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[[folder: Book 2: Sky]]
* As the Crow Master works on his papers, there's a looming shadow behind him.
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* As the Crow Master works on his papers, there's a looming shadow behind him.
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* Soren is slammed into a rock by a dragon, hard enough to shatter his spine. And we're treated to the whole thing without any cutaway, SickeningCrunch and all.
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* Soren is slammed into a rock by a dragon, hard enough to shatter his spine. And we're treated to the whole thing without any cutaway, SickeningCrunch and all.
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* Rayla's panic from the previous episode is only growing, for good reason. She is well aware, that at any moment the young prince she is coming to love, might very well die in her arms at any moment... and all she can do is offer meaningless pleas for him not to die.
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* Rayla's panic from the previous episode is only growing, for good reason. She is well aware, that at any moment the young prince she is may be coming to love, might very well die in her arms at any moment... and all she can do is offer meaningless pleas for him not to die.
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* Remember when Viren said that the dragon prince would grow up to be the most powerful creature in the world? In this episode we see what his fear stems from when Thunder, the king of the Storm Dragons, is on full display. His very presence creates storm clouds which blot out the sun, fires lightning breath that could incinerate a human in one swoop and is overall an unstoppable juggernaut of destruction. Thunder is only on screen for a few minutes but he backs up his reputation without hestiation.
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* Remember when Viren said that the dragon prince would grow up to be the most powerful creature in the world? In this episode we see what his fear stems from when Thunder, the king of the Storm Dragons, is on full display. His very presence creates storm clouds which blot out the sun, fires lightning breath that could incinerate a human in one swoop and is overall an unstoppable juggernaut of destruction. Thunder is only on screen for a few minutes but he backs up his reputation without hestiation.hesitation.
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** Poor Rayla is taken completely off guard by this, Claudia's veteran attacks might have very well been her only previous encounter with Dark Magic. Thus making Callum's rookie dealings with Dark Magic seem only trivial to her. It isn't until Callum starts gasping for air, does she realise what possible danger the young prince might be in.
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** Poor Rayla is taken completely off guard by this, Claudia's veteran attacks might have very well been her only previous encounter with Dark Magic. Thus making Callum's rookie dealings with Dark Magic seem only trivial to her. It isn't until Callum starts gasping for air, does she realise realize what possible danger the young prince might be in.
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* Rayla's panic from the previous episode is only growing, for good reason. She is well aware, that at any moment the young prince she is coming to love, might very well die in her arms at any moment... and all she can do is offer meaningless plees for him not to die.
* Claudia taking a milkberry that she was searching for and offering it to a young deer while the other two flee. She tells it that it's young, strong and healthy, which was why she needed it. The next scene of her [[spoiler: shows her hands sparking with magic, her eyes glowing dangerously and she uses that magic to heal her brother.]] We can already tell what happened to the young deer.
* Claudia taking a milkberry that she was searching for and offering it to a young deer while the other two flee. She tells it that it's young, strong and healthy, which was why she needed it. The next scene of her [[spoiler: shows her hands sparking with magic, her eyes glowing dangerously and she uses that magic to heal her brother.]] We can already tell what happened to the young deer.
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* Rayla's panic from the previous episode is only growing, for good reason. She is well aware, that at any moment the young prince she is coming to love, might very well die in her arms at any moment... and all she can do is offer meaningless plees pleas for him not to die.
* Claudia taking a milkberry that she was searching for and offering it to a young deer while the other two flee. She tells it that it's young, strong and healthy, which was why she needed it. The next scene of her[[spoiler: shows her hands sparking with magic, her eyes glowing dangerously and she uses that magic to heal her brother.]] brother. We can already tell what happened to the young deer.
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* [[spoiler: Aavaros manages to boost Viren's magic to the point that he can fight off an entire group of guards easily including [[LiterallyShatteredLives freezing and shattering one]] and vaporzing vaporizing another, only being forced to surrender due to the sheer number of guards overwhelming him.]].
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[[folder: Echoes Moonrise]]
* Viren yanks Callum's voice out ofThunder]]his body to keep him from screaming for the King, after which he can't [[AndIMustScream form a single word.]] Worse, the guards restrain him and ''let Viren do it.'' Imagine growing up in a setting where you always felt safe and then your honorary uncle and guard do this to you?
* As Callum's leaving the King's tower, he comes across several dead bodies littering the stairwell. It's all BloodlessCarnage, but still a grisly sight.
* Viren yanks Callum's voice out of
* As Callum's leaving the King's tower, he comes across several dead bodies littering the stairwell. It's all BloodlessCarnage, but still a grisly sight.
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a terrifying AdultFear for their Aunt Amaya. In her eyes, her nephews that she swore to protect for her dead sister are now in the hands of a (supposedly) bloodthirsty elf and if she makes the wrong move the boys' lives are forfeit.
* Callum and Ezran's fake hostage situation is
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[[folder: Moonrise]]
* Viren yanks Callum's voice out of his body to keep him from screaming for the King, after which he can't [[AndIMustScream form a single word.]] Worse, the guards restrain him and ''let Viren do it.'' Imagine growing up in a setting where you always felt safe and then your honorary uncle and guard do this to you?
* As Callum's leaving the King's tower, he comes across several dead bodies littering the stairwell. It's all BloodlessCarnage, but still a grisly sight.
* Viren yanks Callum's voice out of his body to keep him from screaming for the King, after which he can't [[AndIMustScream form a single word.]] Worse, the guards restrain him and ''let Viren do it.'' Imagine growing up in a setting where you always felt safe and then your honorary uncle and guard do this to you?
* As Callum's leaving the King's tower, he comes across several dead bodies littering the stairwell. It's all BloodlessCarnage, but still a grisly sight.
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[[folder: Moonrise]]
An Empty Throne]]
* Virenyanks Callum's voice out of his body taking what seems to keep him from screaming for the King, be an enchanted butterfly, and after which a flash of light in his office, he can't [[AndIMustScream form a single word.]] Worse, walks out refreshed while the guards restrain him butterfly looks grey and ''let Viren do it.'' Imagine growing up in a setting where you always felt safe and then your honorary uncle and guard do this to you?
* As Callum's leaving the King's tower, he comes across severaldead bodies littering on the stairwell. It's all BloodlessCarnage, but still a grisly sight. floor.
* Viren
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* Callum and Ezran's fake hostage situation is a terrifying AdultFear for their Aunt Amaya. In her eyes, her nephews that she swore to protect for her dead sister are now in the hands of a (supposedly) bloodthirsty elf and if she makes the wrong move the boys' lives are forfeit.
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[[folder: Bloodthirsty]]
Through the Ice]]
*Callum and Ezran's fake hostage situation is a terrifying AdultFear for their Aunt Amaya. In her eyes, her nephews that she swore to protect for her dead sister are now Ezran going underwater in the hands of a (supposedly) bloodthirsty elf frozen lake and if she makes then not coming back up for a very long time. For a minute it really looked like the wrong move the boys' lives are forfeit.kid wasn't going to make it.
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[[folder: An Empty Throne]]
* Viren taking what seems to be an enchanted butterfly, and after a flash of light in his office, he walks out refreshed while the butterfly looks grey and dead on the floor.
* Viren taking what seems to be an enchanted butterfly, and after a flash of light in his office, he walks out refreshed while the butterfly looks grey and dead on the floor.
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[[folder: An Empty Throne]]
* Viren taking what seems to be an enchanted butterfly,The Dagger and after a flash the Wolf]]
* The FantasticRacism oflight in his office, he walks the whole town when the man with the dagger realizes that Rayla is an elf. They charge at her with pitchforks, brooms and anything else they can get their hands on, angrily chanting "elf" as they chase the trio out refreshed while the butterfly looks grey and dead on the floor.
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[[folder: Through the Ice]]
* Ezran going underwater in the frozen lake and then not coming back up for a very long time. For a minute it really looked like the kid wasn't going to make it.
* Ezran going underwater in the frozen lake and then not coming back up for a very long time. For a minute it really looked like the kid wasn't going to make it.
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[[folder: Through The Cursed Caldera]]
* The giant leech monster that theIce]]
heroes fight. The thing sucked the blood out of a previous creature and wanted to do the same to the group. Even once Rayla kills it, it erupts into smaller leeches and she gets covered in them before Callum knocks them all off.
*Ezran going underwater According to Runaan, whatever the enchanted mirror's function is, it's AFateWorseThanDeath. He [[NothingIsScarier does not elaborate.]]
* Viren turning Runaan into a coin is pretty terrifying, complete with OminousLatinChanting and Viren's NightmareFace. To say nothing of Runaan's horrifying screams - to put this in perspective, the fearless assassin, who's shown little to no emotion up until that moment had been reduced to screaming in terror. And it's pretty clear that Viren has done this to other people in thefrozen lake past...
** Up until this point Gren has displayed DissonantSerenity about being locked in a dungeon. But hearing Runaan scream andthen not coming back up for seeing Viren corrupted by dark magic and with Runaan trapped in a very long time. For a minute it really looked like the kid wasn't going to make it. coin apparently disturbs Gren.
* The giant leech monster that the
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* Viren turning Runaan into a coin is pretty terrifying, complete with OminousLatinChanting and Viren's NightmareFace. To say nothing of Runaan's horrifying screams - to put this in perspective, the fearless assassin, who's shown little to no emotion up until that moment had been reduced to screaming in terror. And it's pretty clear that Viren has done this to other people in the
** Up until this point Gren has displayed DissonantSerenity about being locked in a dungeon. But hearing Runaan scream and
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[[folder: The Dagger and the Wolf]]
* The FantasticRacism of the whole town when the man with the dagger realizes that Rayla is an elf. They charge at her with pitchforks, brooms and anything else they can get their hands on, angrily chanting "elf" as they chase the trio out of town.
* The FantasticRacism of the whole town when the man with the dagger realizes that Rayla is an elf. They charge at her with pitchforks, brooms and anything else they can get their hands on, angrily chanting "elf" as they chase the trio out of town.
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[[folder: The Dagger and the Wolf]]
Wonderstorm]]
*The FantasticRacism of the whole town when the man with the dagger realizes that Rayla is an elf. They charge at investigates a strange noise and finds someone spun up in a spider's web warning her with pitchforks, brooms and anything else they can get their hands on, angrily chanting "elf" as they chase to turn back. When she cuts them loose, the trio inside reveals nothing but dust. It's enough to freak her out of town. to the point where she won't even tell Callum what she saw at first.
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[[folder: The Cursed Caldera]]
* The giant leech monster that the heroes fight. The thing sucked the blood out of a previous creature and wanted to do the same to the group. Even once Rayla kills it, it erupts into smaller leeches and she gets covered in them before Callum knocks them all off.
* According to Runaan, whatever the enchanted mirror's function is, it's AFateWorseThanDeath. He [[NothingIsScarier does not elaborate.]]
* Viren turning Runaan into a coin is pretty terrifying, complete with OminousLatinChanting and Viren's NightmareFace. To say nothing of Runaan's horrifying screams - to put this in perspective, the fearless assassin, who's shown little to no emotion up until that moment had been reduced to screaming in terror. And it's pretty clear that Viren has done this to other people in the past...
** Up until this point Gren has displayed DissonantSerenity about being locked in a dungeon. But hearing Runaan scream and seeing Viren corrupted by dark magic and with Runaan trapped in a coin apparently disturbs Gren.
* The giant leech monster that the heroes fight. The thing sucked the blood out of a previous creature and wanted to do the same to the group. Even once Rayla kills it, it erupts into smaller leeches and she gets covered in them before Callum knocks them all off.
* According to Runaan, whatever the enchanted mirror's function is, it's AFateWorseThanDeath. He [[NothingIsScarier does not elaborate.]]
* Viren turning Runaan into a coin is pretty terrifying, complete with OminousLatinChanting and Viren's NightmareFace. To say nothing of Runaan's horrifying screams - to put this in perspective, the fearless assassin, who's shown little to no emotion up until that moment had been reduced to screaming in terror. And it's pretty clear that Viren has done this to other people in the past...
** Up until this point Gren has displayed DissonantSerenity about being locked in a dungeon. But hearing Runaan scream and seeing Viren corrupted by dark magic and with Runaan trapped in a coin apparently disturbs Gren.
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!!Book Two
[[folder:The Cursed Caldera]]
Heart of a Titan]]
*The giant leech monster Remember when Viren said that the heroes fight. The thing sucked dragon prince would grow up to be the blood out of a previous most powerful creature and wanted to do the same to the group. Even once Rayla kills it, it erupts into smaller leeches and she gets covered in them before Callum knocks them all off.
* According to Runaan, whatever the enchanted mirror's function is, it's AFateWorseThanDeath. He [[NothingIsScarier does not elaborate.]]
* Viren turning Runaan into a coin is pretty terrifying, complete with OminousLatinChanting and Viren's NightmareFace. To say nothing of Runaan's horrifying screams - to put this in perspective, the fearless assassin, who's shown little to no emotion up until that moment had been reduced to screaming in terror. And it's pretty clear that Viren has done this to other peoplein the past...
** Up untilworld? In this point Gren has displayed DissonantSerenity about being locked episode we see what his fear stems from when Thunder, the king of the Storm Dragons, is on full display. His very presence creates storm clouds which blot out the sun, fires lightning breath that could incinerate a human in a dungeon. But hearing Runaan scream one swoop and seeing Viren corrupted by dark magic and with Runaan trapped in is overall an unstoppable juggernaut of destruction. Thunder is only on screen for a coin apparently disturbs Gren.few minutes but he backs up his reputation without hestiation.
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* According to Runaan, whatever the enchanted mirror's function is, it's AFateWorseThanDeath. He [[NothingIsScarier does not elaborate.]]
* Viren turning Runaan into a coin is pretty terrifying, complete with OminousLatinChanting and Viren's NightmareFace. To say nothing of Runaan's horrifying screams - to put this in perspective, the fearless assassin, who's shown little to no emotion up until that moment had been reduced to screaming in terror. And it's pretty clear that Viren has done this to other people
** Up until
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* Rayla investigates a strange noise and finds someone spun up in a spider's web warning her to turn back. When she cuts them loose, the inside reveals nothing but dust. It's enough to freak her out to the point where she won't even tell Callum what she saw at first.
* Rayla investigates a strange noise and finds someone spun up in a spider's web warning her to turn back. When she cuts them loose, the inside reveals nothing but dust. It's enough to freak her out to the point where she won't even tell Callum what she saw at first.
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[[folder: Wonderstorm]]
The Book of Destiny]]
* Callum's fever dream is quickly becoming a nightmare. A very bad nightmare, with very '''REAL''' danger.
** Poor Raylainvestigates a strange noise and finds someone spun up in a spider's web warning is taken completely off guard by this, Claudia's veteran attacks might have very well been her only previous encounter with Dark Magic. Thus making Callum's rookie dealings with Dark Magic seem only trivial to turn back. When her. It isn't until Callum starts gasping for air, does she cuts them loose, realise what possible danger the inside reveals young prince might be in.
*** As a matter of fact, knowing might be even worse. Because despite her ''knowing'' Callum is in danger, there is nothingbut dust. It's enough to freak she can do. All she can do is ''watch'' as her out to friend, who she may have feelings for, gasp helplessly for air as fights in the point where she won't even tell Callum what she saw at first.prison in his own mind.
* Callum's fever dream is quickly becoming a nightmare. A very bad nightmare, with very '''REAL''' danger.
** Poor Rayla
*** As a matter of fact, knowing might be even worse. Because despite her ''knowing'' Callum is in danger, there is nothing
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[[folder: Heart of a Titan]]
* Remember when Viren said that the dragon prince would grow up to be the most powerful creature in the world? In this episode we see what his fear stems from when Thunder, the king of the Storm Dragons, is on full display. His very presence creates storm clouds which blot out the sun, fires lightning breath that could incinerate a human in one swoop and is overall an unstoppable juggernaut of destruction. Thunder is only on screen for a few minutes but he backs up his reputation without hestiation.
[[folder: Heart of a Titan]]
* Remember when Viren said that the dragon prince would grow up to be the most powerful creature in the world? In this episode we see what his fear stems from when Thunder, the king of the Storm Dragons, is on full display. His very presence creates storm clouds which blot out the sun, fires lightning breath that could incinerate a human in one swoop and is overall an unstoppable juggernaut of destruction. Thunder is only on screen for a few minutes but he backs up his reputation without hestiation.
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* Claudia taking a
* Runaan's party is recreated through Viren's magic, but now they're all black and creepily stalk from the shadows with [[RedEyesTakeWarning glowing red eyes]].
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* Callum's fever dream is quickly becoming a nightmare. A very bad nightmare, with very '''REAL''' danger.
** Poor Rayla is taken completely off guard by this, Claudia's veteran attacks might have very well been her only previous encounter with Dark Magic. Thus making Callum's rookie dealings with Dark Magic seem only trivial to her. It isn't until Callum starts gasping for air, does she realise what possible danger the young prince might be in.
*** As a matter of fact, knowing might be even worse. Because despite her ''knowing'' Callum is in danger, there is nothing she can do. All she can do is ''watch'' as her friend, who she may have feelings for, gasp helplessly for air as fights in the prison in his own mind.
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[[folder: Breathe]]
* Rayla's panic from the previous episode is only growing, for good reason. She is well aware, that at any moment the young prince she is coming to love, might very well die in her arms at any moment... and all she can do is offer meaningless plees for him not to die.
* Claudia taking a milkberry that she was searching for and offering it to a young deer while the other two flee. She tells it that it's young, strong and healthy, which was why she needed it. The next scene of her [[spoiler: shows her hands sparking with magic, her eyes glowing dangerously and she uses that magic to heal her brother.]] We can already tell what happened to the young deer.
* Runaan's party is recreated through Viren's magic, but now they're all black and creepily stalk from the shadows with [[RedEyesTakeWarning glowing red eyes]].
* [[spoiler: Aavaros manages to boost Viren's magic to the point that he can fight off an entire group of guards easily including [[LiterallyShatteredLives freezing and shattering one]] and vaporzing another, only being forced to surrender due to the sheer number of guards overwhelming him.]].
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[[folder: Heart of a Titan]]
*Remember when Viren said that the dragon prince would grow up to be the most powerful creature in the world? In this episode we see what his fear stems from when Thunder, the king of the Storm Dragons, is on full display. His very presence creates storm clouds which blot out the sun, fires lightning breath that could incinerate a human in one swoop and is overall an unstoppable juggernaut of destruction. Thunder is only on screen for a few minutes but he backs up his reputation without hestiation.
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*Remember when Viren said that the dragon prince would grow up to be the most powerful creature in the world? In this episode we see what his fear stems from when Thunder, the king of the Storm Dragons, is on full display. His very presence creates storm clouds which blot out the sun, fires lightning breath that could incinerate a human in one swoop and is overall an unstoppable juggernaut of destruction. Thunder is only on screen for a few minutes but he backs up his reputation without hestiation.
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** Poor Rayla is taken completely off guard by this, Claudia's veteran attacks might have very well been her only previous encounter with Dark Magic. Thus making Callum's rookie dealings with Dark Magic seem only trivial to her. It isn't until Callum starts gasping for air, does she realise what possible danger the young prince might be in.
*** As a matter of fact, knowing might be even worse. Because despite her ''knowing'' Callum is in danger, there is nothing she can do. All she can do is ''watch'' as her friend, who she may have feelings for, gasp helplessly for air as fights in the prison in his own mind.
*** As a matter of fact, knowing might be even worse. Because despite her ''knowing'' Callum is in danger, there is nothing she can do. All she can do is ''watch'' as her friend, who she may have feelings for, gasp helplessly for air as fights in the prison in his own mind.
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* Callum's fever dream is quickly becoming a nightmare. A very bad nightmare, with very '''REAL''' danger.
**Poor Rayla is taken completely off guard by this, Claudia's veteran attacks might have very well been her only previous encounter with Dark Magic. Thus making Callum's rookie dealings with Dark Magic seem only trivial to her. It isn't until Callum starts gasping for air, does she realise what possible danger the young prince might be in.
***As a matter of fact, knowing might be even worse. Because despite her ''knowing'' Callum is in danger, there is nothing she can do. All she can do is ''watch'' as her friend, who she may have feelings for, gasp helplessly for air as fights in the prison in his own mind.
* Callum's fever dream is quickly becoming a nightmare. A very bad nightmare, with very '''REAL''' danger.
**Poor Rayla is taken completely off guard by this, Claudia's veteran attacks might have very well been her only previous encounter with Dark Magic. Thus making Callum's rookie dealings with Dark Magic seem only trivial to her. It isn't until Callum starts gasping for air, does she realise what possible danger the young prince might be in.
***As a matter of fact, knowing might be even worse. Because despite her ''knowing'' Callum is in danger, there is nothing she can do. All she can do is ''watch'' as her friend, who she may have feelings for, gasp helplessly for air as fights in the prison in his own mind.
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* Claudia taking a milkberry that she was searching for and offering it to a young deer while the other two flee. She tells it that it's young, strong and healthy, which was why she needed it. The next scene of her [[spoiler: shows her hands sparking with magic, her eyes glowing dangerously and she uses that magic to heal her brother.]] We can already tell what happened to the young deer.
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[[folder: Breathe]]
* Claudia taking a milkberry that she was searching for and offering it to a young deer while the other two flee. She tells it that it's young, strong and healthy, which was why she needed it. The next scene of her [[spoiler: shows her hands sparking with magic, her eyes glowing dangerously and she uses that magic to heal her brother.]] We can already tell what happened to the young deer.
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!!Book Two
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* The FantasticRacism of the whole town when the man with the dagger realizes that Rayla is an elf. They charge at her with pitchforks, brooms and anything else they can get their hands on, angrily chanting "elf" as they chase the trio out of town.
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* According to Runaan, whatever the enchanted mirror's function is, it's AFateWorseThanDeath. He [[NothingIsScarier does not elaborate.]]
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* Viren turning Runaan into a coin is pretty terrifying, complete with OminousLatinChanting and Viren's NightmareFace. To say nothing of Runaan's horrifying screams - to put this in perspective, the fearless assassin, who's shown little to no emotion up until that moment had been reduced to screaming in terror. And it's pretty clear that Viren has done this to other people in the past...
* According to Runaan, whatever the enchanted mirror's function is, it's AFateWorseThanDeath. He [[NothingIsScarier does not elaborate.]]
* According to Runaan, whatever the enchanted mirror's function is, it's AFateWorseThanDeath. He [[NothingIsScarier does not elaborate.]]
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She does tell Callum but she tries not to at first.
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* Rayla investigates a strange noise and finds someone spun up in a spider's web warning her to turn back. When she cuts them loose, the inside reveals nothing but dust. It's enough to freak her out to the point where she won't even tell Callum what she saw.
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* Rayla investigates a strange noise and finds someone spun up in a spider's web warning her to turn back. When she cuts them loose, the inside reveals nothing but dust. It's enough to freak her out to the point where she won't even tell Callum what she saw.saw at first.
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*Viren yanks Callum's voice out of his body to keep him from screaming for the King, after which he can't [[AndIMustScream form a single word.]] Worse, the guards restrain him and ''let Viren do it.'' Imagine growing up in a setting where you always felt safe and then your honorary uncle and guard do this to you?
*As Callum's leaving the King's tower, he comes across several dead bodies littering the stairwell. It's all BloodlessCarnage, but still a grisly sight.
*As Callum's leaving the King's tower, he comes across several dead bodies littering the stairwell. It's all BloodlessCarnage, but still a grisly sight.
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* The giant leech monster that the heroes fight. The thing sucked the blood out of a previous creature and wanted to the same to the group. Even once Rayla kills it, it erupts into smaller leeches and she gets covered in them before Callum knocks them all off.
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* The giant leech monster that the heroes fight. The thing sucked the blood out of a previous creature and wanted to do the same to the group. Even once Rayla kills it, it erupts into smaller leeches and she gets covered in them before Callum knocks them all off.
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*Callum and Ezran's fake hostage situation is a terrifying AdultFear for their Aunt Amaya. In her eyes, her nephews that she swore to protect for her dead sister are now in the hands of a (supposedly) bloodthirsty elf and if she makes the wrong move the boys' lives are forfeit.
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*Ezran going underwater in the frozen lake and then not coming back up for a very long time. For a minute it really looked like the kid wasn't going to make it.
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*Rayla investigates a strange noise and finds someone spun up in a spider's web warning her to turn back. When she cuts them loose, the inside reveals nothing but dust. It's enough to freak her out to the point where she won't even tell Callum what she saw.
*The giant leech monster that the heroes fight. The thing sucked the blood out of a previous creature and wanted to the same to the group. Even once Rayla kills it, it erupts into smaller leeches and she gets covered in them before Callum knocks them all off.
*The giant leech monster that the heroes fight. The thing sucked the blood out of a previous creature and wanted to the same to the group. Even once Rayla kills it, it erupts into smaller leeches and she gets covered in them before Callum knocks them all off.
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* Viren taking what seems to be an enchanted butterfly, and after a flash of light in his office, he walks out refreshed while the butterfly looks grey and dead on the floor.
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Taking place in a fantasy setting with magic, there's going to be plenty of creepy things ahead.
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* Viren taking what seems to be an enchanted butterfly, and after a flash of light in his office, he walks out refreshed while the butterfly looks grey and dead on the floor.
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