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* let's put ourselves on Sci-Twilight place: she has been send into Equestria without way to go back (from what they know) without food, in a dangerous place and nobody know; and for making things worse, sheis in a body she don't know how to move, and if Princess Twilight were not there they could have been trapped forever!
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* let's Let's put ourselves on Sci-Twilight in Sci-Twilight's place: she has been send sent into Equestria without way to go back (from what they know) without food, is in a dangerous place and nobody know; knows and for making to make things worse, sheis she is in a body she don't doesn't know how to move, and if move. If Princess Twilight were not there wasn't there, they could have been trapped forever!
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*let's put ourselves on Sci-Twilight place: she has been send into Equestria without way to go back (from what they know) without food, in a dangerous place and nobody know; and for making things worse, sheis in a body she don't know how to move, and if Princess Twilight were not there they could have been trapped forever!
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* There are other, completely unsupervised portals to Equestria through which monstrous creatures can be created.
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* There are other, completely unsupervised portals to Equestria through which monstrous creatures can be created.created.
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* Rainbow Dash, after going out into a storm to try and solve the magic problem herself, ends up alone and stuck in quicksand on a small island. If not for Sunset and Twilight, Rainbow would have likely been stuck there until she died of thirst, exposure, or eaten by the giant monster plant that made its home on the island.
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* Rainbow Dash, after going out into a storm to try and solve the magic problem herself, ends up alone and stuck in quicksand on a small island. If not for Sunset and Twilight, Rainbow would have likely been stuck there until she died of thirst, exposure, or eaten by the giant monster plant that made its home on the island.island.
* There are other, completely unsupervised portals to Equestria through which monstrous creatures can be created.
* There are other, completely unsupervised portals to Equestria through which monstrous creatures can be created.
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* Rainbow Dash, after going out into a storm to try and solve the magic problem herself, ends up alone and stuck in quicksand on a small island. If not for Sunset and Twilight, Rainbow would have likely been stuck there until she died of thirst, exposure, or eaten by the giant monster plant that made its home on the island.
