-packed film made for this year's 48 Hour OSC Film Festival.
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When the city becomes more and more gray, the Colour Crew is here to save the day! Watch as Magenta, Yellow, and Cyan face off against Sharpener and Eraser Cap in this action-packed film made for this year's 48 Hour 48-Hour OSC Film Festival.
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* HarsherInHindsight: At one point, the chat ask where Clankybot (The creator of ''Webanimation/ObjectCringe'') was since all the big OSC creators were here at the screening. For those who are not into the OSC drama, Clanky had to leave the community for grooming a minor
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* HarsherInHindsight: At one point, the chat ask where Clankybot (The creator of ''Webanimation/ObjectCringe'') was since all the big OSC creators were here at the screening. For those who are not into the OSC drama, Clanky had to leave the community years ago for grooming a minor and had recently come back.
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* TheDanza: In "Terrors And Fables Of The Horrible City Of Cityplace", Banana is voiced by Bana although they are credited as "[=AintEvenChillin=]" in the film festival.
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* TheDanza: TheDanza:
** In "Oh No.", The newscasters Ace and Lynx are voiced by Ace and Lynx respectively (Though the former is credited as Corndni).
** In "Terrors And Fables Of The Horrible City Of Cityplace", Banana is voiced by Bana although they are credited as "[=AintEvenChillin=]" in the film festival.
** In "Oh No.", The newscasters Ace and Lynx are voiced by Ace and Lynx respectively (Though the former is credited as Corndni).
** In "Terrors And Fables Of The Horrible City Of Cityplace", Banana is voiced by Bana although they are credited as "[=AintEvenChillin=]" in the film festival.
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** "malaware.exe": [[CoDragons The Pom Brothers]] were going transform in a puff of smoke to reveal a SuperMode best described as a [[[[https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1115625417110470666/1115636150711890040/IMG_0796.png kangaroo-fox hybrid]] but was cut for time.
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** "malaware.exe": [[CoDragons The Pom Brothers]] were going transform in a puff of smoke to reveal a SuperMode best described as a [[[[https://cdn.[[https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1115625417110470666/1115636150711890040/IMG_0796.png kangaroo-fox hybrid]] but was cut for time.
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* EnragedByIdiocy: Fountain Pen's reaction to Cigar's [[InsaneTrollLogic absolute idiotic nonsense]] is the most adverse out of his colleagues and later punches his lights out than hear another word from him.
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** Cigar has the most dramatic of the retellings, with lighter greyscale and well-detailed sketch art to boot, but the theory itself sounds like a nine-year-old who made it up on the spot. It goes as follows: Burger was with a friend named Soda Cup at the nightclub ...ToiletHumour with stupid, unnecessary details
*** speculate he had a friend, allergic to pickles but ate him anyway, threw up and needed to go to the bathroom, his colleagues were so dumbfounded by what he was saying that they had cut him off from his ImagineSpot and told him off for being useless to the case, says this as a
*** speculate he had a friend, allergic to pickles but ate him anyway, threw up and needed to go to the bathroom, his colleagues were so dumbfounded by what he was saying that they had cut him off from his ImagineSpot and told him off for being useless to the case, says this as a
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** Cigar has the most dramatic of the retellings, with lighter greyscale and well-detailed sketch art to boot, but the theory itself sounds like a nine-year-old who made it up on the spot. It goes as follows: Burger was with a friend named Soda Cup at the nightclub ...ToiletHumour with stupid, unnecessary details
nightclub
*** speculate he had a friend, allergic to pickles but ate him anyway, threw up and needed to go to the bathroom, his colleagues were so dumbfounded by what he was saying that they had cut him off from his ImagineSpot and told him off for being useless to the case, says this asa a ...ToiletHumour with stupid, unnecessary details
*** speculate he had a friend, allergic to pickles but ate him anyway, threw up and needed to go to the bathroom, his colleagues were so dumbfounded by what he was saying that they had cut him off from his ImagineSpot and told him off for being useless to the case, says this as
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: downplayed
* NaiveNewcomer: first of work in a big company, video-diary, interviews with various people, reminded me of the ''WebAnimation/TheWaitingRoom''
* SurroundedByIdiots: her true feelings
* NaiveNewcomer: first of work in a big company, video-diary, interviews with various people, reminded me of the ''WebAnimation/TheWaitingRoom''
* SurroundedByIdiots: her true feelings
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: downplayed
downplayed, while she initially
* NaiveNewcomer: first of work in a big company,video-diary, video diary, interviews with various people, reminded me of the ''WebAnimation/TheWaitingRoom''
* SurroundedByIdiots:her Shakey's true feelings
* NaiveNewcomer: first of work in a big company,
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* MeaningfulName: Violet has a name that is the same colour as her object, a purple phone.
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* MeaningfulName: Violet, the same colour as her object, a purple phone
* StealthPun: Flag's signature weapon is a quarterstaff so in other words, she's wielding a ''flag pole''.
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* AmbiguousEnding: Lemon ... "it should be up to interpretation", Lemon is conspicuously absent (Missing from where he should be seated from), intentionally left open to interpretation
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Comic Book (Dual wield pencils), Lemon (Googles that produce shock waves), Flag (staff pole that generates bombs at both ends)
* StealthPun: Flag's signature weapon is so in other words, she's wielding a ''flag staff''.
* StealthPun: Flag's signature weapon is so in other words, she's wielding a ''flag staff''.
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Comic Book (Dual wield pencils), Lemon (Googles that produce shock waves), Flag (staff pole (quarterstaff that generates bombs at both ends)
* StealthPun: Flag's signature weapon is so in other words, she's wielding a ''flag staff''.
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** "Moving Day": Popsicle and Parfait, kiss on the cheek
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** "Moving Day": Popsicle and Parfait, kiss during the Timeskip, the former kisses the latter on the cheek cheek, blushing
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** "FRAGMENTS": Fish Cake and Wrench, the former finding a way to get the latter, they share only kiss on the lips in the festival, ''Metropolis'', and the second overall
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** "FRAGMENTS": Fish Cake and Wrench, the former spent the entire short finding a way to get the latter, latter after his elimination, they share only kiss on the lips in the festival, ''Metropolis'', and the second overall
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* OneSteveLimit: there's only a finite number of objects that are recognisable and relatively easy to animate..., Banana
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* WelcomeToTheBigCity: moving into the metropolis
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** "A day in the life of Mark": Mark and his girlfriend Bottle O'Ship until she dumped then kicked him out of the house. She did regret this decision, however, as it led to Mark dying in a robbery shootout.
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** "Little Pleasures in the Big City": Best friends Mike and Aaron... cheer up
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** "Little Pleasures in the Big City": Best friends Mike and Aaron...Aaron ... cheer up
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** "FRAGMENTS": Fish Cake and Wrench, the former finding a way to get the latter, the only kiss on the lips in the festival, and the second overall
** "A day in the life of Mark": Mark and his girlfriend Bottle O'Ship until they broke up and she kicked him out of the house
** "The Seedlings 2: Home Sweet Home": Acorn and Seedo underwent a RelationshipUpgrade
** "A day in the life of Mark": Mark and his girlfriend Bottle O'Ship until they broke up and she kicked him out of the house
** "The Seedlings 2: Home Sweet Home": Acorn and Seedo underwent a RelationshipUpgrade
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** "FRAGMENTS": Fish Cake and Wrench, the former finding a way to get the latter, the they share only kiss on the lips in the festival, ''Metropolis'', and the second overall
** "A day in the life of Mark": Mark and his girlfriend Bottle O'Ship until they broke up and she kicked him out of the house
** "The Seedlings 2: Home Sweet Home": Acorn and Seedo underwent a RelationshipUpgrade
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* LimitedAnimation: rather the animation just stops and only audio remain, skips to the credits, audio plays over the credits, voice-acting
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DownerEnding: wakes up, sighs and stares out the window
*LaserGuidedAmnesia:
LaserGuidedAmnesia: Peacock Feather pulls out a memory wiper underneath his eyepatch, in blinding light, Poppy
* NoodleIncident:
*
* NoodleIncident:
* ClosestThingWeGot: After some careful consideration, Clipboard picks Harmonica to be a part of Flamora in spite of their [[ReformedCriminal criminal background]] and being quite proud of it. The only reason being the five candidates are all unqualified idiots that would have been immediately rejected on the spot in any other company so Harmonica was just the best of the worst.
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte is [[TheDitz incompetent]], Lamp has too many future plans, Snotty is a [[GreenIsGross health violation]] and Harmonica's [[DamnedByFaintPraise our best option]].
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte is [[TheDitz incompetent]], Lamp has too many future plans, Snotty is a [[GreenIsGross health violation]] and Harmonica's [[DamnedByFaintPraise our best option]].
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* ClosestThingWeGot: After some careful consideration, Clipboard picks Harmonica to be a part of Flamora in spite of their [[ReformedCriminal criminal background]] and being quite proud of it. The only reason... best of the worst as the rest of the candidates are far less qualified... all of them would have been immediately rejected on the spot in any other company
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte is [[TheDitz incompetent]], Lamp has too many future plans, Snotty is a [[GreenIsGross health violation]] and Harmonica's [[DamnedByFaintPraise our best option]].
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte is [[TheDitz incompetent]], Lamp has too many future plans, Snotty is a [[GreenIsGross health violation]] and Harmonica's [[DamnedByFaintPraise our best option]].
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, a four-part mini-series is in the works and TMOJ Official is currently looking for auditions
-->'''Shell:''' "You know what, I guess someone meant to be together are pretty big after all. Maybe even bigger than a ''Metropolis'' of New York."
!![[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3UbLu3XFzu4 Untitled (37)]]
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-->'''Shell:''' "You know what, I guess someone meant [...] are pretty big after all. Maybe even bigger than a ''Metropolis'' of New York."
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->'''Created by:''' [=JezzJul=], Cove, Kenjja, Savage Brick and Yolkerson
-->'''Shell:''' "You know what, I guess someone meant [...] are pretty big after all. Maybe even bigger than a ''Metropolis'' of New York."
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* TitleDrop:
-->'''Shell:''' "You know what, I guess someone meant [...] are pretty big after all. Maybe even bigger than a ''Metropolis''MonochromaticEyes: Evett is the only one with white eyes in the short as opposed to everyone's BlackBeadEyes.
* ToxicFriendInfluence: Evett is oblivious as to why Violet has been avoiding him nowadays because ofNew York."
!![[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3UbLu3XFzu4 Untitled (37)]]
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->'''Created by:''' [=JezzJul=], Cove, Kenjja, Savage Bricktheir obnoxiously, loud behaviour and Yolkersonpranking escapades which almost put her in jail once. It's also implied that Violet moved to the city in an attempt to have a fresh start away from her since she also kept insisting they shouldn't move there as well. Of course, Evett doesn't listen and does exactly that which gave Violet a rather unwanted surprise when they unexpectedly showed up at her doorstep.
-->'''Shell:''' "You know what, I guess someone meant [...] are pretty big after all. Maybe even bigger than a ''Metropolis''
* ToxicFriendInfluence: Evett is oblivious as to why Violet has been avoiding him nowadays because of
!![[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3UbLu3XFzu4 Untitled (37)]]
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->'''Created by:''' [=JezzJul=], Cove, Kenjja, Savage Brick
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* MonochromaticEyes: Evett is the only one with white eyes in the short as oppose to everyone's BlackBeadEyes.
* ToxicFriendInfluence: Evett is oblivious as to why Violet has been avoiding him nowadays because of their obnoxiously, loud behaviour and pranking escapades which almost put her in jail once. It's also implied that Violet moved to the city in an attempt to have a fresh start away from her since she also kept insisting they shouldn't move there as well. Of course, Evett doesn't listen and does exactly that which gave Violet a rather unwanted surprise when they unexpectedly showed up at her doorstep.
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* ToxicFriendInfluence: Evett is oblivious as to why Violet has been avoiding him nowadays because of their obnoxiously, loud behaviour and pranking escapades which almost put her in jail once. It's also implied that Violet moved to the city in an attempt to have a fresh start away from her since she also kept insisting they shouldn't move there as well. Of course, Evett doesn't listen and does exactly that which gave Violet a rather unwanted surprise when they unexpectedly showed up at her doorstep.
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Evett, ThePrankster, ill-thought out and unfunny at best or property-destroying at worst
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* ScarsAreForever: Joe now wears a cup sleeve ever since a NoodleIncident where someone resisted arrest by poking a hole through his body with a comically oversized straw.
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* ScarsAreForever: Joe, an incident, someone got a straw and poke a hole through their cup, wears a sleeve
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* ALizardNamedLiz: Mark Markerton the marker, a name that can double as a legitimate human name.
* ByStanderSyndrome: The unseen [[CameraFiend cameraperson]] does nothing but document Mark, despite being told by him to back off multiple times, as his life spirals down the drain. At one point, they silently record him sitting behind a dumpster in an alleyway homeless while it heavily rained down without lifting a finger to help. It's also implied they did nothing to stop Mark from robbing the bank which eventually led to him getting shot.
* FromBadToWorse: Mark was already annoyed by somebody filming him for an entire day but it just so happened to be the day when he was fired from his job, his girlfriend dumped and kicked to the street and is now homeless sitting behind an alleyway dumpster unprotected from the [[GrayRainOfDepression rain]]. Thinking he has nothing left to lose and desperate to turn his life around, Mark tried robbing the New Goiky Bank where he died during a shootout.
* FromBadToWorse: Mark was already annoyed by somebody filming him for an entire day but it just so happened to be the day when he was fired from his job, his girlfriend dumped and kicked to the street and is now homeless sitting behind an alleyway dumpster unprotected from the [[GrayRainOfDepression rain]]. Thinking he has nothing left to lose and desperate to turn his life around, Mark tried robbing the New Goiky Bank where he died during a shootout.
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* CameraFiend:
* ByStanderSyndrome: The unseen [[CameraFiend cameraperson]] does nothing but document Mark, despite being told by him to back off multiple times, as his life spirals down the drain. At one point, they silently record him sitting behind a dumpster in an alleyway homeless while it rained, not helping him ...It's also implied they didn't stop him from robbing the bank which eventually led to him getting shot
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* ByStanderSyndrome: The unseen [[CameraFiend cameraperson]] does nothing but document Mark, despite being told by him to back off multiple times, as his life spirals down the drain. At one point, they silently record him sitting behind a dumpster in an alleyway homeless while it rained, not helping him ...It's also implied they didn't stop him from robbing the bank which eventually led to him getting shot
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* FromBadToWorse:already annoyed by somebody filming him, fired from his job, girlfriend broke up with him, kicked to the street, now homeless, sat behind the dumpster in an alleyway while it openly rained, robbed a bank, got shot and died
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GrayRainOfDepression: alleyway, Mark doesn't say anything in this segment, making all the more serious
* KilledOffscreen: shot down by the police
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* KilledOffscreen: shot down by the police
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* ClosestThingWeGot: After some consideration, [...] picks Harmonica to be a part of Flamora in spite of their [[ReformedCriminal criminal background]] and being quite proud of it. The reason .... best of the worst, the rest of the candidates are far less qualified... all of them would have been immediately rejected on the spot in any other company
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte is incompetent, Lamp has too many future plans, Snotty is a [[GreenIsGross health violation]] and Harmonica's [[DamnedByFaintPraise our best option]].
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* ClosestThingWeGot: After some careful consideration, [...] Clipboard picks Harmonica to be a part of Flamora in spite of their [[ReformedCriminal criminal background]] and being quite proud of it. The reason .... only reason... best of the worst, worst as the rest of the candidates are far less qualified... all of them would have been immediately rejected on the spot in any other company
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte isincompetent, [[TheDitz incompetent]], Lamp has too many future plans, Snotty is a [[GreenIsGross health violation]] and Harmonica's [[DamnedByFaintPraise our best option]].
-->'''Clipboard:''' Note's [[SmallNameBigEgo annoying]], Latte is
* OddNameOut: Xeluma's name isn't remotely object-related in the slightest (The Pom Brothers could be derived from "pom-pom") although it's granted because she's a cat-like entity.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The Pom Brothers were going to have a SuperMode, cross between a kangaroo and a fox, puff of smoke, but it was cut for time
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The Pom Brothers were going to have a SuperMode, cross between a kangaroo and a fox, puff of smoke, but it was cut for time
** [[https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1115625417110470666/1115636150711890040/IMG_0796.png image]]
** "malaware.exe": [[CoDragons The Pom Brothers]] were going transform in a puff of smoke to reveal a SuperMode best described as a [[[[https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1115625417110470666/1115636150711890040/IMG_0796.png kangaroo-fox hybrid]] but was cut for time.
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# Troop 16, Critter Crusaders, City Folk and Colour Crew - Varying unknown amounts
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# Troop 16, Critter Crusaders, City Folk and Colour Crew - Varying unknown amounts
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Check out the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DH7hp35LMyg full screening]] alongside the [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL72Pzv1eVRsIzWa5V6bumKJvn-ycqFr1o individual shorts]].
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Check out the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DH7hp35LMyg full screening]] alongside the [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL72Pzv1eVRsIzWa5V6bumKJvn-ycqFr1o [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNJcyjf65T8FQYcZvpZoIWyk7gAFy27lA individual shorts]].
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Jukebox is a worker at the Moonlight City Nightclub who's determined not to lose track of his future, even if it means missing out on opportunities in the present. However, a mysterious door in the club sends Jukebox to the familiar location on the very same night one century ago, and now must find a way to return back to the present, and more importantly, figure out why he was brought back to the past in the first place.
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!![[https://youtu.be/GQlh7YwSmks The Color Crew]]
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When the city becomes more and more gray, the Colour Crew is here to save the day! Watch as Magenta, Yellow, and Cyan face off against Sharpener and Eraser Cap in this action-packed film made for this year's 48 Hour OSC Film Festival.
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