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* '''Downplayed''': Alice takes a job working for a porn site, but only on the billing end, or in the web design or maintenance aspect.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Alice takes a job working for a porn site, but only on the billing end, or in the web design or maintenance aspect.
** Alice takes a job working for a porn site, but only on the billing end, or in the web design or maintenance aspect.
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* '''Implied''': Alice is a single mom who has more money than she could seemingly get from her day job. When she drives past a strip club, she cringes excessively.
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* '''Implied''': '''Implied''':
** Alice is a single mom who has more money than she could seemingly get from her day job. When she drives past a strip club, she cringes excessively.
** Alice is a stripper. She is seen in a supermarket shopping for toys and childcare supplies and is later seen waiting outside an elementary school.
** Alice is a single mom who has more money than she could seemingly get from her day job. When she drives past a strip club, she cringes excessively.
** Alice is a stripper. She is seen in a supermarket shopping for toys and childcare supplies and is later seen waiting outside an elementary school.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Alice is a stripper only on paper, a sex slave in reality. There are drugs, degradation, and a quickly burnt life which will suffer a disturbing death and leave behind an innocent child to the uselessness of [[DepartmentOfChildDisservices the local child services]].
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** The "I do blowjobs to feed my kids, what kind of sacrifices have you done for your family lately?" rant Alice tosses out at those who wish to help her is quickly revealed to be self-defeatism. She has done absolutely nothing to optimize herself, to seek a way out, to prevent her children from seeing her at her lowest, or even to improve her business. It is IDontWantYourPity to an extreme.
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** The "I do blowjobs to feed my kids, what kind of sacrifices have you done for your family lately?" rant Alice tosses out at those who wish to help her is quickly revealed to be self-defeatism. She has done absolutely nothing to optimize herself, to seek a way out, to prevent her children from seeing her at her lowest, or even to improve her business. It is IDontWantYourPity DontYouDarePityMe to an extreme.
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* '''Deconstructed''': This could bring shame upon Alice's kids, as they are judged for what she does to feed them. (It could also put Alice and/or her kids at risk from belligerent clients.) Not to mention, what kind of example is she setting? Sure, she could tell the kids she's a waitress, or a dancer (but not what ''kind'' of dancer, letting them assume she's a ballerina), or simply that she has a job (but not what that job is), but that would be lying. She may also lose her regular day job if she has one, and someone finds out about her night job.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** This could bring shame upon Alice's kids, as they are judged for what she does to feed them. (It could also put Alice and/or her kids at risk from belligerent clients.) Not to mention, what kind of example is she setting? Sure, she could tell the kids she's a waitress, or a dancer (but not what ''kind'' of dancer, letting them assume she's a ballerina), or simply that she has a job (but not what that job is), but that would be lying. She may also lose her regular day job if she has one, and someone finds out about her night job.
** The "I do blowjobs to feed my kids, what kind of sacrifices have you done for your family lately?" rant Alice tosses out at those who wish to help her is quickly revealed to be self-defeatism. She has done absolutely nothing to optimize herself, to seek a way out, to prevent her children from seeing her at her lowest, or even to improve her business. It is IDontWantYourPity to an extreme.
** This could bring shame upon Alice's kids, as they are judged for what she does to feed them. (It could also put Alice and/or her kids at risk from belligerent clients.) Not to mention, what kind of example is she setting? Sure, she could tell the kids she's a waitress, or a dancer (but not what ''kind'' of dancer, letting them assume she's a ballerina), or simply that she has a job (but not what that job is), but that would be lying. She may also lose her regular day job if she has one, and someone finds out about her night job.
** The "I do blowjobs to feed my kids, what kind of sacrifices have you done for your family lately?" rant Alice tosses out at those who wish to help her is quickly revealed to be self-defeatism. She has done absolutely nothing to optimize herself, to seek a way out, to prevent her children from seeing her at her lowest, or even to improve her business. It is IDontWantYourPity to an extreme.
