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* BadAss: Most everyone on the Zeppelpony is one of these. [[note]]Doctor Electron Volt is by far the least bad ass on the ship, because he's a GeniusBruiser and a GlassCannon that puts himself in mortal danger for no reason.[[/note]]
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* BFG: So far, we've seen muscle bound soldiers with Anti-Air riffles that can blow a hole the size of a garage door in reinforced steel from 2 miles away, and an overly large (the size of a pony) Anti-Tank riffle in the first battle alone
* BFS: Some of Chain Mail's swords, especially his soon to be signature [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Death Blade]]
* BFS: Some of Chain Mail's swords, especially his soon to be signature [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Death Blade]]
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* BFG: {{BFG}}: So far, we've seen muscle bound soldiers with Anti-Air riffles that can blow a hole the size of a garage door in reinforced steel from 2 miles away, and an overly large (the size of a pony) Anti-Tank riffle in the first battle alone
*BFS: {{BFS}}: Some of Chain Mail's swords, especially his soon to be signature [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Death Blade]]
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* ArmorIsUseless: Subverted in that every serious injury thus far could have been easily prevented with a good pair of armor.
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* ArmorIsUseless: Subverted in that every serious injury thus far could have been easily prevented with a good pair set of armor.
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* BioAugmentation: At LEAST 2 characters on the Zepplepony have these, both with different results.
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* ICanStillFight: the Doctor's reaction to having a broken leg, several bullet wounds, having busted through a plane of glass with his face, and passing out after running out of pain killers. He still wants to fight even though the battle is pretty much over and done and he has fixed up mortal wounds.
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* ArmorIsUseless: Subverted in that every serious injury thus far could have been easily prevented with a good pair of armor.
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* GunsAreWorthless: Averted, for the [[MookHorrorShow Heroes]]
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* GunsAreWorthless: Averted, Subverted, for the [[MookHorrorShow Heroes]]Heroes]] anyway. Most of them still prefer to use Melee though.
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* GunsAreWorthless: For the most part they have been. Bullet wounds have so far hurt like a bitch, but otherwise only pissed off most everybody hit. That said, most deaths have been by pure Melee combat.
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* GunsAreWorthless: For Averted, for the most part they have been. Bullet wounds have so far hurt like a bitch, but otherwise only pissed off most everybody hit. That said, most deaths have been by pure Melee combat.[[MookHorrorShow Heroes]]
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* GunsAreWorthless: For the most part they have been. Bullet wounds have so far hurt like a bitch, but otherwise only pissed off most everybody hit. That said, most deaths have been by pure Melee combat.
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* PowerArmor: Averted, originally going to be used by Chain Mail, but the hydraulics were broken, so he threw the bionic arm away.
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* OneHandedZweihander: Again Chain Mail will invoke this with his more and more elaborate swords. May also be invoked by the Black Cloud.
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* OneHandedZweihander: Again Chain Mail will invoke this with his more and more elaborate swords. May also be invoked by the Black Cloud.Cloud later, and even then this would be by mercenaries with PowerArmor.
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* OneHandedZweihander: Again Chain Mail will invoke this with his more and more elaborate swords. May also be invoked by the Black Cloud.
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* BFG: So far, we've seen muscle bound soldiers with Anti-Air riffles that can blow a hole the size of a garage door in
reinforced steel from 2 miles away, and an overly large (the size of a pony) Anti-Tank riffle in the first battle alone
reinforced steel from 2 miles away, and an overly large (the size of a pony) Anti-Tank riffle in the first battle alone
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* BFG: So far, we've seen muscle bound soldiers with Anti-Air riffles that can blow a hole the size of a garage door in
in reinforced steel from 2 miles away, and an overly large (the size of a pony) Anti-Tank riffle in the first battle alone
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* BFG: So far, we've seen muscle bound soldiers with Anti-Air riffles that can blow a hole the size of a garage door in reinforced steel from 2 miles away, and an overly large (the size of a pony) Anti-Tank riffle in the first battle alone
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* BFG: So far, we've seen muscle bound soldiers with Anti-Air riffles that can blow a hole the size of a garage door in in
reinforced steel from 2 miles away, and an overly large (the size of a pony) Anti-Tank riffle in the first battlealone alone
* BFS: Some of Chain Mail's swords, especially his soon to be signature [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Death Blade]]
reinforced steel from 2 miles away, and an overly large (the size of a pony) Anti-Tank riffle in the first battle
* BFS: Some of Chain Mail's swords, especially his soon to be signature [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Death Blade]]
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* BFG: So far, we've seen muscle bound soldiers with Anti-Air riffles that can blow a hole the size of a garage door in reinforced steel from 2 miles away, and an overly large (the size of a pony) Anti-Tank riffle in the first battle alone
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* TheSquad: The as of yet unnamed anti-Black Cloud strike force, they double as a BadAssCrew.
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* TheSquad: The as of yet unnamed anti-Black Cloud strike force, they double as a BadAssCrew.BadAssCrew.
* TanksForNothing: So far, all the tanks seen in battle have been decimated in about 2 minutes by Chain Mail with a combination of physics and a BFG [[note]] more specifically an Anti-Tank Rifle, but given that it's a supped up ATR, it counts as one[[/note]]
* TanksForNothing: So far, all the tanks seen in battle have been decimated in about 2 minutes by Chain Mail with a combination of physics and a BFG [[note]] more specifically an Anti-Tank Rifle, but given that it's a supped up ATR, it counts as one[[/note]]
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* BadAss: Most everyone on the Zeppelpony is one of these. Doc. Volt has proven that he's so far the least bad ass, even though he has lightning weapons that can vaporize ponies with one shot.
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* BadAss: Most everyone on the Zeppelpony is one of these. Doc. [[note]]Doctor Electron Volt has proven that he's so is by far the least bad ass, even though he has lightning weapons ass on the ship, because he's a GeniusBruiser and a GlassCannon that can vaporize ponies with one shot.puts himself in mortal danger for no reason.[[/note]]
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* NicknamingTheEnemy: We don't know if the Black Cloud has a name other than that, but it was originally come up with by Celestia's generals because of how much pollution their machines put in the air, which resulted in a [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Black Cloud]].
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* TheSquad: The Black Cloud Liberation Strike, they double as a BadAssCrew.
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* TheSquad: The Black as of yet unnamed anti-Black Cloud Liberation Strike, strike force, they double as a BadAssCrew.
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* RedShirtArmy: So far, the Black Cloud has been this, what with their somewhat defective superior weaponry and all and all ZergRush tactics.
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* RedShirtArmy: So far, the Black Cloud has been this, what with their somewhat defective superior weaponry and all and all ZergRush tactics.tactics.
* TheSquad: The Black Cloud Liberation Strike, they double as a BadAssCrew.
* TheSquad: The Black Cloud Liberation Strike, they double as a BadAssCrew.
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* BadAssCrew: Not only is this a crew of ponies that are almost all bad asses, but it's also on an Airship
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* OneManArmy: Again, most everyone on the ship is one of these. [[note]]Though if you ask Chain Mail than he's actually a war machine on the grounds that even a one-man army is still a man and therefor has things like empathy and pain to get in the way, machines on the other-hoof have none of that and nothing, save death, stops them from killing when they are put into motion.[[/note]]
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* OneManArmy: Again, most everyone on the ship is one of these. [[note]]Though if you ask Chain Mail than he's actually a war machine on the grounds that even a one-man army is still a man and therefor has things like empathy and pain to get in the way, machines on the other-hoof have none of that and nothing, save death, stops them from killing when they are put into motion.[[/note]][[/note]]
* RedShirtArmy: So far, the Black Cloud has been this, what with their somewhat defective superior weaponry and all and all ZergRush tactics.
* RedShirtArmy: So far, the Black Cloud has been this, what with their somewhat defective superior weaponry and all and all ZergRush tactics.
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The character page is under construction, but it's none the less here Characters/TheLeagueofExtraordinaryPonies
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* OneManArmy: Again, most everyone on the ship is one of these. Though if you ask Chain Mail than he's actually a war machine on the grounds that even a one-man army is still a man and therefor has things like empathy and pain to get in the way, machines on the other-hoof have none of that and nothing, save death, stops them from killing when they are put into motion.
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* OneManArmy: Again, most everyone on the ship is one of these. Though [[note]]Though if you ask Chain Mail than he's actually a war machine on the grounds that even a one-man army is still a man and therefor has things like empathy and pain to get in the way, machines on the other-hoof have none of that and nothing, save death, stops them from killing when they are put into motion.[[/note]]
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* BadAss: Most everyone on the Zeppelpony is one of these. Doc. Volt has proven that he's so far the least bad ass, even though he has lightning weapons that can vaporize ponies with one shot.
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* BadAss: Most everyone on the Zeppelpony is one of these. Doc. Volt has proven that he's so far the least bad ass, even though he has lightning weapons that can vaporize ponies with one shot.shot.
* OneManArmy: Again, most everyone on the ship is one of these. Though if you ask Chain Mail than he's actually a war machine on the grounds that even a one-man army is still a man and therefor has things like empathy and pain to get in the way, machines on the other-hoof have none of that and nothing, save death, stops them from killing when they are put into motion.
* OneManArmy: Again, most everyone on the ship is one of these. Though if you ask Chain Mail than he's actually a war machine on the grounds that even a one-man army is still a man and therefor has things like empathy and pain to get in the way, machines on the other-hoof have none of that and nothing, save death, stops them from killing when they are put into motion.
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This Roleplay has examples of
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*BadAss: Most everyone on the Zeppelpony is one of these. Doc. Volt has proven that he's so far the least bad ass, even though he has lightning weapons that can vaporize ponies with one shot.
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The actual RP is [[http://mlpforums.com/topic/81700-the-league-of-extraordinary-ponies-steampunk-roleplay/ here]], so you can read it on your own time.
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The actual RP is [[http://mlpforums.com/topic/81700-the-league-of-extraordinary-ponies-steampunk-roleplay/ here]], so you can read it on your own time.time.
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The actual RP is here, so you can read it on your own time.
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The actual RP is here, [[http://mlpforums.com/topic/81700-the-league-of-extraordinary-ponies-steampunk-roleplay/ here]], so you can read it on your own time.
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As the Original Post says, Equestria is at war. Princess Celestia has sent out a call for the most bad ass army that can be thought of. While this RP is in it's beginnings, it has a lot of promise and WILL inevitably end.
The actual RP is here, so you can read it on your own time.
The actual RP is here, so you can read it on your own time.
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->''“What is the situation general?”
“Not good your highness, the Black Cloud is still advancing, we weren’t able to stop or slow them down…”
“But i have sent all of the royal guards!”
“I know your highness… but they have… some kind of dark magic… scary looking metallic snakes, fire bolts that travel faster than a lightening, their pegasus are a match even for the Wonderbolts and..”
“Stop here, have you lost your mind general?”
“Your highness please believe me… they are not just a bunch of rebels… they are organized as a regular army and they have those terrible stuffs… I’ve lost half of my platoon in less than five minutes… every single soldier died in the following hour… cut away like flowers by a giant blade…”
“ok ok I see… should I call more ponies from the population? We can make a mandatory service call and…
“… my highness… it will be a worthless sacrifice… we need special ponies… we need soldiers with better or at least same abilities as them…. Or we will fall….”
“Special abilities?... Uhm… I have an idea… you can go now general”
The armored, medal covered stallion left the room
“…. Call all of the spies… they have to start right now…”''
--> Original Post, [[http://mlpforums.com/user/20854-doc-volt/ Doc. Volt]]
“Not good your highness, the Black Cloud is still advancing, we weren’t able to stop or slow them down…”
“But i have sent all of the royal guards!”
“I know your highness… but they have… some kind of dark magic… scary looking metallic snakes, fire bolts that travel faster than a lightening, their pegasus are a match even for the Wonderbolts and..”
“Stop here, have you lost your mind general?”
“Your highness please believe me… they are not just a bunch of rebels… they are organized as a regular army and they have those terrible stuffs… I’ve lost half of my platoon in less than five minutes… every single soldier died in the following hour… cut away like flowers by a giant blade…”
“ok ok I see… should I call more ponies from the population? We can make a mandatory service call and…
“… my highness… it will be a worthless sacrifice… we need special ponies… we need soldiers with better or at least same abilities as them…. Or we will fall….”
“Special abilities?... Uhm… I have an idea… you can go now general”
The armored, medal covered stallion left the room
“…. Call all of the spies… they have to start right now…”''
--> Original Post, [[http://mlpforums.com/user/20854-doc-volt/ Doc. Volt]]
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->''“What is the situation general?”
“Notgeneral?”''
->''“Not good your highness, the Black Cloud is still advancing, we weren’t able to stop or slow themdown…”
“Butdown…”''
->''“But i have sent all of the royalguards!”
“Iguards!”''
->''“I know your highness… but they have… some kind of dark magic… scary looking metallic snakes, fire bolts that travel faster than a lightening, their pegasus are a match even for the Wonderbolts and..”
“Stop”''
->''“Stop here, have you lost your mindgeneral?”
“Yourgeneral?”''
->''“Your highness please believe me… they are not just a bunch of rebels… they are organized as a regular army and they have those terrible stuffs… I’ve lost half of my platoon in less than five minutes… every single soldier died in the following hour… cut away like flowers by a giantblade…”
“okblade…”''
->''“ok ok I see… should I call more ponies from the population? We can make a mandatory service calland…
“…and…''
->''“… my highness… it will be a worthless sacrifice… we need special ponies… we need soldiers with better or at least same abilities as them…. Or we will fall….”
“Special”''
->''“Special abilities?... Uhm… I have an idea… you can go nowgeneral”
Thegeneral”''
->''The armored, medal covered stallion left theroom
“….room''
->''“…. Call all of the spies… they have to start right now…”''
--> Original Post, [[http://mlpforums.com/user/20854-doc-volt/ Doc.Volt]]Volt]]
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->''“… my highness… it will be a worthless sacrifice… we need special ponies… we need soldiers with better or at least same abilities as them…. Or we will fall….
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->''“Special abilities?... Uhm… I have an idea… you can go now
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->''The armored, medal covered stallion left the
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->''“…. Call all of the spies… they have to start right now…”''
--> Original Post, [[http://mlpforums.com/user/20854-doc-volt/ Doc.
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->''“What is the situation general?”
“Not good your highness, the Black Cloud is still advancing, we weren’t able to stop or slow them down…”
“But i have sent all of the royal guards!”
“I know your highness… but they have… some kind of dark magic… scary looking metallic snakes, fire bolts that travel faster than a lightening, their pegasus are a match even for the Wonderbolts and..”
“Stop here, have you lost your mind general?”
“Your highness please believe me… they are not just a bunch of rebels… they are organized as a regular army and they have those terrible stuffs… I’ve lost half of my platoon in less than five minutes… every single soldier died in the following hour… cut away like flowers by a giant blade…”
“ok ok I see… should I call more ponies from the population? We can make a mandatory service call and…
“… my highness… it will be a worthless sacrifice… we need special ponies… we need soldiers with better or at least same abilities as them…. Or we will fall….”
“Special abilities?... Uhm… I have an idea… you can go now general”
The armored, medal covered stallion left the room
“…. Call all of the spies… they have to start right now…”''
--> Original Post, [[http://mlpforums.com/user/20854-doc-volt/ Doc. Volt]]
“Not good your highness, the Black Cloud is still advancing, we weren’t able to stop or slow them down…”
“But i have sent all of the royal guards!”
“I know your highness… but they have… some kind of dark magic… scary looking metallic snakes, fire bolts that travel faster than a lightening, their pegasus are a match even for the Wonderbolts and..”
“Stop here, have you lost your mind general?”
“Your highness please believe me… they are not just a bunch of rebels… they are organized as a regular army and they have those terrible stuffs… I’ve lost half of my platoon in less than five minutes… every single soldier died in the following hour… cut away like flowers by a giant blade…”
“ok ok I see… should I call more ponies from the population? We can make a mandatory service call and…
“… my highness… it will be a worthless sacrifice… we need special ponies… we need soldiers with better or at least same abilities as them…. Or we will fall….”
“Special abilities?... Uhm… I have an idea… you can go now general”
The armored, medal covered stallion left the room
“…. Call all of the spies… they have to start right now…”''
--> Original Post, [[http://mlpforums.com/user/20854-doc-volt/ Doc. Volt]]
