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* OffTheShelfFX: As David J. Schow [[https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=4118924304855138&set=p.4118924304855138&type=3 points out]] on Website/{{Facebook}}, the futurisitic weapons used by the crew of the M2 bear a striking resemblance to modified versions of toy bazookas sold by Remco around the time the episode was made.
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* OffTheShelfFX: As David J. Schow [[https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=4118924304855138&set=p.4118924304855138&type=3 points out]] on Website/{{Facebook}}, the futurisitic futuristic weapons used by the crew of the M2 bear a striking resemblance to modified versions of toy bazookas sold by Remco around the time the episode was made.
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Astronauts on UsefulNotes/{{Mars}} are terrorized by an unseen enemy.
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Astronauts on UsefulNotes/{{Mars}} are terrorized by an unseen enemy.
enemy which turns out to be a monstrous, dragon-like "sand shark".
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* TenLittleMurderVictims: The sand shark picks off the astronauts one by one until only Merritt and Buckley are left.
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* OffTheShelfFX: As David J. Schow [[https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=4118924304855138&set=p.4118924304855138&type=3 points out]] on Website/{{Facebook}}, the futurisitic weapons used by the crew of the M2 bear a striking resemblance to modified versions of toy bazookas sold by Remco around the time the episode was made.
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* TokenMinority: Captain Johnson is one of the earliest African-American astronauts depicted on American television, although Lt. Travers from "[[Recap/TheOuterLimits1963S1E24Moonstone Moonstone]]" got there first.
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* TokenMinority: Captain Johnson is one of the earliest African-American astronauts depicted on American television, although Lt. Willowmore from "[[Recap/TheOuterLimits1963S1E10Nightmare Nightmare]]" and Lt. Travers from "[[Recap/TheOuterLimits1963S1E24Moonstone Moonstone]]" got there first.
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* TokenMinority: Captain Johnson is one of the first African-American astronauts depicted on American television, although Lt. Travers from "[[Recap/TheOuterLimits1963S1E24Moonstone Moonstone]]" got there first.
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* TokenMinority: Captain Johnson is one of the first earliest African-American astronauts depicted on American television, although Lt. Travers from "[[Recap/TheOuterLimits1963S1E24Moonstone Moonstone]]" got there first.
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* TokenMinority: Captain Johnson is one of the first African-American astronauts depicted on American television.
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* TokenMinority: Captain Johnson is one of the first African-American astronauts depicted on American television.television, although Lt. Travers from "[[Recap/TheOuterLimits1963S1E24Moonstone Moonstone]]" got there first.
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* SandIsWater: The creatures on Mars "swim" beneath the surface of the sand.
* SandIsWater: The creatures on Mars "swim" beneath the surface of the sand.
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* TokenMinority: Captain Johnson is probably the first African-American astronaut depicted on American television.
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* TokenMinority: Captain Johnson is probably one of the first African-American astronaut astronauts depicted on American television.
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* TokenMinority: Captain Johnson is probably the first African-American astronaut depicted on American television.
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* ChromosomeCasting: This is one of two ''Outer Limits'' episodes with all-male casts ("[[Recap/TheOuterLimits1963S1E31TheChameleon The Chameleon]]" is the other).
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[[caption-width-right:350:The crew of the M2 scans the sands of Mars...]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:The crew of the M2 scans the sands surface of Mars...]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:The crew of the M2 scans the sands of Mars...]]
[[caption-width-right:350:The crew of the M2 scans the sands of Mars...]]
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->'''The Control Voice''': In the vast immensities of cosmic space, bold adventurers streak their way to join battle with strange enemies on strange worlds — the alien, the unknown, perhaps even the invisible, armed only with Man's earthbound knowledge...
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->'''The Control Voice''': Battle joined. Casualties? Yes. Resolution: Victory, of a sort. A painful step from the crib of destiny. On another day, a friend, perhaps, instead of a deadly peril — part of the saga of the space pioneers.
!!"Troper, get back to your vehicle!"
* TheFilmOfTheBook: It's based on a 1955 short story by Jerry Sohl.
** InNameOnly: Sohl did the first draft of the script and is the only writer credited. However, multiple revisions (none of them by Sohl) led to many changes, although the basic plot of the original story is retained.
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->'''The Control Voice''': Battle joined. Casualties? Yes. Resolution: Victory, of a sort. A painful step from the crib of destiny. On another day, a friend, perhaps, instead of a deadly peril — part of the saga of the space pioneers.
!!"Troper, get back to your vehicle!"
* TheFilmOfTheBook: It's based on a 1955 short story by Jerry Sohl.
** InNameOnly: Sohl did the first draft of the script and is the only writer credited. However, multiple revisions (none of them by Sohl) led to many changes, although the basic plot of the original story is retained.
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