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* BlandNameProduct: When Squire says Knight needs her help with computers, he retorts "I'll have you know my Twunter feed's got nearly eight million follows now."
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** Zatanna can't use the staff on missions because [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5339545 she aren't supposed to have it]].
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** While Paul is aware of what the Sword of the Fallen ''actually does'', the Renegade [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5515440 is not]], at least at the moment.
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* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: Paul bribes a succubus to ensure she won't interfere with their schemes against Nabu - but if she turned down the offer, the backup plan was to shoot her with the [[WeaponOfXSlaying Ace of Winchesters]].
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* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: Paul bribes a succubus to ensure she won't interfere with their schemes against Nabu - -- but if she turned down the offer, the backup plan was to shoot her with the [[WeaponOfXSlaying Ace of Winchesters]].
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* WordOfGod: Constantine [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5332835 trusts Paul]] to not betray him.
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** Constantine [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5332835 trusts Paul]] to not betray him.
** Constantine [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5332835 trusts Paul]] to not betray him.
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** Zatanna can't use the staff on missions because [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5339545 they aren't supposed to have it]].
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** While Paul is aware of what the Sword of the Fallen ''actually does'', the Renegade [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5515440 is not]], at least at the moment.
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Takes place March 2-5
Paul tracks down an old friend of Constantine's, Chantinelle. He, John, and Zatanna offer to transform her into a Love Elemental using the Star Sapphire to remove any chance of her interfering with their plan to take down Nabu. It works, allowing her to gain power while completely changing her mindset.
Paul tracks down an old friend of Constantine's, Chantinelle. He, John, and Zatanna offer to transform her into a Love Elemental using the Star Sapphire to remove any chance of her interfering with their plan to take down Nabu. It works, allowing her to gain power while completely changing her mindset.
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Takes place 2-5 March 2-5
2011.
!!! Short version
The Team investigates a town affected by vivid shared nightmares, and captures a fear elemental known as the Terror Thing, which is absorbed and tamed by the lingering soul of Michael Siskin.
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Paul tracks down an old friend of Constantine's,Chantinelle.Chantinelle the succubus. He, John, and Zatanna offer to transform her into a Love Elemental using the Star Sapphire to remove any chance of her interfering with their plan to take down Nabu. It works, allowing increasing her to gain power while completely changing her mindset.
!!! Short version
The Team investigates a town affected by vivid shared nightmares, and captures a fear elemental known as the Terror Thing, which is absorbed and tamed by the lingering soul of Michael Siskin.
!!! Longer version
Paul tracks down an old friend of Constantine's,
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The Team visits the town of Minions, where shared nightmares are seriously disrupting the residents' sleep. They find a powerful source of fear magic in the local standing stone ring, which they learn includes several stones previously used by a cult to create a fear elemental, the Terror Thing.
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The Team Team, consisting of OL, Aqualad, Cornwall Boy, Tempest, and Aquagirl, plus Squire, visits the town of Minions, where shared nightmares are seriously disrupting the residents' sleep. They find a powerful source of fear magic in the local standing stone ring, which they learn includes several stones previously used by a cult to create a fear elemental, the Terror Thing.
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Afterwards, the Team gives its debriefing to Batman and extend an invitation to Squire, which she accepts.
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** Paul's dislike of Nabu's method [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5531596 is explained]].
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** While Paul is aware of what the Sword of the Fallen ''actually does'', the Renegade [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5515440 is not]], at least at the moment.
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* ShoutOut: OL brings up ''Literature/NineteenEightyFour'' as an example of what the Masons were trying to achieve.
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* ToBeLawfulOrGood: Paul is leaning more to good, specifically if the law is evil or stupid.
--> (''about a man being kept wrongfully imprisoned by an evil government'') "What? If he can't get a fair trial, why should they have the right to try him in the first place? I'm not going through all this effort to keep arseholes in power."
--> (''about a man being kept wrongfully imprisoned by an evil government'') "What? If he can't get a fair trial, why should they have the right to try him in the first place? I'm not going through all this effort to keep arseholes in power."
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** OL's dislike of Mercury is given [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5478924 an explanation]].
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** Mercury didn't have [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5478429 all the pertinent information]] when advising OL.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Paul says a short one to Mercury after she says that how she lives is how everyone should live.
--> "Yeah. '''I''' cleansed the sea of Human refuse. '''I''' refroze the North Pole. '''You''' did some gardening and smoked some weed."
--> "Yeah. '''I''' cleansed the sea of Human refuse. '''I''' refroze the North Pole. '''You''' did some gardening and smoked some weed."
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* IWasJustJoking: Paul is using his ring to find a group that calls itself the Pagan Nation.
--> I'm looking for a small community -hundreds of orange crosshairs appear in my vision- near either a large body of water or the sea -about three quarters disappear- with few cars or other motor vehicles -about half- practicing subsistence farming -most of the rest, just islands left for the most part- and no churches. Most of the islands go out. Okay, I can check those.\\
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I don't suppose one of them has a sign saying 'Pagan Nation' on the front -all but one disappear- gate…\\
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Thanks, ring.
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I don't suppose one of them has a sign saying 'Pagan Nation' on the front -all but one disappear- gate…\\
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Thanks, ring.
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** The Renegade [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5457277 was in jail]] when the Team investigated Minions.
