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* {{Foreshadowing}}: During Starlight's counseling session, Silverstream talks about having to work on a project in the Everfree Forest. Turns out the project is on cockatrices.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: During Starlight's counseling session, Silverstream talks about having to work on a project about dangerous creatures in the Everfree Forest. Turns out the project is on cockatrices.
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* ExactWords: Since Starlight made it her policy to be "always" available for the students, this encouraged them to come to her with many matters that honestly didn't actually require her advice, such as Silverstream ''repeatedly'' coming to her for trivial matters like how to describe the concept of being wet to her cousins, who have never been out of the water.
** This is what Trixie points out in their promised delivery of a cake to the celebration, that they would “make” a cake, not buy a cake.
** This is what Trixie points out in their promised delivery of a cake to the celebration, that they would “make” a cake, not buy a cake.
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* ExactWords: ExactWords:
** Since Starlight made it her policy to be "always" available for the students, this encouraged them to come to her with many matters that honestly didn't actually require her advice, such as Silverstream ''repeatedly'' coming to her for trivial matters like how to describe the concept of being wet to her cousins, who have never been out of the water.
** This is what Trixie points out in their promised delivery of a cake to the celebration, that they would“make” "make" a cake, not buy a cake.
** Since Starlight made it her policy to be "always" available for the students, this encouraged them to come to her with many matters that honestly didn't actually require her advice, such as Silverstream ''repeatedly'' coming to her for trivial matters like how to describe the concept of being wet to her cousins, who have never been out of the water.
** This is what Trixie points out in their promised delivery of a cake to the celebration, that they would
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** This is what Trixie points out in their promised delivery of a cake to the celebration, that they would “make” a cake, not buy a cake.
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* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Starlight and Trixie throughout the first half of the episode basically behave this way especially when they’re going to pick up supplies for a gathering they were invited to, arguing who’s job it is to get what, upset that one half of the pair wants to “cheat” and just buy a cake instead of making one with their partner and the above LightswitchSurprise mirrors the CaughtComingHomeLate trope.
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* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Starlight and Trixie Trixie, throughout the first half of the episode episode, basically behave this way especially way. Especially when they’re they're going to pick up supplies for a gathering they were invited to, arguing who’s whose job it is to get what, upset that one half of the pair wants to “cheat” "cheat" and just buy a cake instead of making one with their partner and the partner. The above LightswitchSurprise mirrors the CaughtComingHomeLate trope.
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* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Starlight and Trixie throughout the first half of the episode basically behave this way especially when they’re going to pick up supplies for a gathering they were invited to, arguing who’s job it is to get what, upset that one half of the pair wants to “cheat” and just buy a cake instead of making one with their partner and the above LightswitchSurprise mirrors the CaughtComingHomeLate trope.
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* LargeHam: Trixie, in top form, after Starlight suggests buying a cake instead of making one with her.
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* LargeHam: Trixie, in top form, after Starlight suggests buying a cake from Mrs Cake instead of making one with her.her, especially all the effort she apparently went to in order to get the secret recipe from Mrs Cake in the first place.
