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* TheBusCameBack: After 2 cases and starting the last district, Jones comes back from his undefined leave of absence.
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* TheBusCameBack: After 2 cases and starting the last district, Jones comes back from his undefined indefinite leave of absence.
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* HesBack: Since Gloria cannot participate in the case due to a conflict of interest and her being emotionally distraught, Parker makes the decision to get Jones back from his undefined leave, which apparently doesn't hesitate, despite clearly not looking physically (nor emotionally) ready to come back, saying that even when he's not okay, the team needs him at the field, rather than at home.
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* HesBack: Since Gloria cannot participate in the case due to a conflict of interest and her being emotionally distraught, Parker makes the decision to get Jones back from his undefined indefinite leave, which apparently doesn't hesitate, despite clearly not looking physically (nor emotionally) ready to come back, saying that even when that while he's not okay, the team needs him at the field, rather than at home.
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* TheBusCameBack: After 2 cases and starting the last district, Jones comes back from his undefined leave of absence.
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* HesBack: Since Gloria cannot participate in the case due to a conflict of interest and her being emotionally distraught, Parker makes the decision to get Jones back from his undefined leave, which apparently he doesn't hesitate, despite clearly not looking physically (nor emotionally) ready to come back.
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* HesBack: Since Gloria cannot participate in the case due to a conflict of interest and her being emotionally distraught, Parker makes the decision to get Jones back from his undefined leave, which apparently he doesn't hesitate, despite clearly not looking physically (nor emotionally) ready to come back.back, saying that even when he's not okay, the team needs him at the field, rather than at home.
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* MissingChild: Gloria is on edge since the kidnapping of her son, made even worse when Jake ends up dead. At one point, she even declares she'll be going full CowboyCop in finding him.
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* HesBack: Since Gloria cannot participate in the case due to a conflict of interest and her being emotionally distraught, Parker makes the decision to get Jones back from his undefined leave, which apparently he doesn't hesitate, despite clearly not looking physically (nor emotionally) ready to come back.
->'''Chief Parker:''' Anyway, Gloria, when we find something, Jones will be the one helping <Player> in the field. You're too close to the case!
->'''Gloria:''' Jones? He's on indefinite leave following Zoe's murder! He has enough to deal with!
->'''Jones (appearing):''' Well, I'm not going to say I'm alright, but... you guys need me here now.
* MissingChild: Gloria is on edge since the kidnapping of herson, son made even worse when Jake ends up dead. At one point, she even declares she'll be going full CowboyCop in finding him.
->'''Chief Parker:''' Anyway, Gloria, when we find something, Jones will be the one helping <Player> in the field. You're too close to the case!
->'''Gloria:''' Jones? He's on indefinite leave following Zoe's murder! He has enough to deal with!
->'''Jones (appearing):''' Well, I'm not going to say I'm alright, but... you guys need me here now.
* MissingChild: Gloria is on edge since the kidnapping of her
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* SceneryCensor: Jones lampshades how the shrubbery conveniently covers up a naked James Savage.
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* TragicKeepsake: At Carter's request, the player finds the last toy his father gave him.
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* TragicKeepsake: At Carter's request, the player finds the last toy his father gave him.him.
* UndyingLoyalty: Mandy turns out to be this for Mayor Warren, and was willing to help in the kidnapping of the Hayes family, none questions asked.
* UndyingLoyalty: Mandy turns out to be this for Mayor Warren, and was willing to help in the kidnapping of the Hayes family, none questions asked.
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[[caption-width-right:350: '''Gloria''': But not fast enough! I am going to take this investigation in my own hands!]]
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[[caption-width-right:350: '''Gloria''': But not fast enough! I am going to take this investigation in into my own hands!]]
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* SkinnyPeople: The reason why James ended up naked was because he went skinny dipping in the river prior to the van showing up.
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* SkinnyPeople: SkinnyDipping: The reason why James ended up naked was because he went skinny dipping in the river prior to the van showing up.
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* SkinnyPeople: The reason why James ended up naked was because he went skinny dipping in the river prior to the van showing up.
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* NakedPeopleAreFunny: Jones and the player character end up finding a pile of clothes next to the van that was used to transport Carter. They turn out to belong to James Savage, who shows up behind a bush, naked. James' sticker picture for this case is him standing behind the bush naked.
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Adult Fear is no longer a trope.
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* AdultFear: Gloria is deeply worried about Carter, mostly because she knows what it’s liked to be kidnapped
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Following the kidnapping of Carter and Jake Hayes, Jones is called back in to find them and the missing members of Ad Astra. To their horror though, the GPD finds Jake's shot dead and no signs of Carter.
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Following the kidnapping of Carter and Jake Hayes, Jones is called back in to find them and the missing members of Ad Astra. To their horror though, the GPD finds Jake's Jake shot dead and no signs of Carter.
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Following the kidnapping of Carter and Jake Hayes, Jones is called back in to find them and the missing members of Ad Astra. To their horror though, the GPD finds Jake's body, shot dead and no signs of Carter.
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Following the kidnapping of Carter and Jake Hayes, Jones is called back in to find them and the missing members of Ad Astra. To their horror though, the GPD finds Jake's body, shot dead and no signs of Carter.
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Adult Fear is a disambig, if I remember right.
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* AdultFear: Gloria is on edge since the kidnapping of her son, made even worse when Jake ends up dead. At one point, she even declares she'll be going full CowboyCop in finding him.
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* MissingChild: Gloria is on edge since the kidnapping of her son, made even worse when Jake ends up dead. At one point, she even declares she'll be going full CowboyCop in finding him.
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Following the kidnapping of Carter and Jake Hayes, Jones is called back in to find them and the missing members of Ad Astra. To their horror though, the GPD finds Jake's body with no sign of Carter.
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Following the kidnapping of Carter and Jake Hayes, Jones is called back in to find them and the missing members of Ad Astra. To their horror though, the GPD finds Jake's body with body, shot dead and no sign signs of Carter.
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* HarmfulToMinors: Carter watched his own father be shot in front of him.
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* HarmfulToMinors: Carter watched his own father be shot in front of him.
* TragicKeepsake: At Carter's request, the player finds the last toy his father gave him.
* TragicKeepsake: At Carter's request, the player finds the last toy his father gave him.
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Following the kidnapping of Carter and George Hayes, Jones is called back in to find them and the missing members of Ad Astra. To their horror though, the GPD finds George's body with no sign of Carter.
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Following the kidnapping of Carter and George Jake Hayes, Jones is called back in to find them and the missing members of Ad Astra. To their horror though, the GPD finds George's Jake's body with no sign of Carter.
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* AdultFear: Gloria is on edge since the kidnapping of her son, made even worse when George ends up dead. At one point, she even declares she'll be going full CowboyCop in finding him.
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* AdultFear: Gloria is on edge since the kidnapping of her son, made even worse when George Jake ends up dead. At one point, she even declares she'll be going full CowboyCop in finding him.
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[[caption-width-right:350: '''Gloria''': But not fast enough! I am going to take this investigation in my own hands!]]
Following the kidnapping of Carter and George Hayes, Jones is called back in to find them and the missing members of Ad Astra. To their horror though, the GPD finds George's body with no sign of Carter.
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* AdultFear: Gloria is on edge since the kidnapping of her son, made even worse when George ends up dead. At one point, she even declares she'll be going full CowboyCop in finding him.
* HarmfulToMinors: Carter watched his own father be shot in front of him.
Following the kidnapping of Carter and George Hayes, Jones is called back in to find them and the missing members of Ad Astra. To their horror though, the GPD finds George's body with no sign of Carter.
!Tropes:
* AdultFear: Gloria is on edge since the kidnapping of her son, made even worse when George ends up dead. At one point, she even declares she'll be going full CowboyCop in finding him.
* HarmfulToMinors: Carter watched his own father be shot in front of him.
