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* CharacterOverlap: Max Chambers is an original character made for the VideoGame/DieAnstalt fandom, and Dublin Hartell a [[{{Gijinka}} humanization]] of a canon character from the same. This makes sense if you keep in mind that [[HeAlsoDid the author also did]] Fanfic/APosseAdEsse.
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* CharacterOverlap: Max Chambers is an original character made for the VideoGame/DieAnstalt fandom, and Dublin Hartell a [[{{Gijinka}} humanization]] of a canon character from the same. This makes sense if you keep in mind that [[HeAlsoDid the author also did]] Fanfic/APosseAdEsse.''Fanfic/APosseAdEsse''.
* CrossReferencedTitles: All even-numbered episodes (bar the twentieth) use lyrics from {{Music/ABBA}}'s ''Lay All Your Love On Me''; all odd-numbered episodes (bar the first) use lyrics from Music/EmilieAutumn's ''Time for Tea''.
* CrossReferencedTitles: All even-numbered episodes (bar the twentieth) use lyrics from {{Music/ABBA}}'s ''Lay All Your Love On Me''; all odd-numbered episodes (bar the first) use lyrics from Music/EmilieAutumn's ''Time for Tea''.
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* TakingTheBullet: [[spoiler:Max for Annie in the finale. He doesn't die, but he ''does'' have the bullet stuck in his shoulder from then onwards.]]
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdnessEarlyInstallmentWeirdness: The writing/publishing style is very off-the-cuff and improvisational compared to its modern counterparts; hence, events like the [[{{Retcon}} retconned]] drowning of Max in Episode 6. There is also a much greater emphasis on physical evidence as opposed to simply contradicting alibis.
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* ISeeDeadPeople: Inverted - everyone can see and communicate with the ghosts of the victims ''except'' Max. Dialogue from Emmy suggests, and future such projects confirm, that Max is among a handful of anomalies in this regard.
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The Chambers MMBC is the first attempt at the [[Fanfic/MurderMysteryBacheloretChallenges Murder Mystery Bachelor Challenge]], at least under that banner. Run by socialjusticesimblr, it can be read from the beginning [[http://socialjusticesimblr.tumblr.com/tagged/chambers-MMBC/chrono here]].
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The Chambers MMBC is the first attempt at the a [[Fanfic/MurderMysteryBacheloretChallenges Murder Mystery Bachelor Challenge]], Challenge]] - is, in fact, the ''first'' of its kind, at least under that banner. Run by socialjusticesimblr, it can be read from the beginning [[http://socialjusticesimblr.tumblr.com/tagged/chambers-MMBC/chrono here]].
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Max Chambers has been quite unlucky in love for some time, flitting from partner to partner through (mostly) no fault of his own. A cold streak like this can only last for so long, and eventually he decides to go for the last resort of any eligible bachelor: hosting a bachelor challenge thereof! Unfortunately, one of the people who enters for him turns out to have a more potent fatal flaw than most, namely being willing to kill to win the day... or influenced into killing to win the day, depending on who you ask. To persevere and find love despite it all, Max, his best friend Dublin Hartell, and the percent of contestants who remain innocent must keep their wits up, their hearts closed, and their eyes ''very'' open indeed.
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* InteractiveNarrator: Rep, who serves as camera-person, event organizer and mastermind behind the murder.
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* InteractiveNarrator: Rep, who serves as camera-person, event organizer and mastermind behind the murder. Can overlap with LemonyNarrator depending on how involved it wants to get.
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* DeathByFallingOver: Variant. [[spoiler:Dub's is smashed into the wall, and the killing is deliberate, but it's just as swift.]]
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* DeathByFallingOver: Variant. [[spoiler:Dub's is deliberately smashed into the wall, and the killing is deliberate, but it's just as swift.]]
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* OneSteveLimit - averted, albeit with spelling differences: Charlie Fuentes and Charley Flynn.
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* TapOnTheHead: Variant. [[spoiler:Dub's is deliberately smashed into the wall, and the killing is deliberate, but it's just as swift.]]
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[[folder:Deaths and Survivors (spoilers)]]
# Clarisse Prevot - fire
# Emmy Gnubb - starvation
# June Dandelion - drowning
# Ollie Pond - electrocution
# Gregory Chiltington - eaten by cowplant
# Alexis Grovesnor - toxic jellybean
# [[AnyoneCanDie Dublin Hartell]] - head trauma
# Junior McCabe - falsely flagged for ranting about Death
# Nevaeh Lynx - adverse reaction to botched aging elixir
# Charley Flynn - being shoved off the roof
# Harrison Borders - stabbed in the stomach
# Charlie Fuentes, murderer
# Annie Kayse, winner
[[/folder]]
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# Clarisse Prevot - fire
# Emmy Gnubb - starvation
# June Dandelion - drowning
# Ollie Pond - electrocution
# Gregory Chiltington - eaten by cowplant
# Alexis Grovesnor - toxic jellybean
# [[AnyoneCanDie Dublin Hartell]] - head trauma
# Junior McCabe - falsely flagged for ranting about Death
# Nevaeh Lynx - adverse reaction to botched aging elixir
# Charley Flynn - being shoved off the roof
# Harrison Borders - stabbed in the stomach
# Charlie Fuentes, murderer
# Annie Kayse, winner
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* ArtisticLicenseEngineering: the time-delayed electromagnetic bomb in Episode Eight.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Max and Dub.
* NotTheFallThatKillsYou
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Clarisse Prevot.Prevot.
* WoundedGazelleGambit: [[spoiler:Charlie deliberately falls off the roof himself after pushing Charley off, in order to break his arm and make it look like he was a potential victim of the same case. Few bought it.]]
* WoundedGazelleGambit: [[spoiler:Charlie deliberately falls off the roof himself after pushing Charley off, in order to break his arm and make it look like he was a potential victim of the same case. Few bought it.]]
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* TheButlerDidIt: Averted with Gregory Chiltington.
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The Chambers MMBC is the first attempt at the Murder Mystery Bacheloret Challenge, at least under that banner. Run by socialjusticesimblr, it can be read from the beginning [[http://socialjusticesimblr.tumblr.com/tagged/chambers-MMBC/chrono here]].
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The Chambers MMBC is the first attempt at the [[Fanfic/MurderMysteryBacheloretChallenges Murder Mystery Bacheloret Challenge, Bachelor Challenge]], at least under that banner. Run by socialjusticesimblr, it can be read from the beginning [[http://socialjusticesimblr.tumblr.com/tagged/chambers-MMBC/chrono here]].
* AbortedArc: According to production notes, [[spoiler:the random person that cold-called Charlie in Episode 5 was meant to be connected to one of his old victims, and make more appearances within the story; however, [[WhatHappenedToTheMouse her presence was forgotten]] as the author got "more entrenched in his motivation".]]
* {{Callback}}: Just before Dublin enters the picture, Max calls him asking to talk, saying "I need to hear your voice". [[spoiler:Episode 15 has him repeat the need to Dub's grave.]]
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* MurderTheHypotenuse: [[spoiler:A platonic example. While Dub and Max are best friends rather than a couple, the murderer gets quite jealous of their extended interactions together...]]
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* TransTribulations: Discussed. Max expresses particular fear for Charlie early on, noting that his being a Hispanic trans man makes him an easier target. Charlie dismisses this, noting that he hasn't lived as long as he has without developing ways of defending himself. [[spoiler:Considering that he himself is the murderer of the piece, and it's implied that he's killed before using that justification, he's not lying.]]
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!! This MMBC provides examples of:
* AssholeVictim: Downplayed with Junior McCabe. He is mean-spirited, and frequently misgenders Charlie Fuentes, but it's hard to determine what is just part of his usual temperament and what is exacerbated by the stressful death-filled circumstances.
* CharacterOverlap: Max Chambers is an original character made for the VideoGame/DieAnstalt fandom, and Dublin Hartell a [[{{Gijinka}} humanization]] of a canon character from the same. This makes sense if you keep in mind that [[HeAlsoDid the author also did]] Fanfic/APosseAdEsse.
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness
* EyedScreen: In Episode 20, before the murderer reveal.
* FunnyForeigner: Annie Kayse, and to a lesser extent Nevaeh Lynx. Annie in particular has a running quirk about putting 'cafe' into sentences where it makes no sense in context.
* InteractiveNarrator: Rep, who serves as camera-person, event organizer and mastermind behind the murder.
* NonSpecificallyForeign: Annie Kayse again.
--> "I know you’re French - or Russian, or Swedish - it’s a little tough to tell, and you’ve never been very specific?"
* WeHardlyKnewYe: Clarisse Prevot.
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!! This MMBC provides examples of:
* AssholeVictim: Downplayed with Junior McCabe. He is mean-spirited, and frequently misgenders Charlie Fuentes, but it's hard to determine what is just part of his usual temperament and what is exacerbated by the stressful death-filled circumstances.
* CharacterOverlap: Max Chambers is an original character made for the VideoGame/DieAnstalt fandom, and Dublin Hartell a [[{{Gijinka}} humanization]] of a canon character from the same. This makes sense if you keep in mind that [[HeAlsoDid the author also did]] Fanfic/APosseAdEsse.
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness
* EyedScreen: In Episode 20, before the murderer reveal.
* FunnyForeigner: Annie Kayse, and to a lesser extent Nevaeh Lynx. Annie in particular has a running quirk about putting 'cafe' into sentences where it makes no sense in context.
* InteractiveNarrator: Rep, who serves as camera-person, event organizer and mastermind behind the murder.
* NonSpecificallyForeign: Annie Kayse again.
--> "I know you’re French - or Russian, or Swedish - it’s a little tough to tell, and you’ve never been very specific?"
* WeHardlyKnewYe: Clarisse Prevot.
