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* '''Justified''': The stakes are so high the only way to ensure the hero's performance is to put her through TrainingFromHell and never let her relax for a single second.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** The stakes are so high the only way to ensure the hero's performance is to put her through TrainingFromHell and never let her relax for a singlesecond.second.
** Olivia was ForcedIntoEvil and can't outright join Alice and the heroes but still wants to help them as best she can under the circumstances.
** The stakes are so high the only way to ensure the hero's performance is to put her through TrainingFromHell and never let her relax for a single
** Olivia was ForcedIntoEvil and can't outright join Alice and the heroes but still wants to help them as best she can under the circumstances.
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%%* '''Reconstructed''': In the end, the training method proves to be effective after all and the student forgives the mentor. Both are celebrated for saving mankind.
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%%* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** In the end, the training method proves to be effective after all and the student forgives the mentor. Both are celebrated for savingmankind.mankind.
** Olivia knew going into this that her reputation and any possible good relationship with Alice may well be shot to hell, but considers such a ZeroApprovalGambit a worthwhile sacrifice.
** In the end, the training method proves to be effective after all and the student forgives the mentor. Both are celebrated for saving
** Olivia knew going into this that her reputation and any possible good relationship with Alice may well be shot to hell, but considers such a ZeroApprovalGambit a worthwhile sacrifice.
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* '''Subverted''': When finally cornered Olivia claims to have been training Alice all along, but was only deceiving her.
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* '''Subverted''': When finally cornered cornered, Olivia claims to have been training Alice all along, but was only deceiving her.
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* '''Subverted''': When finally corned Olivia claims to have been training Alice all along, but was only deceiving her.
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* '''Subverted''': When finally corned cornered Olivia claims to have been training Alice all along, but was only deceiving her.
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* '''Subverted''': Olivia is actually an antagonist despite her claims to the opposite.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills she taught Alice [[NiceJobFixingItVillain still prove vital]] to the BigBad's defeat.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills she taught Alice [[NiceJobFixingItVillain still prove vital]] to the BigBad's defeat.
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* '''Subverted''': When finally corned Olivia is actually an antagonist despite her claims to the opposite.
have been training Alice all along, but was only deceiving her.
* '''Double Subverted''':But the skills she taught Alice [[NiceJobFixingItVillain still prove vital]] Said deception turns out to the BigBad's defeat.be Olivia's "final lesson".
* '''Double Subverted''':
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* '''Downplayed''': The mentor is just a DrillSergeantNasty.
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* '''Downplayed''': The mentor is just Olivia gives a DrillSergeantNasty.few helpful tips under the disguise of taunts.
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** The Stealth Mentor training method is effective, but at an incredible personal loss to the hero, who ends up being a BrokenAce or ShellShockedVeteran and will never have a normal life.
** The Stealth Mentor is doing this because he himself is a ShellShockedVeteran or just plain hates the protagonist's guts, not because this is the most effective method.
** The Stealth Mentor's efforts end up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]] and the hero's newfound 'lessons' end up killing the mentor before the latter can explain his motivations.
* '''Reconstructed''': In the end, the training method proves to be effective after all and the student forgives the mentor. Both are celebrated for saving mankind.
* '''Implied''': When the antagonist is defeated, he gives a knowing smirk to the protagonists and simply says "Good luck."
** The Stealth Mentor is doing this because he himself is a ShellShockedVeteran or just plain hates the protagonist's guts, not because this is the most effective method.
** The Stealth Mentor's efforts end up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]] and the hero's newfound 'lessons' end up killing the mentor before the latter can explain his motivations.
* '''Reconstructed''': In the end, the training method proves to be effective after all and the student forgives the mentor. Both are celebrated for saving mankind.
* '''Implied''': When the antagonist is defeated, he gives a knowing smirk to the protagonists and simply says "Good luck."
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** The Stealth Mentor training method is effective, but at an incredible personal loss to the hero, Alice, who ends up being a BrokenAce or ShellShockedVeteran and will never have a normal life.
**The Stealth Mentor Olivia is doing this because he himself she herself is a ShellShockedVeteran or just plain hates the protagonist's Alice's guts, not because this is the most effective method.
**The Stealth Mentor's Olivia's efforts end up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]] and the hero's Alice's newfound 'lessons' end up killing the mentor Olivia before the latter she can explain his her motivations.
* %%* '''Reconstructed''': In the end, the training method proves to be effective after all and the student forgives the mentor. Both are celebrated for saving mankind.
* '''Implied''': Whenthe antagonist Olivia is defeated, he she gives a knowing smirk to the protagonists and simply says "Good luck."
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* '''Implied''': When
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* '''Straight''': The mentor tortures the hero throughout the story, only to reveal in the end that this was the only way to teach the hero the necessary skills to fight the real BigBad.
* '''Exaggerated''': The mentor not only physically injures the hero in the course of his action but also allows great collateral damage to occur just to torture the hero more.
* '''Exaggerated''': The mentor not only physically injures the hero in the course of his action but also allows great collateral damage to occur just to torture the hero more.
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* '''Straight''': The Olivia is a mentor who tortures the hero [[TheHero Alice]] throughout the story, story under the guise of real conflict, only to reveal in the end that this was the only way to teach the hero the necessary skills to fight the real BigBad.
*'''Exaggerated''': The mentor '''Exaggerated''':
** Olivia not only physically injuresthe hero Alice in the course of his her action but also allows great collateral damage to occur just to torture the hero more.her more.
** Every hardship Alice had experienced up to that point was a simulation to prepare her for her eventual release into reality.
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** Olivia not only physically injures
** Every hardship Alice had experienced up to that point was a simulation to prepare her for her eventual release into reality.
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* '''Justified''': The stakes are so high the only way to ensure the hero's performance is to put him through TrainingFromHell and never let him relax for a single second.
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* '''Justified''': The stakes are so high the only way to ensure the hero's performance is to put him her through TrainingFromHell and never let him her relax for a single second.
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** The mentor is as nice to the hero as possible, basically coddling him in order to make him loyal to the cause.
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** The mentor Olivia is as nice to the hero as possible, basically coddling him her in order to make him her loyal to the cause.
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* '''Subverted''': The supposed mentor is actually an antagonist despite his claims to the opposite.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills he taught to the hero [[NiceJobFixingItVillain still prove vital]] to the BigBad's defeat.
* '''Parodied''': The mentor puts the hero through a TraumaCongaLine for his own amusement.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Sometimes the character acts as a mentor, sometimes he just follows his own schemes, depending on what mood he is in during the day.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills he taught to the hero [[NiceJobFixingItVillain still prove vital]] to the BigBad's defeat.
* '''Parodied''': The mentor puts the hero through a TraumaCongaLine for his own amusement.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Sometimes the character acts as a mentor, sometimes he just follows his own schemes, depending on what mood he is in during the day.
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* '''Subverted''': The supposed mentor Olivia is actually an antagonist despite his her claims to the opposite.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skillshe she taught to the hero Alice [[NiceJobFixingItVillain still prove vital]] to the BigBad's defeat.
* '''Parodied''':The mentor Olivia puts the hero Alice through a TraumaCongaLine for his her own amusement.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Sometimesthe character Olivia acts as a mentor, sometimes he just follows his own schemes, depending on what mood he is in during the day.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills
* '''Parodied''':
* '''Zig Zagged''': Sometimes
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* '''Enforced''': The antagonist becomes so much of an EnsembleDarkHorse that the writers are forced to change his motivations.
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* '''Enforced''': The antagonist Olivia becomes so much of an EnsembleDarkHorse that the writers are forced to change his her motivations.
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* '''Exploited''': The heroes deliberately study the enemy's movements to outsmart them.
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* '''Defied''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': The heroes deliberately put themselves in harm's way with Olivia to study the enemy's movements to outsmart them.
her technique.
* '''Defied''':???"Look, I don't care if you're some freakish mentor secretly plotting to train me. I only care about getting what I came here for and seeing to it that all of my REAL allies stay alive. So if you ever cross me again, I ''will'' kill you. Understand?"
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* '''Conversed''': "Don't worry, in the end it will turn out that Professor Stricticus is only assigning them extra work to get them to learn the essential spells to kill Lord Dedstroke, but HE'S actually-" "Dude! Spoilers!"
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* '''Conversed''': "Don't worry, in Alice. In the end it will turn out that Professor Evil Doctor Stricticus is only assigning attacking them extra work in each area to get them to learn the essential spells to kill Lord Dedstroke, but in the epilogue, it'll turn out that HE'S actually-" "Dude! Spoilers!"
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* '''Subverted''': The mentor is actually an antagonist despite his claims to the opposite.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills he taught to the hero still prove vital to the BigBad's defeat.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills he taught to the hero still prove vital to the BigBad's defeat.
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* '''Subverted''': The supposed mentor is actually an antagonist despite his claims to the opposite.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills he taught to the hero [[NiceJobFixingItVillain still provevital vital]] to the BigBad's defeat.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills he taught to the hero [[NiceJobFixingItVillain still prove
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* '''Conversed''': "Don't worry, in the end it will turn out that Professor Stricticus is only assigning them extra work to get them to learn the essential spells to kill Lord Dedstroke."
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* '''Conversed''': "Don't worry, in the end it will turn out that Professor Stricticus is only assigning them extra work to get them to learn the essential spells to kill Lord Dedstroke."Dedstroke, but HE'S actually-" "Dude! Spoilers!"
* '''Implied''': When the antagonist is defeated, he gives a knowing smirk to the protagonists and simply says "Good luck."
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???"So is this whole putting-me-through-hell thing meant to make me better at this, or are you just an asshole?"
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* '''Discussed''': "Only the enemy can teach you how to destroy and conquer. [[EndersGame From now on, I am your enemy.]]"
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* '''Discussed''': "Only the enemy can teach you how to destroy and conquer. [[EndersGame [[Literature/EndersGame From now on, I am your enemy.]]"
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** The StealthMentor training method is effective, but at an incredible personal loss to the hero, who ends up being a BrokenAce or ShellShockedVeteran and will never have a normal life.
** The StealthMentor is doing this because he himself is a ShellShockedVeteran or just plain hates the protagonist's guts, not because this is the most effective method.
** The [[StealthMentor Stealth Mentor's]] efforts end up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]] and the hero's newfound 'lessons' end up killing the mentor before the latter can explain his motivations.
** The StealthMentor is doing this because he himself is a ShellShockedVeteran or just plain hates the protagonist's guts, not because this is the most effective method.
** The [[StealthMentor Stealth Mentor's]] efforts end up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]] and the hero's newfound 'lessons' end up killing the mentor before the latter can explain his motivations.
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** The StealthMentor Stealth Mentor training method is effective, but at an incredible personal loss to the hero, who ends up being a BrokenAce or ShellShockedVeteran and will never have a normal life.
** TheStealthMentor Stealth Mentor is doing this because he himself is a ShellShockedVeteran or just plain hates the protagonist's guts, not because this is the most effective method.
** The[[StealthMentor Stealth Mentor's]] Mentor's efforts end up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]] and the hero's newfound 'lessons' end up killing the mentor before the latter can explain his motivations.
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* '''Inverted''': The mentor is as nice to the hero as possible, basically coddling him in order to make him loyal to the cause.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** The mentor is as nice to the hero as possible, basically coddling him in order to make him loyal to the cause.
** The mentor is as nice to the hero as possible, basically coddling him in order to make him loyal to the cause.
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** [[TreacherousAdvisor An antagonist poses as a mentor to sabotage the hero.]]
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* '''Deconstructed''': The StealthMentor training method is effective, but at an incredible personal loss to the hero, who ends up being a BrokenAce or ShellShockedVeteran and will never have a normal life.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** The StealthMentor training method is effective, but at an incredible personal loss to the hero, who ends up being a BrokenAce or ShellShockedVeteran and will never have a normal life.
** The StealthMentor training method is effective, but at an incredible personal loss to the hero, who ends up being a BrokenAce or ShellShockedVeteran and will never have a normal life.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The StealthMentor training method is effective, but at an incredible personal loss to the hero, who ends up being a BrokenAce or ShellShockedVeteran and will never have a normal life.
**The StealthMentor is doing this because he himself is a ShellShockedVeteran or just plain hates the protagonist's guts, not because this is the most effective method.
* '''Reconstructed''': In the end, the training method proves to be effective after all and the student forgives the mentor. Both are celebrated for saving mankind.
**The StealthMentor is doing this because he himself is a ShellShockedVeteran or just plain hates the protagonist's guts, not because this is the most effective method.
* '''Reconstructed''': In the end, the training method proves to be effective after all and the student forgives the mentor. Both are celebrated for saving mankind.
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* '''Discussed''': "Only the enemy can teach you how to destroy and conquer. From now on, I am your enemy."
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* '''Discussed''': "Only the enemy can teach you how to destroy and conquer. [[EndersGame From now on, I am your enemy."]]"
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* '''Parodied''': The mentor puts the hero through a HumiliationCongaLine for his own amusement.
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* '''Parodied''': The mentor puts the hero through a HumiliationCongaLine TraumaCongaLine for his own amusement.
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* '''Exploited''': The heroes deliberately study the enemy's movements to [[KnowThyEnemy outsmart them]].
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* '''Exploited''': The heroes deliberately study the enemy's movements to [[KnowThyEnemy outsmart them]].them.
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'''Basic Trope''': A mentor poses as an antagonist to force the hero to become stronger.
* '''Straight''': The mentor tortures the hero throughout the story, only to reveal in the end that this was the only way to teach the hero the necessary skills to fight the real BigBad.
* '''Exaggerated''': The mentor not only physically injures the hero in the course of his action but also allows great collateral damage to occur just to torture the hero more.
* '''Downplayed''': The mentor is just a DrillSergeantNasty.
* '''Justified''': The stakes are so high the only way to ensure the hero's performance is to put him through TrainingFromHell and never let him relax for a single second.
* '''Inverted''': The mentor is as nice to the hero as possible, basically coddling him in order to make him loyal to the cause.
* '''Subverted''': The mentor is actually an antagonist despite his claims to the opposite.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills he taught to the hero still prove vital to the BigBad's defeat.
* '''Parodied''': The mentor puts the hero through a HumiliationCongaLine for his own amusement.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Sometimes the character acts as a mentor, sometimes he just follows his own schemes, depending on what mood he is in during the day.
* '''Averted''': The heroes never learn.
* '''Enforced''': The antagonist becomes so much of an EnsembleDarkHorse that the writers are forced to change his motivations.
* '''Lampshaded''': ???
* '''Invoked''': "I don't want you to be nice to me. I need an enemy. Someone who forces me to get better."
* '''Exploited''': The heroes deliberately study the enemy's movements to [[KnowThyEnemy outsmart them]].
* '''Defied''': ???
* '''Discussed''': "Only the enemy can teach you how to destroy and conquer. From now on, I am your enemy."
* '''Conversed''': "Don't worry, in the end it will turn out that Professor Stricticus is only assigning them extra work to get them to learn the essential spells to kill Lord Dedstroke."
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%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
* '''Straight''': The mentor tortures the hero throughout the story, only to reveal in the end that this was the only way to teach the hero the necessary skills to fight the real BigBad.
* '''Exaggerated''': The mentor not only physically injures the hero in the course of his action but also allows great collateral damage to occur just to torture the hero more.
* '''Downplayed''': The mentor is just a DrillSergeantNasty.
* '''Justified''': The stakes are so high the only way to ensure the hero's performance is to put him through TrainingFromHell and never let him relax for a single second.
* '''Inverted''': The mentor is as nice to the hero as possible, basically coddling him in order to make him loyal to the cause.
* '''Subverted''': The mentor is actually an antagonist despite his claims to the opposite.
* '''Double Subverted''': But the skills he taught to the hero still prove vital to the BigBad's defeat.
* '''Parodied''': The mentor puts the hero through a HumiliationCongaLine for his own amusement.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Sometimes the character acts as a mentor, sometimes he just follows his own schemes, depending on what mood he is in during the day.
* '''Averted''': The heroes never learn.
* '''Enforced''': The antagonist becomes so much of an EnsembleDarkHorse that the writers are forced to change his motivations.
* '''Lampshaded''': ???
* '''Invoked''': "I don't want you to be nice to me. I need an enemy. Someone who forces me to get better."
* '''Exploited''': The heroes deliberately study the enemy's movements to [[KnowThyEnemy outsmart them]].
* '''Defied''': ???
* '''Discussed''': "Only the enemy can teach you how to destroy and conquer. From now on, I am your enemy."
* '''Conversed''': "Don't worry, in the end it will turn out that Professor Stricticus is only assigning them extra work to get them to learn the essential spells to kill Lord Dedstroke."
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