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** The work is set inside of a computer system/virtual reality game ([[TheReveal although we are not told that at the beginning]]) with an emphasis on the UltimateShowdownOfUltimateDestiny (people pay $300 a month on the ''Virtuality'' membership for the chance to blast T-Rexes with lasers, and by Jove, they shall!).
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** Single-celled organisms have colonised other planets.
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** Single-celled organisms billions of years ago have fully colonised other planets.
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** In an AlternateHistory timeline, [[Creator/JamesDean James Dean]] is murdered by [[UsefulNotes/FinnsWithFearsomeForests Larry Alan Thorne]].
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** In The work is set in an AlternateHistory timeline, [[Creator/JamesDean James Dean]] is murdered by [[UsefulNotes/FinnsWithFearsomeForests Larry Alan Thorne]].AmbiguousTimePeriod or a RetroUniverse.
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** The héroes BreakOutTheMuseumPiece.
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** The héroes heroes BreakOutTheMuseumPiece.
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** While the 1983 vintage TV showed what at first glance seemed to be S-Video[[labelnote:*]]introduced in 1987[[/labelnote]], a quick look at its back revealed it to be Commodore's LCA[[labelnote:*]]a 1982 precursor[[/labelnote]].
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** [[TimeCrash Time has already broken down.]] [[SchizoTech This results in a sort of patchwork world made up of different places from different time periods, and after a fray and a handful of conflicts, the technology is mutually shared throughout history]] [[PunkPunk with the world's different time periods slowly blending to create new technologies from existing ones throughout history.]] [[EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs And people have tamed dinosaurs and kept them as pets!]]
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** [[TimeCrash Time has already broken down.]] [[SchizoTech This results in a sort of patchwork world made up of different places from different time periods, and after a fray and a handful of conflicts, the technology is mutually shared throughout history]] [[PunkPunk with the world's different time periods slowly blending to create new technologies from existing ones throughout history.]] [[EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs And people have tamed dinosaurs and kept them as pets!]]pets!
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** People use ''VideoGame/{{Fortnite}}'' dances in 1405 AD.
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** Accurate sources and surviving examples of materials from the age that the story is set in may be incomplete, inaccurate, in short supply or too delicate to be used, meaning that even if the producers do care they still have to do the best with what they have, even if it means extrapolating based on the evidence or using anachronistic.
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** Accurate sources and surviving examples of materials from the age that the story is set in may be incomplete, inaccurate, in short supply or too delicate to be used, meaning that even if the producers do care they still have to do the best with what they have, even if it means extrapolating based on the evidence or using anachronistic.anachronistic stand-ins.
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removed an Up To Eleven wick; added Played For Horror to the optional items
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** Browning M2s and Boeing B-52s still in US service in ''2157''.
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** One of the characters is a time traveller who [[GivingRadioToTheRomans brings anachronistic elements with them]] into other time periods.
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** One of the characters is a time traveller traveler who [[GivingRadioToTheRomans brings anachronistic elements with them]] into other time periods.
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** It turns out that Bob is stuck in a LotusEaterMachine and that the anachronistic world is merely a fake created by someone who didn't care for getting the details right as long as Bob was out of the way.
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** The setting has [[TotallyRadical modern language]] used to convey similar connotations but explicitly notes it is a TranslationConvention and any OrphanedEtymology is a side effect of the translationor to avoid 'spoilers' toto those downtime. The FramingDevice notes as an example, GodwinsLaw references explicitly often appear to those from before World War II as [[NephariousPharaoh references to wicked pharaohs]].
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** The setting has characters use modern (or [[TotallyRadical modern language]] used to convey similar connotations only slightly outdated]]) speech patterns, but the work explicitly notes it that this is a form of TranslationConvention and that any OrphanedEtymology is a side effect of the translationor translation (or to avoid 'spoilers' toto for those downtime. downtime). The FramingDevice notes as an example, gives a specific example: GodwinsLaw references explicitly often appear to those from before World War II as [[NephariousPharaoh references to wicked pharaohs]].
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* '''Exploited''': [[TheAncientConspiracy The Shadowed Light]] include deliberate anachronisms to what they have preplanned to make any disclosure of their works look like bad forgeries.
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* '''Exploited''': [[TheAncientConspiracy [[AncientConspiracy The Shadowed Light]] include deliberate anachronisms to what they have preplanned to make any disclosure of their works look like bad forgeries.
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** The setting has [[TotallyRadical modern language]] used to convey similar connotations but explicitly notes it is a TranslationConvention and any OrphanedEtymology is either a side effect of the translation. The FramingDevice does not that it avoids giving 'spoilers' to those downtime. GodwinsLaw references explictly generally appears to those from before WorldWarTwo as [[NephariousPharaoh references to wicked pharaohs.]]
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** The setting has [[TotallyRadical modern language]] used to convey similar connotations but explicitly notes it is a TranslationConvention and any OrphanedEtymology is either a side effect of the translation. The FramingDevice does not that it avoids giving translationor to avoid 'spoilers' to toto those downtime. The FramingDevice notes as an example, GodwinsLaw references explictly generally appears explicitly often appear to those from before WorldWarTwo World War II as [[NephariousPharaoh references to wicked pharaohs.]]pharaohs]].
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** In an AlternateHistory timeline, [[Creator/JamesDean]] is murdered by [[UsefulNotes/FinnsWithFearsomeForests Larry Alan Thorne]].
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** In an AlternateHistory timeline, [[Creator/JamesDean]] [[Creator/JamesDean James Dean]] is murdered by [[UsefulNotes/FinnsWithFearsomeForests Larry Alan Thorne]].
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** An item exists in a work set a few years before it should be commonplace but is suggested to be a prototype.
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** A carriage salesman has all of the hallmarks of a car dealership.
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** The setting has [[TotallyRadical modern language]] used to convey similar connotations but explicitly notes it is a TranslationConvention and [[. any OrphanedEtymology is either a side effect of the translation. The FramingDevice does not that it avoids giving 'spoilers' to those downtime. GodwinsLaw references explictly generally appears to those from before WorldWarTwo as [[NephariousPharaoh references to wicked pharaohs.]]
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* '''Defied''': "Time police" ensure that time travellers do not leave anything in the wrong era.
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* '''Defied''': "Time police" ensure that time travellers do not leave anything in the wrong era.
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* '''Invoked''': Time travellers travelers leave a few pieces of modern technology lying around specifically to see what happens when you mix a few items of modern technology into an older setting.
* '''Exploited''':???
[[TheAncientConspiracy The Shadowed Light]] include deliberate anachronisms to what they have preplanned to make any disclosure of their works look like bad forgeries.
* '''Defied''': "Time police" ensure that timetravellers travelers do not leave anything in the wrong era.
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* '''Defied''': "Time police" ensure that time
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** Bob has a modern revolver which superficially resembles a six shooter and a metal lined fast draw holster. This is {{foreshadowing}} that he is a TimeTraveler.
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** Bob has a modern revolver which superficially resembles a six shooter and a metal lined fast draw holster. This is {{foreshadowing}} that he is a TimeTraveler.{{TimeTravel}}er.
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** New Radicals' "You Get What You Give" plays during a high school graduation in 1997, seeing how the single came out in 1998.
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** [[VideoGame/AceCombat F-22s are chasing down MiG-21s and vice versa.]]
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** The author deliberately obscures the exact time the story takes place in to create a timeless, slightly surreal world that leaves the reader off-balance and resists efforts to [[MeasuringTheMarigolds ground it too heavily in reality]].
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** The author deliberately obscures the exact time era the story takes place in to create a timeless, slightly surreal world that leaves the reader off-balance and resists efforts to [[MeasuringTheMarigolds ground it too heavily in reality]].
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The author wanted to [[WorldBuilding create his own fictional universe]] and didn't care about realism. He just wanted the story to run on RuleOfCool, so he [[SchizoTech mixed and matched whatever he wanted.]]
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** The author wanted to [[WorldBuilding create his own fictional universe]] and didn't care about realism. He just wanted the story to run on RuleOfCool, so he [[SchizoTech mixed and matched whatever he wanted.]]]]
** The author deliberately obscures the exact time the story takes place in to create a timeless, slightly surreal world that leaves the reader off-balance and resists efforts to [[MeasuringTheMarigolds ground it too heavily in reality]].
** The author wanted to [[WorldBuilding create his own fictional universe]] and didn't care about realism. He just wanted the story to run on RuleOfCool, so he [[SchizoTech mixed and matched whatever he wanted.
** The author deliberately obscures the exact time the story takes place in to create a timeless, slightly surreal world that leaves the reader off-balance and resists efforts to [[MeasuringTheMarigolds ground it too heavily in reality]].
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** [[UpToEleven Single-celled organisms have colonised other planets.]]