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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Carmine is walking down a staircase, and the monster lifts her up from a step behind.
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* '''Parodied''': The monster ''tries'' to snatch up Carmine, but she proves a little too heavy and it loses its grip instead, resulting in both going down in a tangle of limbs.
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** The monster ''tries'' to snatch up Carmine, but she proves a little too heavy and it loses its grip instead, resulting in both going down in a tangle of limbs.
** The monster's grabbing limb is just a bit too short, so it constantly just misses Carmine whenever she passes below it.
* '''Zig Zagged''':???The first time the monster appears, it successfully pulls this on Carmine. Through the rest of the story, sometimes it works, sometimes the intended victim escapes, and sometimes the monster attacks from below if that's easier.
** The monster ''tries'' to snatch up Carmine, but she proves a little too heavy and it loses its grip instead, resulting in both going down in a tangle of limbs.
** The monster's grabbing limb is just a bit too short, so it constantly just misses Carmine whenever she passes below it.
* '''Zig Zagged''':
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* '''Enforced''': ???"I loved this scene when it appeared in ''Ceiling Monster 2'', so [[FollowTheLeader let's do a variant of that gag]]."
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* '''Exploited''': ???Carmine's [[EvilUncle Uncle Evulz]] gives her a hat with a wide brim that will cut off her peripheral vision upward before sending her to visit a certain cave.
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* '''Discussed''': ???
"Judging by her wounds, the victim was yanked directly off the floor by something."
* '''Conversed''':???"You got ''Ceiling Monster 3''? Isn't that 'yank the victim straight up' schtick getting old?"
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* '''Exaggerated''': The monster kidnaps Carmine from the top of the skyscraper she's walking by.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** The monster kidnaps Carmine from the top of the skyscraper she's walking by.
** The monster kidnaps Carmine from the top of the skyscraper she's walking by.
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** The monster kidnaps her when she's walking under open sky.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': The monster snatches Carmine by the head, but her body stays.
* '''Reconstructed''': Carmine shoots the monster before it can render her fully defenseless. She has a few bruises from the fall, but at least she knows never to wear a baseball cap to an infestation, no matter how much the light stings her eyes.
* '''Reconstructed''': Carmine shoots the monster before it can render her fully defenseless. She has a few bruises from the fall, but at least she knows never to wear a baseball cap to an infestation, no matter how much the light stings her eyes.
* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Played For Laughs:''' ???
* '''Played For Drama:''' ???
* '''Played For Drama:''' ???
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* '''Played For Laughs:''' ???
'''Deconstructed''': The monster snatches Carmine by the head, but her body stays.
*'''Played For Drama:''' ???
'''Reconstructed''': Carmine shoots the monster before it can render her fully defenseless. She has a few bruises from the fall, but at least she knows never to wear a baseball cap to an infestation, no matter how much the light stings her eyes.
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Back to VerticalKidnapping.
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Back to VerticalKidnapping.
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
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* '''Justified''': The beast has SuperStrength.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** The beast has SuperStrength.
** The beast has SuperStrength.
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*** [[GenreSavvy Anyone who's read this trope]].
* '''Inverted''': Carmine gets the literal drop on the creature, leaping down on top of it in an ambush.
* '''Inverted''': Carmine gets the literal drop on the creature, leaping down on top of it in an ambush.
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** Carmine gets the literal drop on the creature, leaping down on top of it in an ambush.
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* '''Defied''': While searching for the monster, the ceiling is the first place Carmine looks.
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** While searching for the monster, the ceiling is the first place Carmine looks.
** While searching for the monster, the ceiling is the first place Carmine looks.
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* '''Invoked''': Survivors find a mysteriously intact room, they roll in an explosive decoy, the cieling creatures's meal blows up, killing many and dropping the rest for the survivors to bullet sweep. The first comment: "Just like fishing."
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* '''Invoked''': Survivors find a mysteriously intact room, they roll in an explosive decoy, the cieling creatures's ceiling creature's meal blows up, killing many and dropping the rest for the survivors to bullet sweep. The first comment: "Just like fishing."
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* '''Deconstructed''': ???
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* '''Reconstructed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': ???
The monster snatches Carmine by the head, but her body stays.
* '''Reconstructed''':???Carmine shoots the monster before it can render her fully defenseless. She has a few bruises from the fall, but at least she knows never to wear a baseball cap to an infestation, no matter how much the light stings her eyes.
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* '''Invoked''': ???Survivors find a mysteriously intact room, they roll in an explosive decoy, the cieling creatures's meal blows up, killing many and dropping the rest for the survivors to bullet sweep. The first comment: "Just like fishing."
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** Carmine is ProperlyParanoid and wears a necklace and cowl with sharp spikes on it. She also keeps a handgun trained on the space directly above her, just in case.
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*** [[GenreSavvy Anyone who's read this trope]].
