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** [[WriterOnBoard The author]] wants to use Alice [[SoapboxSadie to express]] [[AuthorAvatar his or her political views]]. or to [[StrawCharacter discredit those he or she is against]].
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** [[WriterOnBoard The author]] wants to use Alice [[SoapboxSadie to express]] [[AuthorAvatar his or her their political views]]. or to [[StrawCharacter discredit those he or she is they are against]].
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* '''Averted''': No one's characterization is narrowed.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** No one's characterization isnarrowed.narrowed.
** [[FlatCharacter Alice was never well-rounded to begin with.]]
** No one's characterization is
** [[FlatCharacter Alice was never well-rounded to begin with.]]
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** If Alice is a {{jerkass}}, not only being an absurdly flat character annoys the audience, but having Alice be ''so'' utterly unlikeable makes the audience hate Alice [[TheScrappy even ''moreso'' than before.]]
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** If Alice is a {{jerkass}}, not only being an absurdly flat character annoys the audience, but having Alice be ''so'' utterly unlikeable makes the audience hate Alice [[TheScrappy even ''moreso'' even]] ''[[TheScrappy moreso]]'' [[TheScrappy than before.]]
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** If Alice is a {{jerkass}}, not only being an absurdly flat character annoys the audience, but having Alice be ''so'' utterly unlikeable makes the audience hate Alice [[TheScrappy even ''moreso'' than before.]]
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* '''Played for Horror''': Alice’s obsession with activism is [[UnderStatement mildly]] [[AxCrazy unsettling.]]
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* '''Played for Horror''': Alice’s crazed obsession with activism is [[UnderStatement mildly]] [[AxCrazy unsettling.]]
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* '''Played for Horror''': Alice’s obsession with activism is [[UnderStatement mildly]] [[AxCrazy unsettling.]]
