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* PyrrhicVillainy: Frizz and Nug make clear they didn't find ruining dreams worth the trouble. While they get a small revenge on the heroes the second time round, they still end up suffering the same abuse.
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* PyrrhicVillainy: PyrrhicVictory: Frizz and Nug make clear they didn't find ruining dreams worth the trouble. While they get a small revenge on the heroes the second time round, they still end up suffering the same abuse.
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* LowSpeedChase: At one point in their faceoff, Frizz and Nug try to outmaneuver the Noops by jumping onto a carousel. A short while consists of the Noops trying weakly to grab the Urpneys as they rotate around heckling them.
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* LowSpeedChase: At one point in their faceoff, during the climax, Frizz and Nug try to outmaneuver evade the Noops by jumping onto heroes on a carousel. A Cue a short while consists awkward sequence of the Noops Rufus weakly trying weakly to grab the Urpneys reach them as they rotate around heckling around, pulling faces at them.
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* SlowPacedChase: At one point during the climax, Frizz and Nug try to evade the heroes on a carousel. Cue a short awkward sequence of Rufus weakly trying to reach them as they rotate around, pulling faces at them.
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* HeroBall: The Noops waste a bit too much time giving Frizz and Nug [[GoodIsNotSoft a long, painful and ironic enough punishment]] before trying to capture them, costing themselves the upper hand.
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* HeroBall: GoodIsNotSoft: A rare case of it being to such an extremity it backfires. The Noops waste a bit too much time giving Frizz and Nug [[GoodIsNotSoft a long, painful and ironic enough punishment]] punishment before trying to capture them, costing themselves leaving time for the effects of Urpgor's shrink funnel to wear off and the Urpneys to gain the upper hand.
* SlowPacedChase: At one point during the climax, Frizz and Nug try to evade the heroes on a carousel. Cue a short awkward sequence of Rufus weakly trying to reach them as they rotate around, pulling faces at them.
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* ATasteOfDefeat[=/=]TeamRocketWins: The Urpneys succeed in ruining the dreams of several Noops for one night. The following attempt Albert catches on and stops them, however not before Frizz and Nug manage to perform their task on one Noop. The heroes take their revenge, but suffer a small humiliation in the process.
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* ATasteOfDefeat[=/=]TeamRocketWins: The Urpneys succeed in ruining the dreams of several Noops for one night. The following attempt Albert catches on and stops them, however not before Frizz and Nug manage to perform their task on one Noop. The heroes take their revenge, but suffer a small humiliation in the process.after they go overboard with it.
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* IndecisiveDeconstruction: Given the serious narrative and music accompanying the heroes, it's hard to tell if their scare was meant to be karmic or not, especially since it flips around and punishes Frizz and Nug last second.