Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ArtisticLicenseHistory: Acknowledged in the author’s notes that the fic incarnation of John Mott is married at the time of the Delaware crossing, but his real-life self wasn’t.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Don't pothole in quotes.
Changed line(s) 10,11 (click to see context) from:
'''Laurens:''' I wouldn’t know. Maybe it’s in the [[{{Seer}} job description]], being a bit mad?
* TitledAfterTheSong: "Right Hand Man" from the musical ''Hamilton''.
* TitledAfterTheSong: "Right Hand Man" from the musical ''Hamilton''.
to:
'''Laurens:''' I wouldn’t know. Maybe it’s in the [[{{Seer}} job description]], description, being a bit mad?
* TitledAfterTheSong: "Right Hand Man" from the musical''Hamilton''.''Hamilton''.
----
* TitledAfterTheSong: "Right Hand Man" from the musical
----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 4 (click to see context) from:
* ContentWarnings: There’s one at the very start of the chapter for alcohol mention and use in the second and third sections of the chapter.
to:
* ContentWarnings: There’s one at before the very start of the chapter for alcohol mention and use in the second and third sections of the chapter.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 4 (click to see context) from:
* ContentWarnings: There’s one at the very start of the chapter for alcohol mention and use in the second and third sections.
to:
* ContentWarnings: There’s one at the very start of the chapter for alcohol mention and use in the second and third sections.sections of the chapter.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ContentWarnings: There’s one at the very start of the chapter for alcohol mention and use in the second and third sections.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* EntendreFailure: Aaron offers to tutor Lafayette in English. Lafayette replies saying “I would very gladly accept your offer of…private lessons,” meaning he’s interested in sex with Aaron. Aaron doesn’t realize that and starts talking about lesson plans and dictionaries.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
* BilingualBackfire: Lafayette and Alexander are talking about Aaron in French, not knowing he speaks French until he responds to them in French himself. [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] since they're his friends and weren't trash-talking him.
to:
* BilingualBackfire: Lafayette and Alexander are talking about Aaron in French, not knowing he speaks French until he responds to them in French himself. [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] since they're his friends and weren't trash-talking him.him, and [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] since he didn’t tell either of them he spoke French “so that he could catch [them] doing precisely this.“
* DrunkenSong: Aaron usually doesn’t drink. He gets drunk in this chapter, and his singing a drinking song with his new friends is used to emphasize that.
* DrunkenSong: Aaron usually doesn’t drink. He gets drunk in this chapter, and his singing a drinking song with his new friends is used to emphasize that.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 4 (click to see context) from:
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Following the convention of naming every chapter title after a ''Hamilton'' lyric, this chapter takes its title from the lyrics “I'm gonna need a right-hand man” and "Here comes the general and his right hand man." Those lyrics also TitleDrop the song from which they come from, "Right Hand Man."
to:
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Following the convention of naming every chapter title after a ''Hamilton'' lyric, this chapter takes its title from the lyrics “I'm gonna need a right-hand man” and and/or "Here comes the general and his right hand man." Those lyrics also TitleDrop the song from which they come from, "Right Hand Man."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AllLowercaseLetters: Like every other chapter title of this fic, this chapter's title is in all lowercase letters.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Following the convention of naming every chapter title after a ''Hamilton'' lyric, this chapter takes its title from the lyric “I'm gonna need a right-hand man” and "Here comes the general and his right hand man" from the [[TitleDrop song whose title is also "Right Hand Man."]]
to:
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Following the convention of naming every chapter title after a ''Hamilton'' lyric, this chapter takes its title from the lyric lyrics “I'm gonna need a right-hand man” and "Here comes the general and his right hand man" man." Those lyrics also TitleDrop the song from the [[TitleDrop song whose title is also which they come from, "Right Hand Man."]]"
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6 (click to see context) from:
'''Laurens:''' I wouldn’t know. Maybe it’s in the [[{Seer} job description]], being a bit mad?
to:
'''Laurens:''' I wouldn’t know. Maybe it’s in the [[{Seer} [[{{Seer}} job description]], being a bit mad?
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
!! "right-hand man" contains examples of:
* BilingualBackfire: Lafayette and Alexander are talking about Aaron in French, not knowing he speaks French until he responds to them in French himself. [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] since they're his friends and weren't trash-talking him.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Following the convention of naming every chapter title after a ''Hamilton'' lyric, this chapter takes its title from the lyric “I'm gonna need a right-hand man” and "Here comes the general and his right hand man" from the [[TitleDrop song whose title is also "Right Hand Man."]]
* MadOracle: Discussed.
-->'''Aaron:''' Does that make me mad? Mourning a woman who hasn’t even been born?\\
'''Laurens:''' I wouldn’t know. Maybe it’s in the [[{Seer} job description]], being a bit mad?
* TitledAfterTheSong: "Right Hand Man" from the musical ''Hamilton''.
* BilingualBackfire: Lafayette and Alexander are talking about Aaron in French, not knowing he speaks French until he responds to them in French himself. [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] since they're his friends and weren't trash-talking him.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Following the convention of naming every chapter title after a ''Hamilton'' lyric, this chapter takes its title from the lyric “I'm gonna need a right-hand man” and "Here comes the general and his right hand man" from the [[TitleDrop song whose title is also "Right Hand Man."]]
* MadOracle: Discussed.
-->'''Aaron:''' Does that make me mad? Mourning a woman who hasn’t even been born?\\
'''Laurens:''' I wouldn’t know. Maybe it’s in the [[{Seer} job description]], being a bit mad?
* TitledAfterTheSong: "Right Hand Man" from the musical ''Hamilton''.
