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* AsYouKnow: Roger and Lyra's opening conversation regarding what their daemon's will settle as is almost certainly one they would have had to have had multiple times before.
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* AsYouKnow: Roger and Lyra's opening conversation regarding what their daemon's daemons will settle as is almost certainly one they would have had to have had multiple times before.
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** Asriel shatters the decanter of poisoned wine after Lyra warns him of it's poison, then tells the poisoner to his face that he broke it by accident. His expression the whole time dares the poisoner to contradict him.
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** Asriel shatters the decanter of poisoned wine after Lyra warns him of it's its poison, then tells the poisoner to his face that he broke it by accident. His expression the whole time dares the poisoner to contradict him.
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* MundaneUtility: For the audience. The inside of the Airship Lyra and Mrs. Coulter take at the end. The audience is probably expecting something ritzy and posh, in line with Mrs. Coulter's sensibilities, or something steampunky like the cargo hold of Asriel's private airship. In actuality it looks like nothing so much as a comfortable subway car.
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* MundaneUtility: For the audience. The inside of the Airship Lyra and Mrs. Coulter take at the end. The audience is probably expecting something ritzy and posh, in line with Mrs. Coulter's sensibilities, or something steampunky like the cargo hold of Asriel's private airship. In actuality fact it looks like nothing so much as a comfortable subway car.
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* AdultFear: Large scale. John Faa and Fader Coram report to Tony and Benjamin that the Gobblers have taken children from six different communities. Ma Costa later breaks down privately with Tony when it's clear Billy isn't coming back.
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* InvasionOfTheBabySnatchers: Large scale. John Faa and Fader Coram report to Tony and Benjamin that the Gobblers have taken children from six different communities. Ma Costa later breaks down privately with Tony when it's clear Billy isn't coming back.
