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'''Basic Trope''': One character, (usually an antagonist) carries another (typically a kidnap victim) slung over one of his or her shoulders.
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'''Basic Trope''': One character, (usually an antagonist) carries another (typically a kidnap victim) slung over one of his or her shoulders.shoulders in order to transport them.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Sergei carries Rachel and several other people piled up over one shoulder, to the point where he's basically carrying a human tower.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Sergei carries Rachel and several other people piled up over one shoulder, to the point where he's basically carrying a human tower.tower, and those piled further up are precariously wobbling as they balance atop the person below them.
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* '''Averted''': ???
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* '''Averted''': ???'''Averted''':
** Despite being a big guy, Sergei does not carry anybody.
** Despite being a big guy, Sergei does not carry anybody.
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* '''PlayedForLaughs''': Upon being picked up, Rachel berates Sergei and orders him to put her down, protesting that this is not a dignified manner of transportation. One dissolve later, and Sergei is still carrying Rachel, but the two are now doing things like playing "I spy" and stopping at nearby restaurants for pit-stops as if they were on a road trip.
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* '''PlayedForLaughs''': Upon being picked up, Rachel berates Sergei and orders him to put her down, protesting that this is not a dignified manner of transportation. One dissolve later, and Sergei is still carrying Rachel, but the two are now doing things like playing "I spy" and stopping at nearby restaurants drive-thru's for pit-stops as if they were on a road trip.trip, much to the confusion of the cashier at the window.
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* '''PlayedForLaughs''': Upon being picked up, Rachel berates Sergei and orders him to put her down, protesting that this is not a dignified manner of transportation. One dissolve later, and Sergei is still carrying Rachel, but the two are now doing things like playing "I spy" and stopping at nearby restaurants for pit-stops as if they were on a road trips.
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* '''PlayedForLaughs''': Upon being picked up, Rachel berates Sergei and orders him to put her down, protesting that this is not a dignified manner of transportation. One dissolve later, and Sergei is still carrying Rachel, but the two are now doing things like playing "I spy" and stopping at nearby restaurants for pit-stops as if they were on a road trips.trip.
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored, drumming her fingers on Segei's back, fiddling with a Rubix cube, filling in the crosswords section of a newspaper, eating a meal, etc. before incessantly asking AreWeThereYet?. Sergei looks more and more agitated.
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored, drumming her fingers on Segei's back, fiddling with a Rubix cube, filling in the crosswords section of a newspaper, eating a meal, etc. before incessantly asking AreWeThereYet?. AreWeThereYet Sergei progressively looks more and more agitated.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Sergei carries both Rachel and [[TheSquadette Pvt.]] [[FauxActionGirl Kara]], one on each shoulder.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Sergei carries both Rachel and [[TheSquadette Pvt.]] [[FauxActionGirl Kara]], several other people piled up over one on each shoulder.shoulder, to the point where he's basically carrying a human tower.
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* '''Inverted''': Rachel knocks out a guard after escaping from her cell and carries him over her shoulder while hiding him.
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* '''Inverted''': Rachel knocks out a guard after escaping from her cell and carries him over her shoulder while hiding him.???
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored and asks "[[CasualDangerDialogue Sergei]], AreWeThereYet This isn't the most comfortable form of transportation…"
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored bored, drumming her fingers on Segei's back, fiddling with a Rubix cube, filling in the crosswords section of a newspaper, eating a meal, etc. before incessantly asking AreWeThereYet?. Sergei looks more and asks "[[CasualDangerDialogue Sergei]], AreWeThereYet This isn't the most comfortable form of transportation…"more agitated.
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* '''PlayedForLaughs''': Upon being picked up, Rachel berates Sergei and orders him to put her down, protesting that this is not a dignified manner of transportation. One dissolve later, and Sergei is still carrying Rachel, but the two are now doing things like playing "I spy" and stopping at nearby restaurants for pit-stops as if they were on a road trips.
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored and asks "[[CasualDangerDialog Sergei]], AreWeThereYet This isn't the most comfortable form of transportation…"
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored and asks "[[CasualDangerDialog "[[CasualDangerDialogue Sergei]], AreWeThereYet This isn't the most comfortable form of transportation…"
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored and asks "[[CasualDangerDialog Sergei]], AreWeThereYet? This isn't the most comfortable form of transportation…"
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored and asks "[[CasualDangerDialog Sergei]], AreWeThereYet? AreWeThereYet This isn't the most comfortable form of transportation…"
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* '''Straight''': [[GiantMook Sergei]] hoists [[DistressedDamsel Rachel]] over his shoulder and carries her away while she squirms and pounds her fists against his back in defiance.
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* '''Straight''': [[GiantMook Sergei]] hoists [[DistressedDamsel [[DamselInDistress Rachel]] over his shoulder and carries her away while she squirms and pounds her fists against his back in defiance.
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored and asks "[[CasualDangerDialog Sergei]], [[AreWeThereYet are we there yet?]] This isn't the most comfortable form of transportation…"
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored and asks "[[CasualDangerDialog Sergei]], [[AreWeThereYet are we there yet?]] AreWeThereYet? This isn't the most comfortable form of transportation…"
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': '''Intended Audience Reaction''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': Rachel hides a knife and uses her unconventional vantage point to stab her kidnapper in the back when he least expects it.
* '''Reconstructed''': After that incident, she's [[BoundAndGagged tied up]] to make sure that doesn't happen.
* '''Reconstructed''': After that incident, she's [[BoundAndGagged tied up]] to make sure that doesn't happen.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': Rachel hides a knife and uses her unconventional vantage point to stab her kidnapper in the back when he least expects it.
* '''Reconstructed''': After that incident, she's [[BoundAndGagged tied up]] to make sure that doesn't happen.
* '''Reconstructed''': After that incident, she's [[BoundAndGagged tied up]] to make sure that doesn't happen.
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored and asks "[[CasualDangerDialog Sergei]], [[AreWeThereYet are we there yet?]] this isn't the most comfortable form of transportation…"
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* '''Parodied''': Instead of struggling or crying for help, Rachel looks totally bored and asks "[[CasualDangerDialog Sergei]], [[AreWeThereYet are we there yet?]] this This isn't the most comfortable form of transportation…"
