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* FormulaBreakingEpisode: This episode is set in the "One of the Boys" dimension, and thus doesn't feature Lincoln, but features Linka instead.
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* FormulaBreakingEpisode: This episode is set in the "One of the Boys" dimension, and thus doesn't feature Lincoln, Lincoln and his sisters, but features Linka and her brothers instead.
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* AllPeriodsArePMS: When fanfic Linka shouts, the real Lexx wonders if she's on her period, causing Linka to point out that not all girls are like that on their periods, and wonder how he knows about them.
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* AllPeriodsArePMS: When fanfic Linka shouts, the real Lexx wonders if she's on her period, causing Linka to point out that not all girls are like that on their periods, and wonder how he knows about them.them to which he replies he learned about them when their mom took him to see [[WesternAnimation/TurningRed that magic panda movie]].
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Fanfic Loki enters and Linka tearfully admits that she's hallucinating the word "chocolate", revealing that she's also started to see brown, chocolate-smelling spots on her skin. Loki comes up with a plan, which involves him and his brothers tying Linka up (and apparently it also involves a bucket). She starts dreaming of a Land of Chocolate and when she wakes up, she's escaped and is eating one of the chocolate pies, having eaten all the rest. Lane, however, is not mad because the gig was cancelled.
Fanfic Linka goes to eat another pie, but there was laxative in it.
Fanfic Linka goes to eat another pie, but there was laxative in it.
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Fanfic Loki enters and Linka tearfully admits that she's hallucinating the word "chocolate", revealing that she's also started to see brown, chocolate-smelling spots on her skin. Loki comes up with a plan, which involves him and his brothers tying Linka up (and apparently it also involves a bucket). She starts dreaming of a Land of Chocolate and when she wakes up, she's escaped and is eating one of the chocolate pies, having eaten all the rest. Lane, however, is not mad because the gig was cancelled.
cancelled. Fanfic Linka goes to eat another pie, but there was laxative in it.
it. Unfortunately, Lynn eats it, and then the story ends.
The siblings, while finding the story imperfect, had fun, and Grammy (who has the same name due to being a genderless AI) complains about the inconsistent tenses. Then, Lane teases Linka by saying he can't wait for the next "chocolate".
The siblings, while finding the story imperfect, had fun, and Grammy (who has the same name due to being a genderless AI) complains about the inconsistent tenses. Then, Lane teases Linka by saying he can't wait for the next "chocolate".
* EveryoneHasStandards: Lane admits that he doesn't have many lines he won't cross, but pulling an illegal prank such as a LaxativePrank is one of them.
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* HumorDissonance: Fanfic Lane sees the phrase "I caught you red-handed" (when Linka's hands weren't literally red, so there's no wordplay) as a "joke". The real Lane is not amused and tells fanfic Lane to learn what a joke is.
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* HumorDissonance: InUniverse. Fanfic Lane sees the phrase "I caught you red-handed" (when Linka's hands weren't literally red, so there's no wordplay) as a "joke". The real Lane is not amused and tells fanfic Lane to learn what a joke is.
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* {{Pun}}: In the story, after Linka's brother's tie her up, Lane tells her to sleep 'tight'.
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* {{Pun}}: {{Pun}}:
** In the story, after Linka's brother's tie her up, Lane tells her to sleep'tight'.'tight'.
** Lane says that, while he wouldn't rate the story as the best, there's "not a choco-lot to dislike about it".
** In the story, after Linka's brother's tie her up, Lane tells her to sleep
** Lane says that, while he wouldn't rate the story as the best, there's "not a choco-lot to dislike about it".
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** Fanfic Lynn is excited at the idea of pie for breakfast.
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** Lexx learned about periods from [[WesternAnimation/SeeingRed a movie about magic pandas]].
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** Lexx learned about periods from [[WesternAnimation/SeeingRed [[WesternAnimation/TurningRed a movie about magic pandas]].
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* RealMenHateSugar: Boy Lynn says he only eats dark chocolate since an athlete like himself can't risk what sugar would do to him.
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* ShoutOut: When Luke berates fanfic Linka for not replanting the chocolate tree in her dream, Lynn calls her the Chocolate [[Literature/TheLorax Lorax]].
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** When Luke berates fanfic Linka for not replanting the chocolate tree in her dream, Lynn calls her the Chocolate [[Literature/TheLoraxLorax]].Lorax]].
** Lexx learned about periods from [[WesternAnimation/SeeingRed a movie about magic pandas]].
** When Luke berates fanfic Linka for not replanting the chocolate tree in her dream, Lynn calls her the Chocolate [[Literature/TheLorax
** Lexx learned about periods from [[WesternAnimation/SeeingRed a movie about magic pandas]].
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We open on the couch, but this time it's in the "One of the Boys" dimension. The characters reading are Linka, Luke, Lane, Boy Lynn, and Lexx, and they will be reading "Linka and Chocolate", a chapter of ''Fanfic/LinkaAndHerBrothers''.
The story starts with Lane sneaking to the fridge, causing the real Luke to wonder if he's booby-trapping it, with Lynn snickering at the word "booby". Story Lane is approached by Lars and Luke, who both ask if he's lost his mind upon seeing that he is carrying chocolate bars. This puzzles the real alternate Louds, until fanfic Lars reveals that Linka is a "chocolate monster". This satisfies the real Luke, but Linka is still puzzled, since while she does love chocolate, she isn't insane about it, and Lexx loves chocolate even more than her.
Seeing as fanfic Lane wanted the chocolate to make pies for a party, Lars suggests ''buying'' the pies instead, but Lars hates buying pies, likening it to stealing jokes. He then tasks Luke and Lars to keep Linka out of the kitchen, and when she comes in and notices the pie crusts, he lies that they're coconut cream pies (which the real Lexx hates).
In the story, Luke and Lars enter the kitchen, asking her to jam and help him with a poem respectively, and the real Linka reveals that she's learning the flute. Story Linka goes to help Lars, while Lane starts making the pies, but reveals that he plans to throw them, confusing the real Lane, since he feels that if the pies are for throwing and not eating, he should just buy them. Unfortunately, fanfic Linka has already seen the chocolate and attempts to steal some.
They start arguing, which ends in Linka telling Lane to name one time she went "crazy" over chocolate. The real Lynn points out a time Ron Andy gave her Valentine's Day chocolate, but she points out that that wasn't about the chocolate, but rather because it was the first nice thing he did to her. In the story, Lane remembers a time Linka ate a lot of Lief and Lexx's chocolate bars they were meant to sell.
Story Linka then walks off and explains to the readers that she's a "chocoholic". Then, Loni asks if the suit he's making should be grey or brown. She suggests brown, then disappears (causing the real Lane to reveal that Linka only does that when Lynn wants a sparring partner, and that's because he won a tug-of-war against the rest of his gym class, including the teacher).
Later, fanfic Linka sits down to dinner with her older brothers and parents, and Lane's brothers mock him since they see baking as effeminate, while the parents are proud of Linka for not stealing the chocolate. Linka, meanwhile, is twitchy and keeps hallucinating random words said by her family as "chocolate", causing her to angrily leave. She contacts Claire and asks for help, but he can't help as he's busy trying to get Clawuster (one of his cats) to take his medicine. She looks in a box she has for such situations, but it's empty.
Fanfic Loki enters and Linka tearfully admits that she's hallucinating the word "chocolate", revealing that she's also started to see brown, chocolate-smelling spots on her skin. Loki comes up with a plan, which involves him and his brothers tying Linka up (and apparently it also involves a bucket). She starts dreaming of a Land of Chocolate and when she wakes up, she's escaped and is eating one of the chocolate pies, having eaten all the rest. Lane, however, is not mad because the gig was cancelled.
Fanfic Linka goes to eat another pie, but there was laxative in it.
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* AccidentallyCorrectWriting: InUniverse, Linka notes that what fanfic Lane said about chocolate never lasting long at their house is true, but points out that she's not the only one to blame for that.
* AllPeriodsArePMS: When fanfic Linka shouts, the real Lexx wonders if she's on her period, causing Linka to point out that not all girls are like that on their periods, and wonder how he knows about them.
* BigEater: Fanfic Linka can eat several pies in one sitting.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Linka in the story explains to the audience about how she's a "chocoholic".
* CrashingDreams: Fanfic Linka dreams that she falls face-first into chocolate, then wakes up with her face in a chocolate pie.
* CrushBlush: Linka blushes remembering Ron Andy's first nice deed for her, which was giving her chocolate on Valentine's Day.
* DoesNotLikeSpam:
** Lexx hates coconuts.
** Luke and Lexx are both of the opinion that nobody likes honeydew.
* {{Flashback}}: The story shows us a flashback of Linka stealing Lief and Lexx's candy bars.
* FormulaBreakingEpisode: This episode is set in the "One of the Boys" dimension, and thus doesn't feature Lincoln, but features Linka instead.
* FoulMedicine: According to Claire in the story, Clawuster always struggles to take his medicine.
* FridgeBrilliance: InUniverse, Luke explains how fanfic Linka escaped from being tied up by realising that she's a good escape artist.
* FridgeLogic: InUniverse, Lynn likes the idea of a Land of Chocolate, but is concerned over what would happen there in the summer.
* GiantFood: Story Linka's dream features giant marshmallows, which she bounces on.
* GirlsLoveChocolate:
** Zigzagged in the story, in which Linka, the only sister in the family, is nuts about chocolate and goes to great lengths to steal it, going insane when she fails. However, Rita and Claire don't exhibit similar behaviour.
** Averted in the episode itself, in which Linka loves chocolate but in a reasonable way, and so do her brothers, and Lexx loves it even more than Linka.
* HehHehYouSaidX: Lynn snickers when Luke mentions ''booby''-trapping.
* HumorDissonance: Fanfic Lane sees the phrase "I caught you red-handed" (when Linka's hands weren't literally red, so there's no wordplay) as a "joke". The real Lane is not amused and tells fanfic Lane to learn what a joke is.
* IDontThinkThatsSuchAGoodIdea: Fanfic Linka has reservations about her brothers tying her up.
* IgnorantAboutFire: Loni apparently can't make scrambled eggs without starting a grease fire.
* IHaveNoSon: Discussed in the story, when Linka tells Lane, whose pies she ate, not to say he has no sister.
* ImplausibleDeniability: In the story's flashback, Linka denies having seen the twins' chocolate bars, despite being surrounded by wrappers and having chocolate on her face.
* InstantlyProvenWrong:
** Lexx claims he doesn't eat chocolate quickly like his siblings, only to scarf down the leftover Butterfinger that Lane found.
** Fanfic Linka says to herself that trying to sleep while tied up would be uncomfortable, but then instantly falls asleep.
* InsubstantialIngredients: Discussed when story Linka asks if Lane added "love" to the pies.
* InTouchWithHisFeminineSide: Lane berates fanfic Loni for calling him feminine and calls him a hypocrite.
* LamePunReaction: In the story, Lane's brothers groan when he tells the tied-up Linka to sleep "tight".
* LaxativePrank: Fanfic Lane apparently put laxative in one of the pies.
* LessEmbarrassingTerm: Lexx doesn't like to be called a "chocolate monster", preferring the term "chocolate connoisseur".
* LethalChef: Loni apparently starts a grease fire whenever he cooks scrambled eggs.
* LevelAte: Fanfic Linka dreams about the Land of Chocolate, which is just what it sounds like.
* NameMcAdjective: Lane calls Loni "Campy [=McMetro=]".
* NoodleIncident: At one point in the story, Luke asks Lane if he remembers the "chocolate fiasco", to which Lane responds, "Don't remind me".
* NoYou: When fanfic Lane says, "A pie is like a joke", Luke replies, "You're a joke".
* NurseryRhyme: Lexx mentions that Lief's bucket has a hole in it, prompting Lynn to say, "Then fix it", Lexx to ask, "With what?", Lynn to reply, "Some straw", and Lexx to reply, "But the straw is too long". Lynn is about to suggest he cut it, but Linka interrupts him.
* PieInTheFace: Fanfic Lane plans to throw the pies he bakes, prompting the real Lane to wonder why he doesn't just buy them, since a pie intended for throwing doesn't need to taste good anyway.
* PinkIsForSissies: In the fanfic, Lynn and Loni tease Lane for wearing a pink apron.
* {{Pun}}: In the story, after Linka's brother's tie her up, Lane tells her to sleep 'tight'.
* RunningGag: Lane keeps suggesting that the story characters handcuff Linka to prevent her from going crazy.
* SanitySlippage: Fanfic Linka starts out relatively stable, but then, she starts having chocolate-related hallucinations.
-->'''Real Luke''': "Get this girl to a doctor."
* SayMyName: Linka says, "Lane!" when he suggests he could handcuff her to the stairs while he made the pies to prevent her from stealing chocolate.
* SharedFamilyQuirks:
** According to Linka, she and her brothers all like chocolate.
** Luke and Lexx both dislike honeydew.
* ShoutOut: When Luke berates fanfic Linka for not replanting the chocolate tree in her dream, Lynn calls her the Chocolate [[Literature/TheLorax Lorax]].
* {{Sleepwalking}}: Story Linka escapes her ties and walks into the kitchen, in her sleep.
* {{Smurfing}}: Fanfic Linka hallucinates that her family is saying, "chocolate" instead of what they're really saying.
* StealthHiBye: Fanfic Linka vanishes from Loni's sight without him noticing after she suggests he make a brown suit.
* StockYuck: Lexx hates coconut and is of the opinion that ''nobody'' likes it.
* SweetTooth:
** Fanfic Linka is a "chocolate monster" and keeps trying to steal her brothers' chocolate and when she can't, she literally goes insane.
** While she's not insane about it, the real Linka does admit to loving chocolate.
** Lexx is a self-proclaimed "chocolate connoisseur", and gleefully scarfs down a Butterfinger (though he does hate coconut and honeydew).
** Linka admits that chocolate doesn't last long in the house, but points out that her brothers all love it too (though downplayed for Lynn, since he only likes dark chocolate).
* UnconventionalFoodUsage: In fanfic Linka's dream, there is a lamppost, bench, and statue made of chocolate, and she bounces on marshmallows.
* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: InUniverse, Linka is surprised that a kids' movie Lexx saw mentions periods.
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The story starts with Lane sneaking to the fridge, causing the real Luke to wonder if he's booby-trapping it, with Lynn snickering at the word "booby". Story Lane is approached by Lars and Luke, who both ask if he's lost his mind upon seeing that he is carrying chocolate bars. This puzzles the real alternate Louds, until fanfic Lars reveals that Linka is a "chocolate monster". This satisfies the real Luke, but Linka is still puzzled, since while she does love chocolate, she isn't insane about it, and Lexx loves chocolate even more than her.
Seeing as fanfic Lane wanted the chocolate to make pies for a party, Lars suggests ''buying'' the pies instead, but Lars hates buying pies, likening it to stealing jokes. He then tasks Luke and Lars to keep Linka out of the kitchen, and when she comes in and notices the pie crusts, he lies that they're coconut cream pies (which the real Lexx hates).
In the story, Luke and Lars enter the kitchen, asking her to jam and help him with a poem respectively, and the real Linka reveals that she's learning the flute. Story Linka goes to help Lars, while Lane starts making the pies, but reveals that he plans to throw them, confusing the real Lane, since he feels that if the pies are for throwing and not eating, he should just buy them. Unfortunately, fanfic Linka has already seen the chocolate and attempts to steal some.
They start arguing, which ends in Linka telling Lane to name one time she went "crazy" over chocolate. The real Lynn points out a time Ron Andy gave her Valentine's Day chocolate, but she points out that that wasn't about the chocolate, but rather because it was the first nice thing he did to her. In the story, Lane remembers a time Linka ate a lot of Lief and Lexx's chocolate bars they were meant to sell.
Story Linka then walks off and explains to the readers that she's a "chocoholic". Then, Loni asks if the suit he's making should be grey or brown. She suggests brown, then disappears (causing the real Lane to reveal that Linka only does that when Lynn wants a sparring partner, and that's because he won a tug-of-war against the rest of his gym class, including the teacher).
Later, fanfic Linka sits down to dinner with her older brothers and parents, and Lane's brothers mock him since they see baking as effeminate, while the parents are proud of Linka for not stealing the chocolate. Linka, meanwhile, is twitchy and keeps hallucinating random words said by her family as "chocolate", causing her to angrily leave. She contacts Claire and asks for help, but he can't help as he's busy trying to get Clawuster (one of his cats) to take his medicine. She looks in a box she has for such situations, but it's empty.
Fanfic Loki enters and Linka tearfully admits that she's hallucinating the word "chocolate", revealing that she's also started to see brown, chocolate-smelling spots on her skin. Loki comes up with a plan, which involves him and his brothers tying Linka up (and apparently it also involves a bucket). She starts dreaming of a Land of Chocolate and when she wakes up, she's escaped and is eating one of the chocolate pies, having eaten all the rest. Lane, however, is not mad because the gig was cancelled.
Fanfic Linka goes to eat another pie, but there was laxative in it.
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* AccidentallyCorrectWriting: InUniverse, Linka notes that what fanfic Lane said about chocolate never lasting long at their house is true, but points out that she's not the only one to blame for that.
* AllPeriodsArePMS: When fanfic Linka shouts, the real Lexx wonders if she's on her period, causing Linka to point out that not all girls are like that on their periods, and wonder how he knows about them.
* BigEater: Fanfic Linka can eat several pies in one sitting.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Linka in the story explains to the audience about how she's a "chocoholic".
* CrashingDreams: Fanfic Linka dreams that she falls face-first into chocolate, then wakes up with her face in a chocolate pie.
* CrushBlush: Linka blushes remembering Ron Andy's first nice deed for her, which was giving her chocolate on Valentine's Day.
* DoesNotLikeSpam:
** Lexx hates coconuts.
** Luke and Lexx are both of the opinion that nobody likes honeydew.
* {{Flashback}}: The story shows us a flashback of Linka stealing Lief and Lexx's candy bars.
* FormulaBreakingEpisode: This episode is set in the "One of the Boys" dimension, and thus doesn't feature Lincoln, but features Linka instead.
* FoulMedicine: According to Claire in the story, Clawuster always struggles to take his medicine.
* FridgeBrilliance: InUniverse, Luke explains how fanfic Linka escaped from being tied up by realising that she's a good escape artist.
* FridgeLogic: InUniverse, Lynn likes the idea of a Land of Chocolate, but is concerned over what would happen there in the summer.
* GiantFood: Story Linka's dream features giant marshmallows, which she bounces on.
* GirlsLoveChocolate:
** Zigzagged in the story, in which Linka, the only sister in the family, is nuts about chocolate and goes to great lengths to steal it, going insane when she fails. However, Rita and Claire don't exhibit similar behaviour.
** Averted in the episode itself, in which Linka loves chocolate but in a reasonable way, and so do her brothers, and Lexx loves it even more than Linka.
* HehHehYouSaidX: Lynn snickers when Luke mentions ''booby''-trapping.
* HumorDissonance: Fanfic Lane sees the phrase "I caught you red-handed" (when Linka's hands weren't literally red, so there's no wordplay) as a "joke". The real Lane is not amused and tells fanfic Lane to learn what a joke is.
* IDontThinkThatsSuchAGoodIdea: Fanfic Linka has reservations about her brothers tying her up.
* IgnorantAboutFire: Loni apparently can't make scrambled eggs without starting a grease fire.
* IHaveNoSon: Discussed in the story, when Linka tells Lane, whose pies she ate, not to say he has no sister.
* ImplausibleDeniability: In the story's flashback, Linka denies having seen the twins' chocolate bars, despite being surrounded by wrappers and having chocolate on her face.
* InstantlyProvenWrong:
** Lexx claims he doesn't eat chocolate quickly like his siblings, only to scarf down the leftover Butterfinger that Lane found.
** Fanfic Linka says to herself that trying to sleep while tied up would be uncomfortable, but then instantly falls asleep.
* InsubstantialIngredients: Discussed when story Linka asks if Lane added "love" to the pies.
* InTouchWithHisFeminineSide: Lane berates fanfic Loni for calling him feminine and calls him a hypocrite.
* LamePunReaction: In the story, Lane's brothers groan when he tells the tied-up Linka to sleep "tight".
* LaxativePrank: Fanfic Lane apparently put laxative in one of the pies.
* LessEmbarrassingTerm: Lexx doesn't like to be called a "chocolate monster", preferring the term "chocolate connoisseur".
* LethalChef: Loni apparently starts a grease fire whenever he cooks scrambled eggs.
* LevelAte: Fanfic Linka dreams about the Land of Chocolate, which is just what it sounds like.
* NameMcAdjective: Lane calls Loni "Campy [=McMetro=]".
* NoodleIncident: At one point in the story, Luke asks Lane if he remembers the "chocolate fiasco", to which Lane responds, "Don't remind me".
* NoYou: When fanfic Lane says, "A pie is like a joke", Luke replies, "You're a joke".
* NurseryRhyme: Lexx mentions that Lief's bucket has a hole in it, prompting Lynn to say, "Then fix it", Lexx to ask, "With what?", Lynn to reply, "Some straw", and Lexx to reply, "But the straw is too long". Lynn is about to suggest he cut it, but Linka interrupts him.
* PieInTheFace: Fanfic Lane plans to throw the pies he bakes, prompting the real Lane to wonder why he doesn't just buy them, since a pie intended for throwing doesn't need to taste good anyway.
* PinkIsForSissies: In the fanfic, Lynn and Loni tease Lane for wearing a pink apron.
* {{Pun}}: In the story, after Linka's brother's tie her up, Lane tells her to sleep 'tight'.
* RunningGag: Lane keeps suggesting that the story characters handcuff Linka to prevent her from going crazy.
* SanitySlippage: Fanfic Linka starts out relatively stable, but then, she starts having chocolate-related hallucinations.
-->'''Real Luke''': "Get this girl to a doctor."
* SayMyName: Linka says, "Lane!" when he suggests he could handcuff her to the stairs while he made the pies to prevent her from stealing chocolate.
* SharedFamilyQuirks:
** According to Linka, she and her brothers all like chocolate.
** Luke and Lexx both dislike honeydew.
* ShoutOut: When Luke berates fanfic Linka for not replanting the chocolate tree in her dream, Lynn calls her the Chocolate [[Literature/TheLorax Lorax]].
* {{Sleepwalking}}: Story Linka escapes her ties and walks into the kitchen, in her sleep.
* {{Smurfing}}: Fanfic Linka hallucinates that her family is saying, "chocolate" instead of what they're really saying.
* StealthHiBye: Fanfic Linka vanishes from Loni's sight without him noticing after she suggests he make a brown suit.
* StockYuck: Lexx hates coconut and is of the opinion that ''nobody'' likes it.
* SweetTooth:
** Fanfic Linka is a "chocolate monster" and keeps trying to steal her brothers' chocolate and when she can't, she literally goes insane.
** While she's not insane about it, the real Linka does admit to loving chocolate.
** Lexx is a self-proclaimed "chocolate connoisseur", and gleefully scarfs down a Butterfinger (though he does hate coconut and honeydew).
** Linka admits that chocolate doesn't last long in the house, but points out that her brothers all love it too (though downplayed for Lynn, since he only likes dark chocolate).
* UnconventionalFoodUsage: In fanfic Linka's dream, there is a lamppost, bench, and statue made of chocolate, and she bounces on marshmallows.
* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: InUniverse, Linka is surprised that a kids' movie Lexx saw mentions periods.
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