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'''Basic Trope''': An ally who is indifferent and dismissive of his teammates.
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'''Basic Trope''': An ally who is indifferent and dismissive of his their teammates.
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** Ichigo has [[NotInThisForYourRevolution his own reasons in defeating Evulz]].
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** Ichigo has [[NotInThisForYourRevolution his own reasons in for defeating Evulz]].Evulz that aren't perfectly aligned with those of the heroes]].
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* '''Reconstructed''': Ichigo explains that even though he's aloof, it doesn't mean he doesn't care about anyone on the team. Relieved, [[TheHero Hiro]] asks Ichigo if he wants to join him. Ichigo turns down the offer, though the heroes tell him he'd be [[HonorableTrueCompanion welcomed with open arms if he considered it.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': Ichigo explains that even though he's aloof, it doesn't mean he doesn't care about anyone on the team. Relieved, [[TheHero Hiro]] asks Ichigo if he wants to join him. Ichigo turns down the offer, though the heroes tell him he'd be [[HonorableTrueCompanion [[HonoraryTrueCompanion welcomed with open arms if he considered it.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': Ichigo explains that even though he's aloof, it doesn't mean he doesn't care about anyone on the team. Relieved, [[TheHero Hiro]] asks Ichigo if he wants to join him. Ichigo turns down the offer, though the heroes tell him he'd be welcomed with open arms if he considered it.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Ichigo explains that even though he's aloof, it doesn't mean he doesn't care about anyone on the team. Relieved, [[TheHero Hiro]] asks Ichigo if he wants to join him. Ichigo turns down the offer, though the heroes tell him he'd be [[HonorableTrueCompanion welcomed with open arms if he considered it.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': Ichigo explains that even though he's aloof, it doesn't mean he doesn't care about anyone on the team. Relieved, [[TheHero Hiro]] asks Ichigo if he wants to join him. He is welcomed to the team with open arms
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* '''Reconstructed''': Ichigo explains that even though he's aloof, it doesn't mean he doesn't care about anyone on the team. Relieved, [[TheHero Hiro]] asks Ichigo if he wants to join him. He is Ichigo turns down the offer, though the heroes tell him he'd be welcomed to the team with open armsarms if he considered it.
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*'''Reconstructed''': Ichigo explains that even though he's aloof, it doesn't mean he doesn't care about anyone on the team. Relieved, [[TheHero Hiro]] asks Ichigo if he wants to join him. He is welcomed to the team with open arms
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** Ichigo is TheStoic.
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* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Discussed''': ???
"What'll it take for Ichigo to work with us? He'd make a great teammate if it weren't for his distant attitude.
* '''Conversed''':???"Ichigo doesn't seem to care about the heroes very much. Hopefully he comes around."
* '''Implied''': Ichigo simply moves on with his life after working with the heroes.
* '''Deconstructed''': Ichigo's aloofness causes the heroes to turn away from him out of thinking that he doesn't care at all about anyone.
* '''Conversed''':
* '''Implied''': Ichigo simply moves on with his life after working with the heroes.
* '''Deconstructed''': Ichigo's aloofness causes the heroes to turn away from him out of thinking that he doesn't care at all about anyone.
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* '''Straight''': Ichigo helps out the heroes defeat Emperor Evulz, but acts indifferent and avoidant towards them.
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* '''Straight''': Ichigo helps out the heroes defeat Emperor Evulz, but acts indifferent and avoidant towards them.
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* '''Parodied''': Ichigo frequently forgets who the heroes are despite having fought them several times before. His RunningGag consists of him going "Who the fuck are you guys!?" to the other heroes OncePerEpisode.
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* '''Parodied''': Ichigo frequently forgets who the heroes are despite having fought alongside them several times before. His RunningGag consists of him going "Who the fuck are you guys!?" to the other heroes OncePerEpisode.
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* '''Parodied''': Ichigo frequently forgets who the heroes are despite having fought them several times before. His RunningGag consists of him going "Who the fuck are you guys!?" OnceAnEpisode.
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* '''Parodied''': Ichigo frequently forgets who the heroes are despite having fought them several times before. His RunningGag consists of him going "Who the fuck are you guys!?" OnceAnEpisode.to the other heroes OncePerEpisode.
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* '''Subverted''': Ichigo [[DefrostingIceQueen warms up]] to the heroes and [[LonerTurnedFriend becomes a permanent ally]]. His RunningGag consists of him going "Who the fuck are you guys!?" OnceAnEpisode.
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* '''Subverted''': Ichigo [[DefrostingIceQueen warms up]] to the heroes and [[LonerTurnedFriend becomes a permanent ally]]. His RunningGag consists of him going "Who the fuck are you guys!?" OnceAnEpisode.
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* '''Parodied''': Ichigo frequently forgets who the heroes are despite having fought them several times before.
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* '''Parodied''': Ichigo frequently forgets who the heroes are despite having fought them several times before. His RunningGag consists of him going "Who the fuck are you guys!?" OnceAnEpisode.
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* '''Subverted''': Ichigo [[DefrostingIceQueen warms up]] to the heroes and [[LonerTurnedFriend becomes a permanent ally]].
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* '''Subverted''': Ichigo [[DefrostingIceQueen warms up]] to the heroes and [[LonerTurnedFriend becomes a permanent ally]]. His RunningGag consists of him going "Who the fuck are you guys!?" OnceAnEpisode.
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* '''Parodied''': ???
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* '''Parodied''': ???Ichigo frequently forgets who the heroes are despite having fought them several times before.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Emperor Evulz targets Ichigo more than the other heroes, as his aloofness makes him an easy picking.
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* '''Downplayed''': Ichigo is the HeroOfAntoherStory and has his own problems to deal with, but helps out with the fight against Emperor Evulz when he can spare the time.
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* '''Downplayed''': Ichigo is the HeroOfAntoherStory HeroOfAnotherStory and has his own problems to deal with, but helps out with the fight against Emperor Evulz when he can spare the time.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Ichigo is the HeroOfAntoherStory and has his own problems to deal with, but helps out with the fight against Emperor Evulz when he can spare the time.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???Ichigo seems like a condescending jerk, only for it to be discovered that he did have a team he was very close with, prior to Emperor Evulz killing them all. He then became too scared of losing people again to make new friends. The heroes then manage to defrost his frozen heart and welcome him into the fold, only to discover that he's still a jerk who looks down on them for not being his first team.
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* '''Invoked''': ???
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* '''Invoked''': ???Emperor Evulz's second in command has been assigned to [[TheMole infiltrate the heroes' team]] and so destroys several of the Emperor's unimportant plots to gain the heroes' trust.
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* '''Defied''': ???
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* '''Defied''': ???After helping the heroes, Ichigo immediately introduces himself, explains his history, and asks to join the group.
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'''Basic Trope''': An ally who is indifferent and dismissive of his teammates.
*'''Straight''': Ichigo helps out the heroes defeat Emperor Evulz, but acts indifferent and avoidant towards them.
*'''Exaggerated''': Ichigo helps the heroes defeat the most wicked villains, but is so cold and condescending that the heroes find him insufferable.
*'''Downplayed''': ???
*'''Justified''':
** Ichigo is just a loner who isn't too fond of ThePowerOfFriendship.
** Ichigo has [[NotInThisForYourRevolution his own reasons in defeating Evulz]].
*'''Inverted''': EnigmaticMinion
*'''Subverted''': Ichigo [[DefrostingIceQueen warms up]] to the heroes and [[LonerTurnedFriend becomes a permanent ally]].
*'''Double Subverted''': ...just right before [[AesopAmnesia forgetting about his lesson on teamwork and friendship]]; however, he still helps them.
*'''Parodied''': ???
*'''Zig Zagged''': ???
*'''Averted''': Ichigo works well with the heroes.
*'''Enforced''': "We need a new ally for the heroes. At least one who isn't a friendly one."
*'''Lampshaded''': "Looks like we're teaming up with someone who flunked teamwork school."
*'''Invoked''': ???
*'''Exploited''': ???
*'''Defied''': ???
*'''Discussed''': ???
*'''Conversed''': ???
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Deconstructed''': ???
%%* '''Reconstructed''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
*'''Straight''': Ichigo helps out the heroes defeat Emperor Evulz, but acts indifferent and avoidant towards them.
*'''Exaggerated''': Ichigo helps the heroes defeat the most wicked villains, but is so cold and condescending that the heroes find him insufferable.
*'''Downplayed''': ???
*'''Justified''':
** Ichigo is just a loner who isn't too fond of ThePowerOfFriendship.
** Ichigo has [[NotInThisForYourRevolution his own reasons in defeating Evulz]].
*'''Inverted''': EnigmaticMinion
*'''Subverted''': Ichigo [[DefrostingIceQueen warms up]] to the heroes and [[LonerTurnedFriend becomes a permanent ally]].
*'''Double Subverted''': ...just right before [[AesopAmnesia forgetting about his lesson on teamwork and friendship]]; however, he still helps them.
*'''Parodied''': ???
*'''Zig Zagged''': ???
*'''Averted''': Ichigo works well with the heroes.
*'''Enforced''': "We need a new ally for the heroes. At least one who isn't a friendly one."
*'''Lampshaded''': "Looks like we're teaming up with someone who flunked teamwork school."
*'''Invoked''': ???
*'''Exploited''': ???
*'''Defied''': ???
*'''Discussed''': ???
*'''Conversed''': ???
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Deconstructed''': ???
%%* '''Reconstructed''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
