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** Mabel gets a gruesome death in her own laundromat, first being chased down by the Miner after reading a macabre death threat poem left for her by him moments earlier, then getting pickaxed in the chest when the Miner catches her. The Miner then stuffs her body into one of the laundromat's dryers and activates it, leading to a horrific discovery of her burned, desiccated corpse the next day by the Chief and Mayor.
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** Mabel gets a gruesome death in her own laundromat, first being chased down by the Miner after reading a macabre death threat poem left for her by him moments earlier, then getting pickaxed in the chest when the Miner catches her. The Miner then stuffs her body into one of the laundromat's dryers and activates it, leading to a horrific discovery of her burned, desiccated dried-out corpse the next day by the Chief and Mayor. Mayor, face still frozen in a silent scream.
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** Dave is killed by having his head shoved into a pot of hot, boiling water by the Miner from behind as he bends over, trying to get a hot dog from the pot. We get a lovely shot of his red, burned, peeling face as it lays in the pot. The Miner then proceeds to cut his heart out off-camera and place it in the pot to be found later before [[StuffedInTheFridge stuffing his body in the fridge.]]
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** Dave is has one of the most agonizing deaths of all. He's killed by having his head shoved into a pot of hot, boiling water by the Miner from behind as he bends over, trying to get a hot dog from the pot. We get a lovely shot of his red, burned, peeling face as it lays in the pot. The Miner then proceeds to cut his heart out off-camera and place it in the pot to be found later before [[StuffedInTheFridge stuffing his body in the fridge.]]
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** FridgeHorror dictates that the other four miners ''couldn't'' have all died immediately from the cave-in, as their corpses would've decomposed too quickly to sustain Harry for six weeks. More likely, his co-workers succumbed to their injuries one by one over many days, and possibly even resorted to cannibalism as well: Harry was merely the last one standing.
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** FridgeHorror dictates that the other four miners ''couldn't'' have all died immediately from the cave-in, as their corpses would've decomposed too quickly to sustain Harry for six weeks. More likely, his co-workers succumbed to their injuries one by one over many days, and possibly even resorted to cannibalism as well: Harry Warden was merely the last one standing.
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** FridgeHorror dictates that the other four miners ''couldn't'' have all died immediately from the cave-in, as their corpses would've decomposed too quickly to sustain Harry for six weeks. More likely, his co-workers succumbed to their injuries one by one over many days, and possibly even resorted to cannibalism as well: Harry was merely the last one standing.
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* One of the valentine-boxed hearts, left outside the police station, is found by ''dogs'' before the cops notice it's there. ''Big'' dogs, that were evidently fighting over possession of the carved-out human heart. Dogs, that will be coming home to their unsuspecting owners with bloody mouths, betraying what they've been gnawing on.
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* One of the valentine-boxed hearts, left outside the police station, is found by ''dogs'' before the cops notice it's there. ''Big'' dogs, that were evidently fighting over possession of the carved-out human heart. dripping red box. Dogs, that will be coming home to their unsuspecting owners with bloody blood-smeared mouths, betraying what they've been gnawing on.
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* One of the valentine-boxed hearts, left outside the police station, is found by ''dogs'' before the cops notice it's there. ''Big'' dogs, that were evidently fighting over possession of the carved-out human heart. Dogs, that will be coming home to their unsuspecting owners with bloody mouths.
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* One of the valentine-boxed hearts, left outside the police station, is found by ''dogs'' before the cops notice it's there. ''Big'' dogs, that were evidently fighting over possession of the carved-out human heart. Dogs, that will be coming home to their unsuspecting owners with bloody mouths.mouths, betraying what they've been gnawing on.
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* One of the valentine-boxed hearts, left outside the police station, is found by ''dogs'' before the cops notice it's there. ''Big'' dogs, that were evidently fighting over possession of the carved-out, bloody human heart.
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* One of the valentine-boxed hearts, left outside the police station, is found by ''dogs'' before the cops notice it's there. ''Big'' dogs, that were evidently fighting over possession of the carved-out, carved-out human heart. Dogs, that will be coming home to their unsuspecting owners with bloody human heart.mouths.
