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** Bortus tells Alara that he has bet on her victory in a sporting activity, in an episode that ended up being the actress's last regular appearance on the show, a situation quite similar to the departure of Tasha Yar on ''Star Trek: The Next Generation''.
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*** Like with those astronauts, Alara's recovery is not instantaneous upon returning to her native gravity. She spends most of the episode in a wheelchair and is able to function for only a short time in a crisis through sheer force of will and adrenaline.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Alara's father makes reference to her possibly having some kind of developmental/intellectual disability, referencing that she would have accomodations to assist her is she chooses to finish her degree. While we never see any indication of her having difficulty, he may have been talking about Xelayan standards, as they collectively look down on those who choose to join the military.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Alara's father makes reference to her possibly having some kind of developmental/intellectual disability, referencing that she would have accomodations to assist her is she chooses to finish her degree. While we never see any indication of her having difficulty, he may have been talking about Xelayan standards, as they collectively look down on those who choose to join the military.
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* ChekhovsGun: The first time we see Ed use the gravity suit, we see that it has a timer on the forearm; he can spend about an hour walking around Xelayah. This is foreshadowing for when the suit is damaged and that time frame becomes much more limited later on.
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** Tharl has a tube which connects his nose to his stomach, in an UpToEleven version of the ''Star Trek'' franchise's (or at least the TNG-era shows') unusual fondness for creating aliens whose noses connect to their chins -- one of these being Fallit Kot, the BigBad of the aforementioned "Melora".
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** Tharl has a tube which connects his nose to his stomach, in an UpToEleven up to eleven version of the ''Star Trek'' franchise's (or at least the TNG-era shows') unusual fondness for creating aliens whose noses connect to their chins -- one of these being Fallit Kot, the BigBad of the aforementioned "Melora".
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* RealityEnsues:
** Like Earth's astronauts in space, extended exposure to Earth-normal gravity has caused Alara's body to acclimate to the reduced gravity through reduced bone density and muscle mass. She has to return to Xelayah before the changes are irreversible.
** After Ildis is forced to stick his hand in boiling liquid, for the remainder of the episode, he has horrific, and clearly painful, 2nd degree burns.
** Having just lost a valuable teammate, the crew of the ''Orville'' is understandably finding her replacement a bit difficult to adjust to, as evidenced by their clear discomfort at him eating lunch on the bridge.
** Like Earth's astronauts in space, extended exposure to Earth-normal gravity has caused Alara's body to acclimate to the reduced gravity through reduced bone density and muscle mass. She has to return to Xelayah before the changes are irreversible.
** After Ildis is forced to stick his hand in boiling liquid, for the remainder of the episode, he has horrific, and clearly painful, 2nd degree burns.
** Having just lost a valuable teammate, the crew of the ''Orville'' is understandably finding her replacement a bit difficult to adjust to, as evidenced by their clear discomfort at him eating lunch on the bridge.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Like Earth's astronauts in space, extended exposure to Earth-normal gravity has caused Alara's body to acclimate to the reduced gravity through reduced bone density and muscle mass. She has to return to Xelayah before the changes are irreversible.
** After Ildis is forced to stick his hand in boiling liquid, for the remainder of the episode, he has horrific, and clearly painful, 2nd degree burns.
** Having just lost a valuable teammate, the crew of the ''Orville'' is understandably finding her replacement a bit difficult to adjust to, as evidenced by their clear discomfort at him eating lunch on the bridge.
** Like Earth's astronauts in space, extended exposure to Earth-normal gravity has caused Alara's body to acclimate to the reduced gravity through reduced bone density and muscle mass. She has to return to Xelayah before the changes are irreversible.
** After Ildis is forced to stick his hand in boiling liquid, for the remainder of the episode, he has horrific, and clearly painful, 2nd degree burns.
** Having just lost a valuable teammate, the crew of the ''Orville'' is understandably finding her replacement a bit difficult to adjust to, as evidenced by their clear discomfort at him eating lunch on the bridge.
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* ShoutOut: The vaccine that Ildis and Cambis debate is called the Melloran vaccine, which is possibly a shout-out to Melora, the {{Lightworlder}} from the ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' episode [[Recap/StarTrekDeepSpaceNineS02E06Melora of the same name]], who like Alara had to choose between a career in Starfleet and her home.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The vaccine that Ildis and Cambis debate is called the Melloran vaccine, which is possibly a shout-out to Melora, the {{Lightworlder}} from the ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' episode [[Recap/StarTrekDeepSpaceNineS02E06Melora of the same name]], who like Alara had to choose between a career in Starfleet and herhome.home.
** Tharl has a tube which connects his nose to his stomach, in an UpToEleven version of the ''Star Trek'' franchise's (or at least the TNG-era shows') unusual fondness for creating aliens whose noses connect to their chins -- one of these being Fallit Kot, the BigBad of the aforementioned "Melora".
** The vaccine that Ildis and Cambis debate is called the Melloran vaccine, which is possibly a shout-out to Melora, the {{Lightworlder}} from the ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' episode [[Recap/StarTrekDeepSpaceNineS02E06Melora of the same name]], who like Alara had to choose between a career in Starfleet and her
** Tharl has a tube which connects his nose to his stomach, in an UpToEleven version of the ''Star Trek'' franchise's (or at least the TNG-era shows') unusual fondness for creating aliens whose noses connect to their chins -- one of these being Fallit Kot, the BigBad of the aforementioned "Melora".
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* CastingGag: Creator/RobertPicardo and John Billingsley [[Series/StarTrekVoyager both]] [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise played]] doctors in ''Star Trek''.
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* CastingGag: Creator/RobertPicardo and John Billingsley Creator/JohnBillingsley [[Series/StarTrekVoyager both]] [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise played]] doctors in ''Star Trek''.
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* MixAndMatchCritters: The Xelayan creature Alara's sister shows her, the eevek, looks like a cross between a horse and a parrot.
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* MixAndMatchCritters: The Xelayan creature Alara's sister shows her, the eevek, looks like a cross between a horse and a parrot.parrot with long curved horns and a long lizard tail.
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* BittersweetEnding: Alara has gotten her strength back, but chooses to stay with her family on Xelayah.
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* BittersweetEnding: Alara has gotten her strength back, back and Dr. Finn has figured out a way for her to maintain it while aboard the Orville, but chooses to stay with her family on Xelayah.
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* CastingGag: Robert Picardo and John Billingsley [[Series/StarTrekVoyager both]] [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise played]] doctors in ''Star Trek''.
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* CastingGag: Robert Picardo Creator/RobertPicardo and John Billingsley [[Series/StarTrekVoyager both]] [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise played]] doctors in ''Star Trek''.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Alara reconnects(?) with her family.]]
[[caption-width-right:350:Alara reconnects(?) with her family.]]
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* BigEater: Tharl, the replacement as head of security, comes from a species that has two esophagi, and as such they can "just pound it."
* BigEater: Tharl, the replacement as head of security, comes from a species that has two esophagi, and as such they can "just pound it."
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* BigEater: Tharl, the
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* {{Fingore}}: The entire hand, in this case, courtesy of a pot of boiling sauce.
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* {{Fingore}}: The entire hand, in this case, courtesy of a pot of boiling sauce. Barely averted later when Cambis almost slices off Solana's finger.
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* MeaningfulEcho: Early in the episode, Alara tells her father how she wished that just once, he had told her "You can do it", even if he didn't believe it. Near the end, when he's unsure about his ability to go rescue Ed, she tells him "You can do it, Dad. You can do this."
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* MeaningfulEcho: Early in the episode, Alara tells her father how she wished that just once, he had told her her, "You can do it", it," even if he didn't believe it. Near the end, when he's unsure about his ability to go rescue Ed, she tells him him, "You can do it, Dad. You can do this."
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* MoodWhiplash: The episode looks like it's going to be a fairly low-key family drama, right up until Cambis pulls out a pistol and pleasantly suggests Ildis sticks his hand into some boiling sauce.
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* MoodWhiplash: The episode looks like it's going to be a fairly low-key family drama, right up until Cambis pulls out a pistol and pleasantly suggests that Ildis sticks stick his hand into some boiling sauce.
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---> '''Ildis:''' I don't know you!....I never even ''tried'' to know you....I'm so sorry that you got me for a father.
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---> '''Ildis:''' I don't know you!....you! ... I never even ''tried'' to know you....you... I'm so sorry that you got me for a father.
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* ShoutOut: The vaccine that Ildis and Cambis debate is called the Melloran vaccine, which is possibly a shout-out to Melora, the LightWorlder from the ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' episode of the same name, who like Alara had to choose between a career in Starfleet and her home.
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* ShoutOut: The vaccine that Ildis and Cambis debate is called the Melloran vaccine, which is possibly a shout-out to Melora, the LightWorlder {{Lightworlder}} from the ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' episode [[Recap/StarTrekDeepSpaceNineS02E06Melora of the same name, name]], who like Alara had to choose between a career in Starfleet and her home.
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* TerseTalker: Tharl, Alara's replacement while she's gone. He doesn't say much, and what he does say comes off completely flippant of everyone and everything around him.
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* TerseTalker: Tharl, Alara's replacement while she's gone. He doesn't say much, and what he does say comes off as completely flippant of everyone and everything around him.
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* ShoutOut: The vaccine that Ildis and Cambis debate is called the Melloran vaccine, which is possibly a shout-out to Melora, the HeavyWorlder from the ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' episode of the same name, who faced a handicap similar to Alara's.
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* ShoutOut: The vaccine that Ildis and Cambis debate is called the Melloran vaccine, which is possibly a shout-out to Melora, the HeavyWorlder LightWorlder from the ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' episode of the same name, who faced a handicap similar like Alara had to Alara's.choose between a career in Starfleet and her home.
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* ShoutOut: The vaccine that Ildis and Cambis debate is called the Melloran vaccine, which is possibly a shout-out to Melora, the HeavyWorlder from the ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' episode of the same name, who faced a handicap similar to Alara's.
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* {{Fingore}}: The entire hand, in this case, courtesy of a pot of boiling sauce.
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* MoodWhiplash: The episode looks like it's going to be a fairly low-key family drama, right up until Cambis pulls out a pistol and pleasantly suggests Ildis sticks his hand into some boiling sauce.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Alara's father has one of these moments when he realizes Alara's true worth as a person.
---> '''Ildis:''' I don't know you!....I never even ''tried'' to know you....I'm so sorry that you got me for a father.
---> '''Ildis:''' I don't know you!....I never even ''tried'' to know you....I'm so sorry that you got me for a father.
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* KickTheDog: Cambis forces Ildis to scald his hand in boiling sauce just to torment him.
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* KickTheDog: Cambis forces Ildis to scald his hand in boiling sauce just to torment him. He then prepares to slice off one of Solana's fingers, even after Ildis agrees to do what he says, just to continue causing pain.
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* CoolBigSis: Of Alara's whole family, her sister is the only one who's interested in, and supportive of, Alara's work. She also offers to accompany Alara when the latter wants to investigate a suspicious situation. On the other hand, it's implied that she’s proud of her sister for having overcome being "less evolved." A back-handed compliment for sure.
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* CoolBigSis: Solana ''can'' be. Of Alara's whole family, her sister is the only one who's interested in, and supportive of, Alara's work. She also offers to accompany Alara when the latter wants to investigate a suspicious situation. On the other hand, it's implied that she’s proud of her sister for having overcome being "less evolved." A back-handed compliment for sure.
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* TheUnfavorite: Alara's parents are clearly proud of her brilliant older sister, while they challenge all of Alara's choices and insult her intelligence.
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* TheUnfavorite: Alara's parents are clearly proud of her brilliant older sister, Solana, while they challenge all of Alara's choices and insult her intelligence.
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creature is named the "eevek"; misc spelling fixes