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* TearUpTheContract: When HIM finally has enough of Blossom, he tries to send her home, but finds out he can't since her soul still belongs to him. The only way to undo this is to destroy the contract. HIM thus ends up fighting Blossom over the contract, resulting in a TearApartTugOfWar during which the contract is broken and Blossom is immediately send back home.
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* SoldHisSoulForADonut: Blossom is incredulous to find out her sister sold ''her'' soul just for a measly dollar to buy a bobsled.
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* SoldHisSoulForADonut: Blossom is incredulous to find out her sister sisters sold ''her'' soul just for a measly dollar to buy a bobsled.bobsled. Or as they put it:
-->'''Blossom:''' They traded my soul for a ''bobsled?!''\\
'''HIM:''' Well, technically they traded you for a dollar.
-->'''Blossom:''' They traded my soul for a ''bobsled?!''\\
'''HIM:''' Well, technically they traded you for a dollar.
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* ForgotAboutHisPowers: At the end, when the contract is destroyed and undoes HIM's deal. Bubbles and Buttercup are jumping over a cliff in their bobsled when it disappears. Rather than fly away, they drop like stones and end up in body casts as a result.
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* ForgotAboutHisPowers: At the end, when the contract is destroyed and undoes HIM's deal. Bubbles and Buttercup are jumping over a cliff in their Buttercup's bobsled when it disappears.suddenly disappears during a jump due to a ripped contract, leaving them stuck in midair. Rather than fly away, they drop like stones and end up in body casts as a result.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: At the end Bubbles and Buttercup are stuck in body casts and forced to listen to Blossom read her book on filing taxes.
* MagicallyBindingContract: How HIM collects Blossom's soul.
* MagicallyBindingContract: How HIM collects Blossom's soul.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: At In the end end, Bubbles and Buttercup are stuck in body casts and forced to listen to Blossom read her book on filing taxes.
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* MagicallyBindingContract:How HIM collects Blossom's soul.soul due to Bubbles and Buttercup signing a contract that would sell her sister's soul for one dollar. Once the contract is ripped in half, Blossom's soul is released.
* MagicallyBindingContract:
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* DescriptionCut: Fed up with Blossom's antics, HIM decides to get rid of her. He says that he knows Bubbles and Buttercup will trade back the bobsled. Cut to Bubbles and Buttercup riding in their bobsled, declaring that they're never going to trade the bobsled for anything.
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--> '''HIM''': ''(Shifty eyed)'' Uh yeah... "ink".
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* YourSoulIsMine: Said word for word when HIM comes to collect Blossom's soul.
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* YourSoulIsMine: Said word for word when HIM comes to collect Blossom's soul.soul.
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* SoldHisSoulForADonut: Blossom is incredulous to find out her sister sold ''her'' sold just for a measly dollar to buy a bobsled.
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* SoldHisSoulForADonut: Blossom is incredulous to find out her sister sold ''her'' sold soul just for a measly dollar to buy a bobsled.
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* SoldHisSoulForADonut: Blossom is incredulous to find out her sister sold ''her'' sold just for a measly dollar to buy a bobsled.
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* PityTheKidnapper: HIM thinks he will be able to torture Blossom but Blossom ends up being the one to drive ''him'' crazy instead.
* PityTheKidnapper: HIM thinks he'll be able to torture Blossom but Blossom ends up being the one to drive ''him'' crazy instead.
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* SureLetsGoWithThat: When Bubbles and Buttercup are signing the deal, Bubbles comments on the red ink which they use to do it.
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* SureLetsGoWithThat: When Bubbles and Buttercup are signing the deal, Bubbles comments on the red ink which they use to do it.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Bubbles and Buttercup sell Blossom soul for the dollar they need to buy a bobsled.
* ForgotAboutHisPowers: At the end, when the contract is destroyed and undone HIM's deal. Bubbles and Buttercup are jumping over a cliff in their bobsled when it disappears. Rather than fly away, they drop like stones and end up in body casts as a result.
* ForgotAboutHisPowers: At the end, when the contract is destroyed and undone HIM's deal. Bubbles and Buttercup are jumping over a cliff in their bobsled when it disappears. Rather than fly away, they drop like stones and end up in body casts as a result.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Bubbles and Buttercup sell Blossom Blossom's soul for the dollar they need to buy a bobsled.
* ForgotAboutHisPowers: At the end, when the contract is destroyed andundone undoes HIM's deal. Bubbles and Buttercup are jumping over a cliff in their bobsled when it disappears. Rather than fly away, they drop like stones and end up in body casts as a result.
* ForgotAboutHisPowers: At the end, when the contract is destroyed and
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* MagicallyBindingContract: How HIM collect's Blossom's soul.
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* MagicallyBindingContract: How HIM collect's collects Blossom's soul.
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* PityTheKidnapper: HIM thinks he'll be able to torture Blossom but Blossom ends up being the one to drive ''him'' crazy instead.
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* PityTheKidnapper: HIM thinks he'll he will be able to torture Blossom but Blossom ends up being the one to drive ''him'' crazy instead.
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* SureLetsGoWithThat: When Bubbles and Buttercup are signing the deal, Bubbles comment on the red ink they use to do it.
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* SureLetsGoWithThat: When Bubbles and Buttercup are signing the deal, Bubbles comment comments on the red ink which they use to do it.
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* PityTheKidnapper: HIM thinks he'll be able to torture Blossom but Blossom ends up being the one to drive ''him'' crazy instead.
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* NoOntologicalInertia: Once the contract gets ripped in half by Blossom and HIM's struggle, they releases Blossom's soul, poofs her back home, returns HIM's dimension back to normal and poofs away Bubbles and Buttercup's bobsled since it was purchased using the dollar HIM gave them.
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* NoOntologicalInertia: Once the contract gets ripped in half by Blossom and HIM's struggle, they this releases Blossom's soul, poofs her back home, returns HIM's dimension back to normal and poofs away Bubbles and Buttercup's bobsled since it was purchased using the dollar HIM gave them.
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* ShoutOut: At one point Blossom dresses like and takes on the mannerisms of Bill Lumbergh from ''Film/OfficeSpace'' when criticizing HIM performance.
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* ShoutOut: At one point Blossom dresses like and takes on the mannerisms of Bill Lumbergh from ''Film/OfficeSpace'' when criticizing HIM HIM's office performance.
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While at home reading one day, Blossom suddenly finds herself attacked by HIM who claims he came to collect on a deal he made with Bubbles and Buttercup who sold her soul for a dollar they needed to buy a bobsled. He takes Blossom to his home, the Dimension of Chaos. But suddenly finds out that having Blossom as his captive might be more then he bargained for when she starts organizing the realm.
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* BerserkButton: When the opposing bobsled team make fun of Bubbles liking cute animals. This sets her off and she quickly attacks them.
* DealWithTheDevil: Bubbles and Buttercup sell Blossom soul for the dollar they need to buy a bobsled.
* ForgotAboutHisPowers: At the end, when the contract is destroyed and undone HIM's deal. Bubbles and Buttercup are jumping over a cliff in their bobsled when it disappears. Rather than fly away, they drop like stones and end up in body casts as a result.
* LaserGuidedKarma: At the end Bubbles and Buttercup are stuck in body casts and forced to listen to Blossom read her book on filing taxes.
* MagicallyBindingContract: How HIM collect's Blossom's soul.
* NightmareFace: Bubbles makes one when the opposing bobsled team make fun of her for liking cute animals.
* NoOntologicalInertia: Once the contract gets ripped in half by Blossom and HIM's struggle, they releases Blossom's soul, poofs her back home, returns HIM's dimension back to normal and poofs away Bubbles and Buttercup's bobsled since it was purchased using the dollar HIM gave them.
* OrderVersusChaos: A theme of this one, with Blossom's Order intruding on HIM's home base of Chaos.
* ShoutOut: At one point Blossom dresses like and takes on the mannerisms of Bill Lumbergh from ''Film/OfficeSpace'' when criticizing HIM performance.
* VillainProtagonist: In a sense, HIM when Blossom starts taking over and organizing his realm, deciding she isn't worth the trouble to keep. Pronounced even more when Blossom ''wants'' to stay in the Dimension of Chaos.
* YourSoulIsMine: Said word for word when HIM comes to collect Blossom's soul.
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* BerserkButton: When the opposing bobsled team make fun of Bubbles liking cute animals. This sets her off and she quickly attacks them.
* DealWithTheDevil: Bubbles and Buttercup sell Blossom soul for the dollar they need to buy a bobsled.
* ForgotAboutHisPowers: At the end, when the contract is destroyed and undone HIM's deal. Bubbles and Buttercup are jumping over a cliff in their bobsled when it disappears. Rather than fly away, they drop like stones and end up in body casts as a result.
* LaserGuidedKarma: At the end Bubbles and Buttercup are stuck in body casts and forced to listen to Blossom read her book on filing taxes.
* MagicallyBindingContract: How HIM collect's Blossom's soul.
* NightmareFace: Bubbles makes one when the opposing bobsled team make fun of her for liking cute animals.
* NoOntologicalInertia: Once the contract gets ripped in half by Blossom and HIM's struggle, they releases Blossom's soul, poofs her back home, returns HIM's dimension back to normal and poofs away Bubbles and Buttercup's bobsled since it was purchased using the dollar HIM gave them.
* OrderVersusChaos: A theme of this one, with Blossom's Order intruding on HIM's home base of Chaos.
* ShoutOut: At one point Blossom dresses like and takes on the mannerisms of Bill Lumbergh from ''Film/OfficeSpace'' when criticizing HIM performance.
* VillainProtagonist: In a sense, HIM when Blossom starts taking over and organizing his realm, deciding she isn't worth the trouble to keep. Pronounced even more when Blossom ''wants'' to stay in the Dimension of Chaos.
* YourSoulIsMine: Said word for word when HIM comes to collect Blossom's soul.
