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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice is extremely sweet and always kind to everyone and everything, a {{Purity Sue}} to the extreme.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice is extremely sweet and always kind to everyone and everything, a {{Purity [[invoked]]{{Purity Sue}} to the extreme.
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** Princess Faye seems to be a typical pretty pink princess...but it turns out she's incredibly politically cunning. When TheEvilPrince of another kingdom attempts to romance her, Faye arranges a little accident for him...
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** Princess Faye Alice seems to be a typical pretty pink princess...but it turns out she's incredibly politically cunning. When TheEvilPrince of another kingdom attempts to romance her, Faye Alice arranges a little accident for him...
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** The princess may not be competent, but she stands for important values she trully believes in. She gives many a RousingSpeech who push the KnightInSourArmor to still uphold his values and save the kingdom just like she saves animals and minorities from cruel treatments.
** But her marriage is annulled because she is treated poorly or her father is condemned for the crime of high treason. She spares their lifes, and marries a HotBlooded prince she reciprocically loves who treats her as well as she treats him, and who indeed rules and makes good political decision, while her generous and indulgent nature temperates him, as she slowly grows into an HonestAdvisor.
** But her marriage is annulled because she is treated poorly or her father is condemned for the crime of high treason. She spares their lifes, and marries a HotBlooded prince she reciprocically loves who treats her as well as she treats him, and who indeed rules and makes good political decision, while her generous and indulgent nature temperates him, as she slowly grows into an HonestAdvisor.
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** The princess may not be competent, but she stands for important values she trully truly believes in. She gives many a RousingSpeech who push the KnightInSourArmor to still uphold his values and save the kingdom just like she saves animals and minorities from cruel treatments.
** But her marriage is annulled because she is treated poorly or her father is condemned for the crime of high treason. She spares theirlifes, lives, and marries a HotBlooded prince she reciprocically reciprocally loves who treats her as well as she treats him, and who indeed rules and makes good political decision, while her generous and indulgent nature temperates him, as she slowly grows into an HonestAdvisor.
** But her marriage is annulled because she is treated poorly or her father is condemned for the crime of high treason. She spares their
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** Princess Faye seems to be a typical pretty pink princess...but it turns out she's incredibly politically cunning. When TheEvilPrince of another kingdom attempts to romance her, Alice arranges a little accident for him...
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** Princess Faye seems to be a typical pretty pink princess...but it turns out she's incredibly politically cunning. When TheEvilPrince of another kingdom attempts to romance her, Alice Faye arranges a little accident for him...
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** Princess Alice seems to be a typical pretty pink princess...but it turns out she's incredibly politically cunning. When TheEvilPrince of another kingdom attempts to romance her, Alice arranges a little accident for him...
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** Princess Alice Faye seems to be a typical pretty pink princess...but it turns out she's incredibly politically cunning. When TheEvilPrince of another kingdom attempts to romance her, Alice arranges a little accident for him...
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** Princess Alice seems to be a typical pretty pink princess...but it turns out she's incredibly politically cunning. When TheEvilPrince of another kingdom attempts to romance her, Alice arranges a little accident for him...