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** Sally acts like an insane person towards Bob [[{{Tsundere}} because she really likes him on the inside.]]
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Oh, leaving already~? That's fine, as long as you go back to {{Yandere}}, my love. ''And [[BerserkButton don't you dare go to]] {{Tsundere}} [[IfICantHaveYou or I'll slit your fucking throat]]~''
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Oh, leaving are you finished playing with this trope already~? That's fine, as long as you go back to {{Yandere}}, my love. ''And [[BerserkButton don't you dare go to]] {{Tsundere}} [[IfICantHaveYou or I'll slit your fucking throat]]~''
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** Sally is normally sane since she wishes to be hated by Bob. One day Bob says he doesn't hate her at which point Sally does anything to get Bob to hate her.
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** Sally is normally sane since sane, but acts insane, as she wishes to be hated by Bob. One day day, Bob says he doesn't hate her her, at which point Sally does anything '''anything''' to get Bob to hate her.
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* '''Reconstructed''': And when Bob finally gets around to picking Alice, Sally's requited feelings cause her to MurderTheHypotenuse.
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* '''Reconstructed''': And when Bob finally gets around to picking Alice, Sally's requited unrequited feelings cause her to MurderTheHypotenuse.
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** Sally attempts to kill anyone shows any interest or could possibly harm Bob.
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** Sally, normally sane and nonviolent, lashes out at [[StalkerWithACrush Bob]] after he fails to understand the word “no.”
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** Sally, normally sane and nonviolent, lashes out at [[StalkerWithACrush Bob]] after he fails to understand the word “no.”"no".
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** The only reason Sally is targeting Bob is [[LesYay because it's Alice she's after,]] [[MurderTheHypotenuse and she wants Bob out of the way.]]
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** But it turns out that Alice is just crazy about Bob, and she sees Sally as a threat to their relationship, and decides to take care of her.
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I don\'t see how that ties into that...
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** Bob dies in anemia and admits to Sally during his last days of life that he loves her.
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** Sally notices some shipping of Bob and Alice, even though they've [[ShipsThatPassInTheNight never really met.]] Sweet little Sally flips to [[spoiler: passive]] aggressive mode and overdoses Alice's sleeping pills [[RedundancyDepartmentOfRedundancy in her sleep.]]
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Oh, leaving already~? That's fine, as long as you go back to {{Yandere}}, my love. ''And don't you dare go to {{Tsundere}} or I'll slit your fucking throat~''
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Oh, leaving already~? That's fine, as long as you go back to {{Yandere}}, my love. ''And [[BerserkButton don't you dare go to to]] {{Tsundere}} [[IfICantHaveYou or I'll slit your fucking throat~''throat]]~''
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\"Up To Eleven\" isn\'t playing with a trope.
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* '''UpToEleven''': Sally notices some shipping of Bob and Alice, even though they've [[ShipsThatPassInTheNight never really met.]] Sweet little Sally flips to [[spoiler: passive]] aggressive mode and overdoses Alice's sleeping pills [[RedundancyDepartmentOfRedundancy in her sleep.]]
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* '''Downplayed''': Sally repeatedly tries to drive wedges between Alice and Bob, but it never escalates into violence.
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You shall go back to {{Yandere}}, my love. ''And don't. Talk. To Alice.''
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** Or [[{{Yangire}} maybe she just wants them dead]] [[ForTheEvulz for the hell of it.]]
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** Or [[{{Yangire}} [[CuteAndPsycho maybe she just wants them dead]] [[ForTheEvulz for the hell of it.]]
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** Sally is normally sane since she wishes to be hated by Bob. One day Bob says he doesn't hate her at which point Sally does anything to get Bob to hate her.
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** '''Sally''': I'll do anything for our love, Bob. Anything...
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** '''Sally''': I'll "I'll do anything for our love, Bob. Anything..."
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** '''Sally''': I'll do anything for our love, Bob. Anything...
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Hope this fits.
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** Sally, normally sane and nonviolent, lashes out at [[StalkerWithACrush Bob]] after he fails to understand the word “no.”
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* '''UpToEleven''': Sally notices some shipping of Bob and Alice, even though they've [[ShipsThatPassInTheNight never really met.]] Sweet little Sally flips to [[spoiler: passive]] aggressive mode and overdoses Alice's sleeping pills [[RedundancyDepartmentOfRedundancy in her sleep.]]
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* '''Inverted''': Sally has obvious problems, but her immense love for Bob gives her some much-needed stability.
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* '''Inverted''': [[MoralityChain Sally has obvious problems, but her immense love for Bob gives her some much-needed stability.]]
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** Alternatively, Bob has a lot of girls chasing him. He has a thing for yanderes, knows that Sally is one and starts dating with her to keep other girls away from him.
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** Or [[{{Yangire}} maybe she just wants them dead]] [[ForTheEvulz for the hell of it.]]
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You shall go back to {{Yandere}},my love. ''And Don't. Talk. To Alice.''
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You shall go back to {{Yandere}},my {{Yandere}}, my love. ''And Don't.don't. Talk. To Alice.''
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* '''Exploited''': Alice, a [[BitchInSheepsClothing Bitch In Sheep's Clothing]] herself, sets Sally up to ''look'' unstable and deliberately sets off her ClingyJealousGirl instincts in order to drive a wedge between her and Bob.
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** ...which hardly solves the problem, since Sally herself is crazy enough for ten women, but Bob doesn't want to risk his life by upsetting her.
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** ...which hardly solves the problem, since Sally herself is crazy enough for ten women, but Bob doesn't want to risk his life by upsetting her.
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** ...which hardly solves the problem, since Sally herself is crazy enough for ten women, but Bob ''really'' doesn't want to risk making her unhappy, so he plays along as best he can in the hopes of not getting stabbed.
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** ...which hardly solves the problem, since Sally herself is crazy enough for ten women, but Bob ''really'' doesn't want to risk making her unhappy, so he plays along as best he can in the hopes of not getting stabbed.his life by upsetting her.
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** ...which hardly solves the problem, since Sally herself is crazy enough for ten women, but Bob ''really'' doesn't want to risk making her unhappy, so he plays along as best he can in the hopes of not getting stabbed.
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You shall go back to {{Yandere}},my love
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You shall go back to {{Yandere}},my love love. ''And Don't. Talk. To Alice.''
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** Bob is a ManipulativeBastard who passes himself off as a nice guy, and maybe even honestly believes he is one. Over the course of his relationship with Sally, he's gotten her to center her entire life around ''him'', which has in turn caused her to become a ClingyJealousGirl. Then Bob--possibly oblivious to the fact that he ought to have expected this outcome--dumps her for Alice ''because'' Sally's become a ClingyJealousGirl.
** Sally has Borderline Personality Disorder.
** Sally has Borderline Personality Disorder.
