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** upon getting laid, Steve thinks his previous attitude is what made him desirable and causes it to become worse
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** upon Upon getting laid, Steve thinks his previous attitude is what made him desirable and causes it to become worsebecomes worse.
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** At seeing sex has made Steve become entitled, his friends decide to call him out on his awful behavior ''and'' perspective. He ends up a better person who recognizes other people's boundaries because of the experience.
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** At After seeing that sex has made Steve become entitled, his friends decide to call him out on his awful behavior ''and'' perspective. He ends up a better person who recognizes other people's boundaries because of the experience.
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** Every time Steve shows a tiny bit of irritation, he's bombarded with comments telling him to get some.
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** Every time Steve shows a tiny bit of irritation, he's bombarded with thousands of comments telling him to get some.
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** Steve is absolutely awful to be around when he's getting laid because of his willingness to screw other people other in addition to general jackassery. He's actually a far better person when he isn't trying to have sex.
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** Steve is absolutely awful to be around when he's getting laid because of his willingness to screw other people other over in addition to general jackassery. He's actually a far better person when he isn't trying to have sex.
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** upon getting laid, Steve thinks his previous attitude is what made him desirable and causes it to become worse
