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* {{Flashback}}: This episode opens with an extra scene from [[Recap/WithThisRingEpisode14 Revolution]].
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* {{Flashback}}: This episode opens with an extra scene from after [[Recap/WithThisRingEpisode14 Revolution]].Teth Adom was freed from Theodore Adam's control]].
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* FriendshipMoment: The usually formal Adom asks that Paul refer to him by name instead of Mighty One, as a show of how he sees Paul as a close and trusted friend.
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* FriendshipMoment: The usually formal Adom asks that Paul refer to him by name instead of Mighty One, One during informal settings, as a show of how he sees Paul as a close and trusted friend.
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* DoubleTake: When the Prankster holds Lois Lane captive on top of a building, Paul handles things a little differently from other heroes.
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* DoubleTake: When the Prankster holds Lois Lane captive on top of a building, Paul handles things a little differently from other heroes.heroes, causing Lois to react this way.
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* {{Backstory}}: Paul gives a summary of Kanto's when the two meet, to demonstrate the he does indeed know who he's dealing with.
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* RealityEnsues: Due to the fact that the League semi-regularly meets up at Happy Harbor, it has a low crime rate. As such, in this episode, the Team splits up to fight crime in locations around the world that are more affected by mundane criminals for training.
--> There's actually a small plaque in Happy Harbour dedicated to 'the most unlucky burglar in America' after a petty thief somehow managed to run straight into nearly the entire League line up.
--> There's actually a small plaque in Happy Harbour dedicated to 'the most unlucky burglar in America' after a petty thief somehow managed to run straight into nearly the entire League line up.
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* SupermanStaysOutOfGotham: Averted. Due to the fact that the League semi-regularly meets up at Happy Harbor, it has a low crime rate. As such, in this episode, the Team splits up to fight crime in locations around the world that are more affected by mundane criminals for training.
--> There's actually a small plaque in Happy Harbour dedicated to 'the most unlucky burglar in America' after a petty thief somehow managed to run straight into nearly the entire League line up.
--> There's actually a small plaque in Happy Harbour dedicated to 'the most unlucky burglar in America' after a petty thief somehow managed to run straight into nearly the entire League line up.
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* MythologyGag: Adom's way of killing Queen Bee is a reference to his infamous kill of D-Lister Terra-Man in ''ComicBook/FiftyTwo''.
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** Adom's way of killing Queen Bee is a reference to his infamous kill of D-Lister Terra-Man in ''ComicBook/FiftyTwo''.
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** Apokoliptians on Earth assumed the things Paulphidian did were done by [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5633734 another Apokoliptian]].
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** Darkseid can NoSell attempts to use [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5642411 dimension shifting against him]].
** Highfather [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5648293 was unaware]] that Scott Free is on Earth. He thought his natural son would be a [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5648574 loyal soldier of Darkseid]].
** Highfather [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5648293 was unaware]] that Scott Free is on Earth. He thought his natural son would be a [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5648574 loyal soldier of Darkseid]].
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** Apokolips doesn't block Boom Tubes because Darkseid [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5652408 wants people to visit]].
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* WrongAssumption: Hal thought that [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5587170 Sinestro himself]] was talking to him through the Renegade's yellow power ring.
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* WrongAssumption: WrongAssumption:
** Hal thought that [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5587170 Sinestro himself]] was talking to him through the Renegade's yellow powerring.ring.
** Apokoliptians on Earth assumed the things Paulphidian did were done by [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5633734 another Apokoliptian]].
** Hal thought that [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5587170 Sinestro himself]] was talking to him through the Renegade's yellow power
** Apokoliptians on Earth assumed the things Paulphidian did were done by [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5633734 another Apokoliptian]].
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** The Renegade's assessment of Queen Bee and her sister [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5730003 is accurate]].
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** Highfather and Scott Free [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5729844 didn't part on good terms]].
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** Savage is currently dead at this point. It has something to do [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5729611 with hyenas]].
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* HalfTheWomanSheUsedToBe: Adom kills Queen Bee this way after she unsuccessfully tries to control him.
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** The bowel disruptor used by Prankster's goons is taken from ''ComicBook/{{Transmetropolitan}}''
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** The bowel disruptor used by Prankster's goons is taken from ''ComicBook/{{Transmetropolitan}}''''ComicBook/{{Transmetropolitan}}''.
** Adom's way of killing Queen Bee is a reference to his infamous kill of D-Lister Terra-Man in ''ComicBook/FiftyTwo''.
** Adom's way of killing Queen Bee is a reference to his infamous kill of D-Lister Terra-Man in ''ComicBook/FiftyTwo''.
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It then cuts to Paul being interviewed by Cat Grant about Teth Adom and how Adom's meeting with Queen Bee went.
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* FramingDevice: The last part of the episode has Paul being interviewed on GBS and giving his viewpoint on Adom, the attack on Shiruta, and the meeting between Adom and Queen Bee.
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** [=DeSaad=] has the [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5722992 remnants of Infinity Man]].
