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** Damien makes [[CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon a direct, gruesome and particularly bizarre death threat]] directed to Alex's beloved ones. However, the latter is not unsettled because he knows Damien is [[IneffectualDeathThreats just trying to act tough]].
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** Damien makes [[CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon a direct, gruesome gruesome, and particularly bizarre death threat]] directed to Alex's beloved ones. However, the latter is not unsettled because he knows Damien is [[IneffectualDeathThreats just trying to act tough]].
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** Damien casually mentions that Alex probably wouldn't mind not having to work for Jeff any more.
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** Damien casually mentions that Alex probably wouldn't mind not having to work for Jeff any more.anymore.
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** Alex interprets Damien's comment about 'your lovely wife Susan' as a threat; Damien was in fact just making small-talk and, since he has [[EvenEvilHasStandards standards]], is appalled at the thought that he would threaten an innocent bystander.
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** Alex interprets Damien's comment about 'your "your lovely wife Susan' Susan" as a threat; Damien was in fact just making small-talk and, since he has [[EvenEvilHasStandards standards]], is appalled at the thought that he would threaten an innocent bystander.
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** Damien's threats are more like PokeThePoodle: "Nice carpet you've got here. It would be a shame if someone were to... ''track dirt on it.''
** Damien's threat is nowhere near as subtle as his delivery would imply: "This is a nice house you have here. [[{{NonSequitur}} It would be a shame if someone killed your wife".]]
* '''Zig-Zagged''': Alex interprets Damien's compliments as a threat, which surprises Damien. But later Alex's friend sees his Mooks going to Susan's house. But it turns out that they were delivering her flowers. But then Damien becomes jealous and threatens Susan for real.
** Damien's threat is nowhere near as subtle as his delivery would imply: "This is a nice house you have here. [[{{NonSequitur}} It would be a shame if someone killed your wife".]]
* '''Zig-Zagged''': Alex interprets Damien's compliments as a threat, which surprises Damien. But later Alex's friend sees his Mooks going to Susan's house. But it turns out that they were delivering her flowers. But then Damien becomes jealous and threatens Susan for real.
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** Damien's threats are more like PokeThePoodle: "Nice carpet you've got here. It would be a shame if someone were to... ''track dirt on it.''
it''."
** Damien's threat is nowhere near as subtle as his delivery would imply: "This is a nice house you have here.[[{{NonSequitur}} [[NonSequitur It would be a shame if someone killed your wife".]]
wife.]]"
* '''Zig-Zagged''': Alex interprets Damien's compliments as a threat, which surprises Damien. But later Alex's friend sees hisMooks {{Mooks}} going to Susan's house. But it turns out that they were delivering her flowers. But then Damien becomes jealous and threatens Susan for real.
** Damien's threat is nowhere near as subtle as his delivery would imply: "This is a nice house you have here.
* '''Zig-Zagged''': Alex interprets Damien's compliments as a threat, which surprises Damien. But later Alex's friend sees his
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* '''Enforced''': This is a kid's show, and the writers can't get away with Damien making overt threats.
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* '''Enforced''': This is a kid's kids' show, and the writers can't get away with Damien making overt threats.
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* '''Invoked''': "I bet you've seen enough TV to know what I'm talking about when I say how terrible it would be if something happened to your lovely wife".
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* '''Invoked''': "I bet you've seen enough TV to know what I'm talking about when I say how terrible it would be if something happened to your lovely wife".wife."
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** "What a lovely...I'm not going to beat around the bush. Pay up, or Susan dies".
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** "What a lovely...I'm not going to beat around the bush. Pay up, or Susan dies".dies."
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* '''Discussed''': "He talks and acts like a gentleman, but his words and heart are filled with poison. This man evilness knows no limits... He's a terrifying monster".
* '''Conversed''': "This guy has watched too many gangster's movies. Just go and say it outright, damn it!"
* '''Played For Laughs''':
** Damien's threats are FauxHorrific ("it would be a shame if I had to put this tape with a 12-hour marathon of Creator/TonyDanza shows in your plasma TV"). For additional parody points, Alex [[SeriousBusiness reacts]] as if Damien had been threatened with death (or [[AFateWorseThanDeath worse]]).
* '''Conversed''': "This guy has watched too many gangster's movies. Just go and say it outright, damn it!"
* '''Played For Laughs''':
** Damien's threats are FauxHorrific ("it would be a shame if I had to put this tape with a 12-hour marathon of Creator/TonyDanza shows in your plasma TV"). For additional parody points, Alex [[SeriousBusiness reacts]] as if Damien had been threatened with death (or [[AFateWorseThanDeath worse]]).
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* '''Discussed''': "He talks and acts like a gentleman, but his words and heart are filled with poison. This man evilness man's evil knows no limits... limits ... He's a terrifying monster".
monster."
* '''Conversed''': "This guy has watched too manygangster's gangster movies. Just go and say it outright, damn it!"
* '''PlayedFor for Laughs''':
** Damien's threats are FauxHorrific ("it would be a shame if I had to put this tape with a12-hour twelve-hour marathon of Creator/TonyDanza shows in your plasma TV"). For additional parody points, Alex [[SeriousBusiness reacts]] as if Damien had been threatened with death (or [[AFateWorseThanDeath worse]]).
* '''Conversed''': "This guy has watched too many
* '''Played
** Damien's threats are FauxHorrific ("it would be a shame if I had to put this tape with a
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** Damien tries to carry out his threats - emphasis on ''[[EpicFail tries]]''.
** Damien's threats are absurdly hyperbolic - or, if it is funnier, [[NotHyperbole completely lacking in hyperbole]] even if [[ExactWords it really sounds like it does]].
* '''Played For Drama''': Damien is only delivering the threats to Alex because he himself is being threatened, and makes the threats vague because he is just as upset about what his bosses plan to do to Susan.
* '''Played For Horror''': Damien already killed one of Alex's [[WouldHurtAChild children]] to [[MakeAnExampleOfThem make perfectly clear]] that his threat to kill Alex's other child, his wife, his parents and his dog, disguised as him saying he's sorry for the child's passing, [[ProveIAmNotBluffing are not a bluff]].
** Damien's threats are absurdly hyperbolic - or, if it is funnier, [[NotHyperbole completely lacking in hyperbole]] even if [[ExactWords it really sounds like it does]].
* '''Played For Drama''': Damien is only delivering the threats to Alex because he himself is being threatened, and makes the threats vague because he is just as upset about what his bosses plan to do to Susan.
* '''Played For Horror''': Damien already killed one of Alex's [[WouldHurtAChild children]] to [[MakeAnExampleOfThem make perfectly clear]] that his threat to kill Alex's other child, his wife, his parents and his dog, disguised as him saying he's sorry for the child's passing, [[ProveIAmNotBluffing are not a bluff]].
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** Damien tries to carry out his threats - -- emphasis on ''[[EpicFail tries]]''.
** Damien's threats are absurdly hyperbolic- -- or, if it is funnier, [[NotHyperbole completely lacking in hyperbole]] even if [[ExactWords it really sounds like it does]].
* '''PlayedFor for Drama''': Damien is only delivering the threats to Alex because he himself somebody else is being threatened, threatening him, and makes the threats vague because he is just as upset about what his bosses plan to do to Susan.
Susan.
* '''PlayedFor for Horror''': Damien already killed one of Alex's [[WouldHurtAChild children]] to [[MakeAnExampleOfThem make perfectly clear]] that his threat to kill Alex's other child, his wife, his parents and his dog, disguised as him saying he's sorry for the child's passing, [[ProveIAmNotBluffing are not a bluff]].
** Damien's threats are absurdly hyperbolic
* '''Played
* '''Played
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