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'''Ramonda:''' And where is her ''[[EtTuBrute treacherous]]'' husband now, but in [[PutOnAPrisonBus a place]] where she can visit if she wished?!? '''Mine''' (''rises to her feet, her voice rising with her'') is with the ancestors! ''I am'' '''''queen''''' ''of the most powerful nation in the world! And my'' '''''entire family is gone!''''' ''Have I not given everything?!?''\\
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'''Ramonda:''' And where Where is her ''[[EtTuBrute treacherous]]'' husband now, but in [[PutOnAPrisonBus a place]] where she can visit if she wished?!? '''Mine''' (''rises to her feet, her voice rising with her'') is with the ancestors! ''I am'' '''''queen''''' ''of the most powerful nation in the world! And my'' '''''entire family is gone!''''' ''Have I not given everything?!?''\\
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'''Ramonda:''' (''silently glowers at Okoye'')\\
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'''Ramonda:''' (''silently (''[[DeathGlare silently glowers at Okoye'')\\Okoye]]'')\\
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'''Ramonda:''' (''fuming and unmoved'') You may.\\
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'''Ramonda:''' (''fuming (''[[TranquilFury fuming and unmoved'') unmoved]]'') You may.\\
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->'''Elder''': We give thanks for the gift of King T'Challa, the Black Panther. Son of King T'Chaka.\\
'''Ramonda''': My son.\\
'''Elder''': Descendant of the most sacred King Bashenga, the first Black Panther. We release you. Praise the ancestors.
-->--Funeral rites for T'Challa
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'''Ramonda''': My son.\\
'''Elder''': Descendant of the most sacred King Bashenga, the first Black Panther. We release you. Praise the ancestors.
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->'''Elder''': We give thanks for the gift of King T'Challa, the Black Panther. Son of King T'Chaka.\\
'''Ramonda''': My son.\\
'''Elder''': Descendant of the most sacred King Bashenga, the first Black Panther. We release you. Praise the ancestors.
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'''Ramonda''': My son.\\
'''Elder''': Descendant of the most sacred King Bashenga, the first Black Panther. We release you. Praise the ancestors.
-->--Funeral rites for T'Challa
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->'''Shuri:''' How that does make sense, that the ancestors would give me gifts and skills to help me save my brother and I couldn’t? Why?
->'''Namor:''' I do not have the answer to that question. [beat] My ancestors would often say, [[MiseryBuildsCharacter “Only the most broken people can be great leaders.”]]
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->'''Namor:''' I do not have the answer to that question. [beat] My ancestors would often say, [[MiseryBuildsCharacter “Only the most broken people can be great leaders.”]]
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->'''Shuri''': And you're going to help me get it. [points at M'Baku] ''Are w clear?''
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->'''Shuri''': And you're going to help me get it. [points at M'Baku] ''Are w we clear?''
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'''Shuri:''' So now you are keen to hear from a child... ''who scoffs at tradition?'' [looks at M'Baku with glazed eyes]\\
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'''Shuri:''' So now you are keen to hear from a child... ''who scoffs at tradition?'' [looks at M'Baku with glazed saddened eyes]\\
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->'''Shuri''': And you're going to help me get it. [points at M'Baku] ''Is that clear?''
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->'''Shuri''': And you're going to help me get it. [points at M'Baku] ''Is that ''Are w clear?''
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->'''M'Baku''': [watches her leave with glazed eyes]
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->'''M'Baku''': [watches her leave with glazed saddened eyes]
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->''"I was blinded by hope of partnership. And I have compromised all of us. Talokan will not move again. [[CoDragons Namora. Attuma.]] When we are done with them, they will never think of approaching Talokan! [[BattleCry RISE, TALOKAN!]]"''
-->--Namor's declaration of war against Wakanda in a speech to his people
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->''"In one week's time, I will return with my '''entire army''', and you will join us against the surface world, or I will wash Wakanda from the face of the Earth. [[DueToTheDead Bury your dead. Mourn your losses.]] (to Shuri) [[YouAreInCommandNow You are Queen now.]]"''
-->--Namor's threat in Wakanda's throne room after the invasion's success
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-->--Namor's declaration of war against Wakanda in a speech to his people
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->''"In one week's time, I will return with my '''entire army''', and you will join us against the surface world, or I will wash Wakanda from the face of the Earth. [[DueToTheDead Bury your dead. Mourn your losses.]] (to Shuri) [[YouAreInCommandNow You are Queen now.]]"''
-->--Namor's threat in Wakanda's throne room after the invasion's success
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->''"I was blinded by hope of partnership. And I have compromised all of us. Talokan will not move again. [[CoDragons Namora. Attuma.]] When we are done with them, they will never think of approaching Talokan! [[BattleCry RISE, TALOKAN!]]"''
-->--Namor's declaration of war against Wakanda in a speech to his people
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->''"In one week's time, I will return with my '''entire army''', and you will join us against the surface world, or I will wash Wakanda from the face of the Earth. [[DueToTheDead Bury your dead. Mourn your losses.]] (to Shuri) [[YouAreInCommandNow You are Queen now.]]"''
-->--Namor's threat in Wakanda's throne room after the invasion's success
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-->--Namor's declaration of war against Wakanda in a speech to his people
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->''"In one week's time, I will return with my '''entire army''', and you will join us against the surface world, or I will wash Wakanda from the face of the Earth. [[DueToTheDead Bury your dead. Mourn your losses.]] (to Shuri) [[YouAreInCommandNow You are Queen now.]]"''
-->--Namor's threat in Wakanda's throne room after the invasion's success
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'''M'Baku''': I promised your brother that I would provide you with counsel and protection. [walks closer to Shuri, who turned away] But I'm in need of your advice. [stops and thinks carefully on his words, looking back and forth, before finally speaking while walking even closer to her] The elders approached me with a proposition. They wish to evacuate the city and set up camp in Jabariland.\\
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'''M'Baku''': I promised your brother that I would provide you with counsel and protection. [walks closer to Shuri, who turned away] But I'm in need of your advice. [stops and thinks carefully on his words, looking back and forth, before finally speaking while walking even closer to her] The tribal elders have approached me with a proposition. They wish to evacuate the city and set up camp in Jabariland.\\
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'''M'Baku:''' [smiling sadly at Shuri, giving a ][[TraumaCongaLine The world... the world has taken too much from you for you to still be considered a child]]. It is my people's interest to know which way your mind is leaning.\\
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'''M'Baku:''' [smiling sadly at Shuri, giving a ][[TraumaCongaLine Shuri][[TraumaCongaLine The world... the world has taken too much from you for you to still be considered a child]]. It is my people's interest to know which way your mind is leaning.\\
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->'''M'Baku''': [walks towards Shuri, and respectfully bows at her] Jabariland offers you their comfort for your loss.
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->'''M'Baku''': [walks towards Shuri, and respectfully bows at her] Jabariland offers you their comfort for your loss.\\
