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-->'''Hipster!Fluttershy:''' I would seriously help you right now, but like, I don't wanna, y'know?\\
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-->'''Hipster!Fluttershy:''' I would seriously help you right now, but like, I don't wanna, y'know?\\y'know?
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-->'''Hipster!Fluttershy:''' I would seriously help you right now, but like, I don't wanna, y'know?\\
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diffuse => defuse
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Fluttershy insulting her raccoon friends by calling them "rodents." It's enough that everypony drops everything they are doing to head for the shop in Manehattan to help diffuse the situation.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Fluttershy insulting her raccoon friends by calling them "rodents." It's enough that everypony drops everything they are doing to head for the shop in Manehattan to help diffuse defuse the situation.
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* TotallyRadical: Fluttershy's hipster persona uses slang such as "woke", "lit" and "BRB".
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* TwitchyEye: Rarity's lower eyelids start to twitch as she realizes how much Fluttershy has gotten lost in her different personas.
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* TwitchyEye: Rarity's lower eyelids start to twitch as she realizes how much Fluttershy has gotten lost in her different personas.
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* FauxHorrific: The pony customer next to Fluttershy utters a shrill scream when a droplet of tea ''almost'' spill on her.
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* FauxHorrific: The pony customer next to Fluttershy utters a shrill scream when a droplet of tea ''almost'' spill spills on her.
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* GratuitousFrench: Something Fluttershy's "snooty" character falls into when describing an outfit to a customer.
--> '''Fluttershy:''' Yes, casual chic, ''prêt à porter'', is very ''branché'' this season.
--> '''Fluttershy:''' Yes, casual chic, ''prêt à porter'', is very ''branché'' this season.
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Not the mane cast; she said that about her, her assistants, and her modeling pony. And considering she had to send her model out right then and there whether the dress was right or not, the usage was correct.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Rarity claims the mane cast have "literally run out of time". This despite the writers making fun of the widespread misuse of the word [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E9HonestApple in the last series]].
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Rarity claims the mane cast have "literally run out of time". This despite the writers making fun of the widespread misuse of the word [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E9HonestApple in the last series]].
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Wrong pony. :P
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* ValleyGirl: A customer acting like one causes Rarity to make her second persona in this style.
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* ValleyGirl: A customer acting like one causes Rarity Fluttershy to make her second persona in this style.
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* TaxonomicTermConfusion: A plot-point in this episode. Animal expert Fluttershy calling the raccoons "rodents" is used as [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness a sign she is not herself]].
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* TaxonomicTermConfusion: A plot-point in this episode. Animal expert Fluttershy calling the raccoons "rodents" (Raccoons are actually classed in the Carnivora Order, rather than the Rodentia Order) is used as [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness a sign she is not herself]].
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Natter and justifying edit.
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*** Or evidence that her 'freaky' knowledge of sewing isn't all that helpful when her brain draws blanks under pressure. And she certainly wouldn't know details about the inventory, like what the thread count is on a specific suit.
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*** Or evidence that her 'freaky' knowledge of sewing isn't all that helpful when her brain draws blanks under pressure. And she certainly wouldn't know details about the inventory, like what the thread count is on a specific suit.
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* ValleyGirl: A customer acting like one causes Rarity to make her second persona in this style.
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** Clothes do '''not''' make the pony, it's your best qualities that define you.
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** Clothes do '''not''' make the pony, it's but rather your best qualities that define you.
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** Clothes do '''not''' make the pony, it's your best qualities that define you.
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** There's a thin line between being assertive and being bossy and mean.
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** There's a thin line between being assertive and being bossy and mean.overbearing.
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* RecordNeedleScratch: DJ Pon-3 (at her turntables) adds one to emphasize her head-shaking refusal to look after the shop while Rarity is in Canterlot.
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* RecordNeedleScratch: {{Invoked}} by DJ Pon-3 (at at her turntables) adds one turntables to emphasize her head-shaking refusal to look after the shop while Rarity is in Canterlot.
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* AnAesop: There's a thin line between being assertive and being mean.
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* AnAesop: AnAesop:
** There's a thin line between being assertive and being bossy and mean.
** There's a thin line between being assertive and being bossy and mean.
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* RealityEnsues: Being mean and unconstructively critical to customers (even to be assertive) empties a store pretty quickly.
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* AnAesop: There's a thin line between being assertive and being mean.
** Also, being mean and elitist isn't good for business. It can only garner so many customers before it wears out its welcome.
** Also, being mean and elitist isn't good for business. It can only garner so many customers before it wears out its welcome.
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* RecordNeedleScratch: DJ Pon-3 (at her turntables) adds one to emphasize her head-shaking refusal to look after the shop while Rarity is in Canterlot.
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* ChangingClothesIsAFreeAction: Fluttershy is inexplicably able to change clothes, add makeup and put on jewelry BehindTheBlack to transform into one of her differing personas on the spot. At one point, she walks behind a display in one costume, and comes out in another, all without breaking stride. At the end, when Rarity fires all of Fluttershy's personas one by one, Fluttershy walks off in each costume only to immediately appear on Rarity's opposite side wearing another one, three times in a row.
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* ChangingClothesIsAFreeAction: Fluttershy is inexplicably able to change clothes, add makeup and put on jewelry BehindTheBlack to transform into one of her differing personas on the spot. At one point, she walks behind a display in one costume, and comes out in another, all without breaking stride. At the end, when Rarity fires all of Fluttershy's personas one by one, Fluttershy walks off in each costume only to immediately appear on Rarity's opposite side wearing another one, three times in a row. She then instantly returns as her normal self to apologize.
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** In "Suited For Success", Fluttershy's knowledge of fashion is revealed as her HiddenDepths. However, eight seasons and several script editors later, it seems to have been forgotten.
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** In "Suited For for Success", Fluttershy's knowledge of fashion is revealed as her HiddenDepths. However, eight seasons and several script editors later, it seems to have been forgotten.
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* NarrativeShapeshifting: The three raccoons miming their report for Spike and Twilight involves them temporarily acquiring manes in the style of Fluttershy's various persona.
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* NarrativeShapeshifting: The three raccoons miming their report for Spike and Twilight involves them temporarily acquiring manes in the style of Fluttershy's various persona.personas.
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* OffScreenTeleportation: When Rarity starts "firing" Fluttershy's personas, each one leaves, only for another to show up from another direction, until only Fluttershy's original self is left.
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* OffScreenTeleportation: When Rarity starts "firing" Fluttershy's personas, each one leaves, only for another to show up from another the other direction, until only Fluttershy's original self is left.
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* ReversePsychology: Rarity uses a bit of this to convince a customer to buy something even though she was unsure she wanted it. Fluttershy tries to recreate Rarity's approach, and though initially successful, pushes it far too much by time the Mane Six have returned with Rarity.
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* ReversePsychology: Rarity uses a bit of this to convince a customer to buy something even though she was unsure she wanted it. Fluttershy tries to recreate Rarity's approach, and though initially successful, pushes it far too much by time the Mane Six her friends have returned with Rarity.
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* DependingOnTheWriter: Fluttershy, who displayed masterful knitting ability in [[ComicBook/MyLittlePonyMicroSeries the comics]], can't even knit an elephant tea cozy properly.
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* DependingOnTheWriter: DependingOnTheWriter:
** In "Suited For Success", Fluttershy's knowledge of fashion is revealed as her HiddenDepths. However, eight seasons and several script editors later, it seems to have been forgotten.
** Fluttershy, who displayed masterful knitting ability in [[ComicBook/MyLittlePonyMicroSeries the comics]], can't even knit an elephant tea cozy properly.
** In "Suited For Success", Fluttershy's knowledge of fashion is revealed as her HiddenDepths. However, eight seasons and several script editors later, it seems to have been forgotten.
** Fluttershy, who displayed masterful knitting ability in [[ComicBook/MyLittlePonyMicroSeries the comics]], can't even knit an elephant tea cozy properly.
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* TwitchyEye: Rarity's lower eyelids start to twitch as she realizes how much Fluttershy has gotten lost in her different personas.
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* NarrativeShapeshifting: The three raccoons miming their report for Spike and Twilight involves them temporarily acquiring manes in the style of Fluttershy's various persona.
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** The slow motion shot of the tea droplet flying includes the stock parody of using ''Series/TheSixMillionDollarMan'' slo-mo music.
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** The slow motion shot of the tea droplet flying through the air includes the stock parody of using ''Series/TheSixMillionDollarMan'' slo-mo music.
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* FauxHorrific: The pony customer next to Fluttershy utters a shrill scream when a droplet of tea ''almost'' spill on her.
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* ShoutOut: The goth pony who describes Rarity for You as "a barren, empty wasteland" is based off of Film/EdwardScissorhands, but without the... well, scissors.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The goth pony who describes Rarity for You as "a barren, empty wasteland" is based off of Film/EdwardScissorhands, but without the... well,scissors.scissors.
** The slow motion shot of the tea droplet flying includes the stock parody of using ''Series/TheSixMillionDollarMan'' slo-mo music.
** The goth pony who describes Rarity for You as "a barren, empty wasteland" is based off of Film/EdwardScissorhands, but without the... well,
** The slow motion shot of the tea droplet flying includes the stock parody of using ''Series/TheSixMillionDollarMan'' slo-mo music.
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* OtherMeAnnoysMe: Zigzagged. All of Fluttershy’s characters are just her acting differently and not actually different versions of her, but at one point she acts like all three of them are different ponies. When Rarity fires her "severe" persona, her "goth" persona says she always felt she was too controlling.
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This is contesting if it even counts as a continuity issue.
* DependingOnTheWriter: Fluttershy, who displayed masterful knitting ability in [[ComicBook/MyLittlePonyMicroSeries the comics]], can't even knit an elephant tea cozy properly.
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* SeriesContinuityError: Fluttershy, who displayed masterful knitting ability in [[ComicBook/MyLittlePonyMicroSeries the comics]], can't even knit an elephant tea cozy properly.
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As pointed out in other edits, sewing is not the same as knitting. Fluttershy can have skills in one and not know a thing about the other.
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** Not to mention the more egregious disregard of Fluttershy's "freaky knowledge of sewing" from the classic season one episode "Suited for Success", which makes her lousey tea cozy and ignorance of what a thread count is very bizarre.