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Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Commander Rabb is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Lt. Colonel [=MacKenzie=] prosecutes, the judge is Commander Helfman (Creator/JenniferSavidge).
Rivers then ropes Rabb in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman -- by taking out a hit on Rabb. The hitman turns out to be Sheriff Carson (Creator/MarkMoses), who lures Rabb out to a cabin in the woods by pretending to have discovered the true identity of the hitman.
Rivers then ropes Rabb in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman -- by taking out a hit on Rabb. The hitman turns out to be Sheriff Carson (Creator/MarkMoses), who lures Rabb out to a cabin in the woods by pretending to have discovered the true identity of the hitman.
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Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Commander Rabb is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]].himself. Lt. Colonel [=MacKenzie=] prosecutes, the judge is Commander Helfman (Creator/JenniferSavidge).
Rivers then ropes Rabb in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fakeSEAL turned hitman -- SEAL, this one goes by taking out the name "Ticktin" and is now a hit on Rabb. mercenary hitman. Rabb refuses to go along with this, but Rivers says Rabb has no choice: Rivers has hired Ticktin to kill Rabb.
The hitman turns out to be Sheriff Carson (Creator/MarkMoses), who lures Rabb out to a cabin in the woods by pretending to have discovered thetrue identity hitman's hideout. Carson gives himself away as Ticktin when he boasts about his specially customized ammunition, some of the hitman.
which Rabb and Rivers had already seen from Ticktin's first go at Rabb.
Rivers then ropes Rabb in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake
The hitman turns out to be Sheriff Carson (Creator/MarkMoses), who lures Rabb out to a cabin in the woods by pretending to have discovered the
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Barrington is also watching what's going on with Layton, though he stops short of suggesting Chegwidden should do anything to affect the outcome of Rivers's court-martial.
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Barrington is also watching what's going on with Layton, though he stops short of suggesting Chegwidden should do anything to affect the outcome of Rivers's court-martial.
court-martial. Revealed as a phony, Layton suspends his campaign. At roughly the same time, Chegwidden's chance to be a federal judge disappears.
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* SoldiersAtTheRear: Bill Layton was in public affairs in Saigon, a comfortable desk job. He made an exact copy of someone else's Navy Cross citation to get himself awarded one as well.
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* SoldiersAtTheRear: Bill Layton was in public affairs in Saigon, a comfortable desk job. He made an exact copy of someone else's Navy Cross citation to get himself awarded one as well.well.
* WhipPan: Just before Layton testifies.
* WhipPan: Just before Layton testifies.
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This episode of ''Series/{{JAG}}'' begins with Lt. Curtis Rivers (Creator/MontelWilliams) arriving at a political rally for a Senate candidate Bill Layton, who is apparently an ex-SEAL. However, even after a cordial welcome, Lt. Rivers goes up to Layton and rips the candidate's SEAL insignia pin off, claiming Layton is not a SEAL. The two men then engage in fisticuffs.
Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Commander Rabb is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Rivers then ropes Rabb in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman -- by taking out a hit on Rabb.
Meanwhile, a senator approaches Admiral Chegwidden to nominate him for a federal judgeship -- an opportunity that entices the admiral. However, political machinations may cause him to reconsider.
Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Commander Rabb is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Rivers then ropes Rabb in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman -- by taking out a hit on Rabb.
Meanwhile, a senator approaches Admiral Chegwidden to nominate him for a federal judgeship -- an opportunity that entices the admiral. However, political machinations may cause him to reconsider.
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Lt. Curtis Rivers (Creator/MontelWilliams)
Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Commander Rabb is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Lt. Colonel [=MacKenzie=] prosecutes, the judge is Commander Helfman (Creator/JenniferSavidge).
Rivers then ropes Rabb in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman -- by taking out a hit on
Meanwhile,
Barrington is also watching what's going on with Layton, though he stops short of suggesting Chegwidden should do anything to
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* SoldiersAtTheRear: Bill Layton was in Public Affairs in Saigon, a comfortable desk job. He made an exact copy of someone else’s Navy Cross citation to get himself awarded one as well.
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* SoldiersAtTheRear: Bill Layton was in Public Affairs public affairs in Saigon, a comfortable desk job. He made an exact copy of someone else’s else's Navy Cross citation to get himself awarded one as well.
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Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Harm is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Rivers then ropes Harm in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman -- by taking out a hit on Harm.
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Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Harm Commander Rabb is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Rivers then ropes Harm Rabb in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman -- by taking out a hit on Harm.
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! Tropes found here are
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This episode of Series/{{JAG}} begins with [[Creator/MontelWilliams Lt Curtis Rivers]] arriving at a political rally for a Senate candidate Bill Layton, who is apparently an ex-SEAL. However, even after a cordial welcome, Lt Rivers goes up to Layton and rips his SEAL insignia pin off, claiming he’s a fake. The two men then engage in fisticuffs.
Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Harm is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Rivers then ropes Harm in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman - by taking out a hit on Harm.
Meanwhile, a senator approaches Admiral Chegwidden to nominate him for a federal judgeship - an opportunity that entices the admiral. However, political machinations may cause him to reconsider.
Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Harm is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Rivers then ropes Harm in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman - by taking out a hit on Harm.
Meanwhile, a senator approaches Admiral Chegwidden to nominate him for a federal judgeship - an opportunity that entices the admiral. However, political machinations may cause him to reconsider.
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This episode of Series/{{JAG}} ''Series/{{JAG}}'' begins with [[Creator/MontelWilliams Lt Lt. Curtis Rivers]] Rivers (Creator/MontelWilliams) arriving at a political rally for a Senate candidate Bill Layton, who is apparently an ex-SEAL. However, even after a cordial welcome, Lt Lt. Rivers goes up to Layton and rips his the candidate's SEAL insignia pin off, claiming he’s Layton is not a fake.SEAL. The two men then engage in fisticuffs.
Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Harm is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Rivers then ropes Harm in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman- -- by taking out a hit on Harm.
Meanwhile, a senator approaches Admiral Chegwidden to nominate him for a federal judgeship- -- an opportunity that entices the admiral. However, political machinations may cause him to reconsider.
Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Harm is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Rivers then ropes Harm in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman
Meanwhile, a senator approaches Admiral Chegwidden to nominate him for a federal judgeship
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* PhonyVeteran: Bill Layton, according to Rivers.
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* InsigniaRipOffRitual: Rivers yanks the SEAL trident off of Layton's jacket, loudly proclaiming that he's a phony.
* NoTrueScotsman: At one point, Rivers asks who the other members of Layton's SEAL team were. Layton stammers it was a long time ago, but Rivers angrily refutes that a ''real'' SEAL would never forget the names of his comrades.
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* RetiredBadass: Two retired SEALs help Lt Rivers in exposing fake SEALs and now help him find the hitman.
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* RetiredBadass: Two retired SEALs [=SEALs=] help Lt Rivers in exposing fake SEALs [=SEALs=] and now help him find the hitman.
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* RetiredBadass: Two retired SEALs help Lt Rivers in exposing fake SEALs and now help him find the hitman.
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* PennyAmongDiamonds: Admiral Chegwidden remarks that he wouldn’t exactly fit in with all the other federal judges if appointed since they all “came from deep carpet law firms” while he as a former Navy SEAL came from a [[UsefulNotes/TheVietnamWar “deep carpet jungle”]]
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* AFoolForAClient: Rivers insists on defending himself, and as expected, makes some horrendous blunders. However, once he gets damning information about Bill Layton’s Navy Cross citation, he very effectively tears the guy apart on the stand.
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* MilesGlorissus: Bill Layton never was a SEAL, nor did he actually do the things he claimed to have done for that Navy Cross.
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* MilesGlorissus: MilesGloriosus: Bill Layton never was a SEAL, nor did he actually do the things he claimed to have done for that Navy Cross.
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* MilesGlorisus: Bill Layton never was a SEAL, nor did he actually do the things he claimed to have done for that Navy Cross.
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* MilesGlorisus: MilesGlorissus: Bill Layton never was a SEAL, nor did he actually do the things he claimed to have done for that Navy Cross.
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This episode of Series/{{JAG}} begins with [[Creator/MontelWilliams Lt Curtis Rivers]] arriving at a political rally for a Senate candidate Bill Layton, who is apparently an ex-SEAL. However, even after a cordial welcome, Lt Rivers goes up to Layton and rips his SEAL insignia pin off, claiming he’s a fake. The two men then engage in fisticuffs.
Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Harm is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Rivers then ropes Harm in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman - by taking out a hit on Harm.
Meanwhile, a senator approaches Admiral Chegwidden to nominate him for a federal judgeship - an opportunity that entices the admiral. However, political machinations may cause him to reconsider.
! Tropes found here are
* MilesGlorisus: Bill Layton never was a SEAL, nor did he actually do the things he claimed to have done for that Navy Cross.
* SoldiersAtTheRear: Bill Layton was in Public Affairs in Saigon, a comfortable desk job. He made an exact copy of someone else’s Navy Cross citation to get himself awarded one as well.
Because Bill Layton did win a Navy Cross in Vietnam, Rivers is CourtMartialed for assault. Harm is assigned to defend him, but Rivers [[AFoolForAClient insists on defending himself]]. Rivers then ropes Harm in to assisting in the exposure and apprehension of another fake SEAL turned hitman - by taking out a hit on Harm.
Meanwhile, a senator approaches Admiral Chegwidden to nominate him for a federal judgeship - an opportunity that entices the admiral. However, political machinations may cause him to reconsider.
! Tropes found here are
* MilesGlorisus: Bill Layton never was a SEAL, nor did he actually do the things he claimed to have done for that Navy Cross.
* SoldiersAtTheRear: Bill Layton was in Public Affairs in Saigon, a comfortable desk job. He made an exact copy of someone else’s Navy Cross citation to get himself awarded one as well.
