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* NakedPeopleAreFunny: Elan's InsaneTrollLogic leads him to conclude that if more armor makes you less stealthy, less clothes makes you more stealthy...and no clothes makes you invisible!
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* UnreliableNarrator: Hilgya paints her arranged marriage like a torture, but the flashback panels shows her husband doing everything he could to make her happy.
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* BlandNameProduct: In the intro to the book, where they can't say the real name of [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons the game]] for trademark reasons.
-->'''Player 1''': Let's play Demons & Delves.
-->'''Player 2''': No, let's play Dwarves & Donjons.
-->'''Player 3''': I prefer Drakes & Daggers.
-->'''Player 1''': Let's play Demons & Delves.
-->'''Player 2''': No, let's play Dwarves & Donjons.
-->'''Player 3''': I prefer Drakes & Daggers.
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* OutrunTheFireball: Invoked by Elan, [[RuleOfDrama for the sake of drama.drama]].
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* DramaticIrony: When Elan points out the Order's accomplishments (defeating Xykon, capturing Nale, destroying the gate), the audience sees panels (Xykon shown to be alive, Nale escaping prison, and the destruction of the gate resulting in someone hunting down the Order) which shows that their accomplishments were AllForNothing.
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* SelfDestructMechanism: [[InventionalWisdom For some mysterious reason]], Dorukan had one in his dungeon. Elan ends up activating it and destroying the gate.
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We join the Order of the Stick, a band of adventurers fighting through a dungeon. Their members include Roy Greenhilt (dark-skinned human fighter), Haley Starshine (greedy human rogue), Elan (ditzy human bard), Vaarsuvius (arrogant elf wizard), Durkon Thundershield (stalwart dwarf cleric), and Belkar Bitterleaf (evil hafling ranger).
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We join the Order of the Stick, a band of adventurers fighting through a dungeon. Their members include Roy Greenhilt (dark-skinned and sarcastic human fighter), Haley Starshine (greedy human rogue), Elan (ditzy human bard), Vaarsuvius (arrogant elf wizard), Durkon Thundershield (stalwart dwarf cleric), and Belkar Bitterleaf (evil hafling halfling ranger).
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The group splits apart to find four elemental sigils that protect the talisman. However, the Linear Guild secretly slays or defeats some sylphs that were guarding the sigils. The sigils are all activated, causing a door to appear leading to the talisman room, which is a central platform surrounded by a pit filled with old D&D monsters that the talisman controls. Here, the Linear Guild betrays the Order, revealing they were working with Xykon. They attempt to escape with the talisman, leaving the Order to get killed by the monsters. However, Roy figures out what his father meant, and has Haley destroy the talisman with a well placed arrow. After that, the Linear Guild and the Order battle. The Order wins (with some help from the lawyers).
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The group splits apart to find four three elemental sigils that protect the talisman. However, the Linear Guild secretly slays or defeats some sylphs that were guarding the sigils. The sigils are all activated, causing a door to appear leading to the talisman room, which is a central platform surrounded by a pit filled with old D&D monsters that the talisman controls. Here, the Linear Guild betrays the Order, revealing they were working with Xykon. They attempt to escape with the talisman, leaving the Order to get killed by the monsters. However, Roy figures out what his father meant, and has Haley destroy the talisman with a well placed arrow. After that, the Linear Guild and the Order battle. The Order wins (with some help from the lawyers).
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However, Xykon, being a lich, survives, as his chief minion Redcloak had his [[SoulJar phylactery]]. Redcloak escapes with Xykon and the MITD, as the Order collects the treasures left behind. Elan accidentally sets off a self-destruct rune, forcing the Order to flee the dungeon as well. The dungeon and the gate inside are both destroyed, but the Order makes it out intact. The arc ends with cutaway panels indicating that the Linear Guild has escaped, and someone is after whomever destroyed the gate.
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However, Xykon, being a lich, survives, as his chief minion Redcloak had his [[SoulJar phylactery]]. Redcloak escapes with Xykon and the MITD, as the Order collects the treasures left behind. Elan accidentally sets off a self-destruct rune, forcing the Order to flee the dungeon as well. The dungeon and the gate inside are both destroyed, but the Order makes it out intact. The arc ends with cutaway panels indicating that the Linear Guild has escaped, escaped prison, and someone is after whomever destroyed the gate.
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* OutrunTheFireball: invoked Invoked by Elan, for the sake of drama.
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The Order then frees one of the defeated sylphs, Celia, who reveals that she worked for the wizard Dorukan, who built the dungeon. Celia then takes the captured Linear Guild members away, while letting the Order use the employee stairs to get to Xykon. However, the Order forgets Durkon, who is found by the Linear Guild's cleric Hilgya. She heals Durkon, and the two set off to find the Order. Meanwhile, Elan decides he will be the team cleric, calling on the god Banjo. Durkon falls for and sleeps with Hilgya, but breaks up with her after she reveals her own infidelity to her husband. Durkon then rejoins the Order.
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The Order then frees one of the defeated sylphs, Celia, who reveals that she worked for the wizard Dorukan, who built the dungeon. Celia then takes the captured Linear Guild members away, while letting the Order use the employee stairs to get to Xykon. However, the Order forgets the injured Durkon, who is found by the Linear Guild's cleric Hilgya. She heals Durkon, and the two set off to find the Order. Meanwhile, Elan decides he will be the team cleric, calling on the god Banjo. Durkon falls for and sleeps with Hilgya, but breaks up with her after she reveals her own infidelity to her husband. Durkon then rejoins the Order.
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The Order then frees one of the defeated sylphs, Celia, who reveals that she worked for the wizard Dorukan, who build the dungeon. Celia then takes the captured Linear Guild members away, while letting the Order use the employee stairs to get to Xykon. However, the Order forgets Durkon, who is found by the Linear Guild's cleric Hilgya. She heals Durkon, and the two set off to find the Order. Meanwhile, Elan decides he will be the team cleric, calling on the god Banjo. Durkon falls for and sleeps with Hilgya, but breaks up with her after she reveals her own infidelity to her husband. Durkon then rejoins the Order.
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The Order then frees one of the defeated sylphs, Celia, who reveals that she worked for the wizard Dorukan, who build built the dungeon. Celia then takes the captured Linear Guild members away, while letting the Order use the employee stairs to get to Xykon. However, the Order forgets Durkon, who is found by the Linear Guild's cleric Hilgya. She heals Durkon, and the two set off to find the Order. Meanwhile, Elan decides he will be the team cleric, calling on the god Banjo. Durkon falls for and sleeps with Hilgya, but breaks up with her after she reveals her own infidelity to her husband. Durkon then rejoins the Order.
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However, Xykon, being a lich, survives, as his chief minion Redcloak had his [[SoulJar phylactery]]. Redcloak escapes with Xykon and the MITD, as the Order collects the treasures left behind. Elan accidentally sets off a self-destruct rune, forcing the Order to flee the dungeon as well. The dungeon and the gate inside are both destroyed, but the Order makes it out intact. The arc ends with cutaway panels indicating that the Linear Guild has escaped, and someone is after whoever destroyed the gate.
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However, Xykon, being a lich, survives, as his chief minion Redcloak had his [[SoulJar phylactery]]. Redcloak escapes with Xykon and the MITD, as the Order collects the treasures left behind. Elan accidentally sets off a self-destruct rune, forcing the Order to flee the dungeon as well. The dungeon and the gate inside are both destroyed, but the Order makes it out intact. The arc ends with cutaway panels indicating that the Linear Guild has escaped, and someone is after whoever whomever destroyed the gate.
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We join the Order of rhe the Stick, a band of adventurers fighting through a dungeon. Their members include Roy Greenhilt (dark-skinned human fighter), Haley Starshine (greedy human rogue), Elan (ditzy human bard), Vaarsuvius (arrogant elf wizard), Durkon Thundershield (stalwart dwarf cleric), and Belkar Bitterleaf (evil hafling ranger).
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The Order makes their way through the Dungeon of Dorukan, fighting their way through the legions of monsters and making numerous jokes on the rules of D&D,. Along the way they encounter their counterparts the Linear Guild, and afoul of Xykon's plan for a mysterious 'Gate' at the very bottom.
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After briefly splitting the group and fighting off some enemies, Vaarsuvius finds a magic belt of Gender Changing. Roy discards the belt, but Elan goes back to retrieve it. Eventually, they reveal that they are in the Dungeon of Dorukan,
Eventually, they find a treasure room, but Haley has already claimed almost all of it, and
The group splits apart to find four elemental sigils that protect the talisman. However, the Linear Guild secretly slays or defeats some sylphs that were guarding the sigils. The sigils are all activated, causing a door to appear leading to the talisman room, which is a central platform surrounded by a pit filled with old D&D monsters that the talisman controls. Here, the Linear Guild betrays the Order, revealing they were working with Xykon. They attempt to escape with the talisman, leaving the Order to get killed by the monsters. However, Roy figures out what his father meant, and
The Order then frees one of
The Order then finds a pair of friendly teenage goblins, who promise to take them to Xykon. Meanwhile, Xykon reveals his plan to have the Order unseal a magical gate of some kind. One of the goblins then kidnaps Haley, while the Order moves to confront Xykon and his army of goblins and zombies. Xykon then bluffs the Order into touching the gate. Elan tries to do it, only for
However, Xykon, being a lich, survives, as his chief minion Redcloak had his [[SoulJar phylactery]]. Redcloak escapes with Xykon and the MITD, as the Order collects the treasures left behind. Elan accidentally sets off a self-destruct rune, forcing the Order to flee the dungeon as well. The dungeon and the gate inside are both destroyed, but the Order makes it out intact. The arc ends with cutaway panels indicating that the Linear Guild has escaped, and someone is after whoever destroyed the gate.
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The Order makes their way through the Dungeon of Dorukan, fighting their way through the legions of monsters and making numerous jokes on the rules of D&D,. Along the way they encounter their counterparts the Linear Guild, and afoul of Xykon's plan for a mysterious 'Gate' at the very bottom.
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* CargoCult: When Durkon goes missing, Elan tries to become a cleric with his hand puppet Banjo the Clown as a god.
* KilledInMidSentence
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: When Xykon's body is destroyed, he instructs Redcloak and the Monster In The Darkness to flee, as they can continue their Plan elsewhere.
* OutrunTheFireball: invoked by Elan, for the sake of drama.
* UnwittingPawn: Nale tricks the Order into unlocking the wards protecting Dorukan's Amulet, coincidentally showing Xykon how to unlock Dorukan's Gate. Xykon almost tricks the Order into doing the same.
!!Tropes
* CargoCult: When Durkon goes missing, Elan tries to become a cleric with his hand puppet Banjo the Clown as a god.
* KilledInMidSentence
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: When Xykon's body is destroyed, he instructs Redcloak and the Monster In The Darkness to flee, as they can continue their Plan elsewhere.
* OutrunTheFireball: invoked by Elan, for the sake of drama.
* UnwittingPawn: Nale tricks the Order into unlocking the wards protecting Dorukan's Amulet, coincidentally showing Xykon how to unlock Dorukan's Gate. Xykon almost tricks the Order into doing the same.
