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* '''Exploited''': Alice having this kind of response lets her play the long game in regards to the people she's furious with. Anyone GenreSavvy enough to expect UnstoppableRage or a RoaringRampageOfRevenge may be surprised when they hear that no, she's totally fine with it. That doesn't help them too much the following night, when she's calmly smothering them with a pillow for what they did.
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* '''Exploited''': Alice having this kind of response lets her play the long game in regards to the people she's furious with. Anyone GenreSavvy enough to expect UnstoppableRage or a RoaringRampageOfRevenge may be surprised when they hear that [[BlatantLies no, she's totally fine with it. it]].That doesn't help them too much the following night, when she's calmly smothering them with a pillow for what they did.
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* '''Exaggerated'''':
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* '''Exaggerated'''': '''Exaggerated''':
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* '''Discussed''': "You know, you appear unusually calm when you're angry with me."
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* '''Discussed''': '''Discussed''':
** "You know, you appear unusually calm when you're angry with me.""
** "I thought she would be furious as hell but she seems rather rather calm so it's probably not a big deal after all." "Dude, that's worse than her going into an UnstoppableRage!"
** "You know, you appear unusually calm when you're angry with me.
** "I thought she would be furious as hell but she seems rather rather calm so it's probably not a big deal after all." "Dude, that's worse than her going into an UnstoppableRage!"
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* '''Conversed''': "It's strange how Alice looks so calm, even when she's trying to crush your bones to dust."
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* '''Conversed''': "It's strange how Alice looks so calm, even when she's trying to crush your bones to dust." "It's still the best scene in the show."
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* '''Played For Drama''': Alice is normally loud, brash and a motormouth. [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness So when she seems completely serene, all of her friends/allies immediately back away from her.]]
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* '''Played For Drama''': Alice is normally loud, brash and a motormouth. [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness So when she seems completely serene, serene]], all of her friends/allies immediately back away from her.]]
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** Alice brutally beats Bob up while putting on a very happy and cheerful face
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** Alice brutally beats Bob up while putting on a very happy and cheerful faceface.
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* '''Discussed''':
--> '''Bob''': You know, you appear unusually calm when you're angry with me.
--> '''Bob''': You know, you appear unusually calm when you're angry with me.
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* '''Discussed''':
--> '''Bob''': You'''Discussed''': "You know, you appear unusually calm when you're angry with me."
--> '''Bob''': You
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* '''Straight''': Alice acts furious at Bob, but appears serene.
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* '''Straight''': Alice acts is furious at Bob, but appears serene.calm.
** Alice brutally beats Bob up while putting on a very happy and cheerful face
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* '''Inverted''': Alice appears furious, but is actually happy inside.
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* '''Inverted''': Alice is very happy at Bob, but she appears furious, but is actually happy inside.furious.
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* '''Zig Zagged''':
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* '''Zig Zagged''':'''Zig-Zagged''':
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* '''Enforced''': ???
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* '''Enforced''': ???The creator wanted to make Alice look more badass.
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** Alice makes a point if telling everybody that when she's wearing a poker face, she's not angry (maybe annoyed at the most), and if she's ever angry, [[ScreamingWarrior she makes it]] [[GameFace perfectly well known]].
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** Alice makes a point if of telling everybody that when she's wearing a poker face, she's not angry (maybe annoyed at the most), and if she's ever angry, [[ScreamingWarrior she makes it]] [[GameFace perfectly well known]].
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** Alice is just not the kind of person to get violent or shout at people, but that doesn't mean she doesn't feel anger.
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** Alice is just not the kind of person to get violent or shout at people, but that doesn't mean she doesn't feel anger.get upset.
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** Alice has already let out her UnstoppableRage and she's calmed down, but she's still upset.
** Alice is just not the kind of person to get violent or shout at people, but that doesn't mean she doesn't feel anger.
** Alice is just not the kind of person to get violent or shout at people, but that doesn't mean she doesn't feel anger.
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** Alice is dealing with {{troll}}s seeking to trigger her into an UnstoppableRage, so she responds in such a way that denies them what they're looking for.
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** Alice is dealing with {{troll}}s seeking to trigger push her into an UnstoppableRage, past her RageBreakingPoint, so she responds in such a way that denies them what they're looking for.
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** Alice is dealing with {{troll}}s seeking to trigger her into an UnstoppableRage, so she responds in such a way that denies them what they're looking for, and [[BeCarefulWhatYouWish in fact gives them]] [[OhCrap the opposite reaction]].
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** Alice is dealing with {{troll}}s seeking to trigger her into an UnstoppableRage, so she responds in such a way that denies them what they're looking for, and [[BeCarefulWhatYouWish in fact gives them]] [[OhCrap the opposite reaction]].for.
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** Alice is dealing with {{troll}}s seeking to trigger her into an UnstoppageRage, so she responds in such a way that denies them what they're looking for, and [[BeCarefulWhatyouWish in fact gives them]] [[OhCrap the opposite reaction]].
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** Alice is dealing with {{troll}}s seeking to trigger her into an UnstoppageRage, UnstoppableRage, so she responds in such a way that denies them what they're looking for, and [[BeCarefulWhatyouWish [[BeCarefulWhatYouWish in fact gives them]] [[OhCrap the opposite reaction]].
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* '''Invoked''': Alice decides to stay calm, knowing that an UnstoppableRage will cause more problems than it fixes.
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* '''Invoked''': '''Invoked''':
** Alice decides to stay calm, knowing that an UnstoppableRage will cause more problems than itfixes.fixes.
** Alice is dealing with {{troll}}s seeking to trigger her into an UnstoppageRage, so she responds in such a way that denies them what they're looking for, and [[BeCarefulWhatyouWish in fact gives them]] [[OhCrap the opposite reaction]].
** Alice decides to stay calm, knowing that an UnstoppableRage will cause more problems than it
** Alice is dealing with {{troll}}s seeking to trigger her into an UnstoppageRage, so she responds in such a way that denies them what they're looking for, and [[BeCarefulWhatyouWish in fact gives them]] [[OhCrap the opposite reaction]].
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* '''Averted''': Alice shows anger normally.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** Alice shows angernormally.normally.
** UnstoppableRage
** Alice shows anger
** UnstoppableRage
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** Alice very calmly explains the horrific acts of revenge she will perform on Bob.
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** Alice very calmly [[ToThePain explains the horrific acts of revenge she will perform perform]] on Bob.
