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'''???:''' No, Clay Riley... '''you''' are the one who is damned! \\
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'''???:''' No, Clay Riley... '''you''' are the one who is damned! (cue Riley having a OhCrap moment) \\
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-->-- '''Kid Colt [[LampshadeHanging hanging a lampshade on a well-worn trope,]]''' ''Issue #4''
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-->-- '''Kid Colt [[LampshadeHanging hanging a lampshade lampshade]] on a [[TheCavalry well-worn trope,]]''' trope]],''' ''Issue #4''
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-> ''Only the legends are forever.'''
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-> ''Only the legends are forever.'''''
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-> ''[[{{Tagline}} It Was Their Last Chance For Glory And Their First Step Toward Immortality]]''
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-> ''[[{{Tagline}} It ''It Was Their Last Chance For Glory And Their First Step Toward Immortality]]''
Immortality''
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-> ''A lot of the stories that have been printed, like in old issues of'' Rawhide Kid ''and ''Two-Gun Kid'', those are great legends, but [[LiteraryAgentHypothesis not necessarily the truth]]. We're gonna tell you more of the truth. It is going to have a bit of a historical grounding to it. Look for [[ReimaginingTheArtifact reinterpretations]] of classic Marvel characters.''
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-> ''A lot of the stories that have been printed, like in old issues of'' Rawhide Kid ''and ''Two-Gun Kid'', those are great legends, but [[LiteraryAgentHypothesis not necessarily the truth]].truth. We're gonna tell you more of the truth. It is going to have a bit of a historical grounding to it. Look for [[ReimaginingTheArtifact reinterpretations]] reinterpretations of classic Marvel characters.''
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-> ''...Ex-slaves and poor whites, owning nothing, some [[MadeASlave once owned themselves]], [[UsefulNotes/MeltingPot came together]] and created a town and they have thrived...'' \\
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-> ''...Ex-slaves and poor whites, owning nothing, some [[MadeASlave once owned themselves]], [[UsefulNotes/MeltingPot themselves, came together]] together and created a town and they have thrived...'' \\
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-> '''Clay Harder:''' You're looking for a man who is dead ''twice'', Marcel. Matt Hawk AND the ComicBook/TwoGunKid died [[ContinuityNod about two years back.]] I'm just plain Clay Harder now. \\
'''Marcel Fournier:''' I ''know'' what you are, my friend. [[AsYouKnow I am dere when it all happens]], [[LampshadeHanging non]]? I also know a town dat is in need of de Two-Gun Kid. \\
'''Clay Harder:''' I'm a ''lawyer'', Marcel. That's what I came out west to ''be''. [[JumpedAtTheCall I got sidetracked a mite]] but... it's what I am.
'''Marcel Fournier:''' I ''know'' what you are, my friend. [[AsYouKnow I am dere when it all happens]], [[LampshadeHanging non]]? I also know a town dat is in need of de Two-Gun Kid. \\
'''Clay Harder:''' I'm a ''lawyer'', Marcel. That's what I came out west to ''be''. [[JumpedAtTheCall I got sidetracked a mite]] but... it's what I am.
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-> '''Clay Harder:''' You're looking for a man who is dead ''twice'', Marcel. Matt Hawk AND the ComicBook/TwoGunKid died [[ContinuityNod about two years back.]] back. I'm just plain Clay Harder now. \\
'''Marcel Fournier:''' I ''know'' what you are, my friend.[[AsYouKnow I am dere when it all happens]], [[LampshadeHanging non]]? happens, non? I also know a town dat is in need of de Two-Gun Kid. \\
'''Clay Harder:''' I'm a ''lawyer'', Marcel. That's what I came out west to ''be''.[[JumpedAtTheCall I got sidetracked a mite]] mite but... it's what I am.
'''Marcel Fournier:''' I ''know'' what you are, my friend.
'''Clay Harder:''' I'm a ''lawyer'', Marcel. That's what I came out west to ''be''.
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-> ''The stories then say how he''[[note]](Red Wolf)[[/note]] ''fought only on the side of his red brothers. Reports placed him with Hinmaton-Yalaktit and the Nez Perce in their attempted flight to Canada. Some say he was killed on the way. [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated Not]]'' '''''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated every]]''''' ''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated story is true]].''
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-> ''The stories then say how he''[[note]](Red Wolf)[[/note]] ''fought only on the side of his red brothers. Reports placed him with Hinmaton-Yalaktit and the Nez Perce in their attempted flight to Canada. Some say he was killed on the way. [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated Not]]'' '''''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated every]]''''' ''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated story Not'' '''''every''''' ''story is true]].true.''
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'''Red Wolf:''' [[GoodIsNotNice He will be]].
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'''Red Wolf:''' [[GoodIsNotNice He will be]].be.
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-> ''The man known as Clay Harder looks neither left nor right as he strides back to his office. People, [[TranquilFury seeing the fury in his face]], step quickly aside. He wonders if, perhaps, the Two-Gun Kid died too soon. He wonders if [[OneLastJob it is time for the dead to rise]].''
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-> ''The man known as Clay Harder looks neither left nor right as he strides back to his office. People, [[TranquilFury seeing the fury in his face]], face, step quickly aside. He wonders if, perhaps, the Two-Gun Kid died too soon. He wonders if [[OneLastJob it is time for the dead to rise]].rise.''
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-> ''Howdy. Heard you folks could use some help. [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits Reckon we're it]]. If that suits ya.''
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-> ''Howdy. Heard you folks could use some help. [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits Reckon we're it]].it. If that suits ya.''
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'''Nightrider Leader[[spoiler:/Kid Cassidy]]:''' And I told you [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou no one kills Reno Jones but ME!]]
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'''Nightrider Leader[[spoiler:/Kid Cassidy]]:''' And I told you [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou no one kills Reno Jones but ME!]]ME!
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-> ''Our way's'' '''''over''''', ''John. New villains need a new breed of hero. They'll come. I've'' '''''seen''''' '''em. Me--I'm just lookin' to go out in [[TitleDrop blaze of glory]].''
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-> ''Our way's'' '''''over''''', ''John. New villains need a new breed of hero. They'll come. I've'' '''''seen''''' '''em. Me--I'm just lookin' to go out in [[TitleDrop blaze of glory]].glory.''
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(putting bandanna over his face) ''[[LetsGetDangerous Tonight, the Outlaw Kid rides one more time]].''
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(putting bandanna over his face) ''[[LetsGetDangerous Tonight, ''Tonight, the Outlaw Kid rides one more time]].time.''
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-> '''Clay Riley:''' Burn 'em out, you fools! Burn 'em all out! [[KillThemAll Kill 'em all!]] Damn you! \\
'''???:''' No, Clay Riley... '''[[PreMortemOneLiner you]]''' [[OhCrap are the one who is damned!]] \\
You now stand revealed as the author of the evils besetting this town, and now you will PAY! Thus swears... [[RevealShot The]] '''[[RevealShot Ghost Rider]]'''!
'''???:''' No, Clay Riley... '''[[PreMortemOneLiner you]]''' [[OhCrap are the one who is damned!]] \\
You now stand revealed as the author of the evils besetting this town, and now you will PAY! Thus swears... [[RevealShot The]] '''[[RevealShot Ghost Rider]]'''!
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-> '''Clay Riley:''' Burn 'em out, you fools! Burn 'em all out! [[KillThemAll Kill 'em all!]] all! Damn you! \\
'''???:''' No, Clay Riley...'''[[PreMortemOneLiner you]]''' [[OhCrap '''you''' are the one who is damned!]] damned! \\
You now stand revealed as the author of the evils besetting this town, and now you will PAY! Thus swears...[[RevealShot The]] '''[[RevealShot Ghost Rider]]'''!The '''Ghost Rider'''!
'''???:''' No, Clay Riley...
You now stand revealed as the author of the evils besetting this town, and now you will PAY! Thus swears...
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-> ''Well, would you look at that! [[TheCavalry Cavalry's]] come to town--[[{{Irony}} and they're all injuns!]]''
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-> ''Well, would you look at that! [[TheCavalry Cavalry's]] Cavalry's come to town--[[{{Irony}} and town--and they're all injuns!]]''injuns!''
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'''Gunhawk:''' [[SpeakIllOfTheDead He was saddle trash]]. \\
'''Caleb:''' Whatever [[spoiler: Kid Colt]] was, [[WorthyOpponent he was better'n you]].
'''Caleb:''' Whatever [[spoiler: Kid Colt]] was, [[WorthyOpponent he was better'n you]].
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'''Gunhawk:''' [[SpeakIllOfTheDead He was saddle trash]].trash. \\
'''Caleb:''' Whatever [[spoiler: Kid Colt]] was,[[WorthyOpponent he was better'n you]].you.
'''Caleb:''' Whatever [[spoiler: Kid Colt]] was,
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-> ''Well, pard, you [[FakingTheDead cheated death for awhile]] but looks like it's caught up with you at last. My time will come. [[GratuitousSpanish Vaya con dios, mi hermano]]. You were one of the good ones.''
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-> ''Well, pard, you [[FakingTheDead cheated death for awhile]] awhile but looks like it's caught up with you at last. My time will come. [[GratuitousSpanish Vaya con dios, mi hermano]].hermano. You were one of the good ones.''
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-> '''Caleb Hammer:''' [[WasItReallyWorthIt Was it worth it]]? \\
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-> '''Caleb Hammer:''' [[WasItReallyWorthIt Was it worth it]]? it? \\
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-->-- '''The closing line of the series.'''
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-->-- '''The closing line of the series.''''''
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-> ''The stories then say how (Red Wolf) fought only on the side of his red brothers. Reports placed him with Hinmaton-Yalaktit and the Nez Perce in their attempted flight to Canada. Some say he was killed on the way. [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated Not]]'' '''''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated every]]''''' ''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated story is true]].''
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-> '''Clay Harder:''' You're looking for a man who is dead ''twice'', Marcel. Matt Hawk AND the ComicBook/TwoGunKid died [[ContinuityNod about two years back.]] I'm just plain Clay Harder now. \\
'''Marcel Fournier:''' I ''know'' what you are, my friend. [[AsYouKnow I am dere when it all happens]], [[LampshadeHanging non]]? I also know a town dat is in need of de Two-Gun Kid. \\
'''Clay Harder:''' I'm a ''lawyer'', Marcel. That's what I came out west to ''be''. [[JumpedAtTheCall I got sidetracked a mite]] but... it's what I am.
-->-- '''Conversation in Issue #2'''
-> ''The stories then say how(Red Wolf) fought he''[[note]](Red Wolf)[[/note]] ''fought only on the side of his red brothers. Reports placed him with Hinmaton-Yalaktit and the Nez Perce in their attempted flight to Canada. Some say he was killed on the way. [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated Not]]'' '''''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated every]]''''' ''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated story is true]].''
'''Marcel Fournier:''' I ''know'' what you are, my friend. [[AsYouKnow I am dere when it all happens]], [[LampshadeHanging non]]? I also know a town dat is in need of de Two-Gun Kid. \\
'''Clay Harder:''' I'm a ''lawyer'', Marcel. That's what I came out west to ''be''. [[JumpedAtTheCall I got sidetracked a mite]] but... it's what I am.
-->-- '''Conversation in Issue #2'''
-> ''The stories then say how
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-->-- '''Rawhide Kid''', ''Issue 4#''
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-->-- '''Rawhide Kid''', ''Issue 4#''
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-> ''[[{{Tagline}} It Was Their Last Chance For Glory And Their First Step Toward Immortality]]''
-->-- '''Ad for the series'''
-> ''There is the [[TheWildWest west of fact]]. There is the [[TheWestern west of legend]]. This story falls [[SpaghettiWestern somewhere in between]].''
-->-- '''[[EstablishingSeriesMoment The first page of the first issue]]'''
-> ''A lot of the stories that have been printed, like in old issues of'' Rawhide Kid ''and ''Two-Gun Kid'', those are great legends, but [[LiteraryAgentHypothesis not necessarily the truth]]. We're gonna tell you more of the truth. It is going to have a bit of a historical grounding to it. Look for [[ReimaginingTheArtifact reinterpretations]] of classic Marvel characters.''
-->-- '''John Ostrander''', ''The Marvel Comics July 1998 Catalogue''
-> ''...Ex-slaves and poor whites, owning nothing, some [[MadeASlave once owned themselves]], [[UsefulNotes/MeltingPot came together]] and created a town and they have thrived...'' \\
''Until now.'' \\
''Now it is'' '''''1885''''' ''-- and hell is about to descend on Wonderment.''
-->-- '''OpeningNarration of the first issue'''
-> ''The stories then say how (Red Wolf) fought only on the side of his red brothers. Reports placed him with Hinmaton-Yalaktit and the Nez Perce in their attempted flight to Canada. Some say he was killed on the way. [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated Not]]'' '''''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated every]]''''' ''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated story is true]].''
-->-- '''Narration,''' ''Issue #2''
-> '''Red Wolf:''' I will help your friends - in my way, in my time, in my fashion. For now, I'll dispose of this carrion so the other whites will not find them. \\
'''Ghost Wind Rider:''' One is not yet dead. \\
'''Red Wolf:''' [[GoodIsNotNice He will be]].
-->-- '''Conversation in Issue #2'''
-> ''The man known as Clay Harder looks neither left nor right as he strides back to his office. People, [[TranquilFury seeing the fury in his face]], step quickly aside. He wonders if, perhaps, the Two-Gun Kid died too soon. He wonders if [[OneLastJob it is time for the dead to rise]].''
-->-- '''Narration,''' ''Issue #2''
-> ''Howdy. Heard you folks could use some help. [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits Reckon we're it]]. If that suits ya.''
-->-- '''Kid Colt,''' ''Issue #3''
-> '''Nightrider Mook:''' What you doin' man? I TOLE ya! I shot that Reno Jones mahself! I saw him go down! \\
'''Nightrider Leader[[spoiler:/Kid Cassidy]]:''' And I told you [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou no one kills Reno Jones but ME!]]
-->-- '''Conversation in Issue #3'''
-> ''Thing is, son-- I won't lead you down the path I walk. Be like your daddy. Live your life to make him proud. 'Cause I know my daddy would not be proud of me.''
-->-- '''Kid Colt,''' ''Issue #3''
-> ''Our way's'' '''''over''''', ''John. New villains need a new breed of hero. They'll come. I've'' '''''seen''''' '''em. Me--I'm just lookin' to go out in [[TitleDrop blaze of glory]].''
-->-- '''Two-Gun Kid,''' ''Issue #4''
-> ''Forgive me, father! Forgive what I've become... and what I must do!'' \\
(putting bandanna over his face) ''[[LetsGetDangerous Tonight, the Outlaw Kid rides one more time]].''
-->-- '''Lance Temple (and The Outlaw Kid),''' ''Issue #4''
-> '''Clay Riley:''' Burn 'em out, you fools! Burn 'em all out! [[KillThemAll Kill 'em all!]] Damn you! \\
'''???:''' No, Clay Riley... '''[[PreMortemOneLiner you]]''' [[OhCrap are the one who is damned!]] \\
You now stand revealed as the author of the evils besetting this town, and now you will PAY! Thus swears... [[RevealShot The]] '''[[RevealShot Ghost Rider]]'''!
-->-- '''Issue #4'''
-> ''Well, would you look at that! [[TheCavalry Cavalry's]] come to town--[[{{Irony}} and they're all injuns!]]''
-->-- '''Kid Colt [[LampshadeHanging hanging a lampshade on a well-worn trope,]]''' ''Issue #4''
-> '''Caleb Hammer:''' You... you shot him InTheBack! \\
'''Gunhawk:''' Generally do. Less risk that way. Reward was dead or alive. Dead was easier. It's all that matters t'me. \\
'''Caleb:''' He deserved better'n that! \\
'''Gunhawk:''' [[SpeakIllOfTheDead He was saddle trash]]. \\
'''Caleb:''' Whatever [[spoiler: Kid Colt]] was, [[WorthyOpponent he was better'n you]].
-->-- '''Issue #4'''
-> ''Well, pard, you [[FakingTheDead cheated death for awhile]] but looks like it's caught up with you at last. My time will come. [[GratuitousSpanish Vaya con dios, mi hermano]]. You were one of the good ones.''
-->-- '''Rawhide Kid''', ''Issue 4#''
-> '''Caleb Hammer:''' [[WasItReallyWorthIt Was it worth it]]? \\
'''Rawhide Kid:''' Was what worth what? \\
'''Caleb:''' This fight. You buried three friends back there. Along the way, I buried some of my own and wound up avenging the man that killed them. Half the town died. Was it worth it? \\
'''Rawhide:''' Men die. Every single one of them. That's a fact and that's our fate.
-->-- '''Issue #4'''
-> ''Only the legends are forever.'''
-->-- '''The closing line of the series.'''
-->-- '''Ad for the series'''
-> ''There is the [[TheWildWest west of fact]]. There is the [[TheWestern west of legend]]. This story falls [[SpaghettiWestern somewhere in between]].''
-->-- '''[[EstablishingSeriesMoment The first page of the first issue]]'''
-> ''A lot of the stories that have been printed, like in old issues of'' Rawhide Kid ''and ''Two-Gun Kid'', those are great legends, but [[LiteraryAgentHypothesis not necessarily the truth]]. We're gonna tell you more of the truth. It is going to have a bit of a historical grounding to it. Look for [[ReimaginingTheArtifact reinterpretations]] of classic Marvel characters.''
-->-- '''John Ostrander''', ''The Marvel Comics July 1998 Catalogue''
-> ''...Ex-slaves and poor whites, owning nothing, some [[MadeASlave once owned themselves]], [[UsefulNotes/MeltingPot came together]] and created a town and they have thrived...'' \\
''Until now.'' \\
''Now it is'' '''''1885''''' ''-- and hell is about to descend on Wonderment.''
-->-- '''OpeningNarration of the first issue'''
-> ''The stories then say how (Red Wolf) fought only on the side of his red brothers. Reports placed him with Hinmaton-Yalaktit and the Nez Perce in their attempted flight to Canada. Some say he was killed on the way. [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated Not]]'' '''''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated every]]''''' ''[[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated story is true]].''
-->-- '''Narration,''' ''Issue #2''
-> '''Red Wolf:''' I will help your friends - in my way, in my time, in my fashion. For now, I'll dispose of this carrion so the other whites will not find them. \\
'''Ghost Wind Rider:''' One is not yet dead. \\
'''Red Wolf:''' [[GoodIsNotNice He will be]].
-->-- '''Conversation in Issue #2'''
-> ''The man known as Clay Harder looks neither left nor right as he strides back to his office. People, [[TranquilFury seeing the fury in his face]], step quickly aside. He wonders if, perhaps, the Two-Gun Kid died too soon. He wonders if [[OneLastJob it is time for the dead to rise]].''
-->-- '''Narration,''' ''Issue #2''
-> ''Howdy. Heard you folks could use some help. [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits Reckon we're it]]. If that suits ya.''
-->-- '''Kid Colt,''' ''Issue #3''
-> '''Nightrider Mook:''' What you doin' man? I TOLE ya! I shot that Reno Jones mahself! I saw him go down! \\
'''Nightrider Leader[[spoiler:/Kid Cassidy]]:''' And I told you [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou no one kills Reno Jones but ME!]]
-->-- '''Conversation in Issue #3'''
-> ''Thing is, son-- I won't lead you down the path I walk. Be like your daddy. Live your life to make him proud. 'Cause I know my daddy would not be proud of me.''
-->-- '''Kid Colt,''' ''Issue #3''
-> ''Our way's'' '''''over''''', ''John. New villains need a new breed of hero. They'll come. I've'' '''''seen''''' '''em. Me--I'm just lookin' to go out in [[TitleDrop blaze of glory]].''
-->-- '''Two-Gun Kid,''' ''Issue #4''
-> ''Forgive me, father! Forgive what I've become... and what I must do!'' \\
(putting bandanna over his face) ''[[LetsGetDangerous Tonight, the Outlaw Kid rides one more time]].''
-->-- '''Lance Temple (and The Outlaw Kid),''' ''Issue #4''
-> '''Clay Riley:''' Burn 'em out, you fools! Burn 'em all out! [[KillThemAll Kill 'em all!]] Damn you! \\
'''???:''' No, Clay Riley... '''[[PreMortemOneLiner you]]''' [[OhCrap are the one who is damned!]] \\
You now stand revealed as the author of the evils besetting this town, and now you will PAY! Thus swears... [[RevealShot The]] '''[[RevealShot Ghost Rider]]'''!
-->-- '''Issue #4'''
-> ''Well, would you look at that! [[TheCavalry Cavalry's]] come to town--[[{{Irony}} and they're all injuns!]]''
-->-- '''Kid Colt [[LampshadeHanging hanging a lampshade on a well-worn trope,]]''' ''Issue #4''
-> '''Caleb Hammer:''' You... you shot him InTheBack! \\
'''Gunhawk:''' Generally do. Less risk that way. Reward was dead or alive. Dead was easier. It's all that matters t'me. \\
'''Caleb:''' He deserved better'n that! \\
'''Gunhawk:''' [[SpeakIllOfTheDead He was saddle trash]]. \\
'''Caleb:''' Whatever [[spoiler: Kid Colt]] was, [[WorthyOpponent he was better'n you]].
-->-- '''Issue #4'''
-> ''Well, pard, you [[FakingTheDead cheated death for awhile]] but looks like it's caught up with you at last. My time will come. [[GratuitousSpanish Vaya con dios, mi hermano]]. You were one of the good ones.''
-->-- '''Rawhide Kid''', ''Issue 4#''
-> '''Caleb Hammer:''' [[WasItReallyWorthIt Was it worth it]]? \\
'''Rawhide Kid:''' Was what worth what? \\
'''Caleb:''' This fight. You buried three friends back there. Along the way, I buried some of my own and wound up avenging the man that killed them. Half the town died. Was it worth it? \\
'''Rawhide:''' Men die. Every single one of them. That's a fact and that's our fate.
-->-- '''Issue #4'''
-> ''Only the legends are forever.'''
-->-- '''The closing line of the series.'''
