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Oil workers are abducted by someone or something covered in black slime. Martin and the other two follow the slime trail to an Polynesian island, where the islanders are worshipping The Black Spirit, The entity in question makes the workers old with the slime as retaliation for encroaching or possibly polluting their waters.
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Oil workers are abducted by someone or something covered in black slime. Martin and the other two follow the slime trail to an Polynesian island, where the islanders - led by the Shaman - are worshipping The Black Spirit, Spirit. The entity in question makes the workers old with the slime as retaliation for encroaching or possibly polluting their waters.
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Oil workers are abducted by someone or something covered in black slime. Martin and the other two follow the slime trail to an Polynesian island, where the islanders are worshipping The Black Spirit which makes the workers old and for retaliation regarding encroaching or possibly polluting their waters.
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Oil workers are abducted by someone or something covered in black slime. Martin and the other two follow the slime trail to an Polynesian island, where the islanders are worshipping The Black Spirit which Spirit, The entity in question makes the workers old and for with the slime as retaliation regarding for encroaching or possibly polluting their waters.
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Oil workers are abducted by someone or something covered in black slime. Martin and the other two follow the slime trail to an island, where the islanders are attacking the workers as retaliation for encroaching or possibly polluting their waters.
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Oil workers are abducted by someone or something covered in black slime. Martin and the other two follow the slime trail to an Polynesian island, where the islanders are attacking worshipping The Black Spirit which makes the workers as old and for retaliation for regarding encroaching or possibly polluting their waters.
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* BareMidriffsAreFeminine: The polynesian woman that Martin, Diana and Java meet at the island shows her navel while the male natives are shirtless.
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* BareMidriffsAreFeminine: The polynesian Polynesian woman that Martin, Diana Diana, and Java meet at the island shows her navel while the male natives are shirtless.
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* EndearinglyDorky: Java's attempts at looking cool end up like this. Luckily a polynesian girl returns his charms, to Diana's annoyance and shock.
* EveryoneHasStandards: The polynesian woman mentions that while the oil rig workers weren't welcome on the island, she and the rest of her people are glad they're all safe.
* EveryoneHasStandards: The polynesian woman mentions that while the oil rig workers weren't welcome on the island, she and the rest of her people are glad they're all safe.
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* EndearinglyDorky: Java's attempts at looking cool end up like this. Luckily a polynesian Polynesian girl returns his charms, to Diana's annoyance and shock.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Thepolynesian Polynesian woman mentions that while the oil rig workers weren't welcome on the island, she and the rest of her people are glad they're all safe.
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* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: MOM believes that the work in the oil rig were - in fact - violation of not only the island's waters, but also the international treaty.
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* BareMidriffsAreFeminine: The polynesian woman that Martin, Diana and Java meet at the island shows her navel while the male natives are shirtless.
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* BareYourMidriff: The polynesian woman that Martin, Diana and Java meet at the island.
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* BlobMonster: The Black Spirit, a broadly humanoid mass of grey slime.
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Oil rig workers in the South Pacific Ocean start to go missing, their bodies fed on by a huge creature completely covered in slime controlled by a wicked shaman plotting revenge on them for polluting his island.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: The polynesian woman mentions that while the oil rig workers weren't welcome, she and the rest of their people are glad they're all safe.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: The polynesian woman mentions that while the oil rig workers weren't welcome, welcome on the island, she and the rest of their her people are glad they're all safe.
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* LeeroyJenkins: Martian and Java decide to go guns blazing against the natives. It goes as well as expected and all three are captured.
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Oil rig workers in the South Pacific Ocean start to go missing, their bodies fed on by a huge creature completely covered in slime controlled by a wicked shaman plotting revenge on them for polluting his island.
!!General Tropes:
* BareYourMidriff: The polynesian woman that Martin, Diana and Java meet at the island.
* EndearinglyDorky: Java's attempts at looking cool end up like this. Luckily a polynesian girl returns his charms, to Diana's annoyance and shock.
* EveryoneHasStandards: The polynesian woman mentions that while the oil rig workers weren't welcome, she and the rest of their people are glad they're all safe.
* EvilIsNotAToy: The shaman found out that trying to use an ancient slime spirit against the oil rig workers was a bad idea.
* HeelFaceTurn: The shaman apologizes for his actions after Martin defeats the Black Spirit.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Martin destroying the shaman's crystal means no one can control the Black Spirit.
* RapidAging: Those drained by the Black Spirit suffer from this.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: The shaman only wanted to punish the oil workers who were polluting his island.
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!!General Tropes:
* BareYourMidriff: The polynesian woman that Martin, Diana and Java meet at the island.
* EndearinglyDorky: Java's attempts at looking cool end up like this. Luckily a polynesian girl returns his charms, to Diana's annoyance and shock.
* EveryoneHasStandards: The polynesian woman mentions that while the oil rig workers weren't welcome, she and the rest of their people are glad they're all safe.
* EvilIsNotAToy: The shaman found out that trying to use an ancient slime spirit against the oil rig workers was a bad idea.
* HeelFaceTurn: The shaman apologizes for his actions after Martin defeats the Black Spirit.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Martin destroying the shaman's crystal means no one can control the Black Spirit.
* RapidAging: Those drained by the Black Spirit suffer from this.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: The shaman only wanted to punish the oil workers who were polluting his island.
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