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Cloning Blues renamed to Clone Angst as per TRS
, specifically about angst from a character discovering that they're a clone.
, specifically about angst from a character discovering that they're a clone.Deleted line(s) 9 (click to see context) :
* CloningBlues: Beckett's reaction to learning he's a clone of the original.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Sheppard goes back to Todd off-screen to try and use his network again to locate Teyla. Todd claims his contacts haven't heard anything and Sheppard thinks the Wraith's lying. It's never confirmed whether Todd was being truthful or not.
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* BlatantLies: Possibly with Todd. Sheppard goes back to him off-screen to try and use his network again to locate Teyla. Todd claims his contacts haven't heard anything and Sheppard thinks the Wraith's lying. It's never confirmed whether Todd was being truthful or not.
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* BlatantLies: Possibly with Todd. Sheppard goes back to him off-screen to try and use his network again to locate Teyla. Todd claims his contacts haven't heard anything and Sheppard thinks the Wraith's lying. It's never confirmed whether Todd was being truthful or not.
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* StunnedSilence: Zig-zagged. Beckett demanding to talk to Weir triggers one for [=McKay=] who has been struggling with her disappearance/death all season. His silence goes on for so long that Beckett bluntly asks, “What?” This prompts [=McKay=] to answer vaguely and, making Beckett even more annoyed and wanting to know why he can’t see her, leaving [=McKay=] with no choice but to tell him she’s dead. This revelation causes Beckett to be stunned into silence and sit down from the shock of learning one of his closest friends is dead.
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* StunnedSilence: Zig-zagged. Beckett demanding to talk to Weir triggers one for [=McKay=] who has been struggling with her disappearance/death all season. His silence goes on for so long that Beckett bluntly asks, “What?” This prompts [=McKay=] to answer vaguely and, making which makes Beckett even more annoyed and wanting to know why he can’t see her, leaving [=McKay=] with no choice but to tell him she’s dead. This revelation causes Beckett to be stunned into silence and sit down from the shock of learning one of his closest friends is dead.
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* StunnedSilence: Zig-zagged. Beckett demanding to talk to Weir triggers one for [=McKay=] who has been struggling with her disappearance/death all season. His silence goes on for so long that Beckett bluntly asks, “What?” This prompts [=McKay=] to answer vaguely and, making Beckett even more annoyed and wanting to know why he can’t see her, leaving McKay with no choice but to tell him she’s dead. This revelation causes Beckett to be stunned into silence and sit down from the shock of learning one of his closest friends is dead.
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* StunnedSilence: Zig-zagged. Beckett demanding to talk to Weir triggers one for [=McKay=] who has been struggling with her disappearance/death all season. His silence goes on for so long that Beckett bluntly asks, “What?” This prompts [=McKay=] to answer vaguely and, making Beckett even more annoyed and wanting to know why he can’t see her, leaving McKay [=McKay=] with no choice but to tell him she’s dead. This revelation causes Beckett to be stunned into silence and sit down from the shock of learning one of his closest friends is dead.
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* StunnedSilence: Zig-zagged. Beckett demanding to talk to Weir triggers one for McKay who has been struggling with her disappearance/death all season. His silence goes on for so long that Carson bluntly asks, “What?” This prompts McKay to answer vaguely and, making Beckett even more annoyed and wanting to know why he can’t see her, leaving McKay with no choice but to tell him she’s dead. This revelation causes Beckett to be stunned into silence and sit down from the shock of learning one of his closest friends is dead.
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* StunnedSilence: Zig-zagged. Beckett demanding to talk to Weir triggers one for McKay [=McKay=] who has been struggling with her disappearance/death all season. His silence goes on for so long that Carson Beckett bluntly asks, “What?” This prompts McKay [=McKay=] to answer vaguely and, making Beckett even more annoyed and wanting to know why he can’t see her, leaving McKay with no choice but to tell him she’s dead. This revelation causes Beckett to be stunned into silence and sit down from the shock of learning one of his closest friends is dead.
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* StunnedSilence: Zig-zagged. Beckett demanding to talk to Weir triggers one for McKay who has been struggling with her disappearance/death all season. His silence goes on for so long that Carson bluntly asks, “What?” This prompts McKay to answer vaguely and, making Beckett even more annoyed and wanting to know why he can’t see her, leaving McKay with no choice but to tell him she’s dead. This revelation causes Beckett to be stunned into silence and sit down from the shock of learning one of his closest friends is dead.
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* ActorAllusion / ShoutOut: Beckett mentions feeling like "''A Dog's Breakfast''", a reference to the independent film that Paul [=McGillion=] starred in, featuring several cameos from Stargate alumni and written by David Hewlett.
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-->''You know, for the better part of two years, I imagined what it would be like the day I finally got back to Atlantis. This isn't exactly how I pictured it.''
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-->''You know, for the better part of two years, I imagined what it would be like the day I finally got back to Atlantis. [[BadPresent This isn't exactly how I pictured it.it]].''
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* CloningBlues
* HumanPopsicle
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight
* HumanPopsicle
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight
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* CloningBlues
BadPresent: Due to having been held prisoner for two years, this ends up being Beckett's reaction to not only learning that he's a clone, but that the original Carson is dead, as is (supposedly) Dr Weir.
*HumanPopsicle
CloningBlues: Beckett's reaction to learning he's a clone of the original.
*IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFightHumanPopsicle: Beckett is temporarily put into stasis, until they find a cure for his RestrainingBolt.
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Teyla to Kanaan.
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Teyla to Kanaan.
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* RestrainingBolt: poor Dr. Beckett
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable
* WasOnceAMan: the "hybridized" Athosians
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable
* WasOnceAMan: the "hybridized" Athosians
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* RestrainingBolt: poor Michael is revealed to installed one in Dr. Beckett
Beckett, as without weekly injections, his cells will rapidly begin necrotising.
*StrappedToAnOperatingTable
StrappedToAnOperatingTable: Teyla, as part of Michael's experiments.
* WasOnceAMan:the The "hybridized" Athosians
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* WasOnceAMan:
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---> -- '''Dr. Carson Beckett'''
