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* TheScreamParody: Applejack notes a ponified version of the painting:
--->"Y'see that paintin' on the wall?" Applejack inclined her head towards the ornate frame. "The one with what Ah think is s'posed t' be a stallion on some kind of bridge, with the sky all red an' somethin' wrong with the water an' two strangers approachin'? An' he's jus' screamin' at the air?"
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** To ''Creator/EdvardMunch'' painting, ''Art/TheScream'': In Chapter 15, a ponified version is described:

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** To ''Creator/EdvardMunch'' painting, ''Art/TheScream'': ''Art/{{The Scream|EdvardMunch}}'': In Chapter 15, a ponified version is described:
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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: In chapter 48, a panic-stricken and desperate Coordinator drinks a ''[[FantasticDrug booster]]''. Unfortunately, this particular variety works by [[CastFromHitPoints converting the drinker's personal strength into thaums]], and Coordinator wasn't very strong to begin with. The result is that he ''burns himself out'', completely consuming his LifeForce for an ultimately useless surge of magical power.

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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: In chapter 48, a panic-stricken and desperate Coordinator drinks a ''[[FantasticDrug booster]]''. Unfortunately, this particular variety works by [[CastFromHitPoints converting the drinker's personal strength into thaums]], and Coordinator wasn't very strong to begin with. The result is that he ''burns himself out'', completely consuming his LifeForce LifeEnergy for an ultimately useless surge of magical power.
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* WithThisHerring: Discord sends the Six (plus Spike) on the mission with no gear beyond what they happened to have on them and a single "make any one thing ''go away''" button for Fluttershy. He states that this is necessary if they are to do things "the pony way".
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** In Trixie's letter to Twilight about the Alcorn Amulet, she mentions Booster Drugs, and makes it clear that anything above a 15% boost is as high as they can get without a chance of serious harm coming to the drinker. In 'Memento Mori', Coordinator drinks a 50% booster . . .

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** In Trixie's letter to Twilight about the Alcorn Amulet, she mentions Booster Drugs, and makes it clear that anything above a 15% boost is as high as they can get without a chance of cause serious harm coming to the drinker.drinker. She speculates that even a well-mixed 50% booster might kill the drinker from the strain alone. In 'Memento Mori', Coordinator drinks a 50% booster . . .
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** In Trixie's letter to Twilight about the Alcorn Amulet, she mentions Booster Drugs, and makes it clear that anything above a 15% boost is as high as they can get without a chance of serious harm coming to the drinker. In 'Memento Mori', Coordinator drinks a 50% booster . . .
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** Chapter 40 has made this ''[[UpToEleven worse]]'', to the point where some readers are now calling him Pony Hitler. (Which is unfair, as his experiments on the unborn would make him closer to being Pony Mengele.)

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** Chapter 40 has made this ''[[UpToEleven worse]]'', to the point where some readers are now calling him Pony Hitler. (Which is unfair, unfair[[note]][[ARareSentence yes]], calling him Pony Hitler is being [[InsultToRocks unfair to Hitler]][[/note]], as his experiments on the unborn would make him closer to being Pony Mengele.)
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-->'''Gentle Arrival:''' "Then why don't you '''act''' like it? Talk to them! Make them ''believe'''! You owe me your '''life''', Fluttershy! ''She'' owes me her life, she owes me a debt for Primatura's '''death''' and she has spent her lifetime trying to pay it! Why can't you give me five minutes, just ''five minutes of reason --''"

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-->'''Gentle Arrival:''' "Then why don't you '''act''' like it? Talk to them! Make them ''believe'''! ''believe''! You owe me your '''life''', Fluttershy! ''She'' owes me her life, she owes me a debt for Primatura's '''death''' and she has spent her lifetime trying to pay it! Why can't you give me five minutes, just ''five minutes of reason --''"
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** Discord granted Fluttershy the ability to remove ''any'' one thing of her choosing (potentially including a ''pony'') as part of their mission -- or rather, he'll know when she wants it done and make that thing ''go away'' accordingly. This was the only thing the Bearers received for the mission at all. It takes ages to be fired, and that lack of firing is Lampshaded in chapter 46, where Fluttershy patiently explains to Rainbow Dash that A: they have to be certain they're using it for the ''right'' thing to vanish, and B: they need to be certain they understand just ''what'' they're making vanish. Finally, in chapter 52, Fluttershy uses it to remove ''her'' pain, ending her PainfulTransformation and allowing ''her'' to be cleansed of some of the emotional abuse ''she'' grew up with. [[note]]Fluttershy clarifies the usage in Chapter 53: it's the pain of the transformation, not ''all' pain -- but she also had the emotional abuse and ''her'' taking the blame for her mother's death in mind when the bubble was used. Accordingly, she suspects Discord thought removing ''one'' thing was boring, so he might have done one and a half.[[/note]]

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** Discord granted Fluttershy the ability to remove ''any'' one thing of her choosing (potentially including a ''pony'') as part of their mission -- or rather, he'll know when she wants it done and make that thing ''go away'' accordingly. This was the only thing the Bearers received for the mission at all. It takes ages to be fired, and that lack of firing is Lampshaded in chapter 46, where Fluttershy patiently explains to Rainbow Dash that A: they have to be certain they're using it for the ''right'' thing to vanish, and B: they need to be certain they understand just ''what'' they're making vanish. Finally, in chapter 52, Fluttershy uses it to remove ''her'' pain, ending her PainfulTransformation and allowing ''her'' to be cleansed of some of the emotional abuse ''she'' grew up with. [[note]]Fluttershy clarifies the usage in Chapter 53: it's the pain of the transformation, not ''all' ''all'' pain -- but she also had the emotional abuse and ''her'' taking the blame for her mother's death in mind when the bubble was used. Accordingly, she suspects Discord thought removing ''one'' thing was boring, so he might have done one and a half.[[/note]]
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* HistoryRepeats: In the tragic sense. The two Diarchs were part of a set of Elements instead of just those two, and they were the only ones to ascend. The Mane 6 had Twilight ascend, and whether the others will is still up in the air. And Cadance had every other one of her ''own'' team, lost to history, [[HeroicSacrifice sacrifice themselves]] to keep her alive. Now the question is whether to let it ''[[MortonsFork keep repeating]]''...

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* HistoryRepeats: In the tragic sense. The two Diarchs were part of a set of Elements instead of just those two, and they were the only ones to ascend. The Mane 6 had Twilight ascend, and whether the others will is still up in the air. And Cadance had every other one of her ''own'' team, lost to history, [[HeroicSacrifice sacrifice themselves]] to keep her alive. Now the question is whether to let it ''[[MortonsFork keep repeating]]''...''keep repeating''...
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* HistoryRepeats: In the tragic sense. The two Diarchs were part of a set of [[{{Nakama}} Elements]] instead of just those two, and they were the only ones to ascend. The Mane 6 had Twilight ascend, and whether the others will is still up in the air. And Cadance had every other one of her ''own'' team, lost to history, [[HeroicSacrifice sacrifice themselves]] to keep her alive. Now the question is whether to let it ''[[MortonsFork keep repeating]]''...

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* HistoryRepeats: In the tragic sense. The two Diarchs were part of a set of [[{{Nakama}} Elements]] Elements instead of just those two, and they were the only ones to ascend. The Mane 6 had Twilight ascend, and whether the others will is still up in the air. And Cadance had every other one of her ''own'' team, lost to history, [[HeroicSacrifice sacrifice themselves]] to keep her alive. Now the question is whether to let it ''[[MortonsFork keep repeating]]''...
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* BrownNote: Viewing ''her'' mark for the first time nearly has this effect on Twilight and later causes similar-if-lesser reactions for most (but not all) of the Mane Cast. Marks are not supposed to ''move''. [[spoiler: This turns out to be caused by ''chaos magic''... and also becomes a way to determine if anypony Gentle helped deliver is one of the 'hybrids', who don't see anything wrong with it.]]

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* BrownNote: Viewing ''her'' mark for the first time nearly has this effect on Twilight and later causes similar-if-lesser reactions for most (but not all) of the Mane Cast. Marks are not supposed to ''move''. [[spoiler: This turns out to be caused by ''chaos magic''... and also becomes a way to determine if anypony Gentle helped deliver is one of the 'hybrids', who don't see anything wrong with it.]]



* HistoryRepeats: In the tragic sense. [[spoiler: The two Diarchs were part of a set of [[{{Nakama}} Elements]] instead of just those two, and they were the only ones to ascend. The Mane 6 had Twilight ascend, and whether the others will is still up in the air. And Cadance had every other one of her ''own'' team, lost to history, [[HeroicSacrifice sacrifice themselves]] to keep her alive.]] Now the question is whether to let it ''[[MortonsFork keep repeating]]''...

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* HistoryRepeats: In the tragic sense. [[spoiler: The two Diarchs were part of a set of [[{{Nakama}} Elements]] instead of just those two, and they were the only ones to ascend. The Mane 6 had Twilight ascend, and whether the others will is still up in the air. And Cadance had every other one of her ''own'' team, lost to history, [[HeroicSacrifice sacrifice themselves]] to keep her alive.]] Now the question is whether to let it ''[[MortonsFork keep repeating]]''...
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** The Exception possibly qualifies, because not only can it be hideously abused (such as ''stopping somepony's heart''), but it almost always requires a strong field and at least a double corona, putting its caster at extreme risk of ''backlash''.

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** The Exception ''Differentiation Exception'' possibly qualifies, because not only can it be hideously abused (such as ''stopping somepony's heart''), but it almost always requires a strong field and at least a double corona, putting its caster at extreme risk of ''backlash''.
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* HistoryRepeats: In the tragic sense. [[spoiler: The two Diarchs were part of a set of [[{{Nakama}} Elements]] instead of just those two, and they were the only ones to ascend. The Mane 6 had Twilight ascend, and whether the others will is still up in the air. And Cadance had every other one of her ''own'' team, lost to history, [[HeroicSacrifice sacrifice themselves]] to keep her alive.]] Now the question is whether to let it ''[[MortonsFork keep repeating]]''...

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* BigBad: While they initially don't seem the slightest bit evil and in fact come across as [[Affably Evil extremely friendly and good-natured]], Gentle and Quiet are the masterminds behind the Great Work (or rather, the lead researcher and his most devoted helper): a process meant to turn a normal pony into an alicorn. The attempt went horribly wrong, and their attempts to fix it and keep it hidden drive the story's conflict.

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* BigBad: While they initially don't seem the slightest bit evil and in fact come across as [[Affably Evil [[AffablyEvil extremely friendly and good-natured]], Gentle and Quiet are the masterminds behind the Great Work (or rather, the lead researcher and his most devoted helper): a process meant to turn a normal pony into an alicorn. The attempt went horribly wrong, and their attempts to fix it and keep it hidden drive the story's conflict.



* BrownNote: Viewing ''her'' mark for the first time nearly has this effect on Twilight and later causes similar-if-lesser reactions for most (but not all) of the Mane Cast. Marks are not supposed to ''move''.

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* BrownNote: Viewing ''her'' mark for the first time nearly has this effect on Twilight and later causes similar-if-lesser reactions for most (but not all) of the Mane Cast. Marks are not supposed to ''move''. [[spoiler: This turns out to be caused by ''chaos magic''... and also becomes a way to determine if anypony Gentle helped deliver is one of the 'hybrids', who don't see anything wrong with it.]]



** The Exception possibly qualifies, because not only can it be hideously abused (such as ''stopping somepony's heart''), but it almost always requires a strong field and at least a double corona, putting its caster at extreme risk of ''backlash''.



* EldritchLocation: Chaos terrain: just being there triggers an [[PrimalFear instinctual panic response]] in ponies. These turn out to be areas where Discord's power has essentially saturated the land -- and the only place to find chaos pearls.

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* EldritchLocation: Chaos terrain: just being there triggers an [[PrimalFear instinctual panic response]] in ponies. These turn out to be areas where Discord's power has essentially saturated the land -- and the only place to find chaos pearls. The panic is also kind of justified when you can take two steps to the left and find yourself in capital-N ''Nothing.''
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** In Chapter 33, Twilight mentions how she doesn't much care for peaches, a reference to a brief tide of 'Twilight Eats a Peach' story tags (and associated stories).
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* OnlyOneName: Subverted. Fluttershy is usually just called that, but she actually has a surname, as revealed in Chapter 34. Phylia.
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* HappilyAdopted: It's been confirmed that Pinkie is legally adopted by the Cakes. (It took a while before the readership realized this meant [[Videogame/{{Portal}} the cake was a Pie]].) Also applies to Spike for Twilight's family, and there's a line in Chapter 21 indicating he has full Equestrian citizenship.

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* HappilyAdopted: It's been confirmed that Pinkie is legally adopted by the Cakes. (It took a while before the readership realized this meant [[Videogame/{{Portal}} the cake Cake was a Pie]].) Also applies to Spike for Twilight's family, and there's a line in Chapter 21 indicating he has full Equestrian citizenship.
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* HappilyAdopted: It's been confirmed that Pinkie is legally adopted by the Cakes[[Note]]It took a while before the readership realized this meant [[Videogame/Portal the cake was a Pie.]][[/note]] Also applies to Spike for Twilight's family, and there's a line in Chapter 21 indicating he has full Equestrian citizenship.

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* HappilyAdopted: It's been confirmed that Pinkie is legally adopted by the Cakes[[Note]]It Cakes. (It took a while before the readership realized this meant [[Videogame/Portal [[Videogame/{{Portal}} the cake was a Pie.]][[/note]] Pie]].) Also applies to Spike for Twilight's family, and there's a line in Chapter 21 indicating he has full Equestrian citizenship.

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* AwfulWeddedLife: Quiet Presence ''hates'' his wife, who is described in quite unflattering terms as, functionally, a tribalist, self-absorbed bitch. When she is revealed as having an affair in chapter 53, no reader is surprised.
* BabyNameTrendStarter: An [[InvertedTrope Inversion]] is {{Invoked}} by being {{Discussed|Trope}} in Chapter 14, that "no pony will ever be named Twilight again", because Twilight Sparkle's now a Princess
* BigBad: While they don't seem the slightest bit evil and are in fact extremely friendly and good-natured, Quiet and Gentle are the masterminds behind the Great Work: a process to turn a normal pony into an alicorn. The attempt went horribly wrong, and their attempts to fix it and keep it hidden drive the story's conflict.
* BenevolentConspiracy: The Great Work at least thinks of itself this way; reading between the lines suggests that they believe transforming all ponies into alicorns is the only way to break down the walls of FantasticRacism that separate the three main pony tribes. Whether they actually count as this is debatable; their referenced and implied efforts at the very least mark them as {{Well Intentioned Extremist}}s.

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* AwfulWeddedLife: Quiet Presence ''hates'' turns out to be trapped in an arranged marriage: when we ''finally'' meet his wife, who is described in quite unflattering terms as, functionally, spouse, she presents herself as a tribalist, self-absorbed bitch. bitch who uses her first meeting with Twilight as an opportunity for direct insult. (It's implied that Quiet's parents were trying to make sure he married a 'pure' bloodline.) When she is revealed as having an affair in chapter 53, no reader is surprised.
surprised -- and because the prenuptial contract has an infidelity clause, she winds up forfeiting title, castle, and any settlement she would have been due.
* BabyNameTrendStarter: An [[InvertedTrope Inversion]] is {{Invoked}} by being {{Discussed|Trope}} in Chapter 14, that "no pony will ever be named Twilight again", because Twilight Sparkle's now a Princess
Princess. Twilight later confirms that no newborn is *ever* named Celestia, Luna, or Cadance: the names are unique to them. (By contrast, the mare who birthed Dawn Sky in Chapter 14 is named Shining, and Twilight says that name, without a qualifier, is gender-neutral.)
* BigBad: While they initially don't seem the slightest bit evil and are in fact come across as [[Affably Evil extremely friendly and good-natured, Quiet and good-natured]], Gentle and Quiet are the masterminds behind the Great Work: Work (or rather, the lead researcher and his most devoted helper): a process meant to turn a normal pony into an alicorn. The attempt went horribly wrong, and their attempts to fix it and keep it hidden drive the story's conflict.
* BenevolentConspiracy: The Great Work at least thinks of itself this way; reading between the lines suggests that they believe transforming all ponies into alicorns is the only way to break down the walls of FantasticRacism that separate the three main pony tribes. Whether they actually count as this is debatable; their referenced and implied efforts at the very least mark initially seem to file them as {{Well Intentioned Extremist}}s.under WellIntentionedExtremist.



* BreadEggsMilkSquick: The Snitcher Device, introduced in chapter 27; it allows a pony who doesn't have their cutie mark yet to feel how close they are to actually manifesting their mark, but it ''also'' suppresses their magic and can be used to ''stop'' a mark from manifesting.

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* BreadEggsMilkSquick: The Snitcher Device, device, introduced in chapter 27; it allows a pony who doesn't have their cutie mark yet to feel how close they are to actually manifesting their mark, but it ''also'' suppresses their magic and can be used to ''stop'' a mark from manifesting.manifesting.
** To clarify: whoever puts the Snitcher on its subject can feel how close that pony's mark magic is to the surface, and whether it's rising or falling. So in the case of a user who isn't the foal, it's possible to spot a rise and move to ''distract'' the pony. The magic suppression aspect (which was an unintended side effect) applies to racial abilities and stops functioning at the moment the wearer gains their mark: at that point, they're too strong for the Snitcher to hold them back. Effectively keeping the Snitcher on ''her'' since birth is the reason she never experienced any Surges, preventing Doctor Gentle from learning the Secret while denying ''her'' blood heritage.



* BrutalHonesty: Zephyra Hurricane is described in this way by Princess Celestia in chapter 53.

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* BrutalHonesty: Zephyra Hurricane is expressly described in this way by Princess Celestia in chapter 53.Chapter 53: a mare who, if she decided somepony needed to die, would simply kill them without hesitation or satisfaction -- because the ''truth'' said that pony had to die.



* TheCavalry: After the Mane 6 brings down Gentle Arrival at the end of chapter 52, Discord arrives to teleport everypony -- Bearers, Spike, ''her'' and Gentle Arrival -- back to the palace.

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* TheCavalry: After the Mane 6 ''she'' brings down Gentle Arrival at the end of chapter 52, Discord arrives to teleport everypony -- Bearers, Spike, ''her'' and Gentle Arrival -- back to the palace.palace. However, this isn't meant as a rescue: he simply tells them that the mission is over and they're leaving. To the best of anypony's knowledge, he never interfered with anything while the mission was ongoing -- because that's the 'pony way'.



** Discord granted Fluttershy the ability to remove ''any'' one thing of her choosing (potentially including a ''pony'') as part of their mission -- or rather, he'll know when she wants it done and make that thing ''go away'' accordingly. This was the only thing the Bearers received for the mission at all. It takes ages to be fired, and that lack of firing is Lampshaded in chapter 46, where Fluttershy patiently explains to Rainbow Dash that A: they have to be certain they're using it for the ''right'' thing to vanish, and B: they need to be certain they understand just ''what'' they're making vanish. Finally, in chapter 52, Fluttershy uses it to remove ''her'' pain, ending her PainfulTransformation and allowing ''her'' to be cleansed of some of the emotional abuse ''she'' grew up with.

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** Discord granted Fluttershy the ability to remove ''any'' one thing of her choosing (potentially including a ''pony'') as part of their mission -- or rather, he'll know when she wants it done and make that thing ''go away'' accordingly. This was the only thing the Bearers received for the mission at all. It takes ages to be fired, and that lack of firing is Lampshaded in chapter 46, where Fluttershy patiently explains to Rainbow Dash that A: they have to be certain they're using it for the ''right'' thing to vanish, and B: they need to be certain they understand just ''what'' they're making vanish. Finally, in chapter 52, Fluttershy uses it to remove ''her'' pain, ending her PainfulTransformation and allowing ''her'' to be cleansed of some of the emotional abuse ''she'' grew up with. [[note]]Fluttershy clarifies the usage in Chapter 53: it's the pain of the transformation, not ''all' pain -- but she also had the emotional abuse and ''her'' taking the blame for her mother's death in mind when the bubble was used. Accordingly, she suspects Discord thought removing ''one'' thing was boring, so he might have done one and a half.[[/note]]



** After their talk in Chapter 6, Twilight decides to train Rarity in low-power, high-control workings: the first such spell changes a unicorn's signature, altering their field's hue in the process. In chapter 46, Rarity uses this to make it look like Twilight is manifesting a double corona through her PowerLimiter, tricking a guard into removing that limiter, as it was stopping him from hitting her horn and triggering backlash. But, in doing so, he let Twilight use her magic for real, which is instrumental to freeing them.

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** After their talk in Chapter 6, Twilight decides to train Rarity in low-power, high-control workings: the first such spell changes a unicorn's signature, altering their field's hue in the process. In chapter 46, Rarity uses this to make it look like Twilight is manifesting a double corona through her PowerLimiter, tricking a guard into removing that limiter, as it was stopping him from hitting her horn and triggering backlash. But, But in doing so, he let Twilight use her magic for real, which is instrumental to freeing them.



* CombinedEnergyAttack: In chapter 52, the Mane 6 and Spike are able to defeat the shield that is protecting Gentle Arrival by combining all of their magics into a single assault.
* TheConspiracy: There's actually two in the story, although only one is truly active. The Great Work is trying to find a way to turn ponies into alicorns at will, and that drives things along -- but whatever made the earth ponies drive public awareness of their true magic underground qualifies as ''some'' level of conspiracy: one which extends across an entire species. It's not as if anypony's currently hunting for truth-tellers, but ''something'' created this Secret and the generational means to ''maintain'' it -- and for now, their reasons are unknown.

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* CombinedEnergyAttack: In chapter 52, the Mane 6 and Spike are able try to defeat the shield that is protecting Gentle Arrival by combining all of their magics into a single assault.
assault. It was created by ''her'' during the True Surge and subsequent fire: this means it possesses all three racial magics, layered into a single construct. Twilight and Rarity go after the unicorn aspects, Rainbow takes pegasus while Applejack counters the earth pony portion, Pinkie & Fluttery attack the shield with their shards of inner chaos and since it's a heat shield, Spike gives it the test of its life. Ultimately, all their efforts can do is create a single pupil-sized hole -- but that's enough for Fluttershy's bubble to get through.
* TheConspiracy: There's actually two in the story, although only one is truly visibly active. The Great Work is trying to find a way to turn ponies into alicorns at will, and that drives things along -- but whatever made the earth ponies drive public awareness of their true magic underground qualifies as ''some'' level of conspiracy: one which extends across an entire species. It's not as if anypony's currently hunting for truth-tellers, but ''something'' created this Secret and the generational means to ''maintain'' it -- and for now, their reasons are unknown.



* DeadlyEuphemism: "Sending On" is used in two ways. The first is non-euphemistically; unwanted foals, specifically ponies born to parents of a different tribe, are fostered out to ponies of the correct tribe. This is the "normal" use of the term in pony society. Amongst the more vehemently tribalist crowd, it's used as a euphemism for filicide. Whilst it's left ambiguous if that form of "sending on" has actually been ''used'', in chapter 52, Twilight directly calls this trope out, by referring to Quiet's parents killing Quiet's earth pony sister, and then sarcastically "correcting herself" by using the term "sending on".
* DeadPersonConversation: Briefly, in chapter 52, when Fluttershy erases ''her'' pain, ''she'' briefly glimpses into the Shadowlands, where ''she'' is able to receive a brief moment of comfort from the ghost of ''her'' mother, Primatura.

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* DeadlyEuphemism: "Sending On" is used in two ways. The first is non-euphemistically; unwanted foals, specifically ponies born to parents of a different tribe, are fostered out to ponies of the correct tribe. This is the "normal" use of the term in pony society. Amongst the more vehemently tribalist crowd, it's used as a euphemism for filicide. Whilst it's left ambiguous if that form of "sending on" has actually been ''used'', in chapter 52, Twilight directly calls this trope out, by referring to Quiet's parents killing potentially having killed Quiet's earth pony sister, and then sarcastically "correcting herself" corrects herself by using the term "sending on".
* DeadPersonConversation: Briefly, in In a way. Near the end of chapter 52, when immediately after Fluttershy erases ''her'' pain, ''she'' briefly glimpses into has a vision of Primatura -- something which allows her to finally realize that she's not responsible for her mother's death. However, there are image frames showing ''multiple'' ponies in an internal gallery: Primatura is just the Shadowlands, where ''she'' one who climbs out to meet her. The implication is that we're looking at the eight ponies whose essence was used in the transformation attempt, and that she may ultimately be able to receive a brief moment of comfort from call on them as the ghost of ''her'' mother, Primatura.alicorns reach towards those who were involved in the ascensions.



** Chapter 24 reveals that Celestia and Luna themselves were originally ordinary ponies, and modern Equestria's faith in them is just the same phenomena that Twilight Sparkle is receiving, after being given a thousand years to proliferate.

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** Chapter 24 reveals that Celestia and Luna themselves were originally ordinary ponies, and modern Equestria's faith in them is just the same phenomena that Twilight Sparkle is receiving, after being given a thousand years to proliferate.proliferate -- and Chapter 55 has Discord directly state that the sisters were originally earth ponies. (Cadance was a pegasus, and he declares Twilight as the only unicorn to come this far.)



* DuelsDecideEverything: Earth ponies have the tradition of the ''fosse'', an earth-manipulating duel they used in ancient times to resolve dispute. It's extremely old-fashioned in the modern era, but chapter 26 reveals that Applejack fought one when Igneous Pie came to Ponyville and attempted to drag Pinkie home by force; winning (combined with her promise to kill him if he came near Pinkie again -- it would have been a threat, but she clearly wasn't lying) was what made him leave empty-hooved and stay away ever since.
* EldritchLocation: Chaos terrain. Just being there triggers an [[PrimalFear instinctual panic response]] in ponies.
* EmotionBomb: The idea of using ''resonance'', the emotional underlay of unicorn magic, as an offensive weapon is discussed by Twilight fairly early on.

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* DuelsDecideEverything: Earth ponies have the tradition of the ''fosse'', an earth-manipulating duel they used in ancient times to resolve dispute. It's extremely old-fashioned in the modern era, but chapter Chapter 26 reveals that Applejack fought one when Igneous Pie came to Ponyville and attempted to drag Pinkie home by force; winning (combined with her promise to kill him if he came near Pinkie again -- it would have been a threat, but she clearly wasn't lying) was what made him leave empty-hooved and stay away ever since.
* EldritchLocation: Chaos terrain. Just terrain: just being there triggers an [[PrimalFear instinctual panic response]] in ponies.
ponies. These turn out to be areas where Discord's power has essentially saturated the land -- and the only place to find chaos pearls.
* EmotionBomb: The idea of using ''resonance'', the emotional underlay of unicorn magic, as an offensive weapon is discussed by Twilight fairly early on. Basically, a section of field is rendered invisible and charged with the intended emotion: anypony moving through it then gets hit with the core feeling. Creating landmines of ''hopelessness'' can do a lot to destabilize an army.



** Likewise, Gentle Arrival and Quiet Presence both despise Clear Coordinator. In chapter 29, seeing Coordinator smile at being asked to help control the Bearers is enough to sicken Gentle Arrival. When he gets excited upon confirming that this also means Twilight, it's enough to make Gentle Arrival feel intensely nauseous.

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** Likewise, Gentle Arrival and Quiet Presence both despise Clear Coordinator. In chapter 29, seeing Coordinator smile at being asked to help control the Bearers is enough to sicken Gentle Arrival. viewed as sickeninhg. When he gets excited upon confirming that this also means Twilight, it's enough to make Gentle Arrival feel intensely somewhat nauseous.



** Despite his own less-than-stellar parenting, Gentle Arrival exhibits genuine contempt for the abuse that Rock Pie heaped on Pinkie Pie.

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** Despite his own [[{{Understatement}} less-than-stellar parenting, parenting]], Gentle Arrival exhibits genuine contempt for the abuse that Rock Pie heaped on Pinkie Pie.



* ExplosiveLeash: To deal with Gentle Arrival after taking him into custody in chapter 53, the Princesses put him in a special form of restraining cone which contains multiple layers, the innermost being a layer of platinum, which will deliver a very gruesome death if the wearer manages to touch it with their aura. In fact, they used this same cone to restrain Star Swirl during his imprisonment.

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* ExplosiveLeash: To deal with Gentle Arrival after taking him into custody in chapter 53, the Princesses put him in a special form of restraining cone restraint which contains multiple layers, layers -- with the innermost being a layer of platinum, which will deliver a very gruesome death overload and detonate if it absorbs too much of the wearer manages wearer's magic. This is the restraint used on Star Swirl, and is intended to touch defeat a pony who can get past differentiation: it doesn't matter if you can potentially cast through the restraint if doing so means the restraint explodes and takes your skull with their aura. In fact, they used this same cone to restrain Star Swirl during his imprisonment.it.



** And ultimately, Gentle Arrival may be the worst of all. Seeing that his daughter, whose mother died birthing her, was an earth pony made him obsessed with finding a way to turn all ponies into alicorns, so no other foal would be born "broken" the way his own was. He also repeatedly refers to cross-tribal breeding as a "sin".
** In chapter 54, Princess Celestia talks about how ''long'' ponies have been hating and distrusting ponies for being born "the wrong tribe", ever since the Discordian Era. It's one of the reasons why she and Luna ultimately worked to redefine "sending on" from a DeadlyEuphemism for "murdering the Chaos Children" (which such cross-tribal births were called) to "fostering them out".

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** And ultimately, Gentle Arrival may be the worst of all. Seeing that his daughter, whose mother died birthing her, was an earth pony made him obsessed with finding a way to turn all ponies into alicorns, so no other foal would be born "broken" the way his own was. He also repeatedly refers to cross-tribal breeding as a "sin".
"sin". [[note]][[WordOfGod Word Of Fanfic Author]] has Doctor Gentle as a 'stay on your side of the fence' racist: everything is fine as long as everypony remains in their place. He could call an earth pony a friend and might even believe it was true, but that pony had better not try to marry a unicorn or move into Trotter's Falls.[[/note]]
** In chapter 54, Princess Celestia talks about how ''long'' ponies have been hating and distrusting ponies for being born "the wrong tribe", ever since the Discordian Era. It's one of the reasons why she and Luna ultimately worked to redefine "sending on" from a DeadlyEuphemism for "murdering the Chaos Children" (which such cross-tribal births were called) called -- during the Discordian Era, ponies lost the truth of how their own blood worked and thought those foals were Discord's creations) to "fostering them out".



* FusionDance: It's ultimately explained over chapters 53 to 55 that this is how alicornization works; a pony is infused with ''essence'' from ponies of the other tribes, permanently leaving a small "shadow" of the donor-pony's soul meshed into the alicorn's soul. These slivers leave an imprint of that donor-pony's personality as well, so when an alicorn taps into the deeper parts of the magic left by that transformation, their personality actually shifts to resemble the donor they are tapping. When this imprinting is done with the aid of the Elements, it's harmless, but it ''is'' possible for the donors to be killed; Cadance's own ''ascension'' involved the death of her friends. The most important aspect is that the donation ''has'' to be done voluntarily; the mingling of souls only happens if the donor-ponies love the host-pony and are willing to make that sacrifice of some of their ''essence''.

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* FusionDance: It's ultimately explained over chapters Chapters 53 to 55 that this is how alicornization works; a pony is infused with ''essence'' from ponies of the other tribes, permanently leaving a small "shadow" of the donor-pony's soul meshed into the alicorn's soul. These slivers leave an imprint of that donor-pony's personality as well, so when an alicorn taps into the deeper parts of the magic left by that transformation, their personality actually shifts to resemble the donor they are tapping. When this imprinting is done with the aid of the Elements, it's harmless, but it ''is'' possible for the donors to be killed; Cadance's own ''ascension'' involved the death of her friends. (We never find out how that transformation happened, but the Elements weren't involved.) The most important aspect is that the donation ''has'' to be done voluntarily; the mingling of souls only happens if the donor-ponies love the host-pony and are willing to make that sacrifice of some of their ''essence''.''essence''. As Discord points out to Twilight, this means that no matter what happened afterwards, the Star Swirl who existed at the moment of the change cared about the sisters and was willing to do anything to help them.



** In chapter 29, it turns out that the terrifying Snitcher device started out as a simple, benign invention created by a dedicated caster who wanted to assure her daughter that her mark was coming soon, and maybe help her find it a little faster. It turned out to have horrific side-effects, in the form of completely suppressing the wearer's magic, and was promptly abused by various lunatics and would-be tyrants, which is why it's now illegal.

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** In chapter 29, it turns out that the terrifying Snitcher device started out as a simple, benign invention created by a dedicated caster who wanted to assure her daughter that her mark was coming soon, and maybe help her find it a little faster. It turned out to have a horrific side-effects, side-effect in the form of completely suppressing the wearer's magic, and was promptly abused by various lunatics and would-be tyrants, which is why it's now illegal.



* HappilyAdopted: It's been confirmed that Pinkie is legally adopted by the Cakes. Also applies to Spike for Twilight's family, and there's a line in Chapter 21 indicating he has full Equestrian citizenship.

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* HappilyAdopted: It's been confirmed that Pinkie is legally adopted by the Cakes. Cakes[[Note]]It took a while before the readership realized this meant [[Videogame/Portal the cake was a Pie.]][[/note]] Also applies to Spike for Twilight's family, and there's a line in Chapter 21 indicating he has full Equestrian citizenship.



* HeroicBSOD: Applejack undergoes this after circumstances finally force her to break the veil of secrecy around earth pony magic. Coming out of it has been a slow process, with Rarity believing the Bearers will only see final recovery when Applejack takes up her Daddy's hat again.

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* HeroicBSOD: Applejack undergoes this after circumstances finally force her to break the veil of secrecy around earth pony magic. Coming out of it has been a slow process, with Rarity believing the Bearers will only see final recovery when Applejack takes up her Daddy's hat again.again -- something which doesn't happen until the very last chapter.



* InAnotherMansShoes: Overlapping with EmotionBomb; during chapters 51 and 52, Twilight stumbles into what can only be described as "memory bubbles", allowing her to live out certain key moments from ''her'' childhood through ''her'' own eyes.

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* InAnotherMansShoes: Overlapping with EmotionBomb; during chapters 51 and 52, Chapter 51, Twilight stumbles into what can only be described as "memory bubbles", bubbles" in the underground path to ''her'' rooms, allowing her to live out certain key moments from ''her'' childhood through ''her'' own eyes.eyes. (They were created by accident during the transformation.)



** For a darker twist, it's revealed in Chapter 50 that Quiet Presence's fraility isn't the reason why he's never had kids: he's refused to have foals because his wife is of the ''exact'' same mentality as his parents (and he feels there will be those in future generations who continue to feel that way). The same ponies whom he believes may have ''murdered'' his little sister for being born as an earth pony. Quiet himself doesn't care what his children are, but he refuses to have foals so long as he has to be scared of the chance they might turn out to be earth ponies.

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** For a darker twist, it's revealed in Chapter 50 that Quiet Presence's fraility frailty isn't the reason why he's never had kids: he's refused to have foals because his wife is of the ''exact'' same mentality as his parents (and he feels there will be those in future generations who continue to feel that way). The same ponies whom he believes may have ''murdered'' his little sister for being born as an earth pony. Quiet himself doesn't care what his children are, but he refuses to have foals so long as he has to be scared of the chance they might turn out to be earth ponies.



* LapPillow: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/101769/30/triptych/bentonite chapter 30]]: It's how Quiet and Twilight are positioned, when he reads to her, as described by Rarity:
--> "So when a friend reads to you," Rarity quietly continued, "your natural listening position is to lie down so that [[LapPillow your head is resting on his forelegs]]?"

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* LapPillow: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/101769/30/triptych/bentonite chapter 30]]: It's how Quiet and Twilight are positioned, when he reads to her, her -- or, given pony anatomy, as described by Rarity:
--> "So when a friend reads to you," Rarity quietly continued, "your natural listening position is to lie down so that [[LapPillow your
close it could get: her head is resting on his forelegs]]?"forelegs.



* MineralMacGuffin: Deathstone, which Rarity renames to the more appealing "shiftstone" and which is given the alternative name of "chaos pearl" in chapter 24. They are ultimately revealed to be containers of chaos energy and pony essence, essential for the attempt to artificially reproduce the alicorn creation process. And without them, there would be no hybrids.

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* MineralMacGuffin: Deathstone, which Rarity renames to the more appealing "shiftstone" and which is given the alternative conspiracy-assigned name of "chaos pearl" in chapter Chapter 24. They are ultimately revealed to be containers of chaos energy and pony essence, essential for the attempt to artificially reproduce the alicorn creation process. And without them, there would be no hybrids.



* MundaneUtility: Being a pegasus/earth pony hybrid cures a pony of the instinctual claustrophobia that all pegasi suffer. Fluttershy brings up that she has a basement in her cottage and she uses it casually.
* MythologyGag: When Rainbow Dash locates the hidden door with her thermal vision, she describes the segment of the wall hiding it as being "20 percent cooler", one of her earliest and most famously memetic lines.

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* MundaneUtility: Being a pegasus/earth pony hybrid cures seems to cure a pony of the instinctual claustrophobia that nearly all pegasi suffer. Fluttershy brings up that she has a basement no trouble in her cottage and she uses it casually.
the tight confines of the castle's secret passages, while Rainbow comes close to a panic attack.
* MythologyGag: When Rainbow Dash locates the hidden door to the lower levels with her thermal vision, she describes the segment of the wall hiding it as being "20 "about twenty percent cooler", one of her earliest and most famously memetic lines.



* NightmareFuel: InUniverse, the potential side-effects of wearing a shiftstone are terrifying to Twilight, and the idea that it might, eventually, make Rarity start to transform in the same way as ''her'' is scary enough to make Rarity agree not to wear it to the party. This turns out to have been unnecessary: Rarity's stone, as one of those used in ''her'' initial transformation, had been discharged -- and even if it had been full, the essence within could have only mixed with Rarity's own at birth or during mark manifestation. However, Rarity also wound up finding the ''first'' of Gentle Arrival's chaos pearls...

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* NightmareFuel: InUniverse, the potential side-effects of wearing a shiftstone are terrifying to Twilight, and the idea that it might, eventually, make Rarity start to transform in the same way as ''her'' is scary enough to make Rarity agree not to wear it to the party. This turns out to have been unnecessary: Rarity's stone, as one of those used in ''her'' initial transformation, had been discharged -- and even if it had been full, the essence within could have only mixed with Rarity's own at birth or during mark manifestation. However, Rarity also wound up finding the ''first'' of Gentle Arrival's chaos pearls... pearls -- the one which held Primatura's essence.



** There have been an increasing number of hints that this represents an aspect of his ''talent''. In particular, Chapter 38 has the party about two body lengths away from where he's speaking to Doctor Gentle, with ''nopony'' noticing the conversation. Doctor Gentle immediately asks him just how much he's exerting himself and as soon as they reach an enclosed room, conducts basic medical monitoring. Chapter 44 has Rarity and Twilight mutually figure out that it is indeed a talent: Twilight ultimately describes it as Quiet projecting the emotional resonance of ''dismissal'': he's not invisible, you just overlook or forget that he's in the room.

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** There have been an increasing number of hints that this represents an aspect of his ''talent''. In particular, Chapter 38 has the party about two body lengths away from where he's speaking to Doctor Gentle, with ''nopony'' noticing the conversation. Doctor Gentle immediately asks him just how much he's exerting himself and as soon as they reach an enclosed room, conducts basic medical monitoring. Chapter 44 has Rarity and Twilight mutually figure out that it is indeed a talent: talent. Twilight ultimately describes it as Quiet projecting the emotional resonance of ''dismissal'': he's not invisible, you just overlook or forget that he's in the room.



** In Chapter 42, Twilight swears by ''Discord's antler'' that the Elements will not help ''her'' -- making the entire conference spontaneously pull away from her. Gentle actually pauses to note that he's ''never'' heard of someone swearing by Discord before.

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** In Chapter 42, Twilight swears by ''Discord's antler'' that the Elements will not help ''her'' -- making the entire conference spontaneously pull away from her. Gentle actually pauses to note that he's ''never'' heard of someone swearing by Discord before. (It happens again in the final chapter, and the local audience doesn't take it well.)



** In chapter 55, Celestia becomes so desperate to make Twilight talk to her after unintentionally revealing her origins as Star Swirl's reincarnation to her that she bluntly ''forces'' a literal torrent of message scrolls through Spike, almost choking him with their relentless volume to the point Twilight desperately sends her a message back verbally screaming at Celestia to stop because she's hurting Spike -- and at the same point, is so desperate to stop Spike hurting that she's actually considering just teleporting to Celestia and '''attacking her'''.
** Likewise in chapter 55, during her first dream-time communique with Twilight, Luna stops speaking in her usual flowery methods and bluntly addresses Twilight, even using vulgar language by telling Twilight to pull her head out of her ass.

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** In chapter 55, Celestia becomes so desperate to make Twilight talk to her after unintentionally revealing her origins as Star Swirl's reincarnation to her that she bluntly ''forces'' a literal torrent of message scrolls through Spike, almost choking him with their relentless volume to the point Twilight desperately sends her a message back verbally back screaming at Celestia to stop because she's hurting Spike -- and at Spike. This ends the same point, is so desperate to stop Spike hurting that she's actually considering just teleporting to Celestia and '''attacking her'''.
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** Likewise in chapter 55, during her first dream-time communique with Twilight, Luna stops speaking in her usual flowery methods formal method and very bluntly addresses Twilight, even using vulgar language by telling Twilight -- including telling her to pull her head out of her ass.



* PainfulTransformation: Experienced by ''her'', '''''[[UpToEleven constantly]]'''''. Whatever went wrong in the ascension attempt resulted in perpetual cyclical shifting between the three main pony races, moving from pegasus to unicorn to earth pony to pegasus again, and so on through the cycle. Rarity believes the wing bones are ''breaking'' rather than simply being reabsorbed. Whether this is true is unknown -- but ''she'' is in endless, unrelenting agony... until Fluttershy uses her gift from Discord to erase that aspect of ''her'' being.

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* PainfulTransformation: Experienced by ''her'', '''''[[UpToEleven constantly]]'''''. Whatever went wrong in the ascension attempt resulted in perpetual cyclical shifting between the three main pony races, moving from pegasus to unicorn to earth pony to pegasus again, and so on through the cycle. Rarity believes the wing bones are ''breaking'' rather than simply being reabsorbed. Whether this is true is unknown -- but ''she'' is in endless, unrelenting agony... until Fluttershy uses her gift from Discord to erase that aspect of ''her'' being.changes.



** Invoked and Zigzagged. In chapter 53, Princess Celestia reveals that Gentle Arrival's Cutie Mark is functionally to be the ultimate loving parent... but, somehow, his despair over his wife's death and his racism has allowed him to '''subvert''' his Mark. Strangely, he still seems to genuinely care for the foals that he midwives -- [[TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes he just is able to obliviously abuse his own daughter]].

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** Invoked and Zigzagged. In chapter 53, Princess Celestia reveals that Gentle Arrival's Cutie Mark is functionally to be the ultimate loving parent... but, somehow, his despair over his wife's death and his racism has allowed him to '''subvert''' his Mark. Strangely, he still seems to genuinely care for the foals that he midwives -- [[TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes he just is able to obliviously abuse his own daughter]]. (Pinkie's guess is that he displaced the love he should have had for his own onto those he delivered, and sadly wonders at how much there must have been for all of them to get some of it.)



* PottyFailure: Gentle Arrival implicitly loses control of his bladder after being stared down by an ''incredibly'' angry Discord in chapter 53.

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* PottyFailure: Gentle Arrival implicitly and understandably loses control of his bladder after being stared down by an ''incredibly'' angry Discord in chapter 53.53. (It's not described, but there's a fresh puddle on the floor.)



** Additionally, [[WordOfGod Word Of Fanfic Author]] admitted that the clue given in [[Recap/TriptychContinuumAMarkOfAppeal A Mark Of Appeal]] places Luna as Generosity, and [[Recap/TriptychContinuumTheNightBeforeNightmare The Night Before Nightmare]] finally confirmed Celestia as [[IKnewIt Loyalty]].
* ProtagonistTitle: Triptych is the name that Gentle Arrival's daughter picks herself, as said in Chapter 55.

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** Additionally, Eventually, [[WordOfGod Word Of Fanfic Author]] admitted that the clue given in [[Recap/TriptychContinuumAMarkOfAppeal A Mark Of Appeal]] places Luna as Generosity, and [[Recap/TriptychContinuumTheNightBeforeNightmare The Night Before Nightmare]] finally confirmed Celestia as [[IKnewIt Loyalty]].
* ProtagonistTitle: Ultimately, ''she'' picks her own name: Triptych is the name that Gentle Arrival's daughter picks herself, as said -- in Chapter 55.



** Princess Celestia used an experimental ''working'' of her own creation to try and ''force'' Star Swirl into reincarnating. She also believes that Twilight is Star Swirl's reincarnation, or at least his latest one.

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** Princess Celestia used an experimental ''working'' of her own creation to try and ''force'' Star Swirl into reincarnating.reincarnating, telling him that if he wanted the power so badly, he could just keep trying over and over again until he ''got it right''. She also believes that Twilight is Star Swirl's reincarnation, or at least his latest one.



* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Invoked in chapter 55, when Discord explain to ''her'' that what he hopes to teach her is, amongst other things, the importance of understanding when ''not'' to follow the rules, instead of being LawfulStupid.

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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Invoked in chapter 55, when Discord explain to ''her'' that what he hopes to teach her is, amongst among other things, the importance of understanding when ''not'' to follow the rules, instead of being LawfulStupid.



** In chapter 53, Gentle Arrival stands defiant and proud, arrogantly demanding to be allowed to continue his midwifery, despite being a helpless captive in the presence of ''both'' Princesses ''and'' Discord, all of whom are '''furious''' with him.
* SortingAlgorithmOfEvil: In chapter 51, the Mane 6 has to let a pair of Murdochs reporters go on their way after overhearing their plans to slander Twilight by writing fictious accusations of Twilight being pregnant into the tabloids because they have a much more important task to complete in the form of stopping Gentle Arrival.

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** In chapter Chapter 53, Gentle Arrival stands defiant and proud, arrogantly demanding to be allowed to continue his midwifery, despite being a helpless captive in the presence of ''both'' Princesses ''and'' Discord, all of whom -- who are '''furious''' with him.
him. (This breaks down somewhat once Discord makes his presence known.)
* SortingAlgorithmOfEvil: In chapter Chapter 51, the Mane 6 has to let a pair of Murdochs Murdoch's reporters go on their way after overhearing their plans to slander Twilight by writing fictious fictitious accusations of Twilight being pregnant into the tabloids tabloids, because they have a much more important task to complete in the form of stopping Gentle Arrival.Arrival. (They also learn that the duo tried to get into the party through wearing what Rarity describes as the worst fake pregnancy belly ever seen: it's visibly leaking birdseed.)



* ToughLove: In chapter 55, when Luna first contacts Twilight after her and Celestia have their falling out, she tries to shock Twilight out of her funk by first telling her that there are ways that even alicorns can die, explaining the suffering Celestia is undergoing, and then concludes their visit by telling Twilight to "take a breath, try seeing things from Celestia's point of view, and get (her) head out of (her) ass".
* TownWithADarkSecret: Trotter's Falls is revealed to be the center of a conspiracy its adherents call "The Great Work", which turns out to be a tribal supremacist cult that has, having failed in its original directive to find a way to forcibly change ponies from one tribe to the other, settled for trying to transform all ponies into alicorns.
* TransformationHorror: In chapter 53, an enraged Discord drops the MixAndMatchCritters body he normally wears amongst ponies and reverts to what might be his "true form", an ElementalEmbodiment of chaos itself, terrifying everyone in the Hall Of Legends -- Celestia and Luna included.

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* ToughLove: In chapter Chapter 55, when Luna first contacts Twilight after her and Celestia have their falling out, she tries to shock Twilight out of her funk by first telling her that there are ways that even alicorns can die, explaining the suffering Celestia is undergoing, and then concludes their visit by telling Twilight to "take take a breath, try seeing things from Celestia's point of view, [[PrecisionFStrike and get (her) head out of (her) ass".
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* TownWithADarkSecret: Trotter's Falls is revealed to be the center of a conspiracy its adherents call "The Great Work", which turns out to be a tribal supremacist cult that has, having failed in its original directive to find a way to forcibly change ponies from one tribe to the other, settled for trying to transform all a pony into an alicorn. Not everypony in the town is part of the Great Work, but the town is racist enough to allow a strong location for first recruitments.
** [[WordofGod Word Of Fanfic Author]] describes Trotter's Falls as the pony equivalent of a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sundown_town sundown town]]: earth
ponies into alicorns.
can bring in the food deliveries, but Moon help them if they try to move in.
* TransformationHorror: In chapter Chapter 53, an enraged Discord drops the MixAndMatchCritters body he normally wears amongst ponies and reverts to what might be his "true form", an ElementalEmbodiment of chaos itself, itself which appears as a sapient storm, terrifying everyone in the Hall Of Legends -- Celestia and Luna included.



* TheUnreveal: In chapter 50, Spike reveals that he received Cadance's reply to their question about how she Ascended to alicorn status whilst they were pursuing Gentle Arrival. We don't know what she said, only that it scared Spike so badly that he immediately sent it back to a "safe place" after reading it; as he puts it, Gentle Arrival must '''never''' be allowed to learn how Cadance transformed, as not only would it not help ''her'', it would only make things ''worse''.

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* TheUnreveal: In chapter Chapter 50, Spike reveals that he received Cadance's reply to their question about how she Ascended to alicorn status whilst they were pursuing Gentle Arrival. We don't know what she said, only that it scared Spike so badly that he immediately sent it back to a "safe place" after reading it; as he puts it, Gentle Arrival must '''never''' be allowed to learn how Cadance transformed, as not only would it not help ''her'', it would only make things ''worse''.



** Invoked in chapter 50, when Twilight wishes desperately to herself that Quiet's rationale for helping the Great Work didn't sound like it made ''sense'' to him.

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** Invoked in chapter Chapter 50, when Twilight wishes desperately to herself that Quiet's rationale for helping the Great Work didn't sound like it made ''sense'' to him.''sense''.



** It's revealed in chapter 55 that doing this is actually not as easy as it sounds, even for Discord; apparently, extreme heat interferes with teleportation to some degree.

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** It's revealed implied in chapter Chapter 55 that doing this is actually not as easy as it sounds, even for Discord; apparently, extreme heat interferes may interfere with teleportation to some degree.



** Another in-universe one comes at the climax of chapter 54:

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** Another in-universe one comes at the climax of chapter Chapter 54:



** Ad a third in-universe one is when Cadance's letter is read in chapter 55:

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** Ad a third in-universe one is when Cadance's letter is finally read in chapter Chapter 55:



* WifeHusbandry: After reading some of ''her'' memories in chapter 51, Twilight theorizes that Gentle Arrival may have been hoping to use ''her'' Ascension to somehow bring ''her'' mother's soul back from the Shadowlands, potentially displacing ''her'' soul in the process. The implications of that are enough that Rarity wishes she could vomit. (However, given how alicorns seem to work, the more likely hope would have been that ''she'' could feel and perhaps even communicate with Primatura's essence.)

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* WifeHusbandry: After reading some of ''her'' memories in chapter Chapter 51, Twilight theorizes that Gentle Arrival may have been hoping to use ''her'' Ascension to somehow bring ''her'' mother's soul back from the Shadowlands, potentially displacing ''her'' soul in the process. The implications of that are enough that Rarity wishes she could vomit. (However, given how alicorns seem to work, the more likely hope would have been that ''she'' could feel and perhaps even communicate with Primatura's essence.)



*** However, Applejack zigzags it, explaining in chapter 26 that she does use her "''requests''" on their adventures; her restriction is just to do so subtly. In effect, she can do anything which would pass for [[TabletopGame/MageTheAscension pure coincidence]] -- with constant worries that if she does too much, somepony's going to catch on.
** In chapter 27, Twilight notes that Pinkie Pie's mark and talent should let her pull off a perfectly acceptable "fancy" party... it's just that [[ManChild she hates anything that isn't a kid's style party]] and so refuses to "branch out". (Pinkie winds up assisting in setting up for Quiet's grand gathering, and does so professionally -- then builds the welcome archways out of balloons and streamers.)

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*** However, Applejack zigzags it, explaining in chapter Chapter 26 that she does use her "''requests''" on their adventures; her restriction is just to do so subtly. In effect, she can do anything which would pass for [[TabletopGame/MageTheAscension pure coincidence]] -- with constant worries that if she does too much, somepony's going to catch on.
** In chapter Chapter 27, Twilight notes that Pinkie Pie's mark and talent should let her pull off a perfectly acceptable "fancy" party... it's just that [[ManChild she hates anything that isn't a kid's style party]] and so refuses to "branch out". (Pinkie winds up assisting in setting up for Quiet's grand gathering, and does so professionally -- then builds the welcome archways out of balloons and streamers.)



* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: When Twilight brings up Gentle Arrival's ControlFreak status in chapter 52, Rarity ''immediately'' tells Twilight that she is '''nothing''' like him, as she can see the shame and self-doubt rising in the alicorn as she considers it.

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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: When Twilight brings up Gentle Arrival's ControlFreak status in chapter Chapter 52, Rarity ''immediately'' tells Twilight that she is '''nothing''' like him, as she can see the shame and self-doubt rising in the alicorn as she considers it.

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** Celestia and Luna are confirmed in this story to have originally been ordinary ponies[[note]]for what may be added irony, a blog post has revealed they were actually ''earth ponies''[[/note]] who were turned into what may have been the very first alicorns by the Elements of Harmony. Cadance also appears to have been initially normal [[note]]and as in canon, she started as a pegasus[[/note]], but all anypony knows about her route to ascension is that it ''didn't'' use the Elements. Twilight eventually winds up sending Cadance a scroll, directly asking what happened, just in case it has any relation to what went wrong with ''her'': Discord's rules forbid the Bearers from contacting Canterlot, but not the North. Spike gets her reply during Chapter 45, but the contents have yet to be revealed. All we currently know is that the answer was fourteen words long, and Spike teleported the scroll to safety rather than risk having Doctor Gentle ever read it.

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** Celestia and Luna are confirmed in this story to have originally been ordinary ponies[[note]]for what may be added irony, a blog post has revealed they were actually ''earth ponies''[[/note]] who were turned into what may have been the very first alicorns by the Elements of Harmony. Cadance also appears to have been initially normal [[note]]and as in canon, she started as a pegasus[[/note]], but all anypony knows about her route to ascension is that it ''didn't'' use the Elements. Twilight eventually winds up sending Cadance a scroll, directly asking what happened, just in case it has any relation to what went wrong with ''her'': Discord's rules forbid the Bearers from contacting Canterlot, but not the North. Spike gets her reply during Chapter 45, but the contents have yet to be revealed. All we currently know is aren't initially revealed, save that the answer was fourteen words long, and Spike teleported the scroll to safety rather than risk having Doctor Gentle ever read it.it. In Chapter 55, we finally learn what she wrote:
-->they died\\
they all died\\
they chose me to live and they all died.
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* LapPillow: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/101769/30/triptych/bentonite chapter 30]]: It's how Gentle and Twilight are positioned, when he reads to her, as described by Rarity:

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* LapPillow: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/101769/30/triptych/bentonite chapter 30]]: It's how Gentle Quiet and Twilight are positioned, when he reads to her, as described by Rarity:
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* InnocentInnuendo: From Chapter 30, after Rarity discovers Gentle reading to Twilight:

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* InnocentInnuendo: From Chapter 30, after Rarity discovers Gentle Quiet reading to Twilight:
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* DirtyBusiness: Part of how Quiet may regard the Great Work. Unlike others in the conspiracy, he's not a bigot: he just believes it's impossible to get rid of them. In his view, the only way to keep foals from being sent on (as happened to his baby sister) is to find a way of guaranteeing a newborn's race. As he puts it, it means no birth would ever be dreaded, no foal ever hated for what it is; it would mean an end to ''both'' forms of "sending on". So even if some foals in the current generation wind up being hurt or worse by the experiments, TheEndsJustifyTheMeans -- unless, of course, you propose using his lost sibling.

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* DirtyBusiness: Part of how Quiet may regard the Great Work. Unlike others in the conspiracy, he's not a bigot: he just believes it's impossible to get rid of them. In his view, the only way to keep foals from being sent on (as happened to his baby sister) is to find a way of guaranteeing a newborn's race. As he puts it, it means no birth would ever be dreaded, no foal ever hated for what it is; it would mean an end to ''both'' forms of "sending on". So even if some foals in the current generation wind up being hurt or worse by the experiments, TheEndsJustifyTheMeans [[UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans the ends justify the means]] -- unless, of course, you propose using his lost sibling.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The ''other'' form of [[InsistentTerminology 'sending on']] qualifies: there are ponies too racist to accept an other-species foal, but they're at least willing to leave that newborn at a hospital or police station. Chapter 53 sees Celestia state that protective laws have been in place for centuries to make those abandonments legally safe, as having orphans is far better than dead foals. Unfortunately, not everypony is willing to take that step.
** Gentle Arrival qualifies here. He refuses to see the Bearers [[CantKillYouStillNeedYou killed]] (although this expressly includes some EnlightenedSelfInterest, as he knows how the palace would react ''and'' has a very real reason to want a control on Discord) and practiced neither form of sending on with his own daughter. (Not that making her into the lifelong subject of an experiment while practicing emotional abuse may have been much of an improvement.) This contrasts to Coordinator, whom Doctor Gentle eventually describes as a child denied the right to play with ''one'' toy spending their lives in trying to break it.
** [[WordOfGod Word Of Fanfic Author]] says that some of the ponies funding the conspiracy are doing so to protect their future generations: if a foal's race can be enforced, then sending on will end. Quiet ultimately turns out to be part of this faction.

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** Twilight is asked/made to attend and bless the birth of two foals. Both are then named in tribute to her: the pegasus filly Dawn Sky and a unicorn colt named Dusk. A few chapters later, we meet the latter's father -- and find out the last name is [[Fanfic/OnACrossAndArrow Shine]].
** In Chapter 13, Rarity reveals that the Diamond Dogs call her the [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons Tyrant of the Underdark]]. She ''thinks'' it's meant with respect.
** Chapter 3 reports that Fluttershy's income includes a small stipend with associated tax break from the Weather Bureau [[Fanfic/FlashFog which she's never quite explained]]. [[WordOfGod Word Of Fanfic Author]] says that in this continuity, the cottage is serving as a first-alert station, with Fluttershy sounding the alarm if she spots a major uncontrolled weather system emerging from her neighboring wild zone.
** In her desperation to make dresses (plus one tuxedo) for everypony in time for the party, Rarity winds up cannibalizing a set of Quiet's [[Film/GoneWithTheWind curtains]].
** When Gentle Arrival discusses his list of "infusion" experiments, he mentions an earth pony with an incredible instinct for unicorn ''workings'', and an instinctive ability to dispel most magics, which he uses to pursue a career as a wandering tutor for young unicorns -- this is a reference to Green Grass, the male protagonist of the Fanfic/TravelingTutorAndTheLibrarian series.

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** Twilight is asked/made to attend and bless the birth of two foals. Both are then named in tribute to her: the pegasus filly Dawn Sky and a unicorn colt named Dusk. A few chapters later, we meet the latter's father -- and find out the last name is [[Fanfic/OnACrossAndArrow Shine]].
** In Chapter 13, Rarity reveals that the Diamond Dogs call her the [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons Tyrant of the Underdark]]. She ''thinks'' it's meant with respect.
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To ''Fanfic/FlashFog'': Chapter 3 reports that Fluttershy's income includes a small stipend with associated tax break from the Weather Bureau [[Fanfic/FlashFog which she's never quite explained]].explained. [[WordOfGod Word Of Fanfic Author]] says that in this continuity, the cottage is serving as a first-alert station, with Fluttershy sounding the alarm if she spots a major uncontrolled weather system emerging from her neighboring wild zone.
** To ''Film/GoneWithTheWind'' In her desperation to make dresses (plus one tuxedo) for everypony in time for the party, Rarity winds up cannibalizing a set of Quiet's [[Film/GoneWithTheWind curtains]].
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** To ''Fanfic/OnACrossAndArrow'': Chapter 14 has Twilight being asked/made to attend and bless the birth of two foals. Both are then named in tribute to her: the pegasus filly Dawn Sky and a unicorn colt named Dusk. A few chapters later, we meet the latter's father -- and find out the last name is Shine.
** To ''Creator/EdvardMunch'' painting, ''Art/TheScream'': In Chapter 15, a ponified version is described:
---> "Y'see that paintin' on the wall?" Applejack inclined her head towards the ornate frame. "The one with what Ah think is s'posed t' be a stallion on some kind of bridge, with the sky all red an' somethin' wrong with the water an' two strangers approachin'? An' he's jus' screamin' at the air?"
** To ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'': In Chapter 13, Rarity reveals that the Diamond Dogs call her the Tyrant of the Underdark. She ''thinks'' it's meant with respect.
** When Gentle Arrival discusses his list of "infusion" experiments, he mentions an earth pony with an incredible instinct for unicorn ''workings'', and an instinctive ability to dispel most magics, which he uses to pursue a career as a wandering tutor for young unicorns -- this is a reference to Green Grass, the male protagonist of the Fanfic/TravelingTutorAndTheLibrarian ''Fanfic/TravelingTutorAndTheLibrarian'' series.
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* BabyNameTrendStarter: An [[InvertedTrope Inversion]] is {{Invoked}} by being {{Discussed|Trope}} in Chapter 14, that "no pony will ever be named Twilight again", because Twilight Sparkle's now a Princess
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* ConvenientlyInterruptedDocument: From Chapter 47, the convenient interruption of a "book of what could, in some ways, be termed as 'unicorn history'", which hints at a unicorn discovering the Earth Ponies' Secret, and possibly getting KilledMidSentence for it:
--> that mindless ramble about how unicorns had to beware of those with no true power at all...\\
(There hadn't been any real details in that tract, and Quiet had generally assumed the sudden ending had been produced by the final tail-clamped drag to the asylum.)
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** After their talk in Chapter 6, Twilight decides to train Rarity in low-power, high-control workings: the first such spell changes a unicorn's signature, altering their field's hue in the process. In chapter 46, Rarity uses this to make it look like Twilight is manifesting a double corona through her PowerLimiter, tricking a guard into removing that limiter and thus letting Twilight use her magic for real, which is instrumental to freeing them.

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** After their talk in Chapter 6, Twilight decides to train Rarity in low-power, high-control workings: the first such spell changes a unicorn's signature, altering their field's hue in the process. In chapter 46, Rarity uses this to make it look like Twilight is manifesting a double corona through her PowerLimiter, tricking a guard into removing that limiter limiter, as it was stopping him from hitting her horn and thus letting triggering backlash. But, in doing so, he let Twilight use her magic for real, which is instrumental to freeing them.

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