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* DebutQueue: The Lyft Driver, first appears here, and he'll become prominent in future Earth chapters.
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* HateSink: The girls make it clear that they all hate Jesse Bliss for a reason: she mixed up Anne and Luz's ethnicities, borrowed money from Sasha and spread rumors that she stole money from her (ignoring the fact that Sasha's rich) and stuck gum in Marcy's hair plus stole her Azura Vol. 3.
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* HateSink: The girls make it clear that they all hate Jesse Bliss for a reason: she mixed up Anne and Luz's ethnicities, borrowed money from Sasha and spread rumors that she stole money from her (ignoring the fact that Sasha's rich) rich), and stuck gum in Marcy's hair plus stole her Azura Vol. 3.
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* BigDamnKiss: {{Downplayed}}; the chapter ends with Luz giving a sleeping Anne a kiss on the cheek.
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As an internet work, it doesn't really have a radar to pass through.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: This is the first time Sasha hears that voice, and it won't be the last.
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-->"''I can see in your heart. You desire power and control. I see you have managed to manipulate your friends into serving you. You like controlling people, and why shouldn't you? I can teach you how to be better at it. All you have to do is come through the portal...''"
-->"''I can see in your heart. You desire power and control. I see you have managed to manipulate your friends into serving you. You like controlling people, and why shouldn't you? I can teach you how to be better at it. All you have to do is come through the portal...''"
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* WhatIsThisFeeling: As she dances with Anne, Luz starts feeling butterflies in her stomach. As the night goes on and they have a few more moments, Luz starts questioning why she feels like this and concludes her feelings for Anne have changed.
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!'''Chapter 7: The Sleepover'''
The girls gather at Sasha's for a sleepover, complete with a Scare Dare challenge.
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!!Tropes That Appear In This Chapter:
* CrushBlush: Luz has three of these around Anne.
* GoodTimesMontage: Luz, Anne, and Marcy have one while dancing.
* HearingVoices: The reason Sasha loses the Scare Dare challenge is because she hears a voice talking to her.
* SleepCute: When Anne ends up being too tired to move anymore, she collapses on top of Luz and goes to sleep using her as a pillow. Luz readjusts them so it's more comfortable for her.
* SlumberParty: The chapter shows the girls having the sleepover Sasha mentioned she would have back in "Last Day of School!"
* WhamEpisode: Sasha starts hearing a strange voice and Luz starts to develop a crush on Anne.
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31856875/chapters/79203052 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/FanFictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13737017/8/The-Owl-and-The-Frog HERE]]-]
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The girls gather at Sasha's for a sleepover, complete with a Scare Dare challenge.
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!!Tropes That Appear In This Chapter:
* CrushBlush: Luz has three of these around Anne.
* GoodTimesMontage: Luz, Anne, and Marcy have one while dancing.
* HearingVoices: The reason Sasha loses the Scare Dare challenge is because she hears a voice talking to her.
* SleepCute: When Anne ends up being too tired to move anymore, she collapses on top of Luz and goes to sleep using her as a pillow. Luz readjusts them so it's more comfortable for her.
* SlumberParty: The chapter shows the girls having the sleepover Sasha mentioned she would have back in "Last Day of School!"
* WhamEpisode: Sasha starts hearing a strange voice and Luz starts to develop a crush on Anne.
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/31856875/chapters/79203052 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/FanFictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13737017/8/The-Owl-and-The-Frog HERE]]-]
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