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"Even the Best Fall Down Sometimes" is the 21st chapter of ''Fanfic/JuniorOfficers''.
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* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: Meta example; Barnacles is referred to without his title[[note]]so, he is called "Barnacles" and not "Captain Barnacles"[[/note]], signaling how royally he has screwed up.
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* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: Meta example; Barnacles is referred to without his title[[note]]so, he is called "Barnacles" and not "Captain Barnacles"[[/note]], signaling how royally he has screwed up.up.
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* ManlyTears: In this chapter, Barnacles cries for the first time in thirteen years.
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* ManlyTears: In this chapter, Barnacles cries for the first time in thirteen years.five years.
* MisdirectedOutburst: The climax of this chapter; Barnacles lashes out at Deborah over his own guilt.
* MisdirectedOutburst: The climax of this chapter; Barnacles lashes out at Deborah over his own guilt.
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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:Shellington]] has this reaction upon hearing about Barnacles and Deborah's falling-out.
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* ItsAllMyFault: ItsAllMyFault:
** This is Barnacles' reaction to [[spoiler:Shellington's mental breakdown]].
** [[spoiler:Shellington]] has this reaction upon hearing about Barnacles and Deborah's falling-out.
** This is Barnacles' reaction to [[spoiler:Shellington's mental breakdown]].
** [[spoiler:Shellington]] has this reaction upon hearing about Barnacles and Deborah's falling-out.
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* CallBack: Banracles tells Shellington the ''real'' reason his books were misplaced back in "The Queensland Lungfish".
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* VomitIndiscretionShot: Unlike in "The Swell Shark", here we get a [[SarcasmMode lovely]] shot of Shellington throwing up onscreen.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre:
--> '''Captain Barnacles''': I aimed to treat you[[note]]Shellington[[/note]] respectfully from the moment I found you. And to this day, you've proven time and time again that you still deserve that respect.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre:
--> '''Captain Barnacles''': I aimed to treat you[[note]]Shellington[[/note]] respectfully from the moment I found you. And to this day, you've proven time and time again that you still deserve that respect.
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* ManlyTears[=/=]TearsOfRemorse: The chapter ends with Barnacles doing this, regretting what he said to Deborah.
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* ManlyTears[=/=]TearsOfRemorse: The chapter ends with ManlyTears: In this chapter, Barnacles doing this, regretting what he said to Deborah.cries for the first time in thirteen years.
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* TearsOfRemorse: The chapter ends with Barnacles doing this, regretting what he said to Deborah.
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Tensions are rising in the Octopod as the guilt and anger proves to be too much for Barnacles.
!!Tropes:
* ManlyTears[=/=]TearsOfRemorse: The chapter ends with Barnacles doing this, regretting what he said to Deborah.
* InelegantBlubbering: Deborah does this after Barnacles shouts at her.
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:Shellington]] has this reaction upon hearing about Barnacles and Deborah's falling-out.
* PrecisionFStrike:
--> '''Deborah''': You're[[note]]Barnacles[[/note]] just like my dad, you ''bastard''!
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Two back-to-back:
** Barnacles gives Deborah a major dressing-down for [[spoiler:trying to remain optimistic despite what happened at the end of "The Swell Shark"]], culminating in ''[[spoiler:declaring that he should never have chosen her to be an Octonaut.]]''
** Deborah gives Barnacles one right back for taking his anger out on her.
* TryingNotToCry: "Barnacles stiffened his expression. His eyes were stinging, but he resisted the urge to cry."
* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: Meta example; Barnacles is referred to without his title[[note]]so, he is called "Barnacles" and not "Captain Barnacles"[[/note]], signaling how royally he has screwed up.
!!Tropes:
* ManlyTears[=/=]TearsOfRemorse: The chapter ends with Barnacles doing this, regretting what he said to Deborah.
* InelegantBlubbering: Deborah does this after Barnacles shouts at her.
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:Shellington]] has this reaction upon hearing about Barnacles and Deborah's falling-out.
* PrecisionFStrike:
--> '''Deborah''': You're[[note]]Barnacles[[/note]] just like my dad, you ''bastard''!
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Two back-to-back:
** Barnacles gives Deborah a major dressing-down for [[spoiler:trying to remain optimistic despite what happened at the end of "The Swell Shark"]], culminating in ''[[spoiler:declaring that he should never have chosen her to be an Octonaut.]]''
** Deborah gives Barnacles one right back for taking his anger out on her.
* TryingNotToCry: "Barnacles stiffened his expression. His eyes were stinging, but he resisted the urge to cry."
* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: Meta example; Barnacles is referred to without his title[[note]]so, he is called "Barnacles" and not "Captain Barnacles"[[/note]], signaling how royally he has screwed up.
