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--> '''Alakshmi:''' [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dowry_system_in_India "You... you sold me?"]]
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--> '''Alakshmi:''' [https://en.[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dowry_system_in_India "You... you sold me?"]]
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* During Alakshmi's anxiety nightmare, her mother chastises her for being a horrible duelist that has brought shame upon her family, and that the Choten returned her after having no use for her. Alakshmi asks in horror: [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dowry_system_in_India "You... you sold me?"]]
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* During Alakshmi's anxiety nightmare, her mother chastises her for being a horrible duelist that has brought shame upon her family, and that the Choten returned her after having no use for her. Alakshmi asks in horror: [[https://en.
--> '''Alakshmi:''' [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dowry_system_in_India "You... you sold me?"]]
--> '''Alakshmi:''' [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dowry_system_in_India "You... you sold me?"]]
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* During Alakshmi's anxiety nightmare, her mother chastises her for being a horrible duelist, and that the Choten returned her after having no use for her. Alakshmi asks in horror: [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dowry_system_in_India "You... you sold me?"]]
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* During Alakshmi's anxiety nightmare, her mother chastises her for being a horrible duelist, duelist that has brought shame upon her family, and that the Choten returned her after having no use for her. Alakshmi asks in horror: [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dowry_system_in_India "You... you sold me?"]]
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* During Alakshmi's anxiety nightmare, her mother chastises her for being a horrible duelist, and that the Choten returned her after having no use for her. What makes this go past the radar is Alakshmi asking in horror [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dowry_system_in_India "You... you sold me?"]]
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* During Alakshmi's anxiety nightmare, her mother chastises her for being a horrible duelist, and that the Choten returned her after having no use for her. What makes this go past the radar is Alakshmi asking asks in horror horror: [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dowry_system_in_India "You... you sold me?"]]
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* When Alakshmi has Allie hostage, and sees that Ray can't fight her, she starts to have "plans" for Allie, which was shown as she was the only one who [[LesYay showed some unusual interest in Allie, chasing only her and no one else.]]
* During Alakshmi's anxiety nightmare, her mother chastises her for being a horrible duelist, and that the Choten returned her after having no use for her. What makes this go past the radar is Alakshmi asking in horror [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dowry_system_in_India "You... you sold me?"]]
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--> '''Allie:''' ''[[YourDoorWasOpen Try locking!]]''
* "Deluge" has a pretty terrifying scene in the beginning where Ray gets pinned down by Humonguru and begs for him to get his human side lucid, but the visuals and this line [[DomesticAbuse paint an]] [[ParentalIncest even worse]] [[{{Squick}} one.]]
--> '''Ray:''' [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything No, dad! Stop!]]
* "Deluge" has a pretty terrifying scene in the beginning where Ray gets pinned down by Humonguru and begs for him to get his human side lucid, but the visuals and this line [[DomesticAbuse paint an]] [[ParentalIncest even worse]] [[{{Squick}} one.]]
--> '''Ray:''' [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything No, dad! Stop!]]
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--> '''Allie:''' ''[[YourDoorWasOpen Try locking!]]''
* "Deluge" has a pretty terrifying scene in the beginning where Ray gets pinned down by Humonguru and begs for him to get his human side lucid, but the visuals and this line [[DomesticAbuse paint an]] [[ParentalIncest even worse]] [[{{Squick}} one.]]
--> '''Ray:''' [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything No, dad! Stop!]]locking!]]''
* "Deluge" has a pretty terrifying scene in the beginning where Ray gets pinned down by Humonguru and begs for him to get his human side lucid, but the visuals and this line [[DomesticAbuse paint an]] [[ParentalIncest even worse]] [[{{Squick}} one.]]
--> '''Ray:''' [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything No, dad! Stop!]]
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* The season 2 premiere opens with Ray and Allie having a couple's spat over sharing the bathroom, and this little gem is uttered at the beginning when she walks into the bathroom.
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* The season 2 premiere opens with Ray and Allie [[ShipTease having a couple's spat spat]] over sharing the bathroom, and this little gem is uttered at the beginning when she walks into the bathroom.in.
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* The season 2 premiere opens with Ray and Allie having a couple's spat over sharing the bathroom, and this little gem is uttered at the beginning when she walks into the bathroom.
--> '''Ray:''' Try knocking!
--> '''Allie:''' ''[[YourDoorWasOpen Try locking!]]''
--> '''Ray:''' Try knocking!
--> '''Allie:''' ''[[YourDoorWasOpen Try locking!]]''
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* Ray uses a tech-gauntlet and says that "it feels wrong".
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* Sasha's interpretation of music like humans "coordinating their bodies".
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* Sasha's interpretation of music like humans "coordinating their bodies".bodies".
* "Deluge" has a pretty terrifying scene in the beginning where Ray gets pinned down by Humonguru and begs for him to get his human side lucid, but the visuals and this line [[DomesticAbuse paint an]] [[ParentalIncest even worse]] [[{{Squick}} one.]]
--> '''Ray:''' [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything No, dad! Stop!]]
* "Deluge" has a pretty terrifying scene in the beginning where Ray gets pinned down by Humonguru and begs for him to get his human side lucid, but the visuals and this line [[DomesticAbuse paint an]] [[ParentalIncest even worse]] [[{{Squick}} one.]]
--> '''Ray:''' [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything No, dad! Stop!]]
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* Alakshmi saying to the Choten that he'll be glad to see Master Chavez with all his Mana. A girl and an older man, charged up fully. What else can give it away?
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* Night Moves has Allie and her friends in danger, and when the civilians who are being brought to safety consist of three girls and a guy.
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* Night Moves has Allie Carny is sent to the Fire Realm by accident, and her friends looks around in danger, and when the civilians who are being brought horror before saying:
--> '''Carny:''' Oh man, I knew I wasn't gonna go tosafety consist of three girls and a guy.heaven! I just didn't think [[CurseCutShort I'd end up in-]]
--> '''Bob:''' The fire civilization.
--> '''Carny:''' Oh man, I knew I wasn't gonna go to
--> '''Bob:''' The fire civilization.
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* Heller, just take out the last two letters of his name, and you should get "Hell".
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* We have Fingers, Tatsurion, Gargle, and many other three-fingered characters. Fingers can get past the radar a lot whenever he [[FlippingTheBird makes any kind of gesture with his right hand.]]
* From the fourth episode, we get Allie's smart remark to Steamstar Grapplog spraying her in episode 4.
--> '''Allie:''' That better have just been water…
* When Alakshmi has Allie hostage, and sees that Ray can't fight her, she starts to have "plans" for Allie, which was shown as she was the only one who [[LesYay showed some unusual interest in Allie, chasing only her and no one else.]]
* Heller, just take out the last two letters of his name, and you should get "Hell".
* Episode 9 has this from the internet obsessed monster Gargle. Monster attacks are certainly dangerous, but that's not what the phrase "NSFW: NotSafeForWork!" [[TheInternetIsForPorn usually means…]]
* Night Moves has Allie and her friends in danger, and when the civilians who are being brought to safety consist of three girls and a guy.
* Gargle seeing Ray's head for his memory loss, extending his long, second finger. What else can be said about it?
* Alakshmi saying to the Choten that he'll be glad to see Master Chavez with all his Mana. A girl and an older man, charged up fully. What else can give it away?
* "A Light In The Darkness" is the only time we get a close shot of a gun in the show. [[note]] This one was just made by Gargle out of lights and spare parts, but it's still a gun. [[/note]]
* Alakshmi seeming to flirt with Carny at the beginning of "The Unbearable Being Of Lightness".
--> '''Alakshmi:''' If you want to hit me, you're going to have to move a bit closer.
* Sasha's interpretation of music like humans "coordinating their bodies".
* From the fourth episode, we get Allie's smart remark to Steamstar Grapplog spraying her in episode 4.
--> '''Allie:''' That better have just been water…
* When Alakshmi has Allie hostage, and sees that Ray can't fight her, she starts to have "plans" for Allie, which was shown as she was the only one who [[LesYay showed some unusual interest in Allie, chasing only her and no one else.]]
* Heller, just take out the last two letters of his name, and you should get "Hell".
* Episode 9 has this from the internet obsessed monster Gargle. Monster attacks are certainly dangerous, but that's not what the phrase "NSFW: NotSafeForWork!" [[TheInternetIsForPorn usually means…]]
* Night Moves has Allie and her friends in danger, and when the civilians who are being brought to safety consist of three girls and a guy.
* Gargle seeing Ray's head for his memory loss, extending his long, second finger. What else can be said about it?
* Alakshmi saying to the Choten that he'll be glad to see Master Chavez with all his Mana. A girl and an older man, charged up fully. What else can give it away?
* "A Light In The Darkness" is the only time we get a close shot of a gun in the show. [[note]] This one was just made by Gargle out of lights and spare parts, but it's still a gun. [[/note]]
* Alakshmi seeming to flirt with Carny at the beginning of "The Unbearable Being Of Lightness".
--> '''Alakshmi:''' If you want to hit me, you're going to have to move a bit closer.
* Sasha's interpretation of music like humans "coordinating their bodies".
