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* PyrrhicVictory: The allied races manage to defend the sector, but they still lose two ships for each one they destroy.
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* PyrrhicVictory: Played with. The allied races manage to defend the sector, but they still lose two ships for each one they destroy.destroy - but in brutal honestly, against the Shadows far more advanced warships that is a genuinely impressive ratio to achieve. The fleet also achieves its strategic objective of forcing the Shadows to retreat and the unified fleet is proven as a combat effective weapon. As Sheridan put it; 'not great, but okay'.
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*SwissCheeseSecurity: Sheridan and his command crew have a great many people who would probably rather he (and they) ceased to exist. Including Earth, the Psi Corps and of course the Shadows. And you might think that when the later finally decide to deal with him, they would pull out some pretty incredible technology and abilities to sneak Anna in past layers of security, restricted access areas and close protection guards and Rangers to have a chat? Nope, she just shows up in an alien ship one night, docks, walks through customs with her own Earth identicard, takes a lift to Johns quarters and then lets herself in at the door to introduce herself to Delenn.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Franklin finds out the hard way that you shouldn't try to intervene in an in-progress crime, you're likely to wind up becoming just another victim yourself.
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* ShadowArchetype: Other!Franklin is Franklin's suppressed inner self
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* ShadowArchetype: Other!Franklin is Franklin's suppressed inner selfself.
* SnowGlobeOfInnocence: At the very end of the episode, Delenn is in Sheridan's quarters, watching him sleep. (It's a Minbari custom, part of their equivalent of getting engaged.) Delenn notices a snow globe on the table and picks it up to look at it. Just then the door slides open and a woman walks in.
-->'''Woman:''' Hello. You must be Delenn. I'm Anna Sheridan. John's wife.\\
''[The snow globe slips from Delenn's fingers in slow motion and shatters on the floor.]''
* SnowGlobeOfInnocence: At the very end of the episode, Delenn is in Sheridan's quarters, watching him sleep. (It's a Minbari custom, part of their equivalent of getting engaged.) Delenn notices a snow globe on the table and picks it up to look at it. Just then the door slides open and a woman walks in.
-->'''Woman:''' Hello. You must be Delenn. I'm Anna Sheridan. John's wife.\\
''[The snow globe slips from Delenn's fingers in slow motion and shatters on the floor.]''
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* {{Jerkass}}: Other!Franklin
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* InjuredSelfDrag: Stephen Franklin's JourneyToFindOneself ends when he tries to intervene in a mugging and gets stabbed in the stomach. After lying in pain for a while, he starts seeing a HelpfulHallucination of himself that starts outlining all his flaws, especially running away from all his problems. Stephen eventually gets so irritated he starts dragging himself to where someone can find him, his alternate self egging him on.
--->''' Hallucination''': Then get up off the damn floor! I don't care how much it hurts. Don't you go passing out on me, because that's just another kind of running away. Now you take some responsibility! Show me that you want it! Get up off the damn floor!
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--->''' Hallucination''': Then get up off the damn floor! I don't care how much it hurts. Don't you go passing out on me, because that's just another kind of running away. Now you take some responsibility! Show me that you want it! Get up off the damn floor!
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Franklin finds out the hard way that you shouldn't try to intervene in an in-progress crime, you're likely to wind up becoming just another victim yourself.
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* FlyingSaucer: The Vree ''Xill''-class saucer reveals its antimatter weapon in the battle against the Shadows. The Vree will contribute their ships to every major engagement the Army of Light participates in from now on.
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* FlyingSaucer: The Vree ''Xill''-class saucer reveals its [[SpreadShot antimatter weapon weapon]] in the battle against the Shadows. The Vree will contribute their ships to every major engagement the Army of Light participates in from now on.
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* NowWhat: Garibaldi and Ivanova point out to Delenn and Sheridna that now that the Shadows had been beaten in a major engagement, they're sure to strike back.
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* OtherMeAnnoysMe: Franklin went on Walkabout in order to "meet himself". After his vision/hallucination of himself gives him a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech verbal beatdown]], he realizes he hates himself. He uses that hate to literally will himself to both live and stagger to safety.
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* RammingAlwaysWorks: Invoked by the Shadow scout ship. Literally wounded and unable to escape, it swings around and rams the Whitestar. The scout ship is destroyed and the Whitestar is heavily damaged.
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* SpaceBattle: A massive centerpiece of the episode as the unified [[TheAlliance Army of Light]] fights the [[BigBad Shadows]] head on for the first time. Despite their [[HeroicSacrifice losses]], they manage to [[HyperspeedEscape drive the Shadows back]] but at a [[BittersweetEnding tremendous cost]] to ships and lives.
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* ShadowArchetype: Other!Franklin is Franklin's suppressed inner self
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: One of Franklin's flaws that nearly gets him killed here. His other self lampshades it.
-->'''Other!Franklin''': You always have to be the hero.
-->'''Other!Franklin''': You always have to be the hero.
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: One of Franklin's flaws that nearly gets him killed here. His other self lampshades it.
-->'''Other!Franklin''': You always have to be the hero.
-->'''Other!Franklin''': You always have to be the hero.
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: CueCardPause: One element of Franklin's flaws the Minbari courting ritual is that nearly gets him killed here. His other self lampshades it.
-->'''Other!Franklin''': You always have to bethe hero.man may insist on a second chance if the woman doesn't like the "true face" he shows when he sleeps. Delenn explains that if the woman still rejects him, she can "leave when he falls asleep, file a complaint with the Elders, even cut off his..." Sheridan looks [[GroinAttack horrified]] as Delenn stumbles a moment trying to find the right word, until she continues, "...access to her family".
-->'''Other!Franklin''': You always have to be
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As Sheridan and Delenn begin their ritual, someone checks in on the station and a few minutes later appears at his quarters. A red-haired woman comes in and introduces herself as Anna Sheridan.
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As Sheridan and Delenn begin their ritual, someone checks in on the station and a few minutes later appears at his quarters. A red-haired woman comes in and introduces herself as Anna Sheridan.Sheridan, John's wife.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: It turns out that Franklin doesn't like Franklin.
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Franklin continues needling Stephen, cheerfully outlining the symptoms he’ll be feeling leading up to death. Of course Stephen wasn’t that happy with his life anyway so it won’t matter much. He eventually irritates Stephen to the point that he starts dragging himself away. Franklin seems to sense some resolve in him and jumps down and eggs him on.
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Franklin continues needling Stephen, cheerfully mockingly outlining the symptoms he’ll be feeling leading up to death. Of course Stephen wasn’t that happy with his life anyway so it won’t matter much. He eventually irritates Stephen to the point that he starts dragging himself away. Franklin seems to sense some resolve in him and jumps down and eggs begins to urge him on.
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Stephen finally manages to get to a public area. Just as he collapses the Shadows are driven into retreat. Together in the tactical center, [[SecurityCling Sheridan and Delenn hold each other]] as they survey the devastation around them.
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Stephen finally manages to get to a public area.area, calling for help. Just as he collapses the Shadows are driven into retreat. Together in the tactical center, [[SecurityCling Sheridan and Delenn hold each other]] as they survey the devastation around them.
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** There's also a reference to [[Recap/BabylonFiveS02E04ADistantStar an old Egyptian blessing]].
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* ContinuityNod: The shot where Franklin staggers into the Zocalo injured evokes a similar shot from "[[Recap/BabylonFiveS01E22Chrysalis Chrysalis]]".
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* ContinuityNod: ContinuityNod:
** There's also a reference to [[Recap/BabylonFiveS02E04ADistantStar an old Egyptian blessing]].
** The shot where Franklin staggers into the Zocalo injured evokes a similar shot from "[[Recap/BabylonFiveS01E22Chrysalis Chrysalis]]".
** There's also a reference to [[Recap/BabylonFiveS02E04ADistantStar an old Egyptian blessing]].
** The shot where Franklin staggers into the Zocalo injured evokes a similar shot from "[[Recap/BabylonFiveS01E22Chrysalis Chrysalis]]".
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** Franklin was using the stims to [[Recap/BabylonFiveS03E18Walkabout run away from work]].
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When asks what he found, Stephen replied that he found out he didn’t like himself. Garibaldi figures there are worse revelations to get. As Garibaldi leaves, Stephen notices the flurry of activity.
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When asks asked what he found, Stephen replied replies that he found out he didn’t like himself. Garibaldi figures there are worse revelations to get. As Garibaldi leaves, Stephen notices the flurry of activity.
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Delenn is in chambers speaking with the League. Now that they know where the Shadows are going to strike, they need a fleet, as many ships as they can, but the League are being as stubborn and think-skulled as ever. Delenn asks them to trust her, since they have kept every promise so far, or leave. None of them do. For their part, the Minbari promise as many warcruisers as possible and some additional forces as well.
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Delenn is in chambers speaking with the League. Now that they know where the Shadows are going to strike, they need a fleet, as many ships as they can, but the League are being as stubborn and think-skulled thick-skulled as ever. Delenn asks them to trust her, since they have kept every promise so far, or leave. None of them do. For their part, the Minbari promise as many warcruisers as possible and some additional forces as well.
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Stephen is rushed to Medlab, still delirious as he sees the faces of his friends. Sheridan and Delenn arrive back on station but have already heard about Stephen. He’s lost a lot of blood but he’s stable. The battle met its objective, but it cost a lot. And it was the first time they brought the League together as a cohesive force. Garibaldi asks the question no one wants to consider:
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Stephen is rushed to Medlab, [[DeliriousMisidentification still delirious as he sees the faces of his friends.friends]]. Sheridan and Delenn arrive back on station but have already heard about Stephen. He’s lost a lot of blood but he’s stable. The battle met its objective, but it cost a lot. And it was the first time they brought the League together as a cohesive force. Garibaldi asks the question no one wants to consider:
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Stephen finally manages to get to a public area. Just as he collapses the Shadows are driven into retreat. Together in the tactical center, Sheridan and Delenn hold each other as they survey the devastation around them.
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Stephen finally manages to get to a public area. Just as he collapses the Shadows are driven into retreat. Together in the tactical center, [[SecurityCling Sheridan and Delenn hold each other other]] as they survey the devastation around them.
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: Marcus answering Ivanova's question.
* SecurityCling: Sheridan and Delenn as they survey the aftermath of the battle.
* SecurityCling: Sheridan and Delenn as they survey the aftermath of the battle.
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* IWantToLive: Franklin is stabbed and calling for help. He ends up seeing a halucination of himself who proceeds to [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech chew him out for all of his failings]]. By the end, Franklin finds the determination within him to drag himself (despite his injuries) to seek help.
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Then next day, Ivanova comes to wake Marcus for hos shift and they talk for a bit about the Rangers and their training, and how he became fluent in Minbari. He then speaks in Minbari, “You are the most beautiful woman I’ve ever met.” When she asks what it meant, he just says it’s a Minbari greeting, “My words are inadequate to the burden of my heart.” Ivanova is a bit bemused by this. Marcus heads off, but Ivanova has figure out the slanted beds so she can sleep.
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Then next day, Ivanova comes to wake Marcus for hos his shift and they talk for a bit about the Rangers and their training, and how he became fluent in Minbari. He then speaks in Minbari, “You are the most beautiful woman I’ve ever met.” When she asks what it meant, he just says it’s a Minbari greeting, “My words are inadequate to the burden of my heart.” Ivanova is a bit bemused by this. Marcus heads off, but Ivanova has to figure out the slanted beds so she can sleep.