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* OffModel: For a brief moment in Ironwood's office, Blake is seen with her longcoat on, which Adam had already destroyed during their fight last volume.
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%% * OffModel: For a brief moment, Blake is seen with her longcoat on.
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After the heroes learn of Ironwood's plans, they have to decide whether they're going to help him achieve his goals.
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After the heroes learn learning of Ironwood's plans, they the heroes have to decide whether they're going to help him achieve his goals.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Winter is incensed that the team stole the airship to enter Atlas, not because it was against the law or military property, but because they might have been shot down. It's made very clear that her anger is mostly worry about Weiss's safety.
* CooldownHug: When Winter finds out that the protagonists illegally entered Mantle in their stolen airship, she points out to Weiss that they could have been shot down for doing just that. Weiss, however, calms Winter down by giving the latter a hug and assuring her they did what they had to do.
* CooldownHug: When Winter finds out that the protagonists illegally entered Mantle in their stolen airship, she points out to Weiss that they could have been shot down for doing just that. Weiss, however, calms Winter down by giving the latter a hug and assuring her they did what they had to do.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Winter is incensed that frustrated with the team stole stealing the airship to enter Atlas, not because it was against the law or military property, but because they might have been shot down. It's made very clear that her anger is mostly worry about Weiss's safety.
* CooldownHug:When Winter finds After finding out that the protagonists illegally entered Mantle in their stolen airship, she points out to Winter tells Weiss that they could have been shot down for doing just that. Weiss, however, calms Winter down by giving the latter a hug and assuring her they did what they had to do.
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** During an argument with a fellow prisoner, the prisoner explains to the heroes and audience who Robyn Hill is. He covers how well trained she is, that she's running for a seat on the Council, that her priority in life is protecting Mantle, and that she has the backing of the poor and disenfranchised behind her.
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** During an argument with a fellow prisoner, the prisoner explains to the heroes and audience viewers who Robyn Hill is. He covers how well trained she is, that she's running for a seat on the Council, that her priority in life is protecting Mantle, and that she has the backing of the poor and disenfranchised behind her.
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* InternalReveal: Ironwood spends a lot of time explaining to the protagonists who he's entrusted with knowledge of the war with Salem, and what he plans to do about it now that Ozpin is gone and the Relic of Knowledge is in Atlas. However, he doesn't realise the significance of Oscar's presence in the room until he says that he's doing the best he can without Ozpin here to guide him, causing the protagonists to fall silent. Qrow then makes Ironwood, Winter and Penny aware of what the audience already knows: that Oscar is the next Ozpin. However, Ruby refuses to let Ironwood learn the real reason why Ozpin is currently missing from Oscar's head, thus leaving Ironwood unaware of Jinn's revelations and thinking the Relic has used up all its questions.
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* InternalReveal: Ironwood spends a lot of time explaining to the protagonists who he's entrusted with knowledge of the war with Salem, and what he plans to do about it now that since Ozpin is gone and the Relic of Knowledge is in Atlas. However, he doesn't realise the significance of Oscar's presence in the room until he says that he's doing the best he can without Ozpin here to guide him, causing the protagonists to fall silent. Qrow then makes Ironwood, Winter and Penny aware of what the audience viewers already knows: know: that Oscar is the next Ozpin. However, Ruby refuses to let Ironwood learn the real reason why Ozpin is currently missing from Oscar's head, thus leaving Ironwood unaware of Jinn's revelations and thinking the Relic has used up all its questions.
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** Dramatic Irony: Ironwood describes Ozpin's original plan as simply holding Salem at bay, but designs a new plan based on the premise that Salem will eventually win, and which rests on the ability to outright destroy her. However, the audience and heroes know that Salem cannot be destroyed. When Ruby commits the heroes to helping complete the plan without revealing that the end-goal is unachievable, the camera angles and ominous music score invite the audience to share the disquiet Ruby's companions feel about this decision.
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** Dramatic Irony: Ironwood describes Ozpin's original plan as simply holding Salem at bay, but designs a new plan based on the premise that Salem will eventually win, and which rests on the ability to outright destroy her. However, both the audience viewers and heroes know that Salem cannot be destroyed. is indestructible. When Ruby commits the heroes to helping complete the plan without revealing that the end-goal is unachievable, the camera angles and ominous music score invite the audience viewers to share the disquiet Ruby's companions feel her companions' disquietness about this decision.
