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* FauxHorrific: Most of the lady Crewmates hold an intervention for Crafty after he expresses interest in revisiting a childhood ''Sonic'' OC very seriously. They treat the matter with dead seriousness, being anguished, tearful, and desperate to dissuade Crafty from committing to his plan. In a reversal from the norm, Crafty remains relatively down-to-earth about the entire situation. There's no zany scheme attached to his recent desires; he just found the exercise to be a good way to see how far he's come as an artist. And when he's done with said exercise and presents the finished product to his friends, they come around to his side of the argument... Then, they fearfully dogpile him when he suggests revisiting his scrapped novel project from years ago.
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* FauxHorrific: Most of the lady Crewmates hold an intervention for Crafty after he expresses interest in revisiting a childhood ''Sonic'' OC very seriously.OC. They treat the matter with dead seriousness, being anguished, tearful, and desperate to dissuade Crafty from committing to his plan. In a reversal from the norm, Crafty remains relatively down-to-earth about the entire situation. There's no zany scheme attached to his recent desires; he just found the exercise to be a good way to see how far he's come as an artist. And when he's done with said exercise and presents the finished product to his friends, they come around to his side of the argument... Then, they fearfully dogpile him when he suggests revisiting his scrapped novel project from years ago.
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* FauxHorrific: Most of the lady Crewmates hold an intervention for Crafty after he expresses interest in revisiting a childhood ''Sonic'' OC very seriously. They treat the matter with dead seriousness, being anguished, tearful, and desperate to dissuade Crafty from committing to his plan. In a reversal from the norm, Crafty remains relatively down-to-earth about the entire situation. There's no zany scheme attached to his recent desires; he just found the exercise to be a good way to see how far he's come as an artist. And when he's done with said exercise and presents the finished product to his friends, they come around to his side of the argument... Then, they dogpile him when he suggests revisiting his scrapped novel project from years ago.
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* FauxHorrific: Most of the lady Crewmates hold an intervention for Crafty after he expresses interest in revisiting a childhood ''Sonic'' OC very seriously. They treat the matter with dead seriousness, being anguished, tearful, and desperate to dissuade Crafty from committing to his plan. In a reversal from the norm, Crafty remains relatively down-to-earth about the entire situation. There's no zany scheme attached to his recent desires; he just found the exercise to be a good way to see how far he's come as an artist. And when he's done with said exercise and presents the finished product to his friends, they come around to his side of the argument... Then, they fearfully dogpile him when he suggests revisiting his scrapped novel project from years ago.
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* FauxHorrific: The lady Crewmates (sans Stylene, who finds the entire situation extremely silly) take Crafty's sudden interest in a childhood ''Sonic'' OC very seriously, as though Crafty has an alcohol addiction. For once, ''Crafty'' looks like the reasonable one. While the ladies come around to his side on the issue at the end, they later dogpile him when he suggests revisiting his scrapped novel project from years ago.
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* FauxHorrific: The Most of the lady Crewmates (sans Stylene, who finds the entire situation extremely silly) take Crafty's sudden hold an intervention for Crafty after he expresses interest in revisiting a childhood ''Sonic'' OC very seriously, as though seriously. They treat the matter with dead seriousness, being anguished, tearful, and desperate to dissuade Crafty has an alcohol addiction. For once, ''Crafty'' looks like from committing to his plan. In a reversal from the reasonable one. While norm, Crafty remains relatively down-to-earth about the ladies entire situation. There's no zany scheme attached to his recent desires; he just found the exercise to be a good way to see how far he's come as an artist. And when he's done with said exercise and presents the finished product to his friends, they come around to his side on of the issue at the end, argument... Then, they later dogpile him when he suggests revisiting his scrapped novel project from years ago.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Hitenmitsuru and [=BubblingBroke=] show up in the first question's {{Cutaway Gag}}s, being the two people responsible for getting Crafty into ''D&D.'' Hiten would later go on to play as Osra in ''WebVideo/CrafDND's Champion's Challenge'' campaign. While not appearing in person during that campaign, Brooke is credited as the campaign advisor, giving Crafty pointers from behind the scenes.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Hitenmitsuru and [=BubblingBroke=] show up in the first question's {{Cutaway Gag}}s, being the two people responsible for getting Crafty into ''D&D.'' Hiten would later go on to play as Osra in ''WebVideo/CrafDND's Champion's Challenge'' campaign. While not appearing in person during that campaign, Brooke is credited as also contributes to the campaign advisor, giving Crafty pointers from behind the scenes.scenes, being an advisor for Crafty.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Hitenmitsuru and [=BubblingBroke=] show up in the first question's {{Cutaway Gag}}s, being the two people responsible for getting Crafty into ''D&D.'' Hiten would later go on to play as Osra in the ''WebVideo/CrafDND's The Champion's Challenge'' campaign. While not appearing in person during that campaign, Brooke is credited as the campaign advisor, giving Crafty pointers from behind the scenes.
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* OriginalCharacter: The subject for this episode's art segment is Aztok the Falcon, an old ''Sonic'' OC that Crafty designed when he was very young. Crafty seeks to redesign the character to see how far he's come as an artist. Aztok is notable for being an avian before the Babylon Rogues of ''Sonic Riders'' standardized how bird characters tend to look in the franchise.
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'''Knuckles:''' ''[Popping in from below]'' 'Prince of a floating island kingdom?' Pff-heh. How original.\\
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'''Knuckles:''' ''[Popping ''[popping in from below]'' 'Prince of a floating island kingdom?' Pff-heh. How original.\\
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'''Nurse:''' ... Well, then... ''You're just as dumb, then!\\
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'''Nurse:''' ... Well, then... ''You're just as dumb, then!\\then!''\\
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* BrutalHonesty: Knuckles wanders into the lab midway through the commentary. According to him, Messi let him inside, thinking he was a therapist who could treat Crafty's sudden interest in ''Sonic.'' He bluntly writes off Crafty's old OC idea as derivative and stupid; Crafty takes the remarks quite well--he shares the same opinion--but Nurse quickly shoots them down and chucks Knuckles back outside.
-->'''Crafty:''' All right, all right. Aztok the Falcon was my first character that I remember crafting. He was poorly written, considering I was like... ''twelve...'' But I was proud of him. I made him a bird because bird characters were never really made for ''Sonic'' [=OCs=]. And this was ''wayyy'' before ''Sonic Riders'' was a thing. So I kind of just went with it! His whole thing was that he was a prince of a kingdom on a floating island--\\
'''Knuckles:''' ''[Popping in from below]'' 'Prince of a floating island kingdom?' Pff-heh. How original.\\
'''Nurse:''' Hey... How did you get in here?\\
'''Knuckles:''' The slime girl let me in. She thought I was a... therapist or something?\\
'''Nurse:''' ''Damn it, Messi!'' Well, don't you shame twelve-year-old Crafty for using his imagination!\\
'''Knuckles:''' Hey, I'm not pointing any fingers...\\
'''Crafty:''' Hard to do when you're wearing mittens.\\
'''Knuckles:''' ... I'm just saying that your idea was dumb. And ''you're'' dumb.\\
'''Crafty:''' In hindsight, it ''was'' pretty stupid...\\
'''Nurse:''' Hey! That is ''not'' true. You had fun creating that character. And it mattered to you! So it's not dumb!\\
'''Knuckles:''' Nah. Pretty sure it's dumb.\\
'''Nurse:''' ... Well, then... ''You're just as dumb, then!\\
'''Knuckles:''' ''[quickly, but not energetically]'' Oh no--\\
''[A single punch from Nurse sends Knuckles sailing away; rings erupt from where he once stood.]''\\
'''Crafty:''' Nurse, he has a point, it's fine! It was a dumb character I made when I was twelve! Nothing to get heated over.\\
'''Nurse:''' I know, Doctor. But I just hate people--or echidnas--like that. There's no need to be mean when someone's trying to express themselves. I know I've been guilty of laughing at ''Sonic'' [=OCs=] before, but I actually think it's lovely that children have such a wonderful way to express themselves!\\
'''Crafty:''' You are too good for this world, Nurse. That is the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me about a doodle I made when I was a toddler.\\
'''Nurse:''' I guess Pepper's mannerisms are continuing to rub off on me, huhu~!
-->'''Crafty:''' All right, all right. Aztok the Falcon was my first character that I remember crafting. He was poorly written, considering I was like... ''twelve...'' But I was proud of him. I made him a bird because bird characters were never really made for ''Sonic'' [=OCs=]. And this was ''wayyy'' before ''Sonic Riders'' was a thing. So I kind of just went with it! His whole thing was that he was a prince of a kingdom on a floating island--\\
'''Knuckles:''' ''[Popping in from below]'' 'Prince of a floating island kingdom?' Pff-heh. How original.\\
'''Nurse:''' Hey... How did you get in here?\\
'''Knuckles:''' The slime girl let me in. She thought I was a... therapist or something?\\
'''Nurse:''' ''Damn it, Messi!'' Well, don't you shame twelve-year-old Crafty for using his imagination!\\
'''Knuckles:''' Hey, I'm not pointing any fingers...\\
'''Crafty:''' Hard to do when you're wearing mittens.\\
'''Knuckles:''' ... I'm just saying that your idea was dumb. And ''you're'' dumb.\\
'''Crafty:''' In hindsight, it ''was'' pretty stupid...\\
'''Nurse:''' Hey! That is ''not'' true. You had fun creating that character. And it mattered to you! So it's not dumb!\\
'''Knuckles:''' Nah. Pretty sure it's dumb.\\
'''Nurse:''' ... Well, then... ''You're just as dumb, then!\\
'''Knuckles:''' ''[quickly, but not energetically]'' Oh no--\\
''[A single punch from Nurse sends Knuckles sailing away; rings erupt from where he once stood.]''\\
'''Crafty:''' Nurse, he has a point, it's fine! It was a dumb character I made when I was twelve! Nothing to get heated over.\\
'''Nurse:''' I know, Doctor. But I just hate people--or echidnas--like that. There's no need to be mean when someone's trying to express themselves. I know I've been guilty of laughing at ''Sonic'' [=OCs=] before, but I actually think it's lovely that children have such a wonderful way to express themselves!\\
'''Crafty:''' You are too good for this world, Nurse. That is the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me about a doodle I made when I was a toddler.\\
'''Nurse:''' I guess Pepper's mannerisms are continuing to rub off on me, huhu~!
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: This is the first ''Top Ten Tub'' episode to count down some category's top ten ''worst''. Whereas they approach topics in previous episodes with a generally positive outlook, neither Crafty nor Messi hold back their issues with the ''Sonic'' characters on this list.
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: FormulaBreakingEpisode: This is the first ''Top Ten Tub'' episode to count down some category's top ten ''worst''. Whereas they approach topics in previous episodes with a generally positive outlook, neither Crafty nor Messi hold back their issues with the ''Sonic'' characters on this list.
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* 8: Silver the Hedgehog
* 7: Infinite
* 6: Charmy the Bee
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* 4: Chris Thorndyke
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This episode's questions for Crystelle are revealed on the following three cards:
# The Magician (Crafty's Dragon Die): "What tabletop games do Crafty and Co. like to play?"
# The High Priestess (Messi): "Has Messibelle had any unusual reactions to other chemicals? Not necessarily getting sick but other... weird side effects?"
# The Chariot (Screw): "What is the age difference between Nurse Worse and Screw?"
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Hitenmitsuru shows up in the first question's {{Cutaway Gag}}s as one of the people who got Crafty into ''D&D.'' She would later go on to play as Osra in the ''The Champion's Challenge'' campaign of ''[=CrafD&D=].''[=CrafD&D=],'' the ActualPlay spin-off of ''Dr. Crafty.''
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Hitenmitsuru shows up in the first question's {{Cutaway Gag}}s as one of the people who got Crafty into ''D&D.'' She would later go on to play as Osra in the ''The Champion's Challenge'' campaign of ''CrafD&D.''[=CrafD&D=].''
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: The first question of the episode asks if the Crafty Crew plays any tabletop games, to which Crystelle describes how Crafty got into ''Dungeons and Dragons.'' Afterwards, she announces that Crafty is producing another show surrounding his ''D&D'' campaigns: ''CrafD&D,'' whose intro plays in its entirety before Crystelle moves on to the next question. The new show started a bit over half a year after this episode was uploaded.
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: The first question of the episode asks if the Crafty Crew plays any tabletop games, to which Crystelle describes how Crafty got into ''Dungeons and Dragons.'' Afterwards, she announces that Crafty is producing another show surrounding his ''D&D'' campaigns: ''CrafD&D,'' ''[=CrafD&D=],'' whose intro plays in its entirety before Crystelle moves on to the next question. The new show started a bit over half a year after this episode was uploaded.
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Crystelle manages to recover from her capture in "Let's. Get. Metal," and despite her terror at what she has seen, Crystelle is glad to answer some more questions to return to a good headspace.
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Crystelle manages to recover from her capture in "Let's. Get. Metal," and despite her terror at what she has seen, Crystelle is glad to answer some more questions to return to a good headspace. She's also excited to announce the coming of a [[WebVideo/CrafDND spin-off show]] on the ''Dr. Crafty'' channel.
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: The first question of the episode asks if the Crafty Crew plays any tabletop games, to which Crystelle describes how Crafty got into ''Dungeons and Dragons.'' Afterwards, she announces that Crafty is producing another show surrounding his ''D&D'' campaigns: ''CrafD&D,'' whose intro plays in its entirety before Crystelle moves on to the next question. The new show started a bit over half a year after this episode was uploaded.
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'''Crystelle, taken aback:''' Oh...! Ohhh...! Y-you have an... actual question..... That's the most surprising thing about this poll.
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'''Mindstein, turned away from Metal in her chair:''' What, no 'Hello?' Not even a 'How are we this evening?'\\
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-->'''Duke:''' "Okay, Doc wants us to make sure the castle's safe, and that no bad guys gets in here!"\\
'''Scout:''' Like how we stopped all those robots?"\\
'''Duke:''' "Well, as one-off gag characters, our existence depends on whether or not we're included in the script, mostly reliant on my dumb but lovable persona, and your small and fiery demeanor playing into the structure of the episode."\\
'''Scout:''' "Quite astute of you, Duke!"\\
'''Duke:''' "No thanks, I'll have the salad."\\
(''Scout groans.'')
'''Scout:''' Like how we stopped all those robots?"\\
'''Duke:''' "Well, as one-off gag characters, our existence depends on whether or not we're included in the script, mostly reliant on my dumb but lovable persona, and your small and fiery demeanor playing into the structure of the episode."\\
'''Scout:''' "Quite astute of you, Duke!"\\
'''Duke:''' "No thanks, I'll have the salad."\\
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'''Scout:'''"Quite Quite astute of you, Duke!"\\
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'''Duke:'''"No No thanks, I'll have the salad."\\
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-->'''Crafty:''' "Nurse, you're lucky I already sent out the messages to people before you did that, or else I would have been very mad."\\
(''Crafty casually sips from his coffee cup.'')\\
'''Nurse:''' "You don't know what felony you just committed!"
(''Crafty casually sips from his coffee cup.'')\\
'''Nurse:''' "You don't know what felony you just committed!"
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-->'''Crafty:''' "Nurse, Nurse, you're lucky I already sent out the messages to people before you did that, or else I would have been very mad."\\
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--> '''Nurse:''' "So, Crafty. What's our plan? How on Earth are we going to handle this... ''Metal'' Crafty? He could shut down my motor functions almost instantly, and you don't have One For All anymore!"\\
'''Nurse and Crafty together:''' "Hmm..."\\
'''Crafty:''' "Wait a tick. ''Your'' heart was affected by the EMP blast... but ''mine'' wasn't! Perhaps if we use our hearts together, we can circumvent the EMP blast?"\\
'''Nurse:''' "I don't know. Doesn't that seem a little... dangerous? But on the other hand, we don't exactly have a bunch of options to choose from..."\\
(''By the time Nurse finishes speaking, Crafty has slowly made his way over to her side, with a warm grin across his face.'')\\
'''Crafty:''' "Nurse... No matter what happens, this 'donut dork' is going to be there for you. Right next to you. Always."\\
(''The duo's hearts suddenly start to glow their respective colors, and Nurse coos.'')
'''Nurse and Crafty together:''' "Hmm..."\\
'''Crafty:''' "Wait a tick. ''Your'' heart was affected by the EMP blast... but ''mine'' wasn't! Perhaps if we use our hearts together, we can circumvent the EMP blast?"\\
'''Nurse:''' "I don't know. Doesn't that seem a little... dangerous? But on the other hand, we don't exactly have a bunch of options to choose from..."\\
(''By the time Nurse finishes speaking, Crafty has slowly made his way over to her side, with a warm grin across his face.'')\\
'''Crafty:''' "Nurse... No matter what happens, this 'donut dork' is going to be there for you. Right next to you. Always."\\
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'''Crafty:''' "WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?!?!"\\
'''Nurse:''' "AHHH!! I don't know! Crafty, look!!"\\
(''Staring back at the duo is a gigantic,'' '''''crazed''''' ''set of eyes.'')\\
'''Nurse:''' "Wh-WHAT IS THAT?!"\\
(''One by one, the creature reaches their many massive, skeletal hands out from the darkness, grasping the edges of the void. Their voice echoes throughout the dimension.'')\\
'''Void Entity:''' "'''''The... end... REACH. THE END.'''''"\\
'''Crafty:''' "I don't think that makes things any better!!"\\
(''Having'' '''''five''''' ''hands anchoring them in place, the creature reaches its free, sixth hand for the duo.'')\\
'''Void Entity:''' "'''''THE... EVERYTHING. THE NOTHING!'''''"\\
(''Crafty and Nurse shut their eyes and brace themselves.'')\\
'''Crafty:''' "Hang on! I've got you Greta!"\\
'''Nurse:''' "No! I've got you, Colin!"\\
(''The two Crewmates scream in terror as the creature's hand gets closer. Right in the nick of time, Crystelle opens a portal into the dimension for the duo to exit through. Back in their world, Crafty and Nurse land safely--but hard--into Pepper. The creature, meanwhile, refuses to leave empty-handed and literally chokes the life out of Crystelle, who lets out a scream of anguish before her spirit and the creature vanish. Nothing is left but her now vacant crystal ball head.'')\\
'''Messi:''' "''Crystelle!!''"\\
(''Stylene immediately retrieves Crystelle's head and hurries away.'')\\
'''Stylene:''' "Quick! Let's get back into her Qloset before we lose her!"\\
'''Messi, closely following behind:''' "R-Right!"\\
(''The focus returns to Crafty and Nurse, who are resting against Pepper but still coming down from their panic.'')\\
'''Crafty:''' "Nurse...?"\\
'''Nurse:''' "Y-yes... Doctor?"\\
'''Crafty:''' "We can ''never...'' do that again."\\
'''Nurse:''' "... Understood."
'''Crafty:''' "WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?!?!"\\
'''Nurse:''' "AHHH!! I don't know! Crafty, look!!"\\
(''Staring back at the duo is a gigantic,'' '''''crazed''''' ''set of eyes.'')\\
'''Nurse:''' "Wh-WHAT IS THAT?!"\\
(''One by one, the creature reaches their many massive, skeletal hands out from the darkness, grasping the edges of the void. Their voice echoes throughout the dimension.'')\\
'''Void Entity:''' "'''''The... end... REACH. THE END.'''''"\\
'''Crafty:''' "I don't think that makes things any better!!"\\
(''Having'' '''''five''''' ''hands anchoring them in place, the creature reaches its free, sixth hand for the duo.'')\\
'''Void Entity:''' "'''''THE... EVERYTHING. THE NOTHING!'''''"\\
(''Crafty and Nurse shut their eyes and brace themselves.'')\\
'''Crafty:''' "Hang on! I've got you Greta!"\\
'''Nurse:''' "No! I've got you, Colin!"\\
(''The two Crewmates scream in terror as the creature's hand gets closer. Right in the nick of time, Crystelle opens a portal into the dimension for the duo to exit through. Back in their world, Crafty and Nurse land safely--but hard--into Pepper. The creature, meanwhile, refuses to leave empty-handed and literally chokes the life out of Crystelle, who lets out a scream of anguish before her spirit and the creature vanish. Nothing is left but her now vacant crystal ball head.'')\\
'''Messi:''' "''Crystelle!!''"\\
(''Stylene immediately retrieves Crystelle's head and hurries away.'')\\
'''Stylene:''' "Quick! Let's get back into her Qloset before we lose her!"\\
'''Messi, closely following behind:''' "R-Right!"\\
(''The focus returns to Crafty and Nurse, who are resting against Pepper but still coming down from their panic.'')\\
'''Crafty:''' "Nurse...?"\\
'''Nurse:''' "Y-yes... Doctor?"\\
'''Crafty:''' "We can ''never...'' do that again."\\
'''Nurse:''' "... Understood."
to:
'''Crafty:'''
'''Nurse:'''
(''Staring
''[Staring back at the duo is a gigantic,'' '''''crazed''''' ''set of eyes.
'''Nurse:'''
(''One
''[One by one, the creature reaches their many massive, skeletal hands out from the darkness, grasping the edges of the void. Their voice echoes throughout the dimension.
'''Void Entity:'''
'''Crafty:'''
(''Having''
''[Having'' '''''five''''' ''hands anchoring them in place, the creature reaches its free, sixth hand for the duo.
'''Void Entity:'''
(''Crafty
''[Crafty and Nurse shut their eyes and brace themselves.
'''Crafty:'''
'''Nurse:'''
(''The
''[The two Crewmates scream in terror as the creature's hand gets closer. Right in the nick of time, Crystelle opens a portal into the dimension for the duo to exit through. Back in their world, Crafty and Nurse land safely--but hard--into Pepper. The creature, meanwhile, refuses to leave empty-handed and literally chokes the life out of Crystelle, who lets out a scream of anguish before her spirit and the creature vanish. Nothing is left but her now vacant crystal ball head.
'''Messi:'''
(''Stylene
''[Stylene immediately retrieves Crystelle's head and hurries away.
'''Stylene:'''
'''Messi, closely following behind:''' "R-Right!"\\
(''The
'''Messi:''' R-Right!\\
''[Messi leaves with Stylne. The focus returns to Crafty and Nurse, who are resting against Pepper but still coming down from their panic.
'''Crafty:'''
'''Nurse:'''
'''Crafty:'''
'''Nurse:''' "...
'''Nurse:''' ... Understood.
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--->(''A beat-up Metal Crafty storms into Mindstein's office, glaring intently at her as he walks inside.'')\\
'''Metal:''' "Why? ''Why did you order me to retreat?!''"\\
'''Mindstein, turned away from Metal in her chair:''' "What, no 'Hello?' Not even a 'How are we this evening?'"\\
'''Metal:''' "Cut the faux pleasantries. What happened back there?! I had a counter to his queen piece! But I couldn't copy Crafty's ability... ''Explain this to me!''"\\
'''Mindstein:''' "[[BluntNo No]]."\\
'''Metal:''' "'No..?' WHAT DO YOU MEAN 'NO?!?!'"\\
(''Seething, Metal continues approaching.'')\\
'''Metal:''' "You constructed me for one purpose: to kill that monster! Who haunts me! And ''TAKE HIS HEART!'' A heart I can neither disable, ''nor'' replicate!"\\
(''Metal prepares to strike Mindstein, who is remarkably calm as he does.'')\\
'''Metal:''' "Now... Tell me how I kill him, or I--"\\
(''Mindstein hits a switch on a remote, causing tons of reruns of'' Dr. Crafty ''to play on her monitor simultaneously. The sight of them all causes Metal to seize up in fright.'')\\
'''Metal, falling to the floor:''' "''No! STOP! TURN IT OFF!'' '''''TURN IT OFF, DAMN YOU!!'''''"\\
(''Mindstein complies.'')\\
'''Mindstein:''' "You would do well to know your place, Metal. I've had my own creation turn on me once before... And I refuse to make that mistake again. I ''won't'' explain it--because I ''can't'' explain it. That fact alone is enough to be troubling to my plans...\\
(''Mindstein pauses to sigh.'')\\
'''Mindstein:''' "... I cannot continue to underestimate Crafty any longer. But it ''is'' fascinating! Two hearts were never supposed to exist. So to see two--a real and a replica--resonate and synchronize in such a way... This ''will'' require further research.\\
(''Mindstein makes her way past Metal towards the door.'')\\
'''Metal:''' "Where... Are you going?"\\
'''Mindstein:''' "I'm on a ''tight'' schedule--Business to run, your repairs to do, preparing the next stages of my master plan, details details. You know the deal. For now... I'll leave you with some... Home entertainment."\\
(''Mindstein locks her office with Metal inside. The'' Crafty ''reruns restart as Metal begins screaming intensely and continuously at them. Just as Mindstein vanishes from view, Screw appears from around another corner. She watches her mother leave before turning her attention to Metal's screaming from within the locked office...'')
'''Metal:''' "Why? ''Why did you order me to retreat?!''"\\
'''Mindstein, turned away from Metal in her chair:''' "What, no 'Hello?' Not even a 'How are we this evening?'"\\
'''Metal:''' "Cut the faux pleasantries. What happened back there?! I had a counter to his queen piece! But I couldn't copy Crafty's ability... ''Explain this to me!''"\\
'''Mindstein:''' "[[BluntNo No]]."\\
'''Metal:''' "'No..?' WHAT DO YOU MEAN 'NO?!?!'"\\
(''Seething, Metal continues approaching.'')\\
'''Metal:''' "You constructed me for one purpose: to kill that monster! Who haunts me! And ''TAKE HIS HEART!'' A heart I can neither disable, ''nor'' replicate!"\\
(''Metal prepares to strike Mindstein, who is remarkably calm as he does.'')\\
'''Metal:''' "Now... Tell me how I kill him, or I--"\\
(''Mindstein hits a switch on a remote, causing tons of reruns of'' Dr. Crafty ''to play on her monitor simultaneously. The sight of them all causes Metal to seize up in fright.'')\\
'''Metal, falling to the floor:''' "''No! STOP! TURN IT OFF!'' '''''TURN IT OFF, DAMN YOU!!'''''"\\
(''Mindstein complies.'')\\
'''Mindstein:''' "You would do well to know your place, Metal. I've had my own creation turn on me once before... And I refuse to make that mistake again. I ''won't'' explain it--because I ''can't'' explain it. That fact alone is enough to be troubling to my plans...\\
(''Mindstein pauses to sigh.'')\\
'''Mindstein:''' "... I cannot continue to underestimate Crafty any longer. But it ''is'' fascinating! Two hearts were never supposed to exist. So to see two--a real and a replica--resonate and synchronize in such a way... This ''will'' require further research.\\
(''Mindstein makes her way past Metal towards the door.'')\\
'''Metal:''' "Where... Are you going?"\\
'''Mindstein:''' "I'm on a ''tight'' schedule--Business to run, your repairs to do, preparing the next stages of my master plan, details details. You know the deal. For now... I'll leave you with some... Home entertainment."\\
(''Mindstein locks her office with Metal inside. The'' Crafty ''reruns restart as Metal begins screaming intensely and continuously at them. Just as Mindstein vanishes from view, Screw appears from around another corner. She watches her mother leave before turning her attention to Metal's screaming from within the locked office...'')
to:
'''Metal:'''
'''Mindstein, turned away from Metal in her chair:'''
'''Metal:'''
'''Mindstein:'''
'''Metal:'''
(''Seething,
''[Seething, Metal continues approaching.
'''Metal:'''
(''Metal
''[Metal prepares to strike Mindstein, who is remarkably calm as he does.
'''Metal:'''
(''Mindstein
''[Mindstein hits a switch on a remote, causing tons of reruns of'' Dr. Crafty ''to play on her monitor simultaneously. The sight of them all causes Metal to seize up in
'''Metal, falling
'''Metal:''' ''No! STOP! TURN IT OFF!'' '''''TURN IT OFF, DAMN
(''Mindstein
''[Mindstein complies.
'''Mindstein:'''
'''Mindstein:''' "...
'''Mindstein:''' ... I cannot continue to underestimate Crafty any longer. But it ''is'' fascinating! Two hearts were never supposed to exist. So to see two--a real and a replica--resonate and synchronize in such a way... This ''will'' require further research.\\
'''Metal:'''
'''Mindstein:'''
(''Mindstein
''[Mindstein locks her office with Metal inside. The'' Crafty ''reruns restart as Metal begins screaming intensely and continuously at them. Just as Mindstein vanishes from view, Screw appears from around another corner. She watches her mother leave before turning her attention to Metal's screaming from within the locked office...
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-->'''Crystelle:''' "Now, for our second card for tonight..."\\
(''Crystelle draws Messi's card, the High Priestess.'')\\
'''Crystelle:''' "Ooohhhh... All right, ehm... I'll prep the censors for this one."\\
'''The Question:''' "Has Messibelle had any unusual reactions to other chemicals? Not necessarily getting sick but other... weird side effects?"\\
'''Crystelle, taken aback:''' "Oh...! Ohhh...! Y-you have an... actual question..... That's the most surprising thing about this poll."
(''Crystelle draws Messi's card, the High Priestess.'')\\
'''Crystelle:''' "Ooohhhh... All right, ehm... I'll prep the censors for this one."\\
'''The Question:''' "Has Messibelle had any unusual reactions to other chemicals? Not necessarily getting sick but other... weird side effects?"\\
'''Crystelle, taken aback:''' "Oh...! Ohhh...! Y-you have an... actual question..... That's the most surprising thing about this poll."
to:
-->'''Crystelle:''' "Now, Now, for our second card for tonight..."\\
(''Crystelle\\
''[Crystelle draws Messi's card, the High Priestess.'')\\
]''\\
'''Crystelle:'''"Ooohhhh...Ooohhhh... All right, ehm... I'll prep the censors for this one."\\
\\
'''The Question:'''"Has Has Messibelle had any unusual reactions to other chemicals? Not necessarily getting sick but other... weird side effects?"\\
effects?\\
'''Crystelle, taken aback:'''"Oh...Oh...! Ohhh...! Y-you have an... actual question..... That's the most surprising thing about this poll."
(''Crystelle
''[Crystelle draws Messi's card, the High Priestess.
'''Crystelle:'''
'''The Question:'''
'''Crystelle, taken aback:'''
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(''Having'' '''''five''''' ''hands anchoring them in place, the creature reaches its free hand for the duo.'')\\
to:
(''Having'' '''''five''''' ''hands anchoring them in place, the creature reaches its free free, sixth hand for the duo.'')\\
