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* MemeticMutation: '''AND ANOTHER THING YOU [[FloweryInsults TROUT-FACED DILDO]].'''
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* PhonyPsychic / NotSoPhonyPsychic: Sloe Cyanide oscillates between these, depending on the day.
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* PhonyPsychic / NotSoPhonyPsychic: PhonyPsychic: Sloe Cyanide oscillates between these, this and NotSoPhonyPsychic, depending on the day.
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The Trifle MMBC, or ''A Mere Trifle of a Bachelorette Challenge'', is the third successful attempt at a [[Fanfic/MurderMysteryBacheloretChallenges Murder Mystery Bachelor Challenge]]. It's also the first to be produced by tosimornottosim, who would later become one of the more consistent and well-known contributors to the genre. It can be read from the beginning [[http://tosimornottosim.tumblr.com/tagged/a-mere-trifle-of-a-bachelorette-challenge/chrono here]].
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The Trifle MMBC, or ''A Mere Trifle of a Bachelorette Challenge'', is the third successful attempt at a [[Fanfic/MurderMysteryBacheloretChallenges Murder Mystery Bachelor Bachelorette Challenge]]. It's also the first to be produced by tosimornottosim, who would later become one of the more consistent and well-known contributors to the genre. It can be read from the beginning [[http://tosimornottosim.tumblr.com/tagged/a-mere-trifle-of-a-bachelorette-challenge/chrono here]].
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* MurderSong: While taking care of the last victim, the killer sings a refrain from Jill Tracy's ''The Fine Art of Poisoning''.
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* MurderSong: MurderBallad: While taking care of the last victim, the killer sings a refrain from Jill Tracy's ''The Fine Art of Poisoning''.
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The Trifle MMBC, or ''A Mere Trifle of a Bachelorette Challenge'', is the third successful attempt at a [[Fanfic/MurderMysteryBacheloretChallenges Murder Mystery Bachelor Challenge]]. It's also the first to be produced by tosimornottosim, who would later become one of the more consistent and well-known contributors to the genre. It can be read from the beginning [[http://socialjusticesimblr.tumblr.com/tagged/chambers-MMBC/chrono here]].
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The Trifle MMBC, or ''A Mere Trifle of a Bachelorette Challenge'', is the third successful attempt at a [[Fanfic/MurderMysteryBacheloretChallenges Murder Mystery Bachelor Challenge]]. It's also the first to be produced by tosimornottosim, who would later become one of the more consistent and well-known contributors to the genre. It can be read from the beginning [[http://socialjusticesimblr.[[http://tosimornottosim.tumblr.com/tagged/chambers-MMBC/chrono com/tagged/a-mere-trifle-of-a-bachelorette-challenge/chrono here]].
* MurderSong: While taking care of the last victim, the killer sings a refrain from Jill Tracy's ''The Fine Art of Poisoning''.
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* SecretlyDying: Blueberry herself.
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* SecretlyDying: Blueberry herself.herself.
* SpontaneousHumanCombustion: How Azure Slate is killed initially - the murderer tricks them into [[DivideByZero dividing by zero]] to create this effect!
* SpontaneousHumanCombustion: How Azure Slate is killed initially - the murderer tricks them into [[DivideByZero dividing by zero]] to create this effect!
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: This MMBC was written before a lot of the tropes of the MMBC were established, and the author herself was in the early days of writing proper stories (having only written a bachelorette challenge before that wasn't story-heavy). Trifle MMBC therefor is less coherent than later stories of its kind. The murderer's motive is less clear and complex. Blueberry's illness is handled with all the subtly of a sledgehammer and seems to come out of nowhere. Later MMBCs would handle the genre better.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: This MMBC story was written before a lot of the tropes of the MMBC were established, and the author herself was in the early days of writing proper stories (having only written a bachelorette challenge before that wasn't story-heavy). plot-heavy). Trifle MMBC therefor is therefore can be considered less coherent than later stories of its kind. The murderer's motive is less clear and complex. complex; Blueberry's illness is handled with all the subtly subtlety of a sledgehammer and seems to come out of nowhere. Later MMBCs by the author would handle the genre better.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: This MMBC was written before a lot of the tropes of the MMBC were established, and the author herself was in the early days of writing proper stories (having only written a bachelorette challenge before that wasn't story-heavy). Trifle MMBC therefor is less coherent than later stories of its kind. The murderer's motive is less clear and complex. Blueberry's illness is handled with all the subtly of a sledgehammer and seems to come out of nowhere. Later MMBCs would handle the genre better.
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The Trifle MMBC, or ''A Mere Trifle of a Bachelorette Challenge'', is the third successful attempt at a [[Fanfic/MurderMysteryBacheloretChallenges Murder Mystery Bachelor Challenge]]. It's also the first to be produced by tosimornottosim, who would later become one of the more consistent and well-known contributors to the genre. It can be read from the beginning [[http://socialjusticesimblr.tumblr.com/tagged/chambers-MMBC/chrono here]].
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[[folder:Deaths and Survivors (spoilers)]]
# Azure Slate - fire
# Violet Frostplum - being stuffed in the fridge
# Maizey Citrine - Philosopher's Stone misfire
# Lithodora - falling off a rock-climbing stand
# Beryl Star-Jinx - drowning
# Flame Almond - electrocution
# Mirage Bliss - buried alive in a Box of Danger
# Nevada Riesling - jellybean fluid syringe to the neck
# Baxtor Rose, murderer - taken by the Grim Reaper
# Sloe Cyanide, winner
[[/folder]]
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!! This MMBC provides examples of:
* HereditaryCurse: Almost everyone in the Trifle family has met some kind of tragic fate. The BC was originally intended as Blueberry Honey's attempt to break it.
* MemeticMutation: '''AND ANOTHER THING YOU [[FloweryInsults TROUT-FACED DILDO]].'''
* PhonyPsychic / NotSoPhonyPsychic: Sloe Cyanide oscillates between these, depending on the day.
* SecretlyDying: Blueberry herself.
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[[folder:Deaths and Survivors (spoilers)]]
# Azure Slate - fire
# Violet Frostplum - being stuffed in the fridge
# Maizey Citrine - Philosopher's Stone misfire
# Lithodora - falling off a rock-climbing stand
# Beryl Star-Jinx - drowning
# Flame Almond - electrocution
# Mirage Bliss - buried alive in a Box of Danger
# Nevada Riesling - jellybean fluid syringe to the neck
# Baxtor Rose, murderer - taken by the Grim Reaper
# Sloe Cyanide, winner
[[/folder]]
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!! This MMBC provides examples of:
* HereditaryCurse: Almost everyone in the Trifle family has met some kind of tragic fate. The BC was originally intended as Blueberry Honey's attempt to break it.
* MemeticMutation: '''AND ANOTHER THING YOU [[FloweryInsults TROUT-FACED DILDO]].'''
* PhonyPsychic / NotSoPhonyPsychic: Sloe Cyanide oscillates between these, depending on the day.
* SecretlyDying: Blueberry herself.
