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* ActorAllusion: Joe guesses that Matt's previous job was a marketing director, which was (roughly) Creator/JonHamm's character's job on ''Series/MadMen''.
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* ActorAllusion: Joe guesses that Matt's previous job was as a marketing director, which was (roughly) Creator/JonHamm's character's job on ''Series/MadMen''.
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** Joe snaps after he learns he was not the father of Bethany's daughter. He ends up killing her father in his cabin.
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** Joe snaps after he learns he was is not the father of Bethany's daughter. He ends up killing her father in his cabin.
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* KarmaHoudini: The two cops who leave both Joe and especially his cookie in what amounts to hell don't suffer any consequence for their action.
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* KarmaHoudini: The two cops who leave both Joe and especially his cookie in what amounts to hell don't suffer any consequence for their action.actions.
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* NoMedicationForMe: Jennifer complains to Harry that she only managed to get through her last office Christmas party because she was on "drugs," making it seem she was on ecstasy or the like. Rather, she was on anti-psychotic medication to treat her schizophrenia, but by the time Harry meets her, she has stopped taking it due to thinking she doesn't "need that shit in shit in [her] system."
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* NoMedicationForMe: Jennifer complains to Harry that she only managed to get through her last office Christmas party because she was on "drugs," making it seem she was on ecstasy or the like. Rather, she was on anti-psychotic medication to treat her schizophrenia, but by the time Harry meets her, she has stopped taking it due to thinking she doesn't "need that shit in shit in [her] system."
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* RedHerring: A close-up is done of Bethany's father holding a knife as he tells Joe to leave his house. The viewer is led to believe that a fight occurs between him and Joe that leads to his death. Instead Joe, in a fit of rage, hits him on the head with a snow globe, which kills him.
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* RedHerring: A close-up is done of Bethany's father holding a knife as he tells Joe to leave his house. The viewer is led to believe that a fight occurs between him and Joe that which leads to his death. Instead Joe, in a fit of rage, hits him on the head with a snow globe, which kills him.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When Jennifer kills Harry, Matt and his group of pick up artists quickly disconnect and attempt to destroy all evidence of their involvement, it doesn't work.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When Jennifer kills Harry, Matt and his group of pick up pick-up artists quickly disconnect and attempt to destroy all evidence of their involvement, it doesn't work.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Most people appear to view cookies as a bunch of code rather than an intelligent being, and thus have no issue with subjecting them to virtual slavery or casually committing AndIMustScream levels of mental torture on them.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Most people appear to view cookies as a bunch of code rather than an intelligent being, beings, and thus have no issue with subjecting them to virtual slavery or casually committing AndIMustScream levels of mental torture on them.
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->''Well, I wish it could be Christmas everyday...\\
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->''Well, I wish it could be Christmas everyday...every day...\\
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* NoMedicationForMe: Jennifer complains to Harry that she only managed to get through her last office Christmas party because she was on "drugs," making it seem she was on ecstasy or the like. Rather, she was on anti-psychotic medication to treat her schizophrenia, but by the time Harry meets her, she has stopped taking it due to thinking she doesn't "need that shit in shit in [her] system."
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->'''Matt''': It's a job, not a jail.
->'''Joe''': Often one and the same thing.
->'''Joe''': Often one and the same thing.
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->'''Joe''':
'''Joe:''' Often one and the same thing.
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* EasyRoadToHell: What happens to Joe's cookie. While he ''did'' kill Bethany’s father, it was due to emotional distress at the time and he instantly regretted it. But even when the cops hear about this, they don't hesitate the slightest at giving him ''millions'' of years of isolation inside the cookie.
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* EasyRoadToHell: What happens to Joe's cookie. While he ''did'' kill Bethany’s Bethany's father, it was due to emotional distress at the time and he instantly regretted it. But even when the cops hear about this, they don't hesitate the slightest at giving him ''millions'' of years of isolation inside the cookie.
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-->'''Holder''': It means you're blocked.
-->'''Matt''': ...By who?
-->'''Holder''': By ''everyone''.
-->'''Matt''': ...By who?
-->'''Holder''': By ''everyone''.
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-->'''Matt''': ...
'''Matt:''' ...By
-->'''Holder''':
'''Holder:''' By ''everyone''.
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-->''Well, I wish it could be Christmas everyday...''\\
''When the kids start singing and the band begins to play...''
''When the kids start singing and the band begins to play...''
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''When
When the kids start singing and the band begins to play...''
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* EveryoneHasStandards: While Matt is running a shady business where he and a group of others watch each other have sex with unknowing women, he does have issues when the spectators start getting antsy over one of the women not taking her top off, and tells them to have some respect.
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* KarmicShunning: After getting another man to confess to his own crime, Matt is released but the office places him on the Sex Offenders' Register. This means that he is blocked by everyone in the country, unable to see them, and visible to them just as a silhouette (red instead of grey for typical blocked people, for added MarkOfShame points) ''for the rest of his life''. People are seen reacting with predictable fear and disgust as he walks among them.
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I think "This isn't an interrogation" is a fairly common figure of speech to discourage acting shy.
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*** As Matt strikes up a conversation with Joe, he [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial denies that it is an interrogation]].
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*** As Matt strikes up a conversation with Joe, he [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial denies tries to open him up into to talking by saying that it is this isn't an interrogation]].interrogation.
